The Count of Monte CristoChapter 58 M Noirtier de Villefort
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Liz joined Venturers at the October meeting on Tuesday night. The meeting was devoted to a slide show of the crew's last trip to Algonquin. The crew was going again next summer. Liz planned to go on the trip. I would have loved to go back to Algonquin for a third time. I would be in football camp somewhere then. Who knows when I would be able to go there again?
Coach McCarthy, the wide receivers coach at LSU, called on Wednesday night while I was studying with Penny. Coach Miles had delegated him to find out about the residency requirements for LSU's veterinary school. He told me exactly what was required to attend the school. I decided to see if Penny was interested.
I hung up the phone and asked, "Have you sent in that early admission application to Penn yet?"
Penny grinned. "No. Why do you ask?"
"I think I found a way we could go to college together. Would you like to hear about it?"
"Of course," Penny said.
"I found out that LSU has a veterinary school two weekends ago when I visited. Would you consider going there with me? They offered me a scholarship. I'd accept it this second if you would come with me."
"Louisiana? Would the veterinary school even take someone from Pennsylvania?"
"No, but they would take you if you established residence in Louisiana for one year."
"Live down there for a year?" Penny said. "I don't know, Kyle."
"I really like Baton Rouge. It's a nice – it feels more like a town than a big city. The campus is beautiful. It's the best way I have found for us to stay together."
Penny sighed. "What do I need to do to establish residence?"
"Coach McCarthy says we would need to live there for one year, off campus. We'd register our cars down there and have Louisiana drivers licenses. You'd need to have a job off campus and earn some money. Your dad couldn't claim you as a dependent on his taxes."
Penny frowned. "I'd have to stay down there for a whole year?"
"You could spend six weeks here with your parents. That would be about the same amount of time I'd be back up here. I expect I'll be at football camp all of August. What do you think?"
"I don't know, Kyle. This is a huge step."
"I know it is. I hate the idea of us being apart when we are in college. If you say you'll go to LSU with me, I'll call Coach Miles right now and accept his scholarship offer."
"I don't know, Kyle," Penny said. "I can't make this kind of decision this quick."
"Will you at least think about it?"
"I'll do that. I need to think, talk to my parents and do some research on LSU's vet school."
"Thanks, Penny. I'm glad you will consider this. I love you." I gave her a kiss, a very passionate kiss. We had been studying but the books got pushed off the bed to make room for us. Next thing you know, Penny's lying naked on my bed, I'm locking the door and joining her. We made love as quietly as we knew how. Even so, every few seconds one of us had to shush the other while we did it. Penny cleaned up and headed for home when we finished.
Andy popped into my room as soon as Penny left. He exclaimed, "You know there ain't no justice in the world. I'm the guy in trouble for screwing around with too many girls. You and Penny are going at it like a couple of rabbits while everyone is home. You're unbelievable."
"Hey some guys have got it," I teased. Andy headed back to his room. I was happy, beyond the obvious sexual satisfaction. This was the first time in a week that Andy had teased me. He was starting to pull out of his black mood.
--oooOooo--
Our team practiced hard to get ready for Cornwall. We took them seriously as a threat. They were one of the three teams in our league that had beaten us since I started on varsity. We wouldn't have any room for errors against them.
I bumped into Justin Baer after practice on Thursday. He had parked beside my car. I noticed he had a scout uniform hanging in the back seat. I asked, "What's up Justin? I thought you quit scouts years ago."
"Time flies Kyle. Billy joined Cub Scouts last month. He's a Tiger Cub. I took him to the pack meeting and next thing you know, I'm the new Cubmaster for Pack 312."
"Are you? Cool!"
"Jon and I are meeting early tonight to set things up for the pack meeting."
"Jon?"
"Yeah. Jon Miller's son Brian joined Tiger Cubs too. I drafted Jon to be my assistant as soon as I took the job as Cubmaster. It'll be just like old times. Jon as my ASPL when I ran the troop."
"Wow. Congratulations," I said. "Welcome back to scouting." Justin hopped in his car and headed for the church. Andy and I hopped in my car and headed home.
We played Cornwall at Harrison Field on Friday night. I hoped home field advantage would help us handle these guys. The video on Cornwall didn't help us a lot. They had beat LS last week with their punishing defense. They destroyed the other six teams they played, all weak teams in our league. They were playing the Braves next week and finishing their season with a game at Central. The finale of their schedule was going to be punishing.
Cornwall had the ball first. They managed one first down before Jeremy and crew shut them down. They punted the ball to Andy. Our blocking wedge opened a crease in Cornwall's coverage. Andy squirted through and dashed down the field. The punter tried to tackle Andy as he went by but missed. Andy ran into the end zone and spiked the ball to hearty cheers from our fans. Andy was grinning ear to ear.
Cornwall operated a power running game. They don't pass often. They tried pounding our defensive line. It didn't work. Austin, Joey, Jamie and Travis wouldn't move an inch. Jeremy, Jim and Kenny plugged the gaps in the line. Cornwall was forced to punt after three plays.
Our balanced attack was more than Cornwall could contain. I pulled in a deep pass and ran into the end zone on the eighth play of the next drive. Andy added a touchdown catch before half time.
Andy scored again to finish our first drive of the second half. Coach Caffrey pulled the starters. Jake Kring, Marcus Shaeffer, Jason Harting and Jonathan Landis took care of business after that. Jonathan scored his first varsity touchdown. Marcus scored a final touchdown before the game was over. Cornwall managed to score a touchdown in garbage time at the end of the game when the outcome was no longer in doubt. The final score was 42-7 our favor.
I knew Ed had deliberately thrown passes to Andy in preference to me during the game. Both of us had been open on his two touchdowns. I didn't mind. Andy could use a good night. He hadn't had many of them recently.
