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Okay, before we got started here, I want to thank everyone who wrote last week to congratulate me about my upcoming wedding. For those of you who were wondering, yes it's true and I think it's right this time. Now this one is a very long story. it's a character study so those of you who hate long stories might want to pass on this one. On the other hand I have been listening to you and I will be alternating shorter stories that will probably be four pages or less, starting with a short one...
I read and listen to the words that are written in the reviews that are left after my stories, they are what gives me the incentive to write on. All of you who eave reviews I feel close to and regard you as my friends, but when those reviews diminish and become more critical, then it is time to change, or to stop. In many ways I had wanted to bring the cake story to a conclusion a while ago, but I was persuaded to resurrect it. Recently I wanted to find the best ending and at that time...
Bullies Extended Ending When I originally wrote the story I ended at the last chapter including the epilogue. I left the gender of the protagonist intentionally blank. I didn't have any greater truths for anyone. In general, after years of these tg sex stories (even those without sex) I didn't see a need for a happy ending nor justice. If you want happy endings and justice go to the real movies where the hero always wins and the villain gets it in the end. But after reading the...
BEFORE YOU GO THINKING I was a really dumb little shit, let me set the record straight about why I was three years in kindergarten. Back then, in those olden days fifty plus years ago, there wasn’t an organized nursery school or preschool program, and kindergartens were taught mostly by volunteers in church basements. That was what got my mother into the classroom. She had been a campaigner for teaching the children of Swedish immigrants how to speak proper English and putting them on the...
She takes a moment to enjoy the moment or maybe she was reconsidering what she was going to say but she said anyways,“I I like “ she hesitates,“you like what, tell me, so I can do it” I respond back as I am caught up on the moment myself her skin felt some soft like silk, she was so dedicated so tender. I love the way her body responded to my every touch I felt a raise with everything.“I too like oral, I like to be sucked slowly take your time, suck the tip tease it with the tip of your tongue”...
Jenny nodded and Maria showed her where the phone was. Jenny decided to make two calls, her mother, and a friend who would worry. Marie told her one of the men she would meet in two weeks had a sideline business doing radiator repairs. He would pickup her car, clean her radiator and put in new coolant. She could tell her folks that she lost all her coolant, and that the car wouldn't be ready until Sunday. She wouldn't even have to lie if she spoke carefully Jenny was shaking when she got...
Earlier this summer, Nostrumo reposted a story that has intrigued me for years - The Adventures of Samantha. In all that time, neither he nor I could find the ending to that story. Anyway, in posting the tale, he issued a challenge to come up with an ending. Just about the time I was finishing up my little sequel, Nostrumo posts the discovered ending. Well, that left me in a bit of a bind. First, I had about fifty pages of text just about ready to post, but the justification, ie,...
ENTRAPMENT, TWO SIDES TO EVERY STORY PART 5B. THE SAME AS PART 5A UNTIL THE LAST CHAPTER WHERE IT CONCLUDES WITH A HAPPIER ENDING FOR THOSE READERS THAT THOUGHT THE STORY A LITTLE TOO BRUTAL AND UNRELENTING XXX MR WILTON'S PERSPECTIVE I drifted off to sleep after she left, briefly waking at about 9AM the next morning. I sent her a text message with the photo I had taken last night to give her something to think about whilst she was at work that day. I wasn't working until...
I was spending a few days in the city visiting a friend of mine, and one of the days he was working, so I had lots of time to myself. This seemed like the perfect time to find a place to get the happy ending massage I'd always wanted. The happy ending massage experience seemed perfect for me for a few reasons. First, I am turned on by Asian women, and they seem to be the ones in this line of work. Second, the whole "naughty" aspect of getting a back room, massage parlor handy was a...
