Mom Ki Bra Nikalne Mein Madad Ki 8211 Part 2
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August 12, 2017
Dear Ms. Diary,
[Written August 14]
The state tournament is held at an amazing soccer complex just outside the capital. It has three main fields and a host of satellites for practice or large tournaments. Today’s games take place two at a time on the outside two fields. The middle field will be saved for the final two games tomorrow. Being in the bottom of the bracket, we played in the second set of first-round games. Obviously, if we win, we’ll play whichever team won from our side of the bracket in the earlier game, meaning that that team will have a longer rest than we will, though we’ll still get over three hours.
Coach was right. Perrytown was not any competition. By the 12-minute mark, we were up 3-0, with Rhee getting two and Rathi one. I got the assists for Rathi’s and one of Rhee’s, whose other goal was a one-woman thing of beauty. She stripped the ball from their center half, got up to speed in nothing flat and blew by the defense as if they were standing still. The goalie tried to meet her at the penalty-box line, but a simple double-feint had the goalie sprawling and the ball in the back of the net.
Rhee came out after that goal, Tonda replacing her. After Perrytown missed a shot wide, Tonda, Heather, Rathi, and I teamed up to take the ball through the Perrytown D, with Heather notching her first goal for the day; she came out next. By the 20-minute mark, all O starters except for me were on the sidelines. With Alex out, we could not replace the entire O. At the half, we had a comfortable 6-0 lead, with Tonda and Padme each notching goals.
Coach started the entire backup team in the second half, except that she put Heather at right wing and Mia at center forward, resting Tonda. Heather got two more goals and Padme, Mia, and Kanda got one each for a final of 11-0. During that half, we switched the O around a lot to get Heather a couple breaks. I played the final dozen minutes at right wing, where I had an outside-right shot bounce off the right post. Dang!
“Settle!”
The locker room was not that noisy anyway, as we figured on winning handily and had another game to play.
“First off. Heather, how are you feeling.”
“Good, Coach.”
“You’ve got three hours or so until kickoff. Please take it easy. Rest.”
“Okay, Coach.”
“Attagirls go to the entire suite of backups who threw a shutout and dominated possession time, giving Perrytown very few chances to mount any serious offense. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Because of you, we got to rest virtually all the starters, which should serve us well later today.
“Attagirls go also to the starting offense, which got us off to a blazing start, ‘blazing’ in the form of Whatshername.”
There was much laughing.
“Attagirl to Beth for running the first-half offense that got us a six-goal lead at the half and almost notching a goal near the end. Though you didn’t get it, I’m happy that you were willing to use your outside right.
“To all of you: as Heather has stressed, having credible outside-foot shots gives you more options for any given chance. For Beth’s shot, there were a number of players clogging her line to the far side of the goal, which, otherwise, I’m sure she’d have gone for. Her only good chance was the near side, but she had to curl it away from the goalie. Given that she probably did not have time to switch feet, her only option was outside right. She missed by just a couple inches.
“Attagirl to Marli for two nice saves that preserved a shutout. Now, it’s time for the game ball. While Rhee’s goals-per-minute rating was the best of you SEVEN scorers, today, that prima donna lazed around for most of the game.”
There was much laughter.
“Normally, hat tricks are nearly a shoo-in for game ball, but I’m sorry, Heather it’s not yours this time.”
“No problem, Coach. I know who deserves it.”
Coach cocked her eyebrows at that but continued.
“For running the second-half offense so well and getting four assists, the game ball goes to Lissa Schmitt!”
There was much congratulating. I was happy for Lissa. She certainly deserved it.
Coach’s “Settle” wasn’t very loud, and everyone turned to her.
“For those of you that weren’t aware, after playing team members had to leave the Smithville-Sarnia game to start the process of getting ready for our own game, Civia ... and her father ... stayed to watch the whole game in order to give us a scouting report on our opposition in our next game. I have a few thoughts from the short time that I watched. I will add them if Civia doesn’t cover them. Civia, you have the floor.”
Civia took a step forward, a spiral-bound notebook in her hand. She opened it, looked it over for a few seconds, then began her report.
“While I have commentary that I can provide, Coach mainly wants my analysis of the strengths and weaknesses of Sarnia, our next opponent. I will provide that analysis, but will leave commentary for later, if requested.
“Sarnia won the game, 4-3, though had a 4-1 lead with 30 minutes to play. Hopefully, we don’t get behind in the score, but it seems like the Sarnia defense gets a bit ... careless with a lead. Smithville scored two goals in 15 minutes, both by spreading the field wide, then having a halfback or fullback punch up the middle unmarked for a pass and an open shot.
“Sarnia plays a 4-3-3, or, rather, played a 4-3-3 today. Their back line, except for the right back, are all tall and strong; the right back is of average height, and quick, but not that fast, and she’s the fastest of the four. The right-center back is quite talented but is a little slow. The two left backs are less talented, but faster, though not at all speed demons. The right back goes forward on offense frequently, and she is a good dribbler and has a good right foot with which she scored one of the goals; she didn’t show a left foot ... Their back line is good at the offside trap, catching Smithville’s offense twice with it.
“Their midfield is very good. The wings are excellent on defense, the center less so, though she is a better ball handler. The center half plays a lot of offense, as can be expected in a 4-3-3. She did not take a shot.
“Their center forward plays more like our sweeper. She handles the ball very well, but, whether she doesn’t shoot well or whatever, she passed up a couple of shots that Rhee would have taken, and probably scored. Their wings are both very fast and shoot well. The two of them accounted for three goals. They are the primary offensive threat, and Sarnia’s offense seems designed around them. At least, the center forward and the center half both looked to pass to the wing frequently. The left wing may be a bit better than the right wing, but they’re both quite good.
