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Right Bag, Wrong Clothes
By John Howarth
(c)copyright 2001 John Howarth
My best friend and I were in our 30's and we were single.
We often took vacations together. I could not drive and
that made it difficult to get dates or pick up girls. My
friend was Alan and while he drove he had no interest in
girls and for as long as I could remember, he never did,
and many thought he might be gay or something weird. I know
for a fact that is not the case, he's an electronics
junkie. His apartment had more electronics than a rural
Radio Shack store. He had everything anyone could imagine
or ever want. Electronics was his passion so there was no
room for girls.
I had other friends who did nothing but chase skirts. Every
weekend they were in the bars trying to score. Most times I
had better luck than they did even with my bad sight. Keith
and Donald were those kinds of guys.
When Alan and talked about a trip to Florida we wanted a
way to have fun and keep expenses down. We asked Keith and
Donald if they wanted to come. I was happy when they did
decide to come because it would balance the trip better.
Alan would spent all his time at any of Disney's high-tech
stuff or over at space coast at the space center. With
others on the trip we could balance things better and force
things a little. Alan's total burgers, fries and cokes diet
could also be moderated. I like burgers, as much as the
next guy, but on a trip one meal a day is enough. I've seen
that guy have Coke for breakfast.
We were going to fly to Florida and got good discount
fares. The best driver of the group was Keith, but Donald
was the non-drinker of the group. Keith reserved the rental
car.
We each planned one suitcase and a small carry on. My carry
on always consisted of a good-sized camera bag with room to
carry extra stuff.
The day of the trip we had one of the other guys who could
not join us take us to the airport. We checked our bags and
went to the waiting area. The flight was uneventful. It was
on time and even at the baggage area our bags showed up at
the same time all bunched together. We carried our bags out
and found the car rental area. Soon we loaded the bags in
the trunk and headed for one of the big Disney facilities.
We unloaded the car and waited for Keith to return from the
parking garage. We went to the check in counter and were
quickly on our way to our room for four.
It was going to be a weird two weeks. We got to the room
and found it had two king sized beds not four singles as
requested.
I looked at Keith and said, "I don't have a problem."
Keith smiled and said, "Mark and I took a trip to Maine
with my Mom about 7 years ago and we had to share a bed
then."
Alan and Donald looked at each other and shrugged. Donald
had reserved the room so he called the desk. He got a few
dollars off but could not get a switch.
Alan put his suitcase on one of the stands and unlocked it.
He opened it and stared. "Shit, I must have grabbed the
wrong suitcase, these ain't my clothes."
I looked at him. "Check the baggage tag."
"There ain't one, just a string where it was." said Alan.
Donald said, "It's got to be yours, you opened it with your
key."
He said. "Well these are not my clothes." as he held up a
hot pink knit dress.
Donald said. "I'll check mine. It's got a combination
lock." He put it up on another stand and worked the lock.
As he opened it I saw the top item was bright green. He
looked confused. He picked up the hanger it was on and
discovered it was a girl scout uniform as were the next few
items below it.
Keith threw his suitcase on the bed and he said. "You're
gonna look real sweet in that."
Keith opened his suitcase and saw it was not his clothes.
He looked at the top few items and found some decorated
flare legged jeans, A T-shirt, a sleeveless shell and what
he first thought was a pair of shorts.
He said, "These are not mine but I should find something
that fits."
I took my suitcase to the long shelf near the bathroom. The
lock on my suitcase was shot long ago and I had rigged up a
couple of small padlocks on mine. I noted the baggage tag
was missing as well. I unlocked the locks and opened mine
and stared in disbelief. My clothes were also not as I had
packed. I began to unload everything in the suitcase on to
the shelf. Like my friends, all the clothes in the suitcase
seemed to be girl sized.
I was pretty sweated up so I found some sweat shorts and a
very stretchy tank top. I ignored the pink color. I
stripped down and headed for a quick shower. I took only
the shorts and top with me. I took a short but refreshing
shower and dried off. I pulled on the shorts and top. They
were at best a marginal fit.
I went back out and lay down on the bed. Keith was next and
as he began his shower I dozed off. Keith finished and came
out in the flare legged jeans and a T-shirt. He lay down on
the bed with me. I was lying on my stomach. Alan went in
next and came out in shorts and a tank top.
Keith was still awake and watched Donald enter the
bathroom. He was not paying a lot of attention but suddenly
he noticed his chest was larger than before. Keith had done
a lot of working out and dieting several years ago and for
almost six months had a bust that would make some girls
jealous. He didn't pay his chest much attention till he
felt his hair tickling his shoulders. He got up and went to
the mirror, then stared and fainted.
When Donald came out he saw what looked like a girl on the
floor. He looked and saw it still looked like Keith's face
but very feminized. "Hey look guys, this looks like Keith
but it looks like a girl too."
Alan jumped up then noticed something different about
himself. He came over to the mirror and look. His face
looked like a preteen girl with pigtails. Alan reached down
into the shorts he had on and found only smooth skin, not
even any hair.
Alan was looking at Donald and said, "Looks like you are
changing."
As Keith began to wake up, he looked up and saw two girls
looking down at him. He felt between his legs and said. "My
family jewels are gone."
Alan who was the youngest said. "I'll bet you got girlie
bits, you look like a girlie."
As Keith got up she said. "Oh shit this is weird."
She came over to me and looked down and saw my shapely rear
and my hair in a ponytail. "Mark sure has a nice ass."
He rolled me over and saw I had a nice bust as well. She
felt faint again and sat down on the bed before he fell.
Alan said. "What do we do now, Mommy?"
Keith's mind just went 'tilt'. She shook me and said. "Wake
up we got a problem, sleepy head."
I opened my eyes and noticed I did not need my glasses. I
said. "Hey cool, I don't need glasses any more." As I sat
up. I looked at my hands and my body. I got up and walked
to the mirror. I looked at a girl that looked about age 14.
I turned and said, "Get a charge out of how cute I look. I
could learn to like this."
Keith said. "I don't like it. I had boobs for 6 months and
I hated it. I even had to wear a bra in public. I won't
stay like this."
I went over and fished for the wallet I left in my pants,
then saw a purse next to the suitcase. I grabbed it and
went over to the bed and looked for a wallet. I found it
and looked for an ID. I found a social security card with
the name of Debbie B Hammond, and there was a picture ID
with my picture on it and birth info. There was also all
the money I had for the trip.
I smiled. "Find your purse and find out who you are
supposed to be."