Coach Caffrey brought everyone together locker room after the game. He announced, "The game ball tonight goes to Andrew Martin. Excellent work, Andy!" Andy grinned as he came forward accept the ball. "I was proud of all of you tonight. This is the best game you played this season. I need you to maintain your focus and drive for next week's game. Nothing but our best will allow us to beat Central next Friday." Coach Caffrey nodded to me.
I hopped up and shouted. "Beat Central on three!" Our team stood. I chanted, "one, Two, THREE – BEAT CENTRAL!" as my friends and team mates chanted with me.
Ed and I changed together. Ed asked, "You're going to Penn State tomorrow, right?"
"Yep. You're off to Florida, right?"
"You got it. I have another one of those damn early morning flights," Ed said. "Dad and I fly out of Baltimore at 6:20 tomorrow morning."
"Get out of here. You need some sleep," I teased.
I grabbed the night's hero, my brother, and headed for home. Now that I drove, Mom and Dad didn't hang out after the game was over. I usually drove Andy and myself home after the game.
--oooOooo--
The original plan for the weekend was for Dad and me to arrive in State College around 11 am, in time to see warm-ups before the 1:00 pm game. We would have dinner with Coach Paterno and Coach Burton after the game. ABC forced us to change our plans. They moved kick-off time to 3:30 pm to get a wider TV audience for the game. This game pitted #2 USC against #3 Penn State. It was the biggest college match-up of the weekend.
Our appointment at the Lasch Center was for 11:00 am. Dad dragged me out of bed early. He said we needed to try to beat the football traffic. It didn't work. We were stuck in a traffic jam between Harrisburg and Clarks Ferry for an hour and a half.
Nearly all the cars on 322 pulled off at Park Avenue to park at Beaver Stadium. Penn State had sent me a temporary parking sticker and told us to park in the parking lot beside the Shields building during the weekend. Dad needed the sticker just to be allowed to get to Shields. Dad parked the car. We walked down to the Lasch Center and checked in with the receptionist. She took us to a conference room to wait until one of the coaches was free.
Another potential recruit was already sitting at the conference table with his parents. He was African-American. He was built like a hunk of granite. He obviously worked out as much as I did. I looked him over for a few seconds. He looked familiar. I had seen him somewhere before. I walked over and offered my hand to him.
"Hi. I'm Kyle Martin," I said. He stood up and shook my hand.
"I remember, Kyle. We met at the championship game last fall. I'm Damian..."
"Yeah! Damian Thompson. I remember. How have you been?"
"I'm good. How is your knee?" Damian asked.
"100%. I wouldn't be visiting Penn State if it wasn't," I answered. Damian introduced me to his parents, Howard and Renee Thompson. I introduced them to my Dad. Damian and I compared notes.
"How's your team doing, Kyle?" Damian asked.
We're 7-1. How about the Colonels?"
Damian grinned. "We're undefeated."
"Cool! Maybe we will play again this year in the championship game," I said. As I said it, Christian Hunsecker walked into the conference room followed by his parents. I looked at him.
Christian laughed. "I don't think so, Kyle. Your team isn't even going to win the Lancaster-Lebanon League."
"We'll see about that next Friday night, Christian," I countered.
I introduced Christian to Damian, his parents and Dad. Christian introduced his father Randall and his mother Evelyn to everyone. Christian and I explained how we knew each other and about the rivalry between the Wolverines and Central. We kids talked about Penn State's season while we waited for a coach to arrive.
Another recruit and his mom came before the coach showed up. He introduced himself as Shawn Byrd from Bethlehem. Shawn was an African-American too, but a slightly darker shade of brown than Damian. He was a cornerback for the Liberty Hurricanes.
A couple minutes after eleven o'clock Coach Paterno, Coach Burton and Coach Bradley walked into the conference room. Coach Paterno introduced everyone to each other. He explained that Coach Burton and Coach Bradley needed to leave to get ready for the game. He launched into his 'Welcome to Penn State' talk. It was similar to the talk he gave Dad and me last fall. He talked about Penn State's winning football tradition, the emphasis on academics and helping players earn their degree.
Coach Paterno concluded about twenty minutes later. Coach asked for questions when he was done. Damian asked, "How can you take time to talk with us this morning? You have a game in a few hours."
Coach Paterno grinned. "I'm just the old guy who stands around and watches the other coaches work." Coach Paterno paused to judge our reaction. "Seriously, my job is to oversee the whole team. Coach Burton runs the offense and Coach Bradley runs the defense. They take care of the details. That's their job. On game day I coordinate between offense and defense and generally try to keep out of the way. Does that explain how I can have time for you?"
Damian answered, "Yes. Thanks Coach Paterno."
Coach Paterno continued the Q&A session. The parents and other guys asked questions that Coach Paterno patiently answered. Dad and I sat back and listened. They were the same questions we had asked last year.
Coach Paterno cleared his throat and said, "We have time for one more question. Any one?"
Shawn beat Christian and Damian to the punch. "How are you planning to beat USC today?"
Coach Paterno grinned. "That's an excellent question." He turned and looked at me. "You aren't a spy are you?"
"No sir. I can keep my mouth shut," I answered.
Coach Paterno looked back the other guys. "Kyle was out in LA last August to visit the enemy. Do you have any tips for me about USC?"
"Sorry Coach. I have friends on both teams. You're on your own today."
"Good answer, Kyle. Seriously guys, I am confident our team will win for a three reasons. The first reason is Morano and Torelli play corner for us. They are two of the best in college ball. The second reason is our linebackers. They are excellent. The final reason we will win is we have Phil DiStefano. I don't care what the guys talking Heisman for Jared Dillard say; DiStefano is the best quarterback in the country. We'll win this game." Coach Paterno said with determination. He glanced down at his watch. "It's time for lunch. We're going to eat with the team."