This is story is sort of a sequel to "Just Another Love Story". It takes place about ten years after the events of the previous story. It may stand alone, but probably not. I think it would make a lot more sense if you read JALS first. I came very close to abandoning this story. It's taken the best part of a year to finish, and it was only because I dusted it down and reread it recently that I decided to have another go at it. I'm still not sure if it works. If you've got...
The Summer Swap (alternate ending) Synopsis: With the help of some moonlight magic one summer evening, a guy has a very unique 'first time'. (This is an alternate ending - and quite dark.) [email protected] ********************************************************************** The Summer Swap (alternate ending) It all started as a blessing, a chance to experience the other side. Now, I realize it was a curse. Thanks to that magical moonlit evening so...
Note: I am not the author of this. These seven additional chapters of "The Adventures of Samantha" were originally posted to the Usenet by Nostrume sometime around 1997, and were available in his site "Nostrumo's Book" until it closed. Nostrumo claimed at the time that this ending was written by the original author of "The Adventures of Samantha." I have no way to verify that claim, but Nostrumo's good reputation and the general similarity in style suggest that it's probably...
Introduction: What if John Fields Survived AUTHORS NOTE* I said a story of mine was published and some guy commented saying Posting a story on this site isnt getting a story published. Ya I know. A while ago a Woman who worked for Amazing life media inc contacted me via email and said she wanted to use my story Gothic Amy and Me or as it should have been called Gothic Amy and I in a book with a bunch of other sex stories. Its legit and its going to be published soon. I jumped at the chance and...
We recently visited my sister-in-law and spent 2 weeks there at her place in Tampa, Fla. They have pretty big home and have a woman come in everyday to tidy up the place. She actually prepared our rooms for us. She was about 45ish and in pretty decent shape. We had been there for the first week and i noticed the cleaning lady's schedule was pretty routine. Right down to catching her sniffing my underwear. She didn't think i saw her, but she would go in to get the dirty laundry and when she saw...
…..A king? A completely, utterly, absolutely, entirely useless king! Holy shit was I in for it now! The king was a nice card but of absolutely no use to me whatever. Patrick’s straight was good enough, and my hope of waving a full house in his face was dashed. Patrick, of course, was grinning like an idiot. “Oh, girl,” he said, “I’m afraid it’s time for a little payback.” I had no reason to doubt that assessment. Well….. nothing ventured, nothing gained. “I’ve been waiting for this,” Patrick...
ReluctanceSame Blouse, Revised Ending By shalimar There are times when Gabriel and I go out to those dance clubs that we score with the girls, other times one of us gets the action while the other gets to see the girl leave alone, or with another guy. Sometimes neither of us gets the brass ring. Tonight was one of those losing nights. What I don't understand about him is that he is so good looking that all the girls should be falling all over him. As for me, I would be considered an excellent...
I've always thought the Hammer movie was very well done, except for the ending. This is how I would have ended it. If you haven't seen the movie go see it before reading this. Seriously, it's really good and you should watch it anyway. * Dr Jekyll & Sister Hyde - an alternate ending by BobH (c) 2017 When he heard the commotion in the street outside, Dr Henry Jekyll immediately knew what it meant. The game was up. Accompanied by a baying mob,...
Girl Problems (Alternate Ending) By Justin Felder This is essentially the same story as Girl Problems, but I changed the ending after some constructive criticism. "I still don't understand why it takes you so long," Justin shouted from outside Miranda's dorm. "If you won't accept it just does, then there's nothing to tell you," Miranda shouted back, finishing her mascara. "But you haven't told me anything. Maybe if...
The Family Business (an alternative ending) Introduction I have long been an admirer of Belladonna's stories. The Family Business was one of the first I read and is still one of my all-time favourites. I especially enjoyed the obvious love that Taylor had for his wife and his wish to try to make amends for his many shortcomings. I began to imagine an alternative ending which focused on the changes in Taylor after his wife and mother feminized him. This story begins on Taylor's...