Keith felt for a wallet in her jeans but it was gone. She
saw a purse in her suitcase. Donald and Alan found theirs
as well. Keith still had a driver's license and her name
was Karen Ann Wood. Alan was now Sue Ann Wood and was
Karen's daughter. Donald was now Kelly Green. Kelly was
apparently a neighbors kid to Karen and Sue. My address was
not anywhere close to them. Was I supposed to be a relative
or what?
I looked at Karen and said. "Guess you are going to have
your hands full. It looks like the kids have lost their
adult abilities. I'll help you as I can but you are the
adult."
"I ain't married and..." I cut her off.
"In the bathroom." I said pushing her that way.
We went and I closed the door. "I don't care what your mind
says, Sue is your child and it looks like Kelly is Sue's
friend. I don't have a clue on how I fit in, but I can take
care of myself, except I am only 14. I would expect you are
legally responsible for all of us and will be in big legal
trouble if you abandon us."
"I hate children, that is why I won't get married." She
said.
"Well then it appears you are an unwed mother. I'll bet
somewhere in your past you got some girl in trouble. I can
understand why Sue is a sexless preteen girl. He had no
sexual interest in his old life. I can't quite figure out
why Donald is like that as well. Any change for me is okay,
it fixed my bad sight."
"Donald never had a date, He looked and acted, but as far
as I know he was a washout with dating, You at least dated
a few times that I knew about." she said.
"What do we do now?" Said Donald.
Karen said. "We should probably start with what we came
here to do anyway and that is to have fun. Let's get
changed so we can go out and eat."
Karen selected clothes for Sue and Kelly. I went and picked
out some nice jeans and a sleeveless top. I added some
panties to the stuff and headed for the bathroom. I quickly
came out.
Karen smiled. "Young lady, I hope you don't intend to spend
this entire trip braless."
I looked down. My nipples clearly showed through the top. I
felt myself turning red. I went over to my suitcase and
pulled out a bra. I went back in the bathroom and went
through the struggle of putting it on.
I came out and Karen smiled. "That's much better, I know
you are not used to wearing a bra, but you should. I'd
imagine Disney's folks frown upon that sort of thing."
I faced her wondering how to put it diplomatically. "Ms
Wood. Would you please look at yourself in the mirror, I
may look like jailbait without a bra, but you look just
plain vulgar."
She looked down and she turned more shades of red than I
ever saw before. She went to the mirror and looked. She did
not even reply but went to the suitcase and took out a
monster-sized bra. She went into the bathroom.
After a minute she opened the door and said. "Debbie can
you help me with this."
I went in and helped her with the hooks in back. She said
with distaste. "I always hated these things. I can never
get them hooked the first time."
"Buy some with front hooks." I said.
"They are real expensive in my size." She said.
I smiled and said, "I guess I got it for you."
She put her top back on and we went out to the other room.
She looked in the mirror. She sighed, "Thanks for telling
me, I looked like a slut before."
I looked at her again, "You need to at least put some
panties under those jeans, you are showing a little more
than I'd think you'd want to show."
She looked at her ass and said, "Looks okay to me."
I looked at her and said, "Your ass is glorious, that ain't
the problem."
"I never look down there, I was an ass man remember." said
Karen.
"So was I, and Donald liked the boobs. That crotch seam is
way too tight." I said.
She looked again and went and found something that would
probably fit better. She went and put on a denim shortall
with a looser top. She came out of the bathroom and said.
"For the first night as a girl I guess this will be better.
It doesn't show much at all."
She checked over the kids and we went out to at least eat.
We'd get our tickets to the magic kingdom and eat there.
Karen, Sue and Kelly got their tickets easily but when they
tried to process my name there was some kind of a problem.
I was taken aside. A few minutes later some security people
showed up. They had a conversation with Karen and marked
some stuff on a notepad. They came to me.
"Young lady will you come with us."
I had no idea what was going on. We went back to the hotel
complex and they got a room key. They took me to my room.
They unlocked the door and we entered.
One of the guards said, "Gather up all your stuff and put
it in the suitcase."
I picked up the clothes I had left on the floor. My men's
clothes were now girl stuff as well. I put all the clothes
into the suitcase; I went to the camera bag and began to
pack the camera and lenses into the suitcase as well and at
last folded the camera bag and added it as well. I closed
and locked the suitcase with the locks. I took the suitcase
off the shelf.
One of the guards took it and we left the hotel room and
headed some distance into the Disney facility. At last I
was deposited in the waiting area and the guards left. My
name had been given to the receptionist and I was told to
wait till I was called. I was told to take my suitcase with
me wherever I was taken. As I watched I had a bad feeling.
Half the kids here looked like runaways. There were a few
who looked totally confused just like me. I was definitely
confused.
It took several hours before I was called. I was sent into
an office. I carried my suitcase with me. I entered the
office and a woman said. "Please sit down."
I took the chair near the desk leaving the suitcase near
the door. She had some papers in her hands. She read them
and at last she said. "Now would you like to talk about
it?"
Now I really was confused. "Talk about what?" I said.
"Your name comes up as a runaway and the info matches who
you seem to be." She said.
I frowned and said. "I don't even know where I was supposed
to have run away from. I do not know of my parents or even
where I live."
"Do you have any plane tickets? Most runaways do not fly to
get here." She asked.
I dug in my purse and found my tickets. I looked at them
and found my current name was on them. I handed them to the
woman. She picked up the phone and dialed a number. She
finally got an answer. She said. "Disney security, Just got
another from that flight, that's fifteen already today."
She was marking down stuff and at last she hung up. She
turned to me and said. "Before I start this, you need not
tell me anything before the change, all I want is for you
to verify what I tell you."
I just nodded. She smiled and said. "We have no idea what
has happened but so far it looks like everyone on the
flight you were on has been effected. It seems you picked
up your suitcase and when you got to a room, you found the
suitcase; your suitcase had other clothes than what you
packed. In some cases the person was a guy and his suitcase
was filled with girls stuff. Some girls found their cases
filled with boy stuff and some have found clothes of the
same sex but different size. Is this correct."
"Yes." I said.
"And when you put on clothes from your bag your body
changed to match the clothes, usually within 5 minutes."
She said.
"Essentially true, I don't know how long the change took. I
laid down on a bed and dozed off. I woke up like this." I
said.
"Tell me about others in your room." She said.
"There were three that I came with and we all started as
adults. I'll tell you at least one in the room was a man
before. All are girls now. Two are preteen girls, and one
is an adult woman and there is me at age 14. We were all
within a year or two of the same age when we started. The
one who is an adult woman was several years younger than I
was before the changes. The preteens seem to have lost
their adult abilities. Although none of us were related,
there are two who are mother and daughter, and the other
girl seems to be the child of their neighbor. I don't have
a clue of who I am other than the ID papers I am carrying."
