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Authors note:
This is the end of the story and it has changed from what I had
originally thought when I first started the story. I made Justin's
change much longer and more specific. I also thought that something bad
should happen to Patty and so I tacked on an ending of her fate. I
think it's better this way. In the end, in my opinion, everyone is
happy and don't have a clue they had been changed except for Patty who
is stuck in a sort of hell. Patty alone knows what has happened to her
and her family.
I hope you enjoyed the story. I know it's somewhat impossible or at
least improbably. I don't mean the pen device, but such things as Karen
and Justin trading lives and no one notices. You have to assume that
Justin and Karen looked alike at least in the face and could pass for
each other if they tried. This is somewhat believable since Justin
could wear all the makeup and padding under his clothes to give him a
rather feminine look. Girls have been using makeup to look older
forever. You just have to go for it.
Karen on the other hand with short boyish hair, her breasts wrapped up
and wearing oversized boy clothes to hide her womanly figure might be
able to get away with the impersonation too. Who would suspect that a
woman would try to pretend to be a boy and so people would delude
themselves into believing that Karen was Justin. Not saying this would
happen in the real world, just that it could. I heard a while back
there was an adult man who enrolled in high school and became a
cheerleader until he got caught and sent to jail.
Also since both are taking hormones, Karen would seem to develop into a
man (she would start getting stubble, her voice would change, etc) and
Justin who had never gone through puberty to begin with would develop
like a woman, this is perfectly plausible as it does happen. For
transsexuals the earlier one start taking hormones the more passable he
would be in later life.
I used the cheat of saying that Patty used her pen without her realizing
it, so that you can assume extra commands/changes that I forgot. Maybe
for example, Patty told Justin to be mature and so he was and that is
how he could keep up a conversation with a woman twenty-five years older
than he was without her noticing. Many stories can be picked apart and
if you need these tricks to get through that is fine with me. The story
probably won't be reedited for whatever oversights I might have made.
If you finished reading the story that is good enough for me. That
meant at some level you liked it to follow it through to the end. I
know if I don't like a story, I quit reading it. If you got to this
point, you must have enjoyed it at some level.
Comments welcomed even if you see a logical inconsistency let me know.
If you lied the story, you can tell me that too (that is great to hear)
but also tell me why you liked it. I don't know if I have any more
mom/son life swap stories in me. An actual boy swap story I don't know
if I want to write. Body swaps are fish out of water stories which is
different than the type of story I right. Besides they have been done,
I'm sure everyone has seen at least one of the remakes of Freaky Friday.
Imagin how little the story would change if the Jodie Foster character
was played by a boy. It wasn't that Annabelle was all that girly when
the movie began and so the plot could be exactly the same, IMO.
Regards,
itsme
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Patty liked this arrangement, but she also felt something was missing.
She decided that she wanted her family back together. She missed her
dad. She could see that Justin and Karen were very happy in their
swapped position. Patty didn't care about what Justin was doing
regarding the credit cards and licenses but everything at home was
running smoothly. Even the food was better since Justin was taking
classes. Patty also hadn't see mom happier. She didn't want to bring
back the bad feelings that her mom had been feeling since her dad left.
Patty thought she could make her family whole and happy if she left
things as they were and just made one more change. So when it was time
to visit with her dad she took her pen along.
Before Patty left she wanted to solidify things at home. Justin was
living as an adult woman and Karen was going to school in eighth grade
like a boy. But they knew they were just pretending. They assumed they
could return to their real lives at a later time. This was of course
foolish, but Patty had made so many suggestions by now that everything
seemed normal. Patty decided that Mom and her brother would have to
forget about ever having their old lives and live their new lives as if
it had always been that way.
Patty found Justin in their mom's room. He was sitting in a chair
reading Elle magazine. Patty saw that he was wearing a nice sleeveless
top with matching lady's slacks and pumps with a short one and a half
inch heel. His bra which Patty couldn't see had falsies in the cups.
Patty assumed he was wearing panties of some type too. Patty was
carrying a skirt when she greeted him.
He put the magazine down when Patty came in. Patty could have made this
quick, telling Justin that he was now Karen and had always been Karen.
But she wanted to drag this out and watch the changes. Patty clicked
her pen and said, "Justin you will return to how you was before I ever
got this pen, but you won't notice what you are wearing." She then
released the clicker.
