I Love Lucy
I welcome comments that will help improve my story telling. If you are one of those people that get off making negative sarcastic remarks. but no honest critique, I would rather not hear from you. It was another boring day at the corner drugstore. Jim had to force himself to tend to his duties at the soda fountain. He had to wipe down the counters and fill all the drink boxes. Everything was routine until a cute little Blonde came in the side door from the parking lot. Jim knew the moment she...