I said.
"So far it seems those below age ten lost their adult
abilities, and that accounts for most found by Disney. You
are very fortunate to be at least a teenager. So far every
child we know about is a listed runaway. The info is in the
national crime database or missing children. Our next step
is to contact the people who are your legal guardians. What
happens to you after that is largely a function of their
wishes." She said reaching for the phone.
She dialed a long string of numbers and waited for an
answer. At last she said. "This is Disney security at Walt
Disney world in Florida. We have found the missing child by
the name of Debbie B Hammond. She tried to purchase a
ticket today and her name came up as a runaway."
There was conversation from the other end then she spoke
again. "She was alone and seems to be in good health. I do
not know anything about abduction, but she has a valid
airline ticket from New England. It however is a one way
ticket."
More conversation then she says. "I don't know if she has
been sexually assaulted or raped, we have not asked that."
I said. "I have not been raped and I am still a virgin."
The person on the other end said something and the woman
handed me the phone. I said "Hello"
"Debbie is that really you after all this time. We'd given
up hope on you ever being found." Said the woman at the
other end.
I smiled. "Somehow I can't remember a lot of things, I have
no memory of being abducted and I have no mental scars from
anything. I was not mistreated."
"Do you have any money with you?" Asked the other.
"Lots, but I don't know where it came from, I know I did
not steal it." I said.
"No one asked that. We just want you back safe and sound."
She said.
"I'm fine, and I have enough money for the trip back." I
said.
"Let me talk to the woman with you again." she said.
I handed the phone back to the woman. The woman on the
phone gave details, which the woman with me began to write
down.
At last the woman with me said. "The best we can do is give
her a secure room and keep her safe till someone can get
here to pick her up. Because she is a runaway we must keep
her under guard till someone arrives. We can't send her
home. And whoever comes must have legal proof of who she is
and proof that you are her legal guardians. When we verify
whoever comes, we will release her to them." She said.
The other person spoke and at last she said. "I wish I
could let her visit the park while we are waiting for you
to arrive, but runaways cannot be given any freedom. Policy
says their safety comes first."
She at last hung up the phone and said. "I hate all that,
but rules concerning the handling of runaways is very
specific. You however will get to visit but under specific
conditions. We know you are not a runaway but they will
never know that, now grab your suitcase and come."
She took me to an area in the huge underground complex
under the Magic Kingdom. The first stop was labeled Housing
where I was assigned a room. I put my suitcase in the room.
I was given a map on the underground and of the surface. I
was given a small pack to carry in a pocket of my clothes.
I was told it had to be worn at all times. It was a
security device. I was given a full ticket good only for
the magic kingdom. I was then left at my room. I quickly
made a trip up into the park noting where I had entered
from.
I first went to eat and had a good meal. I was famished. I
rode a few rides after that and stayed in the park till
just about closing time. I enjoyed the Main Street
electrical lighting parade. I grabbed a last snack and
headed back to the underground for the night.
I undressed and went to bed. I was asleep quickly as I was
tired from a very long day. I slept very well.
I woke in the morning and looked at the map of the
underground. I found the cafeteria and after dressing
headed there for breakfast and after a good meal headed out
to explore the park better. In many places my security pack
caused a beep at a doorway or an entrance. Every entrance
and exit had a scan and you could not leave the underground
without a device and you could not enter the underground
without one. This kept the general public out of the
underground and was used to keep track of employees as
well.
I was much better this day and took the camera with me. I
took lots of pictures and had a fun day. I was at least
having fun as I waited. I did not know the pack in my
pocket was also a paging device. On the 4th day just after
lunch the pack began to beep. I took it out.
Almost as soon as I had it in my hand a voice came from it.
"Debbie Hammond please return to your room immediately."
I headed back and arrived to find security waiting. I had
to pack up my suitcase and go with them. We returned to the
security building, I handed back the room key and the
security pack. At last I was taken to a room where I found
a man and a woman waiting.
The woman took me in her arms and said. "I'm so glad to see
you, it's been so long."
The man said. "My princess is looking rather well."
I smiled. "I am in good health."
The people signed papers and I was released to them. We
went out to a car and headed for the airport. Soon we were
on the way home. It was a very long flight. We were headed
for Hawaii.
At last we reached our destination and we picked up a car
from the long term storage area of the airport, and headed
home. It was a long ride to a place on the northwest corner
of the island.
At last we pulled into the driveway of a good sized house
and got out. As we pulled in a teenage boy very close to my
age appeared.
He smiled as he came over and hugged me. "Oh, sis, it's so
nice to see you home."
I smiled and replied. "It's nice to be back."
We entered the house and the man said. "Alright, everyone
into the living room."
We went into the living room and we all sat down. He looked
at me and said. "This won't take long, but is necessary."
I smiled. "I hope it ends a little of my confusion."
"It should." said the man. "So you know you are not nuts.
We never met before, and yes I had a daughter who looked
like you, but she has been dead for several months while we
waited for a replacement. You are the replacement. We paid
a lot of money for you."
He continued. "The replacement program is run by the
government and it kind of takes people who have no real
future and places them into new lives that will be better
than their old lives. Sometimes it's a handicapped person,
sometimes someone alone because of a death in a family
where they are the lone survivor of an accident. It could
be one of many reasons you are here to replace our
daughter.
"My daughter was hurt in an accident and was comatose for
months before she died. We never listed the death; instead
the government changed the records listing you as a
runaway. Before my daughter died, the body was scanned and
stored till a donor mind is found. The government does the
replacement in one of several ways. One is the way you
became our daughter. It is usually an entire planeload of
people like happened to you. You were selected to fit the
profile of my daughter. It means you should have no problem
replacing my daughter."
I smiled and said. "I know what and who I was before and I
seriously doubt I can be a close match for your daughter."
"Because you were a 30 year old man before. I can even tell
you what your name was before and what your handicap was. I
have seen the profile they matched you from and I have some
doubts as well, but I know others who have gotten
replacements from the program and in every case the match
is so good that no one outside the family even suspects.
Much will become clearer in the next few weeks. For
instance. I know you always liked surfing but because you
came from New England and had bad sight you could never
surf well if you tried. I also know you were a technical
person into electronics, ham radio and audio. You also are
a science fiction fan. I know more but you get the idea."