“The offense seems geared to bring the ball up the middle and look first for a slashing wing. The center forward and center half are both more than competent at carrying the ball, but not exceptional. Though Sarnia did not score from long boots to streakers, those wings are obviously capable of that, possibly on the order of Heather’s speed and skills.
“That’s what I have.”
Coach looked around the team, then at Civia next to her.
“That was an excellent report, Civia. You covered the two main items that I noted: the design of their offense and their offense-minded right back. Before I put this to the old salts on the team, Civia, I would like to hear your thoughts, your ... commentary on Sarnia.”
“Yes, Coach. Watching the game, I noted three points that we may be able to exploit. As Coach noted at practice the other day, their relatively slow back line can be exploited on counterattacks. Oh, I’m sorry, I forgot one item. That right-center back plays very deep and in the middle of the field when they’re on offense. That could mean that quick lobs over most of their defense would work best when we have at least two players streaking within support range of each other.
“The second point is the possibility of us moving the ball upfield on the sides, which may allow Rathi or Ann to surprise their D. However, since Smithville was so successful at that today, Sarnia may be trying right now to figure out how to close that hole.
“The third item also deals with Ann ... primarily. Ann probably has the skill set and defense capability to throttle their center forward, their playmaker. Because Sarnia brought the ball up the sides so few times, I cannot estimate what Sarnia’s offense would do if they could not bring the ball up the middle. However, I don’t expect them to like it.”
After a short silence during which Coach looked over the team, seemingly particularly at Ann, Rathi, Rhee, and me, she turned to Civia.
“Again, Civia, thank you. You have been of inestimable help with that analysis and commentary. Before I say anything else, does anyone, taking Civia’s analysis of Sarnia at face value, disagree with her commentary?”
Coach looked around again, then said, “Civia might be wrong. Don’t be bashful if you disagree. I’d really rather hear it now than hear it after we got our butts spanked.”
Rathi spoke up.
“I don’t disagree, at least, not yet. However, Coach, it would be good to know, taking into account what you saw of Sarnia, whether or not there are points of Civia’s analysis that could have made her commentary be off the mark.”
“That’s a good point, Rathi, and I thank you for bringing it up. I did not see enough of the game to confirm all of Civia’s analysis. However, those parts upon which I have some data seem to be accurate in Civia’s analysis. I did see enough to know that their offense is built around those wings. I did see enough to know that their right back is offense-minded and has at least some freedom of decision in that regard. I did not see enough to know that Sarnia only rarely brings the ball up on the wings, but I did not see them bring the ball up on the wings.
“I think that we can trust Civia’s analysis at least far enough to ponder why that is so. Are their wings’ ball-handling abilities suspect? Ditto for their wing midfielders? Rathi, now do you have thoughts on Civia’s commentary?”
“I do. Since we ... since at least some of us know that those wings are the numbers 1 and 2 scorers on the team and that they both placed in the top 5 scorers in their league and that their center forward is not among the scoring leaders, but did have the most assists in their league, I believe that we can accept Civia’s analysis and commentary about their offense as given.
“We have two good and getting-better-by-the-day wing fullbacks. We also have a powerful offense, one that has gotten by all season with less midfield support than most offenses get. I suggest that if Ann can throttle their center forward, and I’d be very surprised if she cannot, we give the wing midfielders secondary responsibility for those wings, as we did for Dowdell. With that, I suggest that we can then go all offense, all the time. Send the streakers. Counterattack, counterattack, counterattack.”
Rathi turned to me.
“Beth, what do you think?”
I looked at Rathi, over at Ann, then at Coach. While looking at Coach, I answered.
“Rathi, I think that that should be the plan. On Thursday, I suggested to Coach that we let you loose on offense. We’ve kept you mostly on D all year. If you go mostly O this evening, that’s got to be a big surprise to them. I also think that, with their relatively slow back line, that we can probably afford, essentially, to pit our offense directly against theirs. Run the score up and see who’s standing at the end. If we win 10-7, that’s just as good as winning 2-1.”
Coach looked around the room, while I watched Coach. Coach’s assay of the room ended at Ann.
“Ann, your thoughts.”
“Although I’ve not seen any of this competition, I’m willing to pit Gracey and Zahira against almost any pair of wings; look how well they do against ours. I wouldn’t have said that at the beginning of the season, but I say that now. No matter how much better the offense has become, I think that those two are the most improved starters. If they can get some assistance from the wing midfielders, I have no qualms about releasing Rathi to the O. I suggest, however, that Emma should have primary responsibility for their offense-minded right fullback if and when she comes forward. If that fullback stays home, then any help that she can give Zahira would be welcomed. I know that that assumes that our midfield will dominate their midfield, but until I see a team that our midfield does not dominate, then I’m comfortable with that assumption. Civia’s analysis didn’t give me any pause in that regard, at least.”
“So, Rathi, Beth, Ann. You all think, excuse the paraphrasing, that we should ‘let slip the dogs of offense?’”
I smiled at her allusion. Coach looked directly at Rathi.
“I do.”
At Ann.
“Yes, Coach.”
At me.
“All-out O.”
“Okay, that’s what we’ll do. Kanda, Dakota. You will probably be getting game time, perhaps a lot of it. Emma and Zala are going to be busy, and you will be giving them breathers. After the past few weeks, I find that I have great faith in you. Don’t let me down.
“Haven, I want you at my side. While I’m watching the whole game, I want you concentrating on the midfield. Particularly on our midfield, but I would appreciate your thoughts on theirs, too. You’ll get in the game, too, but Kanda and Dakota will probably get more game time.”
