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You walk through the doors. Excited to begin your first day as part of the Mixed Wrestling Federation. You walk up to the desk where a receptionist is waiting for you.
"Hello, How can I help?" She asks
"Hi my name is (Insert your name). I'm here for to sign up for the Mixed Wrestling Federation"
"Ahhh yes" she said, "We got you application through last night. Before we officially click accept we have to run you through something first."
"No problem." You say, you just want to get in the ring at this point so you'll listen through anything.
"So as you know our wrestling matches have a no striking rule. So no punching or kicking. Just good old standard wrestling. Also fights don't end after round 3. There is a prize round where the winner can do what ever they desire with the loser. Within reason obviously. You can't just beat someone up." she says
"That's understandable" you say quite relieved at the fact that they won't just be punching you in the face if you lose.
"As a result all prize rounds are sexual in nature. Lots of the women like to be dominant in the prize round when they beat a man. There will be plenty of pegging and strap-on fucking and believe me they really like to fuck them hard. Are you ok with this?"
"Yeah that's fine." You say, Trying to hide the fact that being dominated and strap-on fucked by a beautiful woman was 95% of the reason you signed up.
"Great, You're all set" she says. "You will be fighting next, All new signups fight an hour after they sign up."
"Brilliant, I can't wait." You say. Maybe a little too excitedly
"As this is your first fight you get to choose who you fight first. Take a pick from these options"
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