Justin's expression changed. His personality and expression changed
from that of an adult woman as he was pretending to be to that of an
obnoxious pre-teen boy. Even though he was dressed as a woman including
makeup, he didn't seem anymore like a woman. Now seemed like a boy
playing dress-up. But Justin didn't notice that. He didn't notice what
magazine that he had just been reading either. What was the first thing
that came to his mind was, what was he doing in his mom's room? What he
said in a surly tone he used to reserve for his sister when she
interrupted him was, "What do you want?" Then looking around he
continued, "What are we doing in mom's room?"
Patty clicked the pen again. "Justin you don't mind being in mom's
room." Releasing her finger, "What did you say?"
"Oh, nevermind, but what do you want!?! I have important things to do."
Although, Justin had forgotten for a second what those important things
were.
"I have a rip in my skirt, and I want you to fix it for me." Patty said
nonchalantly, not meeting Justin's anger with her own. Patty knew she
was in complete charge here and so there was no need to raise her voice.
"Are you mad?" Justin said incredulously. "What do I know about fixing a
skirt?"
Patty instinctively clicked her pen every time she gave a command to
Justin. She started off with, "You remember all the hobbies and skills
that you had learned since I first used the pen." This included a wide
range of things not only sewing, but also cooking, fashion, soaps and
even the gossip that he shared with his mom's friends. "Well you have
been taking needlepoint classes."
"Yeah, so, why should I help you?" Just because Justin now knew how to
sew was no reason to help his sister.
Click. "You like showing off your skills." "Please..."
"Oh alright, let me see it." The skirt had a small rip along the hem
that Patty had purposefully made for this occasion. Justin took the
skirt and then headed to the basket of sewing supplies that were kept
underneath the night stand in his mom's room. When he got the supplies
he needed, he started to fix the hem.
"Justin I wanted to ask you about something."
Justin was hard at work trying to thread a needle. He had found the
proper thread color and this was obviously the first step in mending the
skirt. "What is it?" Justin was still using his surly tone. Just
because he was proud that he could mend the skirt and wanted to show off
a bit, didn't mean that he wanted to answer any of his sister's silly
questions. He wanted to fix the skirt and get Patty out of here.
"When was your first period?"
"What are you talking about? You mean at school? Hmmm, I guess at
8:50." Justin didn't even know what a period was, let alone when his
first one was.
Click. "You remember everything that mom told you about herself and they
will become your memories. These memories will replace any memory you
had while wearing boy's clothes." Patty chose her words carefully.
Which she rarely did. She wanted Justin to know everything that Karen
told him about her life, but she didn't want him to forget what he had
been doing in recent months.
Now, clearly remembering his entire sex life as Karen had told him, he
knew what she was talking about. But the little brother in him said,
"That's personal, why do you want to know anyway?"
A little exasperated with his answers and wanting to move this along.
Click. "You will answer all my questions because you want to." "No,
the first time you had a period. I just want to know."
Justin gave the answer to Patty. He now remembered everything about his
first period as Karen had told him. "I was about ten."
"Really, what happened"
Justin then went on to explain the story as Karen had told him. It
didn't occur to him that he is a boy and couldn't have a period nor did
it occur to him when he said how his mom discovered what had happened
was he talking about his mom, Karen or his grandma. During the telling
of the story, Justin was expertly fixing Patty's skirt.
When he was finished, Patty then inquired, "How did you meet dad?"
Again, Justin told the story of how he met his father from his mom's
perspective which was now his perspective. He described it with all the
emotion and feeling that Karen had put into the story when she told him.
He didn't just describe what happened, but also how he felt. He was
still twelve-years-old, but he related the story of his mom's and dad's
first encounter from mom's perspective in a way that only a woman could
tell.
Patty smiled to herself as she heard the story. At one point she said,
"You have all of mom's mannerisms and gestures." Justin was in the
middle of the story, but he started to use his hands more expressively
to tell the story. He leaned in closer to Patty to develop a
mother/daughter intimacy. He also closed his legs which made him seem
ladylike. He started to look less like a boy playing dress-up and more
like a adult woman. It was surprising how just a few mannerisms could
change how you saw a person.
Click. "You speak like mom and use mom's expressions."