“Okay, Coach. They certainly deserve it. As Ann said about Gracey and Zahira, I say about those two. In fact, I’d say that they’re the most improved duo on the whole team. That takes into account that none of us really knew Heather’s skill set when she joined us. We just assumed that she was a true backup, not a wolf in sheep’s clothing.”
Haven grinned at Heather, who returned it.
“I agree with you, Haven,” Coach said. “As for offense, we’ll go with the plan that Beth devised on Thursday. Tonda, you’ll start at left wing. I want you and Heather to run. Rhee, I want you to play a false 9. Do you understand?” When Rhee nodded, Coach said, “Hold back a bit, act as outlet for either or both of them, you may see a lot of shot opportunities, if their whole back line collapses onto those two in kneejerk response to their speed. You get me?”
“Got it, Coach. Let the two wings occupy the whole back line’s attention, then I deal only with a center half. Maybe. I like what I see.”
“Beth, Rathi. Work together. Keep the ball on offense. Remember when we played a two-sweeper set? You two should be like that, though Rathi, offense is still only your second focus. We still need to control the midfield.
“Backup offense and fullbacks. Depending upon how the game goes, you could get quite a bit of game time or very little. Please be prepared for either. Watch the game. Figure out what Sarnia is doing. If you see something, don’t be afraid to tell me about it.
“Girls, we are going to live or die on the strength of the offense. As Beth said, we can give up seven goals, as long as our offense can score at least eight. Midfield and defense: If you find yourself in possession of the ball, look upfield. We’re going to speed-demon Sarnia to death. And when the speed demons cannot get the job done, they’ll pass it back to Rhee, to Beth, to Rathi, and then we go on more methodical offense. Over the course of this season, we have learned that we can score and win with either type. I’m very proud of all of you and confident in your ability to outplay even teams in the state tournament.”
Coach looked around, then said, “You’ve got three hours to hang with your friends or family or both. However, I’m told there’s a lunch spread for all of us. Liya is here to lead us to it. Be back here, in this locker room, by 3:30 pm. Do not be late.”
After lunch, the team split into families and sets of families. The Paleceks and Ann’s and Mia’s families joined our big family. Looking around, it dawned on me that the only males here were fathers. Mia has an older brother, but he obviously didn’t make the trip. The other odd thing about this gathering was that Mia was the only one of us that has siblings. Her little sister made the trip, and Civia spent some time with her, even though Lena is only nine. However, Lena is a precocious, soccer-nut nine-year-old.
“Yeah,” Mia said, “she’s gonna be much better than me. She’ll probably be on this team with Civia in a couple years. If Lena keeps improving, I’m going to insist that she move up to this team when she’s 11. I’ve talked to Civia a bit and the stories she tells of her team this year are ... they’re ... they’re horrible. And you know Civia. If she says that, had she tried, she could have scored at least five goals a game, you know that it was probably way worse than that; she does not brag.”
I shook my head. Somehow, others on the team had become aware of the possibility of 11-year-olds playing on a 12-15-year-old team.
“Civia said that the only time that she really enjoyed the season was in a game in which the other team’s center back was really good. She didn’t say, but her story implied that she still managed multiple goals. She introduced herself to the girl and, apparently, the two of them commiserated with each other about the lack of ... focus, drive in most of the other girls on both teams. Beth, you might put a bug in Coach’s ear about that center back.”
I nodded at her.
“That very thing was beginning to cross my mind. She didn’t say which team, did she?”
“No, but she probably remembers, since that game was the only real light of her season.”
“Thanks, Mia. I’ll ask her.”
When I looked up from talking with Mia, I was surprised to see someone I knew that was not on or associated with the team.
“Hey, Charlize. You never emailed me.”
She walked up and hugged me, a hug that I returned.
“Yeah, I got busy and then Mom decided that she’d like to come so we’re here. You guys kicked some ass this morning.”
“Thanks. Perrytown didn’t really deserve to be here. Cortez should have been here. Hell, you guys, GV, even Paradise would have had little trouble with them. You, specifically, Charlize, would probably have run rings around their D.”
“Yeah. I got to thinking about that while watching the game. It would be nice if more than one team could come here from each quadrant. While we might have gotten a poor draw, say Centerville, there were a couple teams here that we could have beaten. You guys, though. You guys look fricking great, and that was with your second string in for most of the game. I figure you know this, but that second-string midfield of yours ... They could start for most other teams. Hell, don’t pass this on, but they’re better than my midfield.”
“Don’t worry, Charlize, I won’t. And, yes, we know that. I’m not sure what we’re going to do next year, because there’s not much of a gap between Haven’s midfield and Rathi’s midfield, except for Rathi.”
‘Yeah, she’s really good. Of course, you guys are gonna be beating up on everyone so much next year, that it might not matter who you play in any individual game or half or whatever. Your Coach Virtanen is going to have to figure out how to keep everyone happy, with starters not playing entire games and no one being able to run up personal stats totals.”
“I’ve been worrying about just that. Fortunately, the team gets along well with each other, and the starters, though resigned to not playing entire games, have been good about supporting their backups. In fact, I’ve never seen so little dissension in a team. Of course, winning tends to keep dissension down.”
“Yeah, that was not true at GV. We mostly won, but ... I think that was the main reason that our midfield never really gelled, like yours ... hell, like both of yours did.”
“We noticed that. That’s one of the reasons that I told you what I told you after our last game. You need better support. Rhee ... and Heather could not have done all that they did without our midfield dominating virtually every game. While I’m sure that Haven’s line would be happy being your starting midfield, I don’t think that all three families are going to be moving to GV.”