"Do you know how the replacements are done, it's a little
bizarre, and a whole lot unnerving." I said.
"No, explain?" he said.
"Since you know I was a guy, I'll tell you what actually
happened. I was with three of my friends going on vacation
to Florida. We were all guys, and so you know, none of us
were gay. We left New England on a nonstop flight and
arrived in Florida the day Disney's people called you. We
got a rental car and headed for the hotel we were reserved
into. We got our room and took our bags in. Everything was
normal so far.
"In the room one of the guys opened his suitcase and
discovered it full of girls clothes. All of us found the
same thing. I was the first converted. I was sweaty and
took a shower and I pulled on the loosest clothes I could
find in the suitcase and laid down. The others followed
what I had done. I dozed off. All of them were soon wearing
some kind of girl's clothes from their suitcases.
"The two smallest guys noticed the changes first as both
were small as men and ended up a preteen girls. The other
one was changed into a full sized woman very close to his
original size. They woke me up and I found I was in this
body. The ones who became preteen girls we figured were
that way because as guys they did not date. They were not
gay, they just did not date. One had no sexual interest and
the other was just afraid of girls. The one who ended up as
the full grown woman was the one who had dated the most.
"I had dated but never took a girl to bed. I was sexually a
virgin. If all conversions are by design I think the guy
who became the full sized woman will find he has a husband
back home waiting. One of the preteens was her daughter and
the other preteen was a neighbor's child. Anyway we went
out to eat and went to buy tickets to Disney world and that
was when my ID showed up as a runaway." I said.
"You mean you had no choice and no say in anything." He
asked.
"No none, I had no clue of anything going on. At the time I
changed, all my ID stuff changed as well. I'll bet if
checks of my former ID were made, that I never existed." I
said.
"That does sound bizarre. Hey if it works for both of us,
who cares." He said.
I smiled. "If I had a choice of what my other friends got
stuck with or this, I think this is the best choice. I
think I can manage the change."
"Every person checked for a change has a rating for whether
they must be a boy or a girl. The ones who became preteen
kids will be okay because if you take any mind back to
preteen it grows into the body a teenager or older must
either have a neuter rating, or the rating for the sex they
are, or have a rating of 'Can adjust to either sex at any
age'. You have this last rating. I am told teenage girls
are the most difficult to replace. We have waited close to
6 months for you. The claim to cover your memory loss was
that brain reconstruction had been done on you. Your traits
are the same but much was lost." he said.
I considered and at last said. "It should be interesting to
see what happens. I think I may enjoy this; my old life
with bad eyesight was such a struggle. So far I like my
body and it feels perfectly normal. I am at easy in this
form. I think that may be more important than other
factors."
"They tell me the most important thing on all conversions
is the body mind connection. If a mind is comfortable in a
body it solves much more of the transition. A bad match
will never work. They still don't know how far off they can
be and still have a working conversion. You have a total
rating of 97 out of a possible 100 and most working matches
are close to 75 and few if ever over 90. They tell me the
mismatches are minor and may not really matter. I am told
your match is one of the highest three matches ever found."
He said.
"Is there anything I need to know about the body, I mean
physical things or quirks that I should know about." I
asked.
"Both you any your brother wet the bed." Said mother.
"Aw ma you didn't have to tell her. I don't do it anymore.
I stopped last year." said the boy.
"In my original body I wet the bed, but I had stopped by
about age 14. This body does not seem to have that problem.
So that is of no concern." I said.
Dad said. "As a girl Debbie was a pretty smart kid and had
a pretty high IQ. They say that match is close. Do you have
any idea what your IQ was."
"I do not know the exact figure but I know my IQ is above
156 and from what I have learned I think it is in the 170s.
My guess is I am above what she was." I said.
He stared at me for a minute then asked. "Are you sure?"
"In my senior high school English class everyone did badly
on a short essay and our teacher handed back the essays and
told us she expected more from us and that we were the top
English class in the school, and she was not going to
accept that kind of work so she gave it to us to do again.
She told us the reason she expected more from us was the
lowest IQ in the class was 156, and a few were close to
200. Later I found out other things that confirmed where I
was IQ wise. I won't disappoint you." I said.
"Debbie was 148 and is considered high by today's
standards. If you were a true 156 fifteen years ago that is
a lot higher than a 156 today." He said.
"I also know something else. I had bad sight, which is one
of the worst handicaps to deal with. I was legally blind.
From what I have learned since high school Blindness also
gets a point offset on every kind of exam. My 156 was
without any offset. My high school did everything they
could to shoot me down. When things were made right I was
told with my IQ and SAT scores I could have gone to MIT,
which at that time was the top high tech school in the
world. I think I could have gotten into MENSA but I didn't
want that label on me so I never tried." I said.
"We will find out as you will have to take the IQ tests
again before fall. Because of the conversion things need to
be adjusted to what you are now so things can work." He
said.
"You know there will not be a problem." I said.
It was quite late and it had been a long trip. They showed
me my room and I quickly went to bed. I fell asleep easily
and slept well. My thoughts were on how good a life this
could really be.
Next morning was a school day and I had to dress for
school. I wore a skirt and blouse, which I would think was
correct. I at least would not attract much attention on my
first day. I guessed everyone knew I was coming back that
day from my brother. I was ill prepared for the hostile
reception I got that day.
It seemed Debbie had enemies within her classes at school.
One seemed to not believe I was back and I heard comments
to the effect that when she killed someone they were
supposed to stay dead. When I got home I addressed the
subject with Mom.
"Mom, What happened to Debbie before? I am getting some
really rotten stuff at school like she was supposed to
die." I said.
"For what it was worth she was dating a motorcycle guy and
they were in an accident. He died and Debbie barely
survived. The evidence about the accident says they were
deliberately run off the road, however the car that did it
is unknown and has never been found. Debbie has enemies in
school and within the surfing community but I don't think
any of the surfers were involved. We have a pretty good
idea who might be but they have lots of money and could buy
anything or anybody on the island." She said.
"The feelings I am getting at school says I may not live
very long if I continue to go there. It just does not feel
healthy to me." I said.
I went to my room and rested a little. The day had been
unnerving to say the least. I was not happy. I waited for
supper and to see what my brother would say and what Dad
would say. I tried to remain open but cautious. My brother
was the one who started things.
He said to Dad. "I told you not to send Debbie back to
school. What I heard today was real bad. If she continues
to attend, I think she will be dead by the end of the
week."
Dad looked at him then at me. "I doubt it was that bad."
