The Family Business an Alternative Ending
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I recently read the story, The Thrill of Cheating by Flash of Stocking. As I read it, I hoped to find an ending that I liked, but that wasn't the case. I contacted the author, and he graciously granted me permission to provide an alternative ending, knowing that I would take it in a very different direction. Clearly this casts a very different conclusion to the story. I'll leave it to the reader to decide which they prefer. The next morning, Jen spent a long time in the shower. She felt so...
[Please read the original 'After Hours' first. The original story was inspired by a story I read with a more traditional power dynamic between a male boss and a female employee. After posting it, it occurred to me that some readers might enjoy a slightly different ending. - S.S.] The office clock ticks round to five o'clock, Friday afternoon again. The last of my colleagues heads towards the door, stopping for a quick comment before leaving. "Working late again? Just you and the...
Panther Girl of Gor: an alternative ending by 'Archer' Cordellian: So, I've always felt that the most flattering thing a writer can possibly hope for with her work is to find that some of her readers are inspired enough by the stories to try their own hand at adding to the existing body of work, either through art (my wonderful collaborator, ChloeK) or, as in this case, Archer's fan-fic writing. I'm obviously someone who is very much in favour of fan-fic. One of the very first...
Just Get on the Tug, Doug! “Do you want to talk about it?” “No. Not really.” My wife Connie was just returning from her weekend with her lover. It started six months ago. At first, she would use a cover story about going to spent time with her mother, but in the last few months, she just left with no explanation at all. I was a bit too trusting so I wasn’t able to figure out what was going on for quite a while. Calvin Bostic was a friend of my wife’s before I met her. After going together...
"HEY JACKIE YOU NEED TO COME HERE WE'RE READY FOR ROUND TWO! JACKIE! JAINA!" Markus opened the door to the main hall of the mansion, heart beating as his mind was worrying that this would all fall apart somehow. There was a soft, warm trail of slime leading over the corridors and down the main floor, and as Markus and Jeremy rushed up to the door there was the VROOM of an engine outside, and Markus looked out to just barely see a happy Jackie drive off in one of his expensive sports...
Jane was up to greet me when I walked into the house Sunday afternoon. I could easily see the effect of the night before. She was walking slowly; her face was red from whisker-burn, her eyes were a little red looking. To my surprise she wrapped her arms around me and clung to me by the door. I tried to ask her what was wrong but she just shook her head and continued to hang on. She was sniffling a little, I think she may have been crying, but she wouldn't let me see her face. Finally I was...
This is a slow story contains less number of hard core stuff. Please ignore this story if it doesn’t suit your taste. And yeah, my English sucks. Well, I couldn’t think any preface/intro to this story. I request you to read this and review. If you have any suggestion kindly post it to profile. Let’s get into the stream.. I was sitting in a White Hyundai Accent car, stranded in city traffic. I checked my watch, its quarter past 6. “Hmm it could have been quite difficult if there is no...
Introduction: Alternative version of Chapter 3 Hello lovelies! Since the first posting of Chapter three wasnt so happy, I decided to write an alternative chapter 3. I hope you enjoy it. And please let me know where you would like to see Milo and Lenas story go! Xoxo, Cede __________ The strange look in my brothers eyes as I straddled his hips and confessed to being a virgin caused me to pause. You think somethings wrong with me, dont you? My stomach burned with anxiety. To come this far and...
Known worldwide for their massive infrastructure, Alternative Solutions is a company that saved franchises from going bankrupt, avoided wars, even prevented small nations from being ravished by invasions. However, it's in one of the many skyscrappers in Manhattan that lies the "heart and brains" of the company. Alternative Solutions Systems is a branch of the worldwide company, responsible for the development of tools, gear, equipment, or anything else, to solve the problems presented by their...
This is Jeya. I always have this feel that makes me think that I should be helpful to other people in ANY way. This is a slow story contains less number of hard core stuff. Please ignore this story if it doesn’t suit your taste. Well, I couldn’t think any preface/intro to this story. I request you to read this and review. If you have any suggestion kindly post it to Let’s get into the stream.. I was sitting in a White Hyndai XCent car, stranded in city traffic. I checked my watch, its...