Coach Paterno led us down the street to a building marked Pollock Commons. We went upstairs to a cafeteria room. The front end of the room was set up for cafeteria style food service. The trays were filled with food. Half the seats at the tables were filled already. The line straggled away from the end of the serving area as players waited their turn for lunch. Coach Paterno had us join the end of the line.
The player at the end of the line looked like he wasn't much older than me and shaved even less often than me (if that's possible). He stepped aside and said, "Go ahead, Coach."
Coach Paterno laughed. "No, Tyler. I've learned over the years not to get between you boys and the food. Go ahead, get lunch." Tyler stepped back into line. Coach Paterno turned to us and explained, "Tyler Madden is a freshman who plays free safety for us. He's going to be a hell of a player in a year or two." Coach Paterno introduced us to Tyler. When we got to the table Coach Paterno joshed, "Tyler, make sure you eat a lot. Those Ohio State running backs are huge. You're going to need some bulk when you hit them next year."
"Yes, sir," Tyler answered. I looked him over. He looked to be about 6'-1" or 6'-2". He probably weighed as much as me. He was too light? What would the coaches think about me? I had gained 74 pounds since I started football three years ago. Was I going to need to bulk up too?
Coach Paterno took us to a table with some of the other coaches. Christian, his parents, Dad and I had a seat with Paul Adams, the Penn State receivers coach. He knew Christian and me from football camp back in June.
Coach Adams was about my Dad's age, around 40. He talked with Mr. and Mrs. Hunsecker and Dad. It turned out they were all students at Penn State at the same time. Coach Adams played wide receiver for the Lions from 1985 to 1989. Mr. Hunsecker was class of 1988. Mrs. Hunsecker was class of 1989. Dad had attended Penn State as a freshman in 1985-6. They reminisced about the 1986 national championship game.
Coach Adams hurt his knee when he was a senior. Coach Paterno kept him around as a graduate assistant for the next couple years. He went into teaching when he was finished with his masters degree. He taught high school and coached football on the side for five years until he was hired by Lehigh University to coach receivers by Coach Burton, who was the offensive coordinator at the time. Coach Burton talked Coach Paterno into hiring Coach Adams when he came to Penn State.
When lunch was done Coach Paterno excused himself. Coach Adams took over and explained the plans for the rest of the weekend. He had two players who would give Christian, Damian, Shawn and me a tour of campus. Mr. Andrews, an academic advisor for the athletic department, was going to take the parents on a tour of campus and talk about the programs that the university had to assist student/athletes in completing their degrees.
Coach Adams introduced us to Jeremiah Nowak and Dominic Cucchiella, our guides. Jeremiah had a cast on his right arm, extending from his elbow to his fingertips. Dominic, better known as 'Cuch' by his friends and teammates, was wearing a brace on his left knee. He limped a little, kind of like I did last winter after my operation.
Jeremiah waved his good hand and said, "Let's go guys. The Creamery is our first stop."
Christian and I simultaneous said, "Cool!"
Shawn looked confused. "Creamery? Why?"
"Ice Cream," Jeremiah explained.
Cuch added, "Best ice cream in the world. The people who run the Creamery are the guys who taught Ben & Jerry when they were starting to make ice cream 30 years ago."
The four of us followed Jeremiah and Cuch outside and cut between buildings to get to Curtin Road. We bucked the tide of football fans heading north to Beaver Stadium, talking as we walked. We found out that Jeremiah was a junior and #3 quarterback on the team. He broke a bone in his hand fooling around with a couple teammates after practice a couple weeks ago. Coach Paterno was not amused when it happened.
Cuch was a sophomore who played the hero position. He had to explain that Penn State called the strong safety the hero instead. He was #2 at his position. He injured his knee last Saturday. He had a partial tear of his medial collateral ligament and had strained his lateral collateral ligament. The doctors decided he didn't need surgery to fix his knee. I told him about my experience last fall. Cuch didn't expect to miss more than a couple games. He hoped to be ready when Penn State went out to Michigan.
We had a long wait in the line at the Creamery. Jeremiah convinced me to try the Black Cow ice cream. It was vanilla with a root beer sherbet swirl in it. It tasted just like a root beer float. I enjoyed it.
Our guides took us down Curtin Road through campus to Rec Hall. We checked out the Nittany Lion statue outside the building. We went back through campus past the Pattee and Paterno Library. Cuch explained that Joe and Sue Paterno had raised over 13 million dollars to expand the library a few years ago.
Jeremiah and Cuch took us down the mall to Old Main and then across campus past the HUB (Hetzel Union Building) and then on to the Pollack Dorms. Both Jeremiah and Cuch stayed in Hartranft Hall in Pollack. They explained that many of the younger members of the football team had rooms in Pollack. It was convenient to the practice facilities.
Cuch took us up to his room to show off his room. He obviously had cleaned up for us before we came. His room looked the same as Zack's had been last year. We headed for Beaver Stadium after that.
Jeremiah and Cuch took us into the locker room to hang out for a few minutes until warm-ups started. Cuch warned, "You guys need to stay out of the way. They're getting their game faces on."
"Yep, I understand. It's time for them to focus on beating Southern Cal," Shawn said. Damian, Christian and I agreed. We watched as the team finished dressing and taping up for the game.
Greg Walker went by us. He spotted me. "Hey, you're Zack Hayes' friend aren't you? Martin ... uh"
"Kyle Martin," I answered.
"You're visiting again. Are you going to accept a scholarship?" Greg asked.
"I might, if I'm offered one."