“Hah! Yeah, that seems a low-probability possibility. But, between you and me, I’d be happy to trade even up. Hell, I’d be happy to trade for your backup midfield and we’d throw in one or two more. It was so frustrating that we had this good offense and good defense, but ... Hopefully, we’ll do better next year. The source of much of the dissension is graduating, so...”
“I hope, for you, Charlize, that it’s better next year. You definitely deserve better.”
“Thanks. We’ll see.”
“Hey, let me introduce you to Rhee’s heir apparent.”
“Is that that young girl with the odd name?”
I nodded and waved at her to follow me.
“Charlize Sanderson, may I introduce Civia Palecek. Civia, this is Charlize Sanderson.”
Civia stepped all over Charlize’s response.
“Oh! Wow! It’s so great to meet you. You’re one of the few girls that I’ve followed outside of those on the Elkton team. You’re so good! You just need ... I’ll shut up, now.”
Charlize chuckled, then replied, “Civia, it’s nice to meet you. Word about you has trickled out of Elkton ... all the way to Grass Valley, actually.”
That threw Civia for a loop. Her head and shoulders flinched backward in surprise and her eyes widened.
“About m-me?”
“Yes, about you. You’re apparently some up-and-coming talent. How’d you like to move to Grass Valley. I’d certainly appreciate it if you did. I would also appreciate hearing what you think I need.”
“Oh, I couldn’t. I’m only a little girl. My opinions...”
Civia had the good grace to blush, considering that the whole team had accepted her opinions about Sarnia.
“First, you’re only an inch shorter than I am and, second, I’m actually interested in your opinion. I’ve already heard Beth’s, and I agree with it. I’d like to see if yours matches.”
Civia looked at me; I nodded. She turned back to Charlize.
“Well, other than Beth, you need a better midfield, one that can keep the ball in the other side’s half. Your defense seems solid. At least, they didn’t give up many goals. You could use a better left wing, but your and Grass Valley’s primary need is a good midfield.”
Charlize smiled, and said, “You agree with Beth and I agree with both of you, but please don’t let that out anywhere. I already don’t get along well enough with our midfielders without them hearing third-hand about me dissing them.”
“Oh. I wouldn’t think about it. Umm ... thanks for trusting me.”
“No problem. It was obvious that Beth trusted you, and I’m willing to trust on her say-so. We were pretty good friends when we were on the same team, though not as good as she and Rhee were ... or are.”
“You were on the same team? It must have been in Elkton, as I know that Beth has never played anywhere else.”
“Yup. Beth and Rhee and me. I started a year before those two did, but we were on the same 8-11 team, until my family moved when I was 11.”
“Wow. I’d say that that must have been a good team, but my own experience with 8-11 teams suggests that ... Well, skill doesn’t seem to be that much of a priority then. At least, not on the teams that I’ve been on.”
“Actually, that team wasn’t too bad. We three were the most dedicated, but none of us were anything like Civia Palecek. I hear that she’s a real phenom.”
Civia colored dramatically. She seemed about to object, but I looked at her with my head canted slightly downward and my eyebrows raised. She swallowed.
“Thank you, Charlize. I appreciate that from someone of your skills. I understand that there are certain pre ... prerick...”
I helped her out; “Prerequisites.”
“Yes, pre ... re ... quisites. I understand that there are certain prerequisite physical capabilities, but the rest takes just focus and dedication.”
“Ah,” Charlize said, “there’s the difference. I’m sure that you know, but a lot of kids don’t have or cannot marshal the requisite focus and dedication.”
“Yes, but I ... I have problems understanding that. My parents have told me that many times, as have Beth and Coach. That is, Coach Virtanen.”
“Yeah, while I understand, it’s not something that I can really internalize. Does that make sense, Civia?”
With her head nodding rapidly, she responded, “Yes! That’s exactly it. I guess we’re all built differently.”
“Are you going to be in the stands for Elkton’s game with Sarnia? Perhaps we could sit together.”
“Oh. Umm ... oh.”
Civia looked nervously at me.
“It’s okay, you can tell her. Don’t tell anyone else, though.”
Charlize looked questioningly at me, then turned back to Civia.
“Well, I ... I’m going to be watching the other game, to scout Centerville.”
Charlize’s eyebrows flew up into her bangs, then she squinted her eyes and looked at me.
“Let me guess. Civia scouted Sarnia for you.”
“Yup,” I nodded. “Coach accepted her report at face value, even what Civia called her commentary. Our strategy for the game is built largely on Civia’s scouting report.”
I considered explaining more, but thought that I’d test Charlize’s ... resiliency, I suppose.
Charlize looked at me for a bit, then at Civia.
“That seems like it might be fun. Would you mind if I joined you? I could help you in your job.”
Civia looked hard at Charlize, then up at me, then back at Charlize.
“I’m sorry if ... this question is ... impertinent but why would you want to do that?”
“That’s fine, I don’t mind. I have two reasons, one more selfish than the other. Centerville is a well-known powerhouse in girls soccer in the state. They’re the reigning champs and they’ve been the state champs five of the past ten years. I’ve never seen them play, so that would be interesting enough. However, I have an interest in Elkton ... your team ... winning the tournament.”
“Why?”
“If you win, then I can say that the only reason we lost the league championship is because we had to play the eventual state champs. Of course, we lost to them!”
Civia produced a merry grin at that, and a nodding head.
“I can see that. If you don’t mind my parents being there, too, I’d...” [she got a bit bashful] “like it if you helped me. I think I could do a better job with your help.” Civia looked up at me and asked, “Would Coach mind Charlize helping?”
I shook my head and said, “I doubt it, but I’ll ask her.”
Since I had her here, I fulfilled my other task.
“Civia, Mia was telling me that your season was worse this year than I had figured.”