Notes: this is my first story (as you may tell) and this story may not transition or conclude as a normal story would. I do appreciate tips [email protected] The Alternative Universe. By Joanne Chapter 1 John was a shy and lonely man, after leaving his teenage years recently behind him he has found it hard to cope with the real world, This is his story on how he eventually was able to cope with his fears and...
Better Than the Alternative? Chapter 1 I was up early this morning, probably the only kid in my class who was actually excited for the first day of school. There were a few reasons I was excited, one of them more so than the other. For one thing it was my first day in high school, while only a lonely freshman, I'm still in high school. The second reason, and the main reason, is I thought I never was going to make it this far. No, I don't mean academically, I meant I wouldn't have lived...
Chapter 2 I'm not going to lie, I was stunned. I wasn't trying to be rude, but this cute girl in front of me just admitted that she was a friend of mine that I had known as a guy... I was looking at her face, and I could then see the Sam I had known, well sort of. Sam had always had this look... I mean we all have a look, but his was like he was always concentrating. He had been a good damn player, and I mean totally focused, even for a kid. Now though, that intense look that he...
This one took me a bit extra time to write, my daughter is graduating tomorrow, and preparations have been taking up a lot of my time. I do want to say, this is an extremely important moment in Jordan's life... I just feel that I might need witness protection after this chapter... I promise I will make up for it in 11. Hope you enjoy, and don't get too upset with me. ~~ Rebecca Chapter 10 I followed Mr. Miller back to his office, I kept glancing around hoping I'd get a glimpse of...
‘Wraith? Gods?’ Zax struggled to wrap his head around the two terms. ‘Wraith like a ghost ... like in a horror movie?’ The manner in which Xinia recited how God Demirva used remnants of the souls and dark attribute to create such creature was inventive. Seems to be impossible to the current Zax, but still a mind opener to the, maybe, reachable heights a proficient soul cultivator can attain. ‘But what sort of existence do they talk about in Ercas Mir when they mention Gods?!’ His only hope...
Author’s Note: This series is a continuation of my last story series, ‘Ghosts of the Past.’ It is taking place 18 years plus into the future and involves the children of the group of friends surrounding Charles and Diana Richards and Tom and Lynda Seldon… who are just about to learn the ‘Price of Past Miracles…’ ********** ‘Mama… I love him and he loves me!’ Megan Richards exclaimed as she clung to her lifelong friend and soul mate, Brad Seldon. ‘Aunt Dee… I know you probably think we’re...
Chapter 1 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Joey's Background +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ January 8, 1980 Joey wanted nothing more in this world then to be a rock star, but the odds were against him. He did not know how to play any instrument, nor was his singing ability anything special. It hurt him even more that he did not know anyone within the industry. Still, he wanted to be a rock star. Unfortunately for Joey, he was also lazy and undisciplined. He was just a few...
The Summer Swap (alternate ending) Synopsis: With the help of some moonlight magic one summer evening, a guy has a very unique 'first time'. (This is an alternate ending - and quite dark.) [email protected] ********************************************************************** The Summer Swap (alternate ending) It all started as a blessing, a chance to experience the other side. Now, I realize it was a curse. Thanks to that magical moonlit evening so...
Excerpt from ‘ The price of Rebellion’A Crucim story in progress. By [email protected] sleek Roman war galley drops anchor and a short time later the captain speaks to General ‘Crassus.’? We couldn’t catch the pirates sir. The slaves are lazy and didn’t put in all their effort even with a liberal taste of the whip.The captain is nervous, he knows that the final blame will lay with him. He takes the generals silence as liberty to...
Introduction: What if John Fields Survived AUTHORS NOTE* I said a story of mine was published and some guy commented saying Posting a story on this site isnt getting a story published. Ya I know. A while ago a Woman who worked for Amazing life media inc contacted me via email and said she wanted to use my story Gothic Amy and Me or as it should have been called Gothic Amy and I in a book with a bunch of other sex stories. Its legit and its going to be published soon. I jumped at the chance and...