"What? All these visits and they haven't offered you anything?"
"I hurt my knee last fall," I explained. "They waited to find out if I could play this fall."
"Well, how are you doing?" Greg asked.
"I have 22 touchdowns so far this season."
"Shit! 22. Say yes when they offer you the scholarship, kid. They're going to offer it soon, guaranteed." Greg said. "Our team can use somebody like you next year when I'm gone."
"I'll see what the coaches have to say this weekend and then make up my mind Greg. Good luck against USC today."
"Thanks, Martin," Greg said. He headed off for his locker.
A couple minutes later Phil DiStefano, Zack Hayes and a couple other guys came back into the locker room followed by Coach Burton and another coach. Jeremiah explained, "The quarterback briefing is done. The team is going out for warm-ups in a couple minutes."
Zack spotted me immediately and came over. He clapped me on the back and said, "Glad you're here, Kyle. It's going to be a hell of a game today."
"Good to see you too, Zack. I'm looking forward to it."
"Who are these other guys?" Zack asked.
I introduced Christian, Damian and Shawn to Zack. Zack invited the four of us to meet him for a party. He left me his phone number. I was to give him a call when we got settled at the hotel after the game. He said he could pick us up and take us to the party.
The team headed for the field. Jeremiah, Cuch and the rest of us followed them out to the field. We stood on the Penn State sideline watching them prepare. Jeremiah stood beside me. He asked, "How do you know Zack Hayes?"
"We were teammates in high school. He's also my older brother's friend. He is the one who got me started in football. A lot of what I know I learned from Zack."
"I know what you mean. Zack and I should be big rivals. One of us is going to be the starter next season when Phil leaves." Jeremiah paused. "I know he has the edge to get the job. We've both been with the team for three years. The coaches thought enough of him to red shirt him our freshman year so he has one more year of eligibility than me. He'll probably get the starter's job next season. I'm going to push him anyway and make him earn the top spot. In spite of all that, Zack helps me all the time. He treats me as a friend instead of a rival. He's a special kind of guy."
"Zack is," I agreed. "He will do whatever it takes so the whole team is successful."
We stood on the sidelines watching for about fifteen minutes. A parade of Penn State players stopped by: Aaron Morano, Vic Torelli, Pete Klein, Shawn O'Conner, and Tony Phillips. Cuch and Jeremiah seemed a little surprised how many guys knew me. I explained about my previous visit.
USC came out for warm-ups a couple minutes after Penn State took the field. It was a little weird looking over at them on the west end of the field getting ready. I consider myself friends with a number of the Penn State players and they sort of seemed like "my" team. But then I saw Brady Rasmussen passing to Alex Gutierrez and Jared Dillard throwing to a receiver I didn't recognize. I looked over at Coach Carroll observing everything. I felt like I had an interest in them too. How was I going to pick between them?
My daydreaming was interrupted by a voice I knew. "Hey, Kyle! You made it to the game. I thought you said you couldn't get tickets." I looked up to see Alex Gutierrez run towards me after he caught one of Brady's passes.
"Hi, Alex. It's good to see you. I couldn't buy tickets to get in the stadium today," I retorted. "I needed personal intervention from Joe Paterno to get in here."
"Ahhh, official visi," Alex answered.
"Yep, that's right."
"Why would you want to come to some cold gray place like this? It was 82 degrees when we left LA yesterday morning," Alex said.
Everyone in the group I was with laughed. "Cold? This is warm for Happy Valley in the end of October." All of us were wearing T-shirts without coats or sweatshirts. The temperature was in the high fifties. Clouds were starting to roll in. The weatherman predicted rain later on Sunday, probably after lunch.
"I don't know about you, Kyle. I want to go to college somewhere that's warm and sunny. I'm going to the beach tomorrow after we get home to LA."
"Enjoy it, Alex," I answered. I proceeded to introduce Alex to Jeremiah, Cuch, Christian, Damian and Shawn. We talked for a minute before Coach Sarksian waved to Alex to get back to warming up. I wished him luck before he left.
Cuch said, "I gather that you visited USC already this year."
"Yes, I did."
"I hope you choose to stay in your own state, Kyle. I wouldn't want you to be one of those sunshine boys over there." Cuch said, pointing towards the Trojans.
"I don't know what I'm going to do, Cuch. I'll decide after my last visit in a couple weeks."
We stood and watched the players from the opposing teams warm up for the game. Aaron Morano and Vic Torelli stopped by to say hi when they were finished. Brady Rasmussen stopped by to talk for a couple minutes too. Coach Carroll gave me a wave as he jogged off the field for final preparations for the game. Jeremiah and Cuch took us up in the stands to join our parents. They stayed with us. They weren't going to be any help to the team with their injuries.
We sat back and enjoyed the game. It was back and forth. Both teams had fast, hard hitting offenses that could score from anywhere on the field. Both defenses were capable of stopping the other too. If a defender took half a step the wrong direction or hesitated momentarily, the offense would make a big play. If the quarterback wasn't perfect with a throw, the pass was knocked down.
Neither team could sustain a ten or twelve play drive the length of the field. They'd go four or five plays for 10-12 yards and then hit a 40-50 yard pass. Turnovers determined the score in the first half. Jared threw an interception and let Penn State score first on the shortened field. Ben Moore, linebacker for the Trojans, put a devastating hit on Shawn O'Conner, the Penn State tailback, forcing a fumble that USC recovered. They converted that into a touchdown.
Penn State answered with a drive long enough to net them a field goal. Pete Klein and the other Penn State linebackers manhandled USC's tailback in the first half. He coughed the ball up three times. Unfortunately for Penn State, they only recovered one of the three fumbles. Penn State cashed in on that turnover for another touchdown.