His voice which was high, changed somewhat. It was more melodious. It
was no longer the speech of a boy and more like that of a woman. His
word choice also became somewhat more sophisticated. He added more
words of endearment into his speaking style. Using words like 'honey,'
'sweetheart,' and 'dear' when referring to Patty or Raymond. He used
some of the typical phases that both Patty and Justin had heard his mom
use often. He started to emphasize his words differently than he had
before. The story didn't change, most of the words were the same as
before but a word here and there and the rhythm of his speaking style
made all the difference. He had obviously picked this up from hearing
not only his mom talk, but also chatting with mom's friends. This added
to the illusion that he was an adult woman not just a kid in his mom's
clothes.
Patty kept making commands to Justin while he was telling his story.
None of the commands interrupted the story Justin was telling.
Click. "You are mom's age." She said at one point. Nothing changed,
although if he was asked Justin would say he was thirty-eight instead of
twelve. He was still a boy at least to himself.
Click. "You are a woman." This was now just a fact. With the changes
before, his actions, memories and were already thoroughly feminine. But
now he thought of himself as a woman.
Click. "Your name is Karen, you are my mother and you have always been
Karen." It had to be said, it would be strange if Patty's little
brother Justin thought of himself as a thirty-eight-year-old woman.
Now that Justin was gone from Karen's mind, Patty had to add just a few
little touches. Click. "Mom," she was truly Karen now, "you still love
dad with all your heart. You will take him back to be your husband if
you think he is truly sorry and repentant. The most important thing in
your life is to be a wife. If you get the chance you will do everything
in your power to make your marriage work. Next you are a loving mother
and finally you are a woman. This is how you think of yourself." This
was the last command that Patty gave the former Justin. Patty had hoped
that she had gave Justin the proper commands so that she could be
'Karen' forever. But Patty still had the pen and she knew she could
make any refinements if they became necessary.
Patty would also talk to her dad and between what she said to Justin and
her dad, they would come together and have a very loving, stable
marriage for the rest of their lives. After Patty had finished talking
to Justin, he would live the happy life of a middle aged wife and
mother. All of her real concerns were to support her family. She
considered herself a reflection not of herself, but of her family.
Patty then saw Karen in the living room, Karen was playing Justin's PSP.
Patty was quicker when changing Karen. She made him the best little
brother any girl could have. He wasn't a whiny little wimp. He wasn't
the obnoxious little brother that the original Justin was. He simply
loved her like a brother, but stayed out of her way. His life from then
on would be the life of a jock but not a bully. Patty removed from
Karen's mind anything that had to do with being a woman or being an
adult. All of his knowledge and learning after his thirteenth birthday
were removed from his mind totally. He was Justin now and in his head
not only was he a boy, but he had never even seen a naked woman before.
Patty was ready to now visit with her dad and return the household into
one big happy family.
Several days later, Raymond was at the door of their house with flowers
in hand. When he saw what he thought was Karen open the door, he got
down on his knees. Karen was wearing a pretty blouse and skirt set. It
was a tasteful floral maxi-skirt with a matching blouse designed for a
woman approaching middle age. She wore sensible sandal style shoes with
a low heel. Her hair and makeup were pretty but understated. All in
all she looked like a pretty confident woman who was secure in her own
skin.
Raymond started begging forgiveness when he saw her. He said he had
come to realize the huge mistake he had made and he wanted to be taken
back. He wanted his family again. He would never stray again and deep
in his heart he meant it.
Karen asked him what about his bimbo. Raymond said that she had left
him without saying a word and didn't know what happened to her. He said
that that gave him time to think and he now knew what he had done was
wrong and that if she would give him a second chance he would be the
best husband and father.
Raymond didn't know that his girlfriend's personality had been totally
changed. Not only did she not want Raymond, but she didn't want any
man. She is only attracted to women with large breasts. She didn't
need to be with a woman with cartoonishly large breasts, but large
breasts attracted her. It was sort of an obsession with her. It made
it hard to stay focused on anything she was doing, but she is managing
the best that she can.
Raymond knew as an absolute certainty that the 'woman' standing before
him was his wife Karen. Even if Raymond saw 'her' without a stitch of
clothing on (and saw the penis of a twelve-year-old) he still knew 'she'
was Karen, but in reality, it was Justin. Justin was also certain who
he was, she was Karen a mother of two and she wanted to be the wife of
the father of those children again. Justin knew as well as he knew
anything that 'he' is and always had been Karen. She knew everything
about herself. She remembered her first period and her first kiss. The
men she dated before meeting Raymond. She remembered falling in love,
getting married and having children. She was for all intents and
purposes she was Karen and deep in her heart she knew she loved Raymond.