Introduction: I had a roommate whod cry over the relationship he was having with his girl, I ended up fucking that girl, in the same apartment we shared as roommates, even in front of him. She kind of played along without much effort, like a caged animal who can only taste freedom while in chains. Like all girls before her, I knew shed play the role of defiance very shortly. But as soon as I lined them up outside overlooking the wired fences, the mined fields, the vicious dogs, all of them knew...
I wrote this to explain when I first realized my desire to be with another woman. I never knew how much I wanted this until we were out one night at an alternative bar and I watched women dancing and caressing each other. There were two beautiful women standing beside us and they kissed, a very hot, passionate kiss, while running their hands over each other's breasts and buttocks and I thought I'd orgasm right there watching them. It really had a profound affect on me! I wanted to feel...
Guten Tag! Gestatten sie dass ich mich vorstelle. Ich bin ein Wissenschaftler. Ein Quantenwissenschaftler um genau zu sein. Doch im Gegensatz zu anderen meines Schlages sitze ich nicht in riesigen Hallen und vor gigantischen Supercomputern und bin nur einer von vielen. Nein! Ich ziehe es vor in meinen speziell für mich angefertigtem Kellerlabor zu arbeiten und an geheimen, von manchen als gefährlich angesehenen Experimenten zu arbeiten. So fallen Ruhm und Nutzen meiner Entdeckungen allein mir...
"Alternative Medicine" By: Chiara Hi. My name is Lee. Let me tell you the most amazing story about how I got into shape! I had been in a depression for some time. I am 35. I had been overweight for the last 10 years. I used to be active until about 8 or 10 years ago. I really loved to play soccer or run in those days. I had a nice relationship with Janice back then. All was well. Then it seemed to fall apart.I came into a pretty good inheritance when my parents passed away. I found...
Alternative Education by Gingerfred Man Chapter One -- Johnson, Johnson's Johnson, Johnson Junior Mark Johnson, PhD, lay naked on his bed. His chest was heaving as the result of a stupefying orgasm that had spewed a large amount of hot sperm in a semen sauce along the length of his flat belly and hairy, buff chest. His considerable cock was softening as the exhausted educator considered the fact that he had cum three times in the past 45 minutes. The cause of his sexual agony...
Transgender Sex: A Liberating Alternative Sex that involves only men and women, whether it is heterosexual or homosexual, eventually becomes tiresome. Both as entities in themselves and as sexual partners, shemales, as a third sex, so to speak, renew and heighten sex and sensuality by combining some of the attributes of each sex, as such crude terms as "chicks with dicks" and "dudes with boobs" suggest. Just when we begin to think that we know it all about men and women and about sex...
Radhika loves her only son Raju. Her husband Ramesh is a drunkard. He works for an IT concern as a manager. Radhika works as a school teacher. Raju is studying XII standard, and is 18 years of age. Ramesh has to withstand a lot of pressure in his IT job to survive and earn handsomely. Sometimes he returns home after 3 full nights of work. Such is his job. So he drinks heavily to relieve himself. But he does not make any ruckus. He drinks and sleeps off.But sometimes when he dozes off, he...
Alternative Reality 1 Written by Dauphin http://dauphinsworld.activeboard.com/ I tried to open my eyes, but had to close them again. Everything was black. I tried to open my eyes. They were so heavy. I did my best to keep them open, but the light hurt them. Everything looked so white. I could see this woman looking down at me saying to wake up. She was calling me Ashley! My name was Ash. I closed my eyes again. I could not keep them open. I closed my eyes again, and I could hear...
Alternative version of Actions Have Consequences By Sarah Goodwoman Marci looked in the mirror one last time to make sure her makeup was perfect. She was shocked and disappointed at how good it was. She has only been doing her makeup for a month now but felt like she was a professional at it. The woman stalling for time was not happy that she did not need to do anymore alterations to her makeup. Marci cursed herself for being too honest, for she was not looking forward to leaving the...