USC managed to have two big plays on the same drive after the third fumble and scored another touchdown, Jared Dillard to Alex Gutierrez. Penn State responded with by sustaining a big drive just as the half was ending. They managed to get from their 28 yard line down to USC's 22 before things went wrong. Phil threw a pass to Greg Walker, but USC's Chris Mann out-jumped Greg to take the ball away. Greg tackled Chris immediately. USC couldn't score in the 45 seconds left in the half. The two teams went into the locker room with the score USC 21, Penn State 17.
Joe Paterno must have given an inspirational speech at halftime. The team came out all fired up when they received the kickoff to start the second half. They smashed the ball straight up the gut of USC's defensive line on three straight plays.
Dad proudly observed, "This is the Penn State I remember when I went here."
Phil caught USC sleeping on the fourth play, a play action pass. He completed a 28 yard strike to Greg Walker. The team continued down the field that way, smashing into their line most of the time and then hitting a play action pass for good yardage. Penn State took the lead after a bruising thirteen play drive for a touchdown.
I thought things looked extremely promising now for Penn State. If they could hold USC on the next drive and then repeat their long drive again, they could have a ten point lead. It would set them up for the win.
It didn't quite work out that way. Penn State did stop USC's next drive. USC did the same to Penn State. The two teams sparred again, looking for an opening, but nothing came up. They went into the fourth quarter with Penn Sate leading 24-21.
Penn State started their next drive with an excellent punt return that started them on their 39 yard line. They managed to keep their drive going this time. Phil completed a short pass to Tony Phillips, their tight end, on a crossing route. Tony made the linebacker miss the tackle. He ran for another 21 yards to take the Lions down to USC's 26 yard line.
Shawn O'Conner carried the ball twice into the middle of USC's line and netted only two yards. Penn State tried a play action pass again. USC anticipated this and blitzed. They overloaded the left side of Penn State's offensive line. The free safety broke free and nailed Phil in the blind side, driving him into the turf violently.
Phil rolled onto his back after the hit but didn't get up. Shawn O'Conner waved for the trainers when he went over to help Phil up. I looked down in front of us. Zack Hayes had a ball and was warming up quickly while the trainers went out to care for Phil.
Phil sat up before the trainers could reach him. They kept him seated on the ground while they checked him out before they helped him off the field. The crowd cheered as he waved to them.
Zack trotted onto the field and huddled his team mates. As I expected Zack handed the ball off to Shawn. He dove into the center of the line. It looked like a cutback run to take advantage of the way the Trojan players pursued to the ball aggressively. As I watched I caught sight of an arm coming up in the backfield. I looked at the arm. Zack still had the ball!
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Story: #47 Copyright ©2010 Written: October 02 2010 A story By: KaosAngel Proofed by: KaosAngel Please send any comments about this story to ([email protected]) ********************************************************* ~~!! NOTE !!~~ This story is bassed on a fictional town within the game Second Life called Stepford, I would like to thank Ariana RoeCastle, Emilie Muggins & Jerrol Jarvinen of Stepford for thier approval of this...
Clifford sat up in bed feeling the warm body lying next to him. He looked down at the shape in the near darkness. Janet. Christ, why did it have to be this way? He had loved Tracy, he still did. So why was he in Janet's bed? Why did he have sex with her? Four times? Not one of them was anything like the times he had been with Tracy, and yet... He got out of bed and made his way to the window, padding in his bare feet across the carpet. He slowly pulled open the curtains and looked out at...
The Real Stepford Wives: Only Women Have Babies by Sarah Barndt I was once a normal, heterosexual male. That is, I was until I happened upon the town of Stepford. I was spending a few weeks there, installing some equipment at Stepford Pharmeceutical Labs, for the company I worked for. I had recently broken up with my fiancee and was glad to be back on the road as a working engineer. I enjoyed it, but Stepford was odd. All of the men wanted to ask me about my sex life when I...
All my life I had always feared God. Growing up I thought he personally stared down at from Heaven watching my every move, listening to my every thought. It was this fear that has always kept me on the straight and narrow and given me my morale courage. My only sorrow is that I was unable to pass this fear down to my children and from this, there will be no retribution. I am surely damned as if I had spent a lifetime of murder and greed. With this knowledge I don't feel fear anymore, just...
The Real Stepford Wives Brown Sugar by Sarah Barndt I was once a normal, heterosexual male. That is, I was until I happened upon the town of Stepford. I was spending a few weeks there, installing some equipment at Stepford Pharmaceutical Labs, for the company I worked for. I had recently broken up with my fiancee and was glad to be back on the road as a working engineer. I enjoyed it, but Stepford was odd. All of the men wanted to ask me about my sex life when I visited 'the...
Reddit Erin Ashford, aka r/ErinAshford! Erin Ashford is not a pornstar from a bygone age, nor is she a famous modern-day pornstar. She’s also not a semi-famous Twitch streamer gone nude, not an Instagram model that promotes flat tummy tea, and definitely not a XXX cam model. So who is she exactly, and why should you care about her? Truth be told, she isn’t really known outside of Reddit - she made her XXX debut on /r/GoneWild after posting a large selection of XXX pictures (and some videos) on...
Reddit NSFW ListAuthor’s note: I had planned to take a break from writing and submitting stories to Literotica when I reached 300 submissions. I know I said that when I reached 100 and again when I reached 200 submissions but many of you loyal readers asked me to continue. Many of you also sent me story lines and topics to write about, some more detailed than others. Recently I received an e-mail from Peggy Sanford who has written several stories for Literotica and if you have a Literotica log-in and...