She could never stay mad at him. Raymond was the father of her
children. She would make Raymond suffer for a few moments and then take
him back.
Before answering, she asked his child what they thought. Patty was
having fun playing devil's advocate since she put this all together and
knew how it would all turn out. Justin loved his dad with all his heart
every bit as much as 'Karen' did but in a different way obviously.
Justin also needed a dad in his life to teach him to be a man. He had
just started dating Jessica and he needed his dad to give him advice.
'Justin' was a typical twelve-year-old who knew nothing about girls and
women. Most of his life was about sports and being with the boys. But
like all boys growing up his tastes were changing and girls were
entering his interests. He was starting to get attracted to girls, but
didn't really know what to do about it. He needed a strong hand to
guide him. He loved his mom, but he couldn't really ask her about such
things. It was plain on his face, he wanted his dad back in his life.
Soon, Raymond was welcomed back into the family. A status that was
solidified when he moved back into the house and was especially made
clear when he moved back into Karen's bed and they made passionate love
for the first time since the separation.
Much like Karen who had started taking female hormones a while back.
Justin started taking Raymond's low-T medications at least twice a day
at Patty's suggestion. Justin became a model son. With his dad back in
his life he lost the rebellious streak that Karen had grounded him for
when all this started. Justin was actually too busy to get into
trouble. It seemed he had after school activities almost every day.
Besides the volleyball and Boy Scouts, Justin signed up with other sport
clubs too. He had become quite a jock and was developing into a fine
young man with the help of his father's guidance and his low-T
medications.
Karen insisted that Raymond give Justin the talk about the birds and the
bees. Karen knew that Justin had gotten himself a girlfriend and she
wanted Raymond to tell him what was what. Talks between men and their
sons had been going on like this for as long as there had been fathers
and sons. Justin was very naive when it came to this subject. If
Raymond didn't talk to his son fast, the boy would learn sex from the
streets and that was never a good idea. So Raymond invited Justin to
the den and he started talking. Raymond and Justin had a great
relationship and things went smoothly, well as smoothly as such things
go. Father's always worried about telling their son's too much too
quickly or not telling enough.
Justin had never seen a woman naked before. (Due to Patty's pen, Justin
didn't see his body as a woman's body.) Raymond had to explain to
Justin how women were different than boys. He didn't go into the
details about periods. But he did explain where babies came from. He
also gave Justin his first copy of Playboy, just as his father had given
him. When Raymond was done and he was sure he had answered all of
Justin's questions, Raymond changed the subject to sports and they left
the room laughing. Raymond was pleased with himself that he had told
Justin all he needed to know at this time. Justin is only twelve and
there was time for a more serious talk in a few years.
Patty found a way to eavesdrop on the conversation. She was the only
one who could see the joke. Raymond had actually told his 'wife', the
mother of his children, about the birds and the bees. Patty smiled to
herself and then without being seen left the den.
Justin formalized his relationship with Jessica by telling her as only a
twelve-year-old could that they were going out. Jessica had considered
herself dating Justin for weeks before. She was just glad that Justin
had finally caught on. Now that Justin was dating, he had less time for
his friend Timmy. Justin encouraged Timmy to join his volleyball team
and Timmy did so.
It was during one of the volleyball games that Justin and Timmy met
Vinny. Vinny was a player on the opposing team. One of Justin's team
members went up to spike the ball and Vinny cleanly blocked it. Then he
grabbed his crotch and shouted "You think you can spike it on me??? Well
SUCK MY BALLS!!!" All the boys broke out laughing. Especially since
the boy who said it was wearing glasses and had braces. It was cool to
see such bravado in a nerdy looking boy like that. The adults who were
officiating the game didn't think it was as funny. Vinny was taken out
of the game.
There was just something about Vinny that both Justin and Timmy liked so
they searched him out after the game. Vinny said that his Mom worked at
TGI-Fridays and that he could get them all the free food they wanted if
they sat in her section. The three boys were inseparable from that time
forward. Well they were when Justin didn't have a date anyway. Justin
was thinking who should he set Jessica's friend Kelly up with, Vinny or
Timmy?