“Yeah, it was bad. There was no one else on the team that wanted to be good. They were all just having fun.” She paused. “I understand that ... people like to have fun, but ... I don’t know. Why don’t they want to be as good as they could be? Why don’t they think becoming good is fun? I know. We’ve already covered that.”
“I brought the subject up with you because Mia said that there was a center back on one team that you liked, or thought was good. Yes?”
“Yeah. Tanika ... something. She was really good. She stopped me cold a couple times early, so I had to pull out my best game to beat her. I talked to her during an injury timeout. She was nice. I’m sorry, I don’t remember which team. We played them early in the season and the next time we played that team, she wasn’t playing, wasn’t even on the sidelines. I looked for her, but I didn’t ask. Why do you ask?”
“Do you think she was your age? I ask because if she was, perhaps she’d be interested in the team.”
“Oh. Ohhh. I’ll bet she would. She should know about the team, shouldn’t she?”
“Maybe. Why don’t you tell Coach about Tanika. I’m sure that she has ways to find her. We will have a fullback slot to fill next year, and I’m sure that Coach would be interested in a good 12-year-old to fill it.”
“You mean ... like developing her for the future of the team ... like Kanda and Dakota and ... me.”
I nodded at her.
Smiling, she said, “I’ll do that. I liked her.”
I said my good-byes to Charlize and Civia, told Rhee that I’d be talking with Coach in the locker room, then headed there. I buttonholed her about Charlize. As I expected, she didn’t have a problem with that, even guessing Charlize’s reason for wanting to do the job, then I joined the team in getting dressed in a clean soccer kit.
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Svetlana Porchenko stepped over to Coach, then turned to face us.
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At the time of experiences with Catherine I did not understand what was happening fully. Although as I mentioned I’d been a bully in school and thought I was very outspoken, in reality I was obviously very insecure, in fact perhaps a bit introverted. At least when I met new people, or was in a new environment I didn’t say much and kept my thoughts to myself until I became more familiar with the people to start venturing my opinions. The following Wednesday afternoon I was off work from 2 PM...
I have a few fantasies. I will share one for now and would love to hear from you and see what you think.It starts with myself and a woman. We're in a room and start making out and getting each other turned on. Kissing on each other and talking naughty. The woman decides to start taking control and tells me about how she fantasizes about blindfolding a man and making him preform any and all sexual acts she desires! Im incredibly turned on by this and before i could say yes, she pushes me on the...
In the early fall of 1953 an incident lasting from the dark of Midnight to the predawn hours remains my most vivid, graphic, and lasting memory. It needs no embellishment, rather, needs be be believed as stated, for tis a true memory, tho seems to this day, the fantasy of my fevered mind. On the ranch in Wyoming, where I grew up, we separated to ewes in first “season” to keep them from being bred too early, as they are just not mature enought to carry to full term ,and the mortailty rate is...
Eva is tired of feeling underappreciated. As a woman in football, the other professionals don’t take her seriously – they all just tell her to ‘get her tits out’. Over a glass or two of wine, Eva spills her troubles to her friend Scarlett, a women’s football coach. Cuddled on the sofa, the girls get closer and gentle foot rub soon turns into passionate kissing and incredible girl-on-girl action. As the two women explore each other’s bodies, they lick each other’s pussies before bringing...
xmoviesforyouHello, everyone. Amith here again. Thank you all for your feedback. Keep your support for my future stories too.Love you all After taking rest we left the flat and found an amazing pub in a Koramangala. It was very dark. Not like other pubs with green or blue lights or laser lights.It was dark as hell which makes couple even hornier. As we moved in we ordered some cocktail and vodka shots there.Ohh sorry, I forgot to tell you about our outfits. I was wearing a purple party wear shirt and...
Introduction: this is a somewharmt true story based on me, a redneck living in small vermont town and lovin a girl, i have changed a lot from the truth so it is more fiction than reality i was walking my girl friend home from highschool. i was in my carhartts and work boots, and she was wearing a nice pair of tight blue jeans and a white tee shirt. as we were walkin along up the street i stopped at the corner to turn down Orchard off Main and when i started to go down she wasnt moving. lets go...
Clean ThoughtsBy: Londebaaz Chohan What a pain in the neck. Even after complaining twice, the light around the confessional area was not fixed. Father Mahrzach could not tell, if he really saw someone go in the confessional or it were only his weak eyes and those shadows around his peripheral vision to blame. After at least an hour, Reverend came to the confessional. The divider in the middle was only showing a silhouette on the other side and father could not tell the age or the gender of the...
Simon was looking forward to the ring of the doorbell, and when itcame he jumped with a start and looked around him hoping the flat wastidy and welcoming.He walked to his front door and opened it to reveal his landlord, MrGeorge Franks."Well, are you going to let me in, or what?" demanded Franks hiswrinkled brow frowning and huge white bushy eyebrows arching over blueeyes that positively glowered. Pushing past the young man he strodepurposefully into the sitting room and after dropping his...
Being DippedLife can be pretty sweet. Look at me, sitting here in the prime of mylife on a Friday evening watching a movie on my super huge tv with mybeautiful girlfriend by my side. Hell, I don't even like the stupidmovie, but nothing is gonna get me out of this terrific mood."Hey Loverboy, I got a secret sumthin'- sumthin' today from one of myspecial friends," my girl teases in a sing-song way. Cammie and I havebeen pretty close these past few months, and I'm starting to really seeus as a...
“Do you remember the time when the kids caught having sex in the middle of the living room?” “Of course, I do. It was probably the most embarrassing event of my life.” “But probably the best sex session you have ever had.” Kari hated to admit it, but she agreed. “I’m just happy we didn’t scar the children for life when they saw us.” “I didn’t think we would.” It was mid afternoon when Kari and Kevin walked into the kitchen. They had been out shopping for groceries. After getting...