Stepford brothers (change to sisters!) By bojok71 Author's notes: this story serves to plug a hole, in my view, of the credibility of the Stepford stories. What if someone came looking for a lost relative? The answer is simple, and forms part of this story. Story notes: this story is very close, for obvious reasons, to the original Stepford story. However, it's new enough to be considered a new read. It's as sexual and interesting as my other stories. Thanks again to Sarah Barndt for...
The next morning Forrest woke up at about 10 and woke me with a kiss on the lips. I surprised him by throwing my arms around him and deepening the kiss. I reached down under the covers and grabbed his balls. I played with them as I felt his dick start to harden. He did the same to me, squeezing my balls and moving them around in my loose sack, causing my dick to harden. Without a word, I grabbed my cloths and beckoned for him to do the same. After checking that his sister was still...
We waved bye to Forrest’s and my parents as they drove off. It was summer break and they would be gone for several days. My friend Forrest and his 9 year old sister, Scout, were staying at my house for the time they were gone. None of our parents wanted us to be home alone, but they were fine if we were together. I was 15 and Forrest was 14, but he looks 10 or 11. I live in the middle of nowhere, but we found plenty of things to do during the day, but my favorite time was at night. My...
Peggy Sanford stepped out of the elevator and into the lobby of the Roosevelt New Orleans Hotel. As she walked across the lobby she noticed several males obviously checking her out. She smiled to herself as she walked across the long spacious lobby. It always pleased Peggy that she could still attract such attention. Not that she should be surprised, for a married mother of two in her late forties, Peggy was still a very beautiful woman. Her long brown hair framed a face that belied her age,...
It was the summer before my second year of high school when I got a call from Darci Smith asking me to meet her at the high school the next day to help her clean out the costume room. Now Darci is the drama club teacher and the art teacher. Every guy in the school wants to fuck her and masterbates to her. Darci is in her early thirties, married, and looks like she is still twenty one. She has nice mid size tits, a fine ass, big blue eyes and blonde hair. She has a pert little hard body and...
"There's a man here to see you, Mr. Forrester; he says he's a detective from the Denver Police Force." Oh-oh, thought John. "Ok, send him in, Angela." "Hello, Mr Forrester; my name is Paul Donohue, I'm a detective from the Denver Police Force." "What can I do for you, Detective Donohue?" as I pressed the intercom so Angela could listen in discreetly out at her desk. "Well, Mr. Forrester, sometime last year I was handed a case in Denver that has us all baffled. It seems that two...
Chapter 1 Stephen sighed as he watched the world go by. "I still don't see why we have to move," he told his wife as he turned to look at her. "Because honey, the company is opening a new store in Stepford and they asked me to run it," Emily replied, not taking her eyes off the road. "Besides, the offer was too good to turn down and the house came as part of the job," Emily continued. "I'd thought that you'd be proud of me," she added. "And I am. Really," Stephen added as his wife...
I had been working in the construction industry a week when the foreman called me to his office. As I made my way over I wondered what I could have done wrong. As it had gone clocking off time I was annoyed that the meeting would be eating in to my free time. 'Aah, come in.' he said as I stepped through the door. 'Have a seat.' His office was much neater than I thought it would be. As I looked around the room I noticed that there were no girlie pictures like I had seen plastered up everywhere...
GayMeeting at Bedford MillsI had often thought about my friend Simone in the years since we had been at school together. After I graduated, I had moved to New York to pursue my career and with a husband and children, I had lost touch with Simone, but I knew that she had married a rich man whom she had met at college, and that they lived in Greenwich, Connecticut, but they had no children. I had also heard from other former classmates who had met her, that she had a glamorous lifestyle, with...
Mary Pilson knew that her ‘uncle’ Walter was grooming her. ‘Uncle’ was a silly term that Mary’s mother used to describe the men who moved into their home to take advantage. Mary had no time for her uncles; she saw them for what they were, parasites and users. Mary’s mother could hardly make ends meet working as an usherette at the local cinema. Her good looks, curvy body and long legs ensured that she was well tipped by the male customers but she also attracted the sharks. Mary mostly...
We’re cruising along a wide and quiet suburban street. Green lawns stretch back from the pavement to the nice semi-detached homes. There’s a slim woman walking a large dog along the side of the road, and we pan around to look at her as we pass – it’s no-one we know, but we kind of wish we did! Then we’re looking forward again – seeing an intersection infront of us ... Then pulling up, looking out of the side window right at a single story, flat-roofed building. A sign outside reads,...
*This story with pics. "Screwdrivers and a little 9 ball" https://forum.xnxx.com/threads/screwdrivers-and-a-little-9-ball.522876/ "Screwdrivers and a little 9 ball" Hello I'm Tara, First I'm going to tell you a little bit about myself in case you haven't read any of my stories before and also to help you understand the story a little...
September 1981, Milford, Ohio Friday was routine until lunchtime. Afternoon classes had been canceled for both Elyse and me because of the Labor Day weekend, so I drove back to the apartment instead of having lunch on campus. Elyse and I packed our overnight bags and waited for Kathy and Bethany, who arrived as planned, and we left Chicago just before 4:00pm. It was my goal to make the trip to Milford in just under five and a half hours, which I could do if we grabbed fast food on the way...
It was the electronic chirp of a cellphone text message that first stirred Peggy Sanford from a state of excessive alcohol and strenuous sexual activity induced sleep to a state of semi-conscious awareness. The first thing she recognized was that she was not the only one lying in the bed. She felt the warm embrace of a delicate arm draped across her chest, a set of soft full breasts pressing up against her back, a smooth hairless pelvis nuzzled up against her buttocks and a tone fit leg...