Karen had settled into the life of a wife and mother. She ran the
household and supported everyone emotionally in her family. She didn't
need to work, Raymond paid all the bills, but she did spend an awful lot
of money on fashions for her. As her figure developed due to the
hormones she was taking, she started wearing less and less foundation
garments. She started to buy more sexy lingerie for her private times
with Raymond. Karen was starting to gain weight so she decided to
reinstate her membership at the gym. Raymond seemed a changed man and
all of Karen's friends, who were resistant at first, endorsed Karen's
decision to let Raymond back into her life.
Patty suggested (without using her pen) that Mom and Dad should renew
their wedding vows. Everyone thought this was a great idea and a
ceremony was planned for the near future. Patty was going to be Karen's
maid of honor and Justin would be Raymond's best man. It was a lovely
ceremony, followed by an expensive reception. Justin's friends, Timmy
and Vinny were there. The three were such great friends that Karen also
established a friendship with their mom's Stephanie and Lydia.
Present Day
Patty left the room. Karen knew there was nothing she could do. The
nurse would be there soon and once she was put to sleep she would never
be herself again. But she did remember how her life was. She
remembered the pain of Raymond leaving her. She didn't think she could
ever forgive him. She still loved him, but how could she stay married
to a man like that. But Raymond had changed. She saw it in how he
treated his wife, 'Karen.' But was that really him? She guessed not.
She also remembered how she felt as a boy. It was really fun to play
sports. It was nice not having any real responsibilities. She was
truly happy when she was a 'boy.' It didn't matter anyway, there was
nothing she could do about it. The nurse entered the room with a
syringe in hand.
Patty had resolved to stop using the pen on her family. She thought her
family was perfect now. But as the weeks and months passed Patty
resented not being treated as an adult. She was being treated like a
normal sixteen-year-old by her loving family.
She took out her pen fore the first time in a long time and said to her
whole family, but her mom in particular, "Accept me for who I am and
don't try and change me." It was a poor choice of words, since even
though Patty thought of herself as an adult, she was still a teen and
her family treated her as such.
Karen seeing that her child was distressed tried to calm her by taking
her hand in her own. While trying to grab her hand, Karen inadvertently
depressed the pen while saiding, "You act like a baby." Meaning of
course that sometimes Patty acts immature and needed to be protected by
her mom. Karen didn't know the harm she had done, but Patty did
immediately.
Patty tried to fix the problem. She spastically kept clicking the pen
like a baby, but found that the only thing that would come out of her
mouth was incoherent baby babble. She found she couldn't stand on her
feet any more and plopped on her butt. Realizing how a baby must act
changed her. She would think oh my god babies do this and that and then
she would do it herself. It took less than a minute to realize the most
obvious aspect of being a baby and she forced herself to wet herself for
the first time that day.
Because of Patty's previous command, everyone in the family accepted her
for who she was. She was a teen who acted like a baby and they would
treat her like a baby. Worse yet, no one wanted to change her. Except
Karen but she wanted to change her in a different sense.
Karen picked up Patty and carried her to her room. In her room, Karen
stripped Patty out of her wet things and put her in a new clean set of
panties. During the changing, Karen took the pen away from Patty.
Karen realized that dressing Patty in panties wasn't right for Patty new
persona and knew she needed to go out and get some thing. Karen then
carried Patty back into the livingroom and asked Raymond to watch her.
Raymond took Patty into his arms and sat her on his lap and started to
play a game of peekaboo with her. Patty had no choice but act
accordingly and smiled and laughed like a baby.
Patty was trapped acting like a baby for the rest of her life. She knew
what she was doing, but she couldn't resist the command. As more and
more of what it took to be a baby occurred to her the more babyish she
acted. She couldn't walk, only crawl. Toddlers walked, but babies
crawled. She couldn't eat solid food. She lost most of her
coordination. She was constantly trying to think of a way to get out of
this hell and with every little battle won, she would realized that
babies don't do that and that skill was lost forever.
Karen returned with what she thought was the bare necessities for a
baby. She returned with diapers, baby wipes, powder, bottles, formula,
bibs, a spit cloth, and baby toys. When Patty saw the stuff it gave her
ideas of how a baby acted. She pursed her lips like she was a hungry
baby. Karen immediately recognized this action and warmed up a bottle
for her. When it was ready, Karen scooped Patty into her arms and fed
her her first bottle. After she was done, Karen put Patty over her
shoulder and rubbed her back in an effort to burp her.
All of Patty's furniture and stuff was removed from her room as it
slowly took the form of a baby's nursery. Patty's adult live was over
as she was compelled to act like a baby forever.
The End
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