You know that look folks get seconds before they say out loud the name of this story? That look ... yeah ... you know it ... you've seen it ... done it ... What the Fuck? It's not always accompanied with a question ... either mark or look. Sometimes it's a sentence of pure rage ... you just caught the 13 year old neighbor boy with his hands in your 12 year old daughters pants. Worse yet, you caught your daughter on her knees sucking the neighbor boys cock. And ... if you took the time to...
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----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Of the Auparishtaka or Mouth Congress THERE are two kinds of eunuchs, those that are disguised as males, and those that are disguised as females. Eunuchs disguised as females imitate their dress, speech, gestures, tenderness, timidity, simplicity, softness and bashfulness. The acts that are done on the jaghana or middle parts of women, are done in the mouths of these eunuchs, and this is called Auparishtaka....
Now what? Did I park crookedly? Keep the other two cars from being able to have somewhere to park? For once the cops had their hands on their guns, but they weren’t drawn. The FBI agents had on bullet proof vests, but no weapons were drawn. “Are you Joe Johnson,” one of the Fed’s asked. “One of many I have found over the years when searching for myself on the net,” I replied. Now this is going to get interesting, but at least they aren’t cuffing me or pulling their guns, so that is a...
Demi Sutra and Kira Noir love pussy. I mean seriously…just look at them! Laid out on the bed, sucking clit and ass and enjoying every minute of it! Which is about the time super-stud Manuel Ferrara enters the room! If you’re wondering how Mr. Ferrara was able to pull off 6 AVN Performer-of-the-Year Awards at the AVNs (the “Oscars” of Adult Entertainment), just watch him lay the pipe on these two horny sluts! No more wondering after that! Ferrara uses Demi’s soft,...
xmoviesforyouHi all! I have been a kind reader so this site and reading sex stories made me write my true story of my affair and sex with my gf. Firstly I like to tell about me I m a good looking guy 24 years of age and belong to well family with all the luxuries so always had a link with good groups and friends my gf name sanjula was my classmate as well my old friend from school days with a damn sexy dashing figure of 36-28-36. Her figure and clothes could easily show her sexuality. Our relation was just...
Whoever the scriptwriter is in my life is a sadistic bastard, and I’m considering firing them. It was another of those dreams in the first person, but I knew that ‘I’ wasn’t really me. I was some girl named Stephanie, typical cheerleader type but with brains. I was with this big jock type football and wrestler. He looked a lot like the jock guy from American Pie. Come to think of it, the chick I was looked a lot like the girl he was after in the movie. We were all living in this huge wooden...
AUTHOR’S LAMENT I have been disappointed at the response, or should I say the lack thereof, to the first two chapters of my story. I am sure there are thousands of men and probably a number of women who have had an experience similar to mine. If you ever longed for someone but didn’t pursue it because you were not attractive enough, or not personable enough, or not charming enough, or most likely, just plain not confident enough, you know what I went through — in spades! Please send me your...
Somebody sent me a link to Fim Fiction this morning, and I’ll be honest, I was pretty fucking confused at first. The headline at the very top of the page warned of The Expansive Dangers of Dodgy Potion Sellers, so for a second, I thought there’d been a recall of the sketchy boner pills I recently ordered from China. I scrolled down a bit and saw the posts weren’t limited to warnings about the village apothecary. There were stories of princess wrestling, dragon weight gain, as well as...
Sex Stories SitesIt was 8pm on a Friday night when I decided I would do one of my naked walks again. Mum and dad were gone until Monday, so they wouldn't ask me any questions about me going out so late. And if they would call, a thing they almost never did, I could always tell them that I was at the movies. So, walking back into my room, I first looked at myself in the full length mirror of my closet door. I thought I didn't look too bad and then pulled the closet door open. I quickly found my tracksuit...
Several days passed after Taylor and Jack's late night rendezvous. The two had not had a great deal of contact since, although each one spent a lot of time recalling the things that happened between them, and the feelings that surrounded those things. Jack and Tommy never skipped a beat in their friendship. Tommy had mostly forgotten about his suspicion that Taylor might have a crush on Jack. But one afternoon when the two boys were together with a couple of other friends at a local...
This tale starts with Naruto. Naruto can be a child, meeting a brother figure, or with Naruto on his way to the academy. Either way plz follow these guidelines 1) All teams must be 4 Genin and 1 jonin, 2) Your OC must not be a godlike, overpowered, super ninja, at least not at the start of the story 3)Have fun writing and reading :)
Well it all started a few years ago. It was spring break and i had just got out of school and i was looking to have fun. I was so excited about going out of town for a week i didn't know what i was going to do so we all packed up and headed to gatlinburg tn. The night we got is when it all happened. The long car ride from Ms made everybody hungry so they all went out to eat leaving only me & my friend out the huge rented cabin. As soon as everybody was gone u made my way to him. He was...
Ellen has a long slender neck, I love kissing her neck and giving her hickeys. Always careful that hickeys are low near her collar bone, so she can hid them. The majority of men never learn to seduce and make erotic love to a woman. There is a lot more to the rules of attraction and expressing affection than simply making out. Expression is very important in any kind of relationship and it becomes all the more important in case of romantic relationships. Neck kissing is an important precursor...
© April 6, 2002 Chapter 1 She hated it so when her Master went to work. He left Sunday, now it was Friday and it would be a VERY long weekend. Though her Master would call her and they would chat on line, she wanted her Master with her. She never liked when she had to share him. He was hers, all hers. Though she knew there were others, she and he had a stronger bond. None of "them" could get away with what she could. None of "them" understood him the way she did. None of "them"...