Author’s Note: These stories are a continuation of member/author Walterio’s excellent 12 part series, Peggy Sanford a Worldly Woman and his extra story Peggy Sanford and the Secret Society. After I read his stories all I could think was ‘That was hot! I wish I was her.’ Walterio wrote these in response to member/author Peggy46’s invitation to anyone to continue or add to the stories that she wrote about herself and her wild sex life. I tried to fill in enough background information to make this...
“Thank you ... Zax”. A middle aged woman with a combed black hair and a bit of weight around her waist walked toward him with hands down and holding one another. “You shouldn’t, Mrs. Inoki “. Zax shook his head. The woman was the mother of his childhood friends, Weysey Inoki. Mrs. Inoki came to stand beside him, but her view was on the large group of children having the time of their life fighting the living snowmen. “Our home is at the periphery of us, newcomers’ huts. The hut next to us...
Through her wide open legs she watched the last drops of her morning piss cling to her silky blonde pussy-hair, then drop into the bowl. She stretched and yawned, willing her reluctant body awake. "Mike?" she called. "Yeah?" her husband answered, pushing the bathroom door open. "Well, aren't you a pretty sight?" he said. "Look, who's talking. You look as bad as I feel," she said with a smile. Her husband was naked except for a towel around his mid-section, his flaccid...
Sarah and I communicated well when she had time for conversation, often after her shift was over. She made it clear that she liked me as more than just a patient, and in addition to liking her, I found myself lusting for her constantly. It wasn't so bad in the mountains when there were no distractions, but to see it around me every day flamed my desire. She caught up with me while I was in physical therapy. After a couple of cheers, she said, "I got her cell phone. I'll see you...
Lamax system was only 61 lightyears distant to Faysummit system. Meaning the superfast Colt reached Faysummit only 136 minutes. Roy was getting more anxious by the moment. The closer he got the more he felt convinced that his mother was close and that she was in great peril. The Colt was brand-new and by law, it was his ship. The Phantasian who piloted the ride was an employee or more precise a contractor. Tanya was right, this passenger cabin was not big enough for Partner, but then this...
Any one who is looking for a rush, needs to try. Just make sure most of you are alone on the highway. Mt girl and I were leaveing Oklahoma going back to Kansas and were very horny.She had gotten my fake pussy out and started to undo my pants. We were loaded and my semi was getting hot as our body temps were riseing. I had the cruise control set and she had stripped down and sat in the passenger seat to tease me and make me watch the road and her. She tease that pussy and moaned as I squirmed.Mt...
This is a true story and happened recently. I am bi and enjoy sucking and being sucked by guys occasionally. But on the odd occasion I het so horny that I need fucking. A couple of weeks ago it was early evening and I found myself heading to a cruising spot where I have met guys before. I parked up in a layby. it was stil light, and it was quiet. Eventually a white van came slowly driving by, as he passed I flashed my indicators a few times. He pessed his break lights a few times and we had an...
Hello, my name is Charlotte. I know you won’t believe this and normally I wouldn’t admit to it, but I am Otis’ cock slave. There really isn’t any other way to put it. And the really strange part, the really, really strange part, is that I come from a straight-laced New England family and Otis is barely educated and was just a worker in one of my husband’s warehouses. This is a strange tale, one that I find hard to believe even though I am living it. I first met...
This week, we start the show with establishing shots of the most boring suburban estate you could ever hope to see. Lots of ‘nice’ double story semi-detached homes, each with their own little square of grass and concrete driveway out front, separated from the public footpath by low brick walls. We can see a chunky, out of breath looking man walking along the street toward us, perky, elegant and mean-looking Doberman by his side ... This week’s host – the love-him-or-hate-him Cockney geezer –...
Author’s note: I had planned to take a break from writing and submitting stories to Literotica when I reached 300 submissions. I know I said that when I reached 100 and again when I reached 200 submissions but many of you loyal readers asked me to continue. Many of you also sent me story lines and topics to write about, some more detailed than others. Recently I received an e-mail from Peggy Sanford who has written several stories for Literotica and if you have a Literotica log-in and...
Author’s note: I had planned to take a break from writing and submitting stories to Literotica when I reached 300 submissions. I know I said that when I reached 100 and again when I reached 200 submissions but many of you loyal readers asked me to continue. Many of you also sent me story lines and topics to write about, some more detailed than others. Recently I received an e-mail from Peggy Sanford who has written several stories for Literotica and you can see Peggy’s profile and photo under...
Businessman Is Forcibly Transformed Into A Sissy By Sissycuckold It was a warm summer's day when it all began; I was a successful 34 year old, businessman man, with a large house, flash car, and a beautiful wife. As it was a Sunday I was out for any early morning walk, having just finished making love to my 27 year old wife Lorna, when suddenly a large black car screeched to a halt just before me. In a flash 4 burly men jumped out and I was unceremoniously...
and shorts; his cock and balls swaying in front of him. Mary smiled, leaned forward again and nuzzled Carol's silky cunt-hair, flattening it out to the sides and exposing her sensuous pink slit to their view. Then she stuck her tongue up inside it. Carol groaned happily and bucked her hips. John was standing over them now, stroking his thick cock while he gazed dreamily down at his sister's inviting pussy. Pushing a finger back up inside Carol's dewy cunt, Mary explored its...
"My parents are celebrating their anniversary this weekend, and they're planning a family party. I'd like to take tomorrow off and fly down - if it's alright with you, of course." Lucy Parsons came around the desk and stood close to him. He caught a flash of tanned thigh as her skirt flap parted. "This must be a first. A new lawyer showing consideration for the firm." "Isn't that the way it's done?" "Not usually. Young lawyers are a fairly arrogant lot, and favors...