My brother said. "We were not sure before if what happened
was an accident or not, but now I am sure and it is not
just from the kids. Mr. Johnson and Ms Sanu both made
comments that tell me adults are in on this as well. That
school is just unsafe for her."
"All the pieces are fitting together just fine. Do you
think it is safe for you in the school or not?" he asked.
"I would suggest I can be a target to reach her thru. No I
doubt it is safe for me either. The kids and the teachers
make it plain enough that I am not accepted either." He
said.
I tried to not add to this because I was not the cause. At
last Dad said. "I know it will be difficult because of the
grip those folks have on everything here, but both of you
will school at home. I know you can handle it."
My brother gave a big sigh of relief. "Great I was starting
to get very nervous. Why do we even have to stay here?
Can't you get transferred back to the states."
"You know that is not an option, It ain't even the money.
We have discussed this many times. Nothing has changed." He
said.
I looked at him. "It's a matter of government security
isn't it." I said.
"You know I cannot discuss my job situation." He said.
"If you had the sense to check, my previous life had a top
secret security clearance, which I would suspect is part of
why I am here." I said.
"I will check it. If you did it will carry over to this
form. I'll check the IQ as well. You could be right that
there is more going on here than any of us suspects." He
said.
"As a college student I was the only student cleared to be
inside the circle of secret service at a presidential
debate. I was also used as a spy within the school but I
didn't know it when it happened. I was given the info on
both incidents years later. I never sought a government
rating; I got it from one place I worked. I'm told this is
the best way to get a rating as it is considered more
reliable." I said.
He leaned back and said. "I think there is much more going
on here than anyone is saying. I will make some checks
tomorrow. If what you are saying is true, you could be in
much more danger than even I know."
"If you want you and I can discuss this later, alone." I
said.
I went to my room and relaxed and knew Dad would be in to
see me. About 8:00 pm he knocked on my door. He came in and
said. "I want you to tell me everything you know about your
own situation. I mean anything you might think might be
involved with your security clearance. I made a few calls
and I found some really scary stuff. I need everything you
can remember."
I spent over an hour telling him everything I knew. When I
was done he smiled and said. "That confirms a lot of what I
found. That covers most of it. There are other things but
you know the important ones. I didn't think anyone outside
the military or CIA could have the rating you have. You
being here cannot be an accident. I also found something
else. You need not be concerned about school. You are
certified as taking four years of college. You will pretend
to home school and will take the exams but they will not
count, it's going thru the motions to cover the law."
"I'm glad my troubles before were worth something." I said.
"Now as to what is going on here, you go with me tomorrow.
They have not told me anything, but what I just got on the
phone tells me a lot more than either of us knows is going
on here. You are to dress as a Hawaiian girl, a teenager; I
would think a Hawaiian skirt and halter top might be best.
You want to look unofficial." He said.
"That will look real sweet with you all dressed up." I
said.
"I was told to dress casual as well, shorts and a Hawaiian
shirt. Our meeting is not in a usual location, and they are
covering you being out of school and there is a cover for
why we are meeting where we are. It all looks like official
stuff because you are back home. No one will suspect
otherwise." He said.
That was it. He left me to consider my situation. I began
to read thru Debbie's old diaries for clues and info. It
would take quite a while to sort out everything that was
going on in her life. I considered what had gone on that
day at school.
In the morning Dad said to my brother. "You go to school
today and try to stay cool. After school you take Debbie to
the beach to see if she might be able to pick up surfing.
The season starts real quick and I need to know." He said.
"You can't be considering entering her this year. That
would be crazy not to mention dangerous." He said.
"You will do as I say, if we want Debbie back she must be
back 100%. That means school, dancing, surfing, and
everything else." Said Dad.
My brother's look was one of awe. "You really can't expect
her to pick up everything the way it was. The deception
won't last but minutes."
I got up and put a peck on his cheek. "You let me worry
about it. You must treat it as if I am totally back."
He pushed my arm aside. "No, you're as crazy as he is and
you don't have a clue on what you being back really means."
I put my arms around him. "Big brother, I know enough,
Let's see I was Ms Teen Hawaii, I hula like crazy, I am the
top female surfer from Hawaii and I am one of the only
girls to ride the big ones at the bay. There is more but
that is enough for starters. I really think you worry too
much."
He escaped my embrace and said. "You are a crazy bitch, in
a day or so you'll come down out of that cloud and listen
to reason. The next thing you will be telling me is you
know how to deal with the problems at school."
I smiled a big grin. "I've almost got that figured out as
well. You just be ready to take me surfing after school."
He went to his room mumbling. I looked at Dad and shook my
head. I soon left with Dad and we headed for our first
meeting and it was the cover. Dad was meeting with the surf
folks to sign me up for this season. We had quite a
discussion but Dad paid the fees and we both signed the
papers.
Next we went to another location close by and after Dad and
another had a brief conversation on the street we were
taken to what was assumed to be a secure location. The
doors were locked and we both sat down with this other
person.
The other said, "Mr. Hammond and Ms Hammond, it is good to
see you have figured some things out on your own. You
figured out Debbie was killed, and you have already gotten
threats. You know her getting killed the way she did was
avoidable. That motorcycle jock was paid to get her killed
but he waited too long and ended up getting killed as well.
You are stronger than Debbie was before and we can work
with you when we could not work with her."
"I am strong and not weak. "I said.
"You better be, we want you back in school. Your grades do
not matter so long as you pass. You must be socially
visible like your surfing and the Teen Hawaii stuff. The
more visible you are the harder it will be to kill you. It
would draw too much attention. Are you strong enough to
handle the stuff at school without help?" He asked.
"I am working on a plan to deal with that situation. I will
likely reach an understanding with some of my enemies
there. If they somehow think I am a replacement, I may look
inexperienced, it could help a lot." I said.
He replied. "There are plots and subplots in several
different circles, the school is one, the surfers are
another. There may be linkages between several groups. We
are trying to pin down a structure that is at work here.
While all your stuff seems trivial it is still part of a
control structure. It can lead us to those we are trying to
reach and may be an easier way to reach the highest people.
People who abuse power will do it at all levels. They never
count the cost."
"You know I am strong. I will not bend and I won't be
broken. Once I commit to something I will not give up. When
I decide it's not part way, it's to go all the way no
matter what the cost." I said.
"That is why you are here today, one so your father knows
just enough to fully trust you, and so you know you can
trust him as well." He said.
"You mean I got an option on trusting him. Like I kinda
thought with him as my father, I didn't have a choice.
Anyway trust must be earned for both him and me. My normal
position is a usually trust until a person proves unworthy.