The small cove was nearly deserted as I carefully made my way down the steep, winding track. The sun had baked the cliffs and turned the mud into dust. As I got to the beach I kicked off my clothes, damp and sticky from the long climb down, and ran into the sea. The water was cool, good and clean as I swam half a dozen strokes underwater then flipped onto my back and surfaced. I was about 20m from the beach, looking up at the cliff I could see why the guidebook had said that this beach was for...
Peter Marchbanks was excited to learn that Callie was working at Beatrice's Diner. He was a frequent customer there, since he worked as a car salesman across the street. But with the slumping economy, he wasn't sure how long he would be able to afford eating out. When Callie looked up and saw Peter sitting there, she was surprised. "Hey aren't you Collin's dad?" she grinned. "Guilty," Peter said, shrugging his shoulders. Collin and Harley were good friends and played together nearly...
September 1973 Jim had learned over the years that there times when he would do things and have second thoughts afterward. When that happened he would think over what he should have done and faced up to the consequences of his own acts. "Thunderpussy is sure mad at you," Rich told him as he slurped down a cup of coffee. He stretched and the muscles in his shoulders pressed at his tee shirt. "She came storming in to her apartment just as Chelsea and I were starting to relate to one...
Hi, my name is Ryan. I am in my last year of High school at Beachwood High. It was mid fall and I was leading the football team towards another championship. I was the quarterback and the team captain. Being head of the football team had its advantages. Basically, I had girls trying to get with me all the time. It’s not that I was shy or anything but I decided that I was going to stay single until I found someone I really liked. Although I did tend to fool around with some of the girls, I had...
First TimeThursday morning started same as ever. I rolled out of bed at the predawn hour of 5am, packed my bathing suit and towel, and headed to the university gym to swim laps for a few hours. The pool area was locked, which bummed me out, but I made up for it by riding the stationary bikes in the workout room. It was early, so almost no one was there, which I was more than okay with. I hate having people around when I exercise. At quarter to 7 I packed it in and went back to my dorm to shower. I...
First TimeAnother mundaneday at college. John had maths followed by double science and ending with media studies, this was his favourite lesson of the day because he sat opposite a stunning red head called May. She always wore nicely fitting clothes showing off her curves and figure which was one of pure delight, she also spotted a few tattoos which were only ever partially visible but John was none the less very fond of what he could see. He got to the lesson just in time but to notice there was only...
ExhibitionismThere Can Be Only One Chapter 16I had mum naked up in her bedroom… thinking that I would watch her strip out of her work clothes and take photos as she did so, with the intention of getting rid of yet another erection by fucking mum. Mum was not too sure about us fucking in her room, and I didn’t really care where we did it…as long as we did it. She followed me out into the hall totally naked. I had my hand on the handle to my door when we heard someone coming up the stairs. Unsure whom it may...
My boyfriend is a really randy bugger. When at home he has me wear short skirts without any knickers, in fact he does not allow me to own any. This is so he can fuck me anywhere at any time. He absolutely loves coming over to me, and sliding his hands up my short skirt, to grope my bald -another requirement of his- pussy, before he plunges his meaty shaft into me. As I said, I never know when and where he will take me, and not knowing always keeps me wet with anticipation. In the past I have...
After those mind blowing orgasms we shared Paige was very attentive to me and insisted on drying me off with her huge towel and Clare was doing the same to Paige, we shed what remained of our wet swimwear and all wrapped ourselves in huge cuddly towels and went insidePaige got straight in the shower but it was tiny so Clare and i waited in our towels, Clares towel fell down as we sat on the bed, revealing her very large gorgeous breasts , i stopped her pulling the towel back up her body and let...
When I was a senior in high school I would get drunk at parties then come home and put on pantyhose and go for walks in the woods in just my pantyhose or go to the Adult book store and go into the booths for some fun. One time I was in a booth in just my pantyhose and a t shirt stroking my cock and a cock popped thru the glory hole. It was nice and smooth, shaved and pretty long. I started playing with it then put my mouth over it and sucked it nice and slow, wanting it to last...
Clarice was a twenty-three year old college dropout. Due to unusual circumstances, thats a whole story in its own right, she had decided to leave college and now worked in a comic book shop. Which suited her just fine. She loved comics, though wasn't crazy about Marvel or DC, and had a great boss who treated her well. The pay wasn't worth getting excited over, but she was able to get by with a little extra for luxuries. It helped that she shared a house with four other people. There were four...
Copyright© all rights reserved Have you ever had the urge to do one crazy thing in your life? One thing that was totally out of character that would shock those who know you well? I followed that urge and it turned out to be quite an experience, one that I will never forget. I have no regrets and I have never shared this story with anyone. Until today. It started about 5 years ago when I discovered the joys of surfing the internet. It didn't take me long to discover the tens of...
I was working at a video in Akron Ohio. I was the Assistant manager. I should probably introduce myself. My name is Alex. At the time I was 200 pounds, I had brown hair and hazel eyes. I always worked on Monday nights and stayed at the store until I had all of the videos processed for sale and rental for opening on Tuesday mornings.I always worked with Megan. She was about 150 pounds, black hair, brown eyes, 32DD Bra, and very flirty. We worked together at nights all the time. Megan was...
Office SexLisa woke up wrapped in the softness of unfamiliar black silk sheets. Disoriented, she rubbed her eyes and tried to make sense of where she was. As she stretched her rested body, the events of last night flooded her memory. Her pussy tightened, as she remembered what was done to her. Lisa's nipples hardened, and she automatically reached for them. Rolling them between her fingers, she felt electric jolts shoot from her nipples directly to her clit. When she started to slide her hand down to...