This guide is intended to help you give your man, and I assure you, for as long as your hands are on him and you follow this guide, he will most surely belong to you, an amazing happy ending massage. I assume you can already give a good massage, so this won’t focus on the technical details of the massage, but rather how to heighten and eroticize the experience. There will also be some short vignettes for the prurient and perverted to read, even if uninterested in giving massages themselves....
My wife and I are a Dom couple that is accustomed to having someone live with us as our slave. We have had several over the past few years and have even had a few runaways show up on our door. But what happened on this particular night was like nothing I could ever have been prepared for.It was quite late as I was sitting watching a movie alone. I heard a knock on the door and when I opened the door I found a young girl standing there with two bags. I was curious as I did not remember my wife...
Note: I had been considering writing multiple different endings for my ‘What to do now’ story, even though in my opinion it could stand alone as a thought provoking little piece of erotic fiction. It seems that the only thoughts it provoked in the general literotica members was anger somehow, so I don’t know what I will do now, aside from this one ending that I have decided to write, based mostly on the feedback from the opening story. This isn’t an ending I had originally envisioned and not...
Responding to the large number of requests I wrote this ending to Clark Kent or Superman? It is one of several possible endings I envisioned, one of the more likely ones to me. I hope it satisfies the readers looking for an extension to the original. If not, imagine your own ending – it’s fun. There is no sex whatsoever in this story. Barry returned shortly with Linda. Damn! Each one was better looking than the last. How could somebody like Barry attract all these incredible women? Ouch....
Author's note: This is an alternative ending to Missy's story "Just This Once", with the first part a transcription of hers to help set the stage. Missy's stories are always entrancing, and this one is no different. As I often do with her stories, I find myself wishing for a different outcome with a sense of justice for the protagonist, but I realize the author has a different intention. This is the ending I was hoping for, but you should read Missy's original (and superior) story first...
I like to pamper myself by going to spa and massage centers. In the starting, I was unaware that there were adult massage centers too in NHP. One fine day, I went to the spa in West NGP and there I got to choose my masseuse from 3-4 girls. All girls were wearing saree and I chose a girl named Mamta. It was the first time I saw her and after seeing her, I was stunned. Mamta took me to the cabin and asked me to change. After 5 minutes, she came and got the oil and stuff. She was looking like a...
Extremities (1986) the movie. Starring - Farrah Fawcett. Revised Ending. The following is an actual plot review of the movie from when it was first released in 1986. These are not my words but are those of the reviewer. "An intended rape victim manages to escape from her attacker but leaves her purse behind. Worried that he may visit her house and finish what he has started, she contacts the police but they are unable to help, saying that she has no proof. "If he...
I recently read the story, The Thrill of Cheating by Flash of Stocking. As I read it, I hoped to find an ending that I liked, but that wasn't the case. I contacted the author, and he graciously granted me permission to provide an alternative ending, knowing that I would take it in a very different direction. Clearly this casts a very different conclusion to the story. I'll leave it to the reader to decide which they prefer. The next morning, Jen spent a long time in the shower. She felt so...
Fiona opened her eyes and drank in her surroundings.Hot sunlight radiated through the windows of Cuppa Joe’s, where it mingled with the noisy effusion of the espresso machines, and gave the café a confined, sultry feel. There was a defined bustle of other patrons, and the air seemed crowded with conversation. She and Mark were fortunate to even find a table today. As the chattering continued, Fiona raised the cup before her and took a sip of her steaming soya mocha, enjoying the slight burning...
FetishLuca held up his gloved right hand and threw a punch. It connected with his opponents' jaw but did not knock him down. He saw a tooth go flying out of the corner of the other man’s mouth. As Luca pranced around the boxing ring he could hear notes and melodies playing in his head, soft as anything. His feet seemed to follow the musical notes floating in his mind. Light as air his body seemed to levitate around the ring.Out of the corner of his eye, the flash of a camera went off. Momentarily...