We have been getting along fine." I said.
"What we want is to trace command structure, who takes
orders from who, you know the pecking order. We don't want
you to infiltrate the structure. That is far too dangerous.
You are more valuable to be a thorn in the side to
someone." He said.
"I can be anything from a minor irritation to a royal pain
in the ass as the circumstances demand. It's much more fun
to pick away at someone. You get the idea." I said.
"You should know there are several other replacements in
your school and you will be watched. You will have to sort
things out yourself. None of the replacements know who the
others are. They are told there are this many in the
school. There are currently six including you. Your contact
will not be your Dad; it must look like you are not working
together. You should be able to maintain such character
with your Dad just thru normal teenage rebellion. A little
friction needs to show. How to handle that will be up to
you. Your initial contact will be..." He handed me a folder
with a picture and a little info. "His code phrase to you
will always be 'you riding today?' and your reply must be
'hang ten dude.' When he repeats it a second time he feels
it is safe to talk where he is now. Since you both surf you
must adhere to the exact wording. Any other wording like
'Debbie are you riding?' is not a match. He will test you.
Your first contact will be Saturday at the bay." he said.
"I understand, and from things I know this should be very
interesting." I said.
That was it. We left the meeting and got in the car and
headed back. He knew he could not ask about my contact. He
said. "What was that last part about?"
"My contact is one of my known enemies. I would say that is
interesting enough." I said.
"I would say so but Debbie had so many enemies another
would never be noticed, but you will see about that." He
said.
We talked lightly the rest of the way home. At the house he
dropped me off and said. "If you want to study your
surfing, look at the video tapes. It may help you learn
again."
"That may help a lot, Thanks." I said.
"One rule, you can walk to the beach from the house, but
never surf alone. Wait for your brother." He said.
I giggled and said. "That is really a dumb rule, that means
I better not get caught."
He yelled. "Debbie, don't even think about breaking it."
I opened the house door and went in ignoring his yelling. I
would never break that rule but he didn't need to know
that. I grabbed a light lunch and sat down to study the
tapes. I watched some nice practice runs on some nice waves
for the first tape. The second tape I looked at was big
boards at the bay. It was a little scary especially when I
was shown doing amazing things and riding impossible waves.
I was also shown doing rescues. I went to another tape as I
waited for my brother to come in from school.
He saw the tapes when he came in. I was already in a one-
piece swimsuit. He saw the bay tape and said. "If you are
looking at that you are braver than I thought, or you are
totally crazy."
"I must be totally crazy." I laughed.
I headed for the back door. He grabbed towels and at the
rack in back I said. "Which one is mine?"
"Yours are the hot pink." He said.
I grabbed the regular board and we headed down the path to
the beach. He did not grab a board and when we got to the
beach he said. "Okay, let's see what you are made of. Go
out and see what you can manage without a lesson."
I didn't say a word and just went into the water. I made my
first attempt kneeling and only went a little way. I looked
up and he was gone. Seconds later I saw him setting up a
video camera. I managed to stand up on my third try and at
least got a short ride. We were there for 2 hours and he
taped it all. By the end of the session I was getting some
pretty good rides. Finally I had enough.
I said. "That's enough for today."
I headed for the house as he broke down the camera
equipment. Mom was in the kitchen when I came in she said.
"Dad was worried you might go out alone."
"I was with my brother, he's breaking down the camera." I
said.
"How did it go?" She asked.
"Not bad, I'm a little rusty." I said.
"Supper is almost ready." She said.
"I can smell it, yummy, liver and onions." I said.
She looked at me surprised. "What don't you like?"
"I eat most anything, just no anchovies on the pizza." I
said.
She gave me another stare. "And what are your favorite
deserts."
"Let's see, strawberry shortcake, German chocolate cake,
cheesecake, any kind of berry pies. Custard pudding and
pie." I said.
Another hard stare. She said. "Dad was really concerned
about you trying to break the no surfing alone rule."
I shrugged and said. "Hey I'm a moon child, water is my
element."
"Hold it right there, you read that like a script." She
said.
I looked at her puzzled. "Mom, what I said is me, 100% me,
and I don't understand why you are staring at me like
that."
Her expression was one of wonder as she said. "We will
discuss this when your father gets home."
I went and pulled on some shorts and a T-shirt and returned
just as Dad came in. My brother had already put the tape in
the machine.
Mom started to serve as she said. "We all wondered how
close things could actually be with Debbie. She came in and
smelled the Liver and onions cooking and said 'yummy.' I
asked her what she didn't like. Tell them what you said."
"I said, I eat almost anything except no anchovies on the
pizza. She asked about favorite deserts and I said,
Strawberry shortcake, German chocolate cake, cheesecake,
all kinds of berry pies and custard pudding and pie.' She
asked me about my lack of concern about the no surf alone
rule and I said. 'I am a moon child, water is my element.'
She keeps giving my these strange looks." I said.
Dad laughs and says. "Those are the exact words the real
Debbie would give, Just for laughs, what was your actual
birthday and time."
"July 8, 1947 at 12:45 AM." I said.
Dad said. "Now that is scary, Debbie was born on July 8,
1974 at 12:45 AM."
My brother said. "Let me put the tape on. I took sis to the
beach and I didn't give her a lesson and just sent her out
to try on her own. This is the tape from the third ride she
attempted."
We ate as we watched the tape and only got about half way
thru the tape when the phone rang. Dad picked it up and
talked to the folks on the other end and at last hung up.
He looked at me.
"Princess is having a busy day. We got to see about you in
a hula skirt."
I headed for the bedroom and my brother followed. He found
the skirt and top and told me to put them on and come to
the living room. I did the quick change and went out to the
living room.
He said, "Okay, I play and you show us your moves. Don't
worry about hand movement, just kind of wave them."
He started slow and I began to move. It took a few minutes
to get with the flow and he got faster and faster. I kept
up real well and he got faster and faster till he started
to mess up.
He looked at me. "I guess we can take her there. There is a
welcome back party for Debbie, and I know everyone will
want to see if you can still move like before. Let's go."
said Dad.
We went out to the car and made the hour trip and joined a
little celebration. I joined others and I was officially
welcomed back. I got up with some other girls to dance and
things began slow like at home but at the fast end it was
much faster and I still had all the moves. The other girls
dropped out one at a time. At last there was just me.
I kind of followed what the drummer did and at last ended
next to the mayor who said, "I guess that makes it
official, Debbie is back."
Everyone clapped and slowly the gathering broke up and we
headed home. It had been a long day for me. I went to bed
as they finished watching the tape.