BDSMHi dosto. Mera naam Raj hai. Mai Delhi NCR ka rahne wala hu. Mai apni jindgi ki ek sacchi gathna aap ko batne wala hoo. Ye baat unn dino ki hai jab mai 19 saal ka tha. Mai padhai ke baad kuch kaam sikhne ke liye apne maama ke yahaa karnal aa gaya. Mere maama ne mujhe apne dost ki bijli ki dukaan pe laga diya. Mai roj kaam pe jaane laga. Meri dukaan ke paas ek makaan tha jisme ek ladki uska bhi or uski mummy rahti thi. Jab uska bhai or uski mummy kaam pe chali jaati wo chhat pe chad ke muje...
Hello, everyone – I want to apologize for taking nearly four weeks to publish this sex story. Life became busy and it took up my time. However, I am back!!!!. Thank you, everyone,, who continued to read, comment, like and send feedback! I really appreciate the support and encouragement. Thank you to those who contacted me in the past few weeks to motivate me to continue and write the next part of the sex story, and Special thanks to people who advised me to keep writing in future also, I will...
Elsa Jean walks by the opened bathroom door where she sees a huge cock. She’s stare at it with awe by the door before finally approaching the guy for it. He was nervous since he doesn’t know where her dad is but she tell him that he’s out at work and shouldn’t have to worry about him. She lets the guy know that she wants his cock so they go the living room where she quickly starts going down on him. This petite chick does a great job at taking this dick deep inside her. She got fucked from...
xmoviesforyouI needed to confront Lexi. I’d thought that blackmailing her would be easier. It always seemed so straightforward on TV. You made demands, and then the guilty parties did those things. It was simple. So how on Earth was it that I made very simple demands, and ended up getting my head split open? I’d only asked her to clean the pool and hit on some kid. Was that really too much for her to handle? I climbed the stairs, my anger returning with each step, but the rage I’d felt hours ago had now...
'Boy's Winter's day.' That morning, for some unknown reason, I woke from my normal death-like sleepunusually alert and aware. Mostly I drifted through the endless days in a sortof stupor, induced by the back-breaking drudgery and boredom of the routinethey imposed on me, in which days - perhaps even weeks - went by without anythingto make me note their dreary passage. It was bitterly cold in my pen, and I was lying on my side, curled up as bestI could to preserve my body-heat which had warmed...
LE GIRLS' BY JANICE Last April when school was out for a week Carl, my best friend, and I were alone at our house watching a TV show about cross dressers. They kept talking about how much fun it was to be all dressed up as an attractive woman. We, Carl and I, to see exactly what they were talking about, decided to try on one of my sisters dresses. We got them from the pile she had ready for the used clothing box at...
On her return to Coddington, it took Brenda several days to regain her focus, both in the classroom and on the court. She was distracted by the events of the past summer and the need to make up her mind if she really did love Pete and would happily marry him. Easier said than done, she thought. She had a long fall and winter to endure without him and it would truly be a test of her resolve. She swore that she would not allow herself to be distracted by another man. Pete phoned her at the...
My brother was about twice my age with 4 lovely daughters and two handsome sons. Jacob and Jackson where the oldest boys. Jacob was 22 and Jackson was 21. Jackson's twin sister was Lexi. Lexi was about 5 foot five with long curly blonde hair trailing down her back stopping at the edge of her butt. Then there was Samantha who was 17 with brown hair stopping at the top of her breast line. She was 5 foot one with the best blue eyes I'd ever seen. Than there was Chloe who was 12 years old...
Hey sex loving community, l, Sagar here continuing the story of fun and fuck with the sexy and hot dentist lady Dia whom I met at the supermarket. Dia was kind of exhausted and panting from the crazy cunt-licking session. I was resting my head on her glory hole soaking in her delicious juices. Then a few seconds passed, we looked at each other. And then in a flash, both of us got up and started kissing each other wildly. She was still breathing heavily and seemed lost. We started exploring our...
Mindy was on a mission to make her ex-boyfriend jealous for breaking up with her. She made sure the pictures were racy and showed her doing extraordinary things in bed. He would call her to discuss the pictures or short videos she sent. She did not respond to him. She showed him pictures of Holly going down on her. She showed a clip of her having a threesome with his brother and a friend. Damon was sorry that he dumped her and wanted Mindy to meet him and talk. She planned on calling Damon...
"Happy Father's Day, papa bear - I've brought you breakfast in bed".Debbie, my gorgeous blonde teenage step-daughter stood at the side of the bed, utterly naked except for the 13th birthday present silver charm bracelet.She briefly slipped each of the heart shaped charms into her mouth, all the while watching my mounting erection lifting the thin summer quilt."Where's breakfast" I tried to ask innocently."I am silly. You said we could have sex when my pubic hair started growing - and here it...
A few years ago, I had the lead in a local Halloween play. It was a dreadful show with very few redeeming qualities, but it pulled in pretty good audiences and people recognized me from it. It also earned me a small following of groupies for a very short time. Over time, they kind of drifted on to something else. June of last year, one of them, Kelsey, contacted me and asked if I'd like to go out. She didn't seem crazy-stalkerish, so I said sure.We went to dinner and were having a pretty good...
Chapter Seven: Bimbo Pussy Suppository By mypenname3000 Copyright 2017 Delilah Murphy, Senator of the Great State of Indiana I shivered when I walked out of the nasty, disgusting trailer with Natasha. The implications of what I had just done struck me. I had bought a human being. I paid $10,000 up front with the promise of another $10,000 for the busty, brunette bimbo beside me, a huge, ecstatic grin on her face. “I'm a lesbian now!” she shouted out to the trailer park. It was a...