Gay MaleThis story has been kicking around in my subconscious for years but it has taken a long time to get it on to paper. I will warn readers now that the story takes some darker paths latter on and hopefully some unexpected turns. Although still a work in progress the story arc is complete and hard to move. This is my first submitted story so please provide your feedback and input. I am a slut for public opinion. Special thanks to Rezai Balo for helping edit the story and bring it...
Ever since my wife died last year, I have been on a desperate search for a suitable method of death to join her in the afterlife. She was ****d and murdered while I was away on a business trip. Her death was violent, bloody and horrible from the evidence and as told by the assailant. She must have suffered in agony for many hours and wondered why I wasn’t there to protect her. I have blamed myself ever since and now I must find my peace in the only way I know how.I decided to take my own life,...
This story has been kicking around in my subconscious for years but it has taken a long time to get it on to paper. I will warn readers now that the story takes some darker paths latter on and hopefully some unexpected turns. Although still a work in progress the story arc is complete and hard to move. This is my first submitted story so please provide your feedback and input. I am a slut for public opinion. Special thanks to Rezai Balo for helping edit the story and bring it...
Happy Ending by Eric Disclaimer, author's note X files belong to Chris Carter 10/13 products and Fox no infringement is intended This story came to me in a dream. With drawn guns Mulder and Scully stood outside a door. Hope and fear played across Mulder's face while Scully stood stoically at his side. " This is it, Scully - the Cancerman's lair. " " If the tip was right, Mulder. " " It's got to be right Scully! It all fits. " A disarming...
….A jack!! That gave me a full house, beating Patrick’s straight! A whoop of triumph left my lips. What an incredible rush! I mean, it’s sweet to win, but when victory drops into your hands after escaping from the clutches of almost certain defeat it has the saccharine scent of honey and the unbearably, indescribably delicious taste of a preposterously decedent dessert. Although I’d won in February, this was so much better than that first adventure, and it was a rush I knew I would just had to...
….A jack!! That gave me a full house, beating Patrick’s straight! A whoop of triumph left my lips. What an incredible rush! I mean, it’s sweet to win, but when victory drops into your hands after escaping from the clutches of almost certain defeat it has the saccharine scent of honey and the unbearably, indescribably delicious taste of a preposterously decedent dessert. Although I’d won in February, this was so much better than that first adventure, and it was a rush I knew I would just had to...
ReluctanceBefore & After By Mel Huntington The author welcomes feedback at [email protected] I shut the water off and stepped out of the shower, silently wishing that a federal law could be enacted mandating decent-sized towels at all lodging establishments in these United States of America. I made due with what I had and then stepped out of the bathroom into the vanity/closet area of the motel room. I inspected myself in the mirror: 5'8", blonde hair, blue eyes, and 155 pound...
A Happy Ending I had gotten into trouble with a school bully; a mean cuss who had beaten me and nearly raped me during my last day at high school. This bully, Jake, and his friends had made my last year of school miserable, always taunting me and calling me names like 'fag', 'sissy' and worse. That last day at school I was in the restroom when he came in with a buddy of his. I had just finished my business and Jake thought it would be a fitting end to the school year if I gave him a...
I had plans for other sessions but to write them felt like a check list of things which can be read in lots of other stories out there. Maybe someday I’ll think of more creative ways to write them. Today I’m skipping ahead to the end I envisioned…at least on the part of Samantha. A Trip to the Ruins Samantha couldn’t wait to be done with classes for the term. She had arranged to escape to the Scottish highlands for a few days after her last final and simply disappear. All she wanted to do was...
We have, again, tried to make this story as realistic as all the others. But there are some details that we have been unable to confirm, hope that this does not spoil the enjoyment. At the start of this, we never knew just how far it would go. But we have ended the story the way we wanted it to. Again I must say a very big thank you to my wife, Sylvia. Over the last few months you have been a pillar of strength. You have helped in every aspect of this story series, and without you I would...