Next morning I ate a good breakfast and got ready for
school. I wore jeans and a plain top and tried to not look
sexy at all. I was also preparing for possible trouble. I
put an extra change of clothes in the locker at school just
in case. I tried to act like I was ignoring the chatter
from my enemies. When Moesha gave me a shove to get my
attention, I acted like I was daydreaming.
"Huh! What was that for?"
"That was for not paying attention." She said.
"Why on earth should I pay attention to you, all I see is
the same old Moesha. I'm not your boyfriend, and I'M not
that kind of girl, are you?" I said.
I got daggers from her eyes. "We were talking about you?"
"You are entitled to your opinion, and considering that you
don't like me, I already know what that is all about. If
you said something intelligent I might listen." I said.
"Ms Hammond, you are looking for trouble." She said.
I faced her. "May I rephrase that for you, I am looking at
trouble, but I think everyone knows it anyway. I don't have
a clue on why you dislike me. Maybe jealousy of my Teen
Hawaii title, or maybe you don't have the moves I do, or
maybe it's my surfing ability. I really don't know?"
"I dislike your family, you ain't from Hawaii." She said.
"You have few choices, one, adjust, I can't change what I
am. Two, prove you are a better Hawaiian than I am. Or
three, shut up." I said.
We'd drawn a big crowd. There were teachers in the back.
She was getting real mad. "I don't have to take this from
you."
I backed up and said. "Careful, Moesha is about to blow.
You don't want to get caught in her lava flow, she'll
really burn ya." I headed for next class.
I didn't hear a single word as I departed. I got to class
and got some nods of approval from some of the guys and
some of the girls. I knew I would have to be careful at
lunch. The teacher came in and she spoke.
"Ms Hammond, That was a most unladylike outburst. Do you
have anything to say for yourself."
I stood. "Considering she was out to start a catfight, I
think things went rather well. If she wants to fight me
I'll consider a wrestling match."
The teacher saw she was not going to win said. "You
represent Hawaii to many people, your behavior should be
better."
I smiled. "Oh, I see a catfight is more ladylike, I'll have
to remember that." I sat down.
Half the class snickered and the teacher just begins the
class. She picks on me more than usual for answers and I
get everything right, to her dismay. Class ends and I head
for lunch. I fully expect I will either get caught in a
food fight, or someone will dump food on me. I was again
acting preoccupied. I saw it coming and moved gracefully
out of the way as Moesha tried to dump a full tray of food
on me. Instead she got her boyfriend with it. She also got
hit with some of it herself. I walked by and said. "Moesha,
boys like to be spoon fed, well it's nice to see you
sharing. Looks like you need a bib."
She glared at me. "I'll get you for this."
"For what, looks to me like you're just being klutzy." I
said.
"That food was meant for you." She said. She looks at the
gathering crowd.
"So you know, I like to be spoon fed, I'm surprised your
boyfriend lets you feed him like some swine." I paused
shaking my head. "It's such a shame to waste food when so
many children overseas are starving."
She was seeing red now. She picked up a piece of pie from a
friends tray and threw it at me. I ducked and it hit one of
the teachers standing in back right in the face. There was
a gasp from the group. I just motioned like I was marking a
scorecard with 2 points and just walked out. I skipped
lunch this day.
Next class I got more smiles including one from the
teacher. After that class Moesha's boyfriend met me in the
hall. He grabbed my arm. "I don't like you calling me a
pig."
"I did no such thing, I implied she treats you like a pig.
Frankly I'm surprised you'd go with a girl who treats
people the way she does." I said.
"You know, I never noticed you before, but I like your
style." He said.
"Why thank you Carl." I said and headed for my last class.
That was a non-event, I finished the day and met my brother
and we headed home. In the car he said. "You sure got a lot
of attention today. The whole school is buzzing, even the
seniors have noticed. You sure did knock Moesha down a few
notches."
"And what else did you hear?" I said.
"There was not a word against me and darn little against
you. I think you just made things a whole lot more
interesting. Oh, Moesha got 5 hours of detention for
throwing that pie. You earned a whole lot of respect today.
The whole school will be watching." He said.
At home we hit the surf again for a couple of hours. At
supper Dad told me he had gotten a number of calls from the
school about the goings on that day. After we ate I had to
give him the full play by play of everything. To say he was
amused was putting it mildly. It was Friday so we'd have
the weekend for things to settle.
I went to my room and a little while later I heard the
phone ring. Mom called, "Debbie, phone."
I went to the phone and picked it up. "Debbie, Carl, I just
had this huge blowup with Moesha, she's real pissed with
you." He said.
"That ain't my problem." I said.
"It is if she goes out and gets herself hurt or killed
trying to out do you." He said.
"Explain?" I said.
"She wants to prove she is better than you, now don't get
me wrong, lots of girls surf in Hawaii, but she isn't going
to settle for regular surfing. She is going up to the Bay
tomorrow." He said.
"Are you going to the Bay with her." I asked.
"Hell no, I don't want to be there if she gets hurt." He
said.
"Carl, you need to be there especially if she does get
hurt. I will be there." I said.
"You wouldn't make her have an accident?" he asked.
"Carl, In case no one ever told you my surfing policy it is
real simple. Safety first. At the Bay especially. Ask
anyone, I have and will continue to place safety first. I
have thrown away my runs in competition to save someone's
life. If Moesha gets in trouble, I will be there for her."
I said
"Are you sure." He asked.
"Carl, I have no axe to grind with Moesha. She has been
attacking me. Anyway if you want to know how I treat my
enemies in surfing, call Mitch. He will tell you quite
honestly but he will tell you what I have done to save
others. I play it straight with everyone." I said.
"If I come I will look for you." he said.
He hung up and I headed back to my room. I had not reached
the room when the phone rang again. Mother said. "Debbie,
for you again."
I picked it up. "Hello"
"Debbie, you bitch, you want me to prove I am better than
you, meet me at the Bay tomorrow if you got the guts." She
said.
"Moesha, I will be at the Bay tomorrow whether or not you
come or not. I need to practice. I will need to say a few
words to you there. Do not go in till I get there." I said.
"I don't need you bossing me around." She said.
I lowered my voice. "Moesha, I am dead serious on this. The
Bay is dangerous, and no one including Mitch or myself
surfs there alone. You don't go in the water without a
buddy. Mitch and I are bitter enemies but at the bay we are
often buddies, why? Because if either of us gets into
trouble the best person likely to be able to help is the
other. At the Bay we are fiercest competitors but the best
of buddies. You cannot surf the bay without putting safety
first. If you doubt me call Mitch."