Hello Everyone This is pradeep back again with the continuation of my first submission(IT’s NOT JUST LOVE MAKING),And people who does not read my first story please I request you to read my previous submission which was the first part,so that you can have a great brief introduction of the my story which im gonna share you all. So to say about me,I am Pradeep (Name Changed),From (Vadapalani) Chennai.Iam 21 years old and i am living in a private home.I am 5.9 with athlete body and average in...
I was young for my post but I had been doing it as a deputy it for several years with the old sheriff's forester. My father was a baron but I was only a younger son so I was not going to inherit. I carried the heavy stag into kitchen and ignored the quiet that fell. I shifted it off my shoulder and onto the large butcher table, "I took this from a poacher Anna." She wiped her hands as she crossed the kitchen, "how long..." I snorted as headed into the Keep, "a half day." When I...
September 1981, Milford, Ohio Kara came into the living room when the dishes were done and took my hand and led me to the den. We sat in our chairs, as her father insisted. “Did you put your mom up to that ice cream date?” I asked. “No! I was just as surprised as you were. I could tell that dad was really upset at her. And when you stepped in, I thought he was going to blow a gasket. You agreed with him and made him look bad at the same time. And then, when mom did that thing with the...
The studio lights go up, the audience cheers and applauds. Max Weinman, the slick studio host, launches into his well-rehearsed patter. "Welcome, welcome, welcome to another game of Beat the Forfeit. As always, we have two couples competing for tonight's jackpot of one hundred thousand pounds. First, in the studio, we have Jim and Russell. Let's meet them." Two men stand behind smart game-show lecterns each displaying a score of zero. Max touches the collar of his open necked shirt, tugs...
Lisa's head swam. She was so damn horny it was difficult for her to think straight. Every inch of her skin felt alive and sensitive. Her puffy and extended nipples even more so. Her cock ached with pleasure even as permanently limp as it now was. Even her balls, shriveled and atrophied as they now were, also ached with pleasure. Her ass was even worse. It felt empty now that Master Carl had removed the plug. Not that the plug helped much with that horniness. Oh, it filled her up...
We’re in the boring, flat, concrete car park, surrounded by boring family cars, looking at the boring red-brick buildings that combine to form the Beddingham International School. But here comes the excitement... She’s sexy, with a fuck-me-but-don’t-fuck-with-me face and long blonde hair is swept around to the side of her head and hangs infront of one shoulder. Her accent, friendly southern English but with a distinct Eastern European edge. “Hello, and welcome to a new series of ‘The...
(Fictional story told from Female point of view) My husband Ron and I like to play sexual games. One game that we sometimes play is Forfeits, this is where I am given some task to fulfil and if I fail I have to take a note from the Lucky Dip jar and act out whatever is written on it. These have ranged from relatively mild things, such as leaving off my panties and flashing my nakedness in a pub, to very severe things like inviting a strange Master from a sex contact mag, to come and beat me....
To perhaps alleviate some of the confusion of many, many names, here is a list of some that are mentioned, but were introduced in previous episodes of the Transformations series. Dr. Julia Waxman, Psychiatrist, Director of Transformation Frank Waxman, Julia's husband, General Manager of Transformations, former fashion exec, General Manager of Magnuson Foundation. Gerald Magnuson, wealthy philanthropist, primary backer of Transformations. Paul Ventri, CFO of Transformations and president...
It must have been two or three in the morning. Even after waking, and after Carol returned from a trip to the bathroom, they did not speak. She got right on top of Ryan as he lay on his back, remembering the revelation that tender position had been with Dex. It was no less thrilling with Ryan, and she soon returned to a contented sleep. Her next conscious moment found her still atop him, but with his reenergized cock pressing against her thigh. Not sure if he was awake, she raised her bottom...
With nervous butterflies in her stomach Nadine walked into the studio. She would finally become a real actress. For years her agent had only send her out on modeling jobs and told her she couldn’t act, but now for the first time she would do an actual real screen test. ‘Welcome,’ A guy with baby blue eyes reached out his hand. ‘I’m Martin the director, are you ready for your audition?’ ‘Yes Sir.’ Nadine tried to hide her nerves under a bunch of enthusiasm, but she realized it sounded...
"A Proper Stepford Wife" It was a warm sunny day as I drove along after being at the bar for a couple beers and a few games of pool. In the convertible Corvette I felt the wind in my hair and sideburns at the sides of my baseball cap. I was dressed as usual in t-shirt, jeans and tennis shoes. The sun was bright as I headed home so I put on my sunglasses. I felt the slight itch then scratched the whiskers at my chin and right cheek realizing I hadn't shaved in a couple days. I...
Walter had been taking care of the Charles' pool for as long as Faith could remember. Although Mercedes frowned on it, Faith had always enjoyed chatting with him while he worked. Walter was a story-teller, and he was able to hold her spellbound, even now that she was in college. For his part, he welcomed her attention, always amazed that a bitch like Mercedes could give birth to such a genuinely sweet person as Faith. Mercedes literally did not notice the presence of Walter or the numerous...
This happened a few years ago. It was getting dark and I was passing a popular cruising spot near Barton Mills. I drove down the quiet forest road and pulled up . I got lucky because a few minutes later a car passed slowly and flashed his indicator. I did the same, he took this as a sign that I was interested. I glanced at him in his car as I got out and walked into the wooded area. He followed quickly behind. as he got to me I was stroking my soft cock. with just my jeans unbuttoned and loose....
Its been a while since I posted on here, but having just returned from a contract in the UK, I thought id post again.The drive homeI purchased a motor home for a whilst working on a short contract in the UK, I found myself driving up to see friends after a weeks work on a Friday evening. Having finished for a 3 day weekend I started the drive north and found myself getting sleepy on the route. Not knowing the A11 too well I pulled over in a layby to look at the map, my luck was in, a food van...