Introduction: this one ended with a touchy-feely ending, but I like it, and you possibly might like it too!! Sorry its not as erotic as it could be, but, you know what, its good closure, and Im happy with it please write to me if you want to make a series or a stand alone story with any of my characters, Im more than happy to approve them, and also, dont worry all twelve of my fans Ive got another story under consideration, and I promise it will be better than this one, as in 10 times more...
We fucked in the sea, going into the water up to our elbows, Lyn took off her bikini bottoms and wrapped her legs around me, l supported her while she fed my cock into her pussy, neither one of us realised how much further she could take my cock inside her when fucking this way, but it was when l shot my load that Lyn began to spasm, her legs and arms gripped me so tight, l didn’t think she was ever going to let me take my cock from her firm tight fitting warm pussy, it was great fucking in...
Introduction: Not the real ending, Peace Its been a weird couple of weeks since Fathers Day. My family has been coming together supporting one another. There has been a few other changes which have caught my eyes…Simone and Vanessa. Both have well been flirting with me, and showing me affection other then a niece to her uncle. I have been a bit worried about the way they come up to me in front of my wives and loves placing their arms around me and kissing me. Its at those times I hear giggles....
A day in the hot sun is fantastic, add sex and the whole day is a hundred times better.Taking off her bikini bottoms she wrapped her legs around me. / I ran my finger down her spine once more stopping on her arse hole. / Her inner thighs were glistening from her own juices.I didn’t meet with Julia on the Sunday, l didn’t see her again until l returned to the education system, but l did meet with Lyn for our picnic. I was waiting at the train station as arranged, when l got into her car she said...
My business meeting had run late. I was to meet Susan an hour ago. She had talked me into letting her come along to my most recent company convention. For years I had gone alone, as most of the men in the company had done. But this year she insisted on seeing just what went on at these conventions. So, reluctantly I agreed. We had an early dinner together because I was to meet with the CEO of the business that evening. I assumed it would be a short meeting so I told Susan just to go ahead to...
Group SexA plethora of internet porn has led an entire generation of men to believe that every paid massage ends in sex or at least, a good handy. It's a fact that I have to contend with daily. The entire town passes by my parlor every day; they all know I'm here; they all think they know what goes on behind my curtain. Parades of men, some young, some old, come into my shop every day. There is rarely a ring on their finger, though I often see the tan lines on those who have removed them for the visit....
Straight SexMoving to a new place (alternate ending) The day of the move in was at hand. Timmy had told the movers what to move and where everything went. They would do it for her for an additional fee. He had also arranged for the walls to be painted and for carpeting in the rooms. He even arranged for new furniture in Lydia's room. Timmy was in complete control over both of their lives. They moved into the new apartment and Lydia went to her room and saw all the new furniture. She didn't...
My Sweet Rayne (Alternate ending) by Reeb The cold of the evening air in London on a January night was almost unbearable at times. The chilling cold penetrated deep into my bones through the layers of my uniform. As I stood at the rail terminal waiting my train to Norwich through Ipswich, my thoughts reflected over the last three months of my life. It was late January 1944 and I had just been promoted to Captain in the US Army Air Force. Along with that promotion, I was awarded the...
Love StoriesThe asian woman great great massages so I went back. She said I'm handsome, and loved my cock. She had a hard time communicating so I took a phone card, and wrote my number on it. The next day she texted where she was staying. As I made my way the door opened, and she greeted me in a small tight miniskirt. This event went down like a basic asian girl fantasy. She was really short, had a sexy ass, and ridiculous (dick) nipples. I was showered but she was like constantly mumbling and if not for...
Hi everyone, this is my first attempt at writing a story based on sexual escapades that I have experienced throughout my life. There is a element of truth in this story as this is based on an event that happened as close as yesterday.It was just past 7pm and the office had a deserted look to it already. Being the middle of summer most of the employees had already left on vacations and the remaining few unlucky souls had left for the day. I could feel the sharp spikes of pain resonate through my...