She gives me a "Yeah, Right." and hangs up.
I just put the phone down and it rings again. I pick it up.
"Hello."
"Debbie, Mitch, what the hell is going on, I've been on the
phone all night with girls and others from your high
school. Who is this Moesha and what is she trying to
prove." He says.
"I'll be at the bay tomorrow. We can talk then. You are not
done with the phone yet. I expect Moesha to call you. Just
tell her the truth." I said.
"Good, I'll see you then." He said and hung up.
I went back to the bedroom and did not get another call
that night. I rested well and got extra sleep that night. I
didn't know how important that would be the next day.
We ate a good breakfast and loaded 2 big boards and the
video stuff and headed for the Bay. We arrived and checked
the surf forecast. It would be a big day. We beat most this
day. I sat studying the waves. I felt a tinge of fear.
I was bought back to reality by a voice. "No daydreaming
here. If you ain't ready go back home."
"Mitch. Oh, I'm ready if anyone is ever ready for this
place." I said.
"You riding today?" he asked.
"Hang ten dude!" I replied.
He grabbed his board and I grabbed mine and we headed out.
Once outside and alone he said. "You riding today."
"Hang ten dude." I said.
"You sure got things stirred up real quick." He said.
"You know how good I am at influencing friends and making
enemies." I said.
"I don't need a report, half of my calls were reports last
night. You are sure getting things polarized in a hurry. I
just needed to verify contact with you. This could be a
messy day. Moesha will not be the only beginner, and I know
there will be problems." He said.
"I will be on my toes, I know the danger and I am ready.
What you saw on shore was a tinge of fear. If you don't
feel a little fear when you come here you ain't human." I
said.
"No need to get derogatory." He said.
I laughed. "In your case, you are a fool." I said.
"I'm glad to see you have a sense of humor, the original
was often a bitch. This is a distinct improvement." He
said.
I lifted my arm and gave it a sniff. "I didn't know I had
BO, maybe I can fit in with the guys after all."
He laughed. "I guess I'll need to sharpen my wit if I need
to deflect your barbs. I could really learn to enjoy this."
"If we are done out here, we better go in, we have a bunch
of newbies to show the ropes to." I said.
"Yes, we better." He said.
He let me take the first run. For the first try on a big
board at the Bay it was not bad. It would not win a prize
but at least I didn't wipe out. I watched him and he didn't
really do much better. We got back in and stood out boards
in the sand. We waited for everyone he expected then we
gathered them together in one group.
"Okay most of you have never surfed here before and is why
we are having this meeting. Debbie and I are the veterans
here and what I have to say could save your life. Do not
argue with us about any of this, just absorb this and
accept it. If you ignore it you could end up badly bent or
dead. If you want to surf here you must have an attitude
adjustment. That hate of someone, or want to do someone
harm is to be left on the beach. When you enter the water
here we all protect each other. You come here to do one
thing and that is to surf and not get hurt. We put our
personal feelings aside. We are all best friends here. If
you cannot do this you best stay on the beach. I hate
Debbie's guts but here I am her best friend. She put her
hate aside last season and gave up a competition run to
save my life. I was knocked out by my board when I went
over the falls. She got to me when no one really saw what
happened. I was still out cold when she got me to the
beach." He paused.
"That means if she did not rescue me I'd be dead. I owe her
at least my life. Now you need to pick a buddy for the day.
It means a person you will look out for. It means when you
make a run he watches you, and he makes a run you watch
him. That does not mean others will not watch. Anyone
outside should keep an eye on every surfer making a run. If
you are inside or paddling out, ditto. If you see something
happen to someone, don't think that it is someone else's
job, You try to help. If someone gets there first great you
can back off. If you wipe out here more than any place
else, get away from your board. On a big day your board
could cut you in half. I have seen a friend die that way.
Surfing here is real serious business. Do not take it
lightly." He said.
We had them make out a buddy list and gave it to the
ambulance people. We started by taking them all out. Early
on Mitch and I took turns making runs. We tried to keep it
so one of us was outside all the time. Things were getting
real big.
Three of Moesha's friends were the first victims. One held
on to her board and went over the falls with it. I got to
her first. It was not good to look at. She had a broken
arm. I got her into the shallows on my board. The medical
folks took her. I headed back our only to see Mitch going
after one of the other girls. She got a couple of cracked
ribs for her trouble.
The third was a half hour later with a bad wipeout. She
jumped from her board but went the wrong way. She got hit
with her board and knocked cold. The medics thought
concussion but the hospital said fractured skull.
After that all the rest of the newbies quit. Only Moesha
remained. I let Mitch make runs while I was keeping and eye
on her. At last Moesha began what was to be the scariest
run of the day. I followed her having a bad feeling. I saw
her wipeout and go over the falls headfirst. I saw her go
down and saw her board go right after her. She did not come
up. Her board did in two pieces.
I jumped from my board and found her easily enough. She hit
the bottom so hard she was partially buried; her head and
shoulders were covered in the sand. I got a grip on her
middle and pulled. It took three pulls to get her loose. I
swallowed a bunch of water too. I got to the shallows with
her. I let her body float as best I could.
The medics came in and I said. "You want a flat board she
could have a damaged back. She hit bad." I said.
They got the backboard and quickly headed for the hospital
with her. Mitch was making his last run as I gathered up my
board.
As he came in he saw my grave expression. He said. "How
bad."
"I'd rather not give you my thoughts, let's just say it
don't look good." I said.
"I want to know." he said.
"She hit the bottom head first, and got hit with her board.
The board came up in two pieces. Her head and shoulders
were buried in the sand. I had to pull her out. I'd think
broken neck at minimum." I said.
"We better go to the hospital then, Tell your brother I'll
bring you home, Let him take your boards and Moesha's." I
said.
I went and told my brother. I went with Mitch and we headed
directly for the hospital. We checked with the emergency
room and found she was in surgery. Her folks were in the
waiting area.
Her Dad saw me and said. "You are the cause of this you
little bitch."
Mitch motioned for me to play it cool. He said. "I don't
know what your problem is Pops, but Debbie saved Moesha's
life. We are here because what happened is very serious.
Debbie rescued three of the girls today and I rescued one."
Before her Dad could say anything Carl walked in. He looked
at me. "How bad." He said.
"Haven't told us yet. She really got bent, hit the bottom
head first, got hit with her board. The board came up in
two pieces, she didn't come up. When I got to her, her head
and shoulders were buried and stuck in the sand at the
bottom