The Body Castaways: Part Two -- The Fate Of the Castaways! ERIC'S ENDING! (Eric's conclusion to the story begun in... The Body Castaways Part One: Igor, Hollywood Starlet!) An all-new, alternative version of the classic body- swapping episode of Gilligan's Island! The Characters and original script are copyrighted to others. No claim is made to those concepts by us. All additional elements of the story not in the original TV script nor owned by others are copyrighted to...
HappyA few months ago my wife was overseas in London on business. It was a Saturday afternoon, I was bored and horny and browsing around on a few porn sites, when an ad popped up about a venue near to me that offers sensual massaged with a hand relief ending. I decided to call them and find out the prices, how to make a booking and there street address. There prices seemed reasonable, so I hopped in my car and off to the venue I went all excited and eager. The nearer I got to the venue...
Back to the Future, The Alternate Ending By Bashful "Doc, I did what you said, I changed the past back the way it was supposed to be, what went wrong? My parents got married, my brother and sister are fine, what happened?" "I don't know. I warned you that everything you do in the past has an effect on the future," Doc Brown answered as he put the finishing touches on his latest invention. "Is it really so bad? Biff's son is a much nicer young man than his father was. He's...
[Please read the original 'After Hours' first. The original story was inspired by a story I read with a more traditional power dynamic between a male boss and a female employee. After posting it, it occurred to me that some readers might enjoy a slightly different ending. - S.S.] The office clock ticks round to five o'clock, Friday afternoon again. The last of my colleagues heads towards the door, stopping for a quick comment before leaving. "Working late again? Just you and the...
PLEASURE ISLAND: The Bikini Chapter 3B Wendy/Wendell? Tells You How It Is Both? You spin the word around in the hazy glow of your mind blowing orgasm with a strange blonde man that took you from an alley, bound you, and then fucked you. He'd just taken your virginity (at least in this body) by rape. Instead of outrage all that you could feel was the mixture of your cum and his mixing as it trickled out of your now used pussy. The only regret that you had was not giving your virgin pussy to...
When I arrived, they had me register and fill out a form to indicate what parts of my body were the most stressed, and I just circled the entire diagram, indicating my whole body needed attention. I was shown into a dimly lit room, with candles lit and a light fragrance in the air. I could feel my body immediately begin to relax. My masseuse came in and introduced herself as Clarissa. I told her my name was Sophie, and explained how much I was looking forward to this massage, given how...
"So would you like a happy ending with your massage?" Annette Brite asked in that sexy posh voice of hers. "Uh, doesn't that involve you ... uh ... jerking me off?" Clive Little asked. "Yes, Mr. Little," Annette laughed. "It is indeed a euphemism for hand relief." Little was at a loss on how to respond. He was still trying to work out how he'd ended up here, in her little shop, at seven in the evening. Little had been looking for a last minute birthday present for his wife...
Bill Tyler sat sadly nursing a beer when the sound of a woman’s voice, slightly intoxicated and very excited, erupted behind him. ‘Billy Tyler!’ she squealed, ‘Is that really you, Billy?’ Bill turned his head to get a glimpse at the woman who had ID’d him. He was greeted by a mane of red hair and a pretty smile. ‘Sure is.’ ‘I’m Megan Stoltz!’ ‘Okay.’ ‘I was friends with your sister, Linda, maybe eleven years ago.’ ‘Well …’ ‘You wouldn’t know me, I mean, we weren’t ever introduced or...
My Sweet Rayne (Alternate ending) by Reeb The cold of the evening air in London on a January night was almost unbearable at times. The chilling cold penetrated deep into my bones through the layers of my uniform. As I stood at the rail terminal waiting my train to Norwich through Ipswich, my thoughts reflected over the last three months of my life. It was late January 1944 and I had just been promoted to Captain in the US Army Air Force. Along with that promotion, I was awarded the...