Chapter 3 "So, we're in agreement? Relay races in sixty to seventy years?" she asked me with a large grin. I'm glad that seeing the humor clearly on her face defused my emotional 'almost' outburst. I laughed to hide the remaining urge to cry, and told her, "Deal... You know I might have to give you a handicap though... You know I've already got my practice scooting around in a 'chair." She joined in laughing with me. "We'll just have to see about that... Umm... Did you forget your...
Chapter 5 I'd like to say that I was able to focus and catch up on the reading that I didn't get done last night due to my meltdown. I couldn't though, my mind kept drifting back to how much the changes terrified me last night and then just now how I seemed more than okay with the possibility. I didn't think I was okay with being a girl, just the thought of my body becoming all curvy sent a shudder through me. I spent most of the two-hour study hall in thought, the only thing I...
***Authors note*** Life is slowly starting to return to a semblance of normalcy, at least enough that I have a bit of time to write now. I'm just having to catch up with three writing projects I'm currently behind on. Alternative is of course one of them, along with another story I am slowly starting to write (Muse is not staying focused), and a collaboration I'm writing with a good friend of mine. I can't really say more, but hopefully it will be awesome. Hope you all enjoy, hugs....
*Authors note* Hey y'all, I hate that it's taken me this long to complete this chapter. Life unfortunately has caused me to have to place my writing pretty low on my priority list. Between work and my kids I just haven't had enough time in my days to write much at a time. To those following this story I will repeat my promise to you, I WILL complete this story. I just apologize that it's taking me longer than it should. Hope y'all enjoy. ~Rebecca J. Chapter 18 Sam gasped, "Oh my...
*Authors note* Both of my daughters were busy today and with it being the first Saturday I didn't have to work in months I didn't know what else to do. So I typed lol. Thankfully I have the rest of this story already written out in my head, its just getting the time to actually type it. I do want to sincerely thank everyone that's been following this story with me. Your words truly mean a lot. Thank you. Hope you enjoy. ~Rebecca J. Chapter 19 Stunned, Brett asked, "Just what kind...
Please feel free to leave feedback. I would love to hear your comments, suggestions and criticisms. By all means please let me know if this story is a turn on for all girls and admirers out there. Nothing makes me more excited xoxoxo The following is told from the authors perspective. Joyce had a wonderful day at the office. She received an unexpected call from her new Vice President Charles who had just been promoted from corporate attorney. She knew Charles very well. ...
© March 2002 I drove thoughtfully westward in the gathering dusk of a winter's evening, windscreen wipers beating a steady rhythm against the light rain that was falling. I let my mind cast back to the start of the events that would culminate later that evening. It had started with an e-mail from a married couple who had found and read one of my earlier stories. We exchanged letters over several months and it became apparent that they were very keen to explore having a third person in...
CHUCK - Tuesday DAY 9 part # 1 We were enjoying our hotel breakfast when I turned to speak to John. "Please make sure that Steve doesn't over stretch himself after I leave," I told him. "That's totally unnecessary,." Steve protested, "I'm fine today." Unfortunately, he winced slightly as he turned; the girls saw this and ganged up on him, insisting that he certainly wasn't fine yet... He had to accept their ruling... We decided to go get the Citation from McCarran and fly it...
STAR – The Valley - DAY 16 - Tuesday Today is going to be another busy one, but I am lying in bed thinking of Willie; there was something special about that nice old man. But I have to get up and moving. This Ferdie Felton character (what a name for an important company Vice President.) is due to arrive at 0900. I hope Jennie gets back in time. But I shouldn't have worried, as Dewey's G-5 landed at 0830 with her and Bill on board. The first thing I did after getting into my office,...
…..A king? A completely, utterly, absolutely, entirely useless king! Holy shit was I in for it now! The king was a nice card but of absolutely no use to me whatever. Patrick’s straight was good enough, and my hope of waving a full house in his face was dashed. Patrick, of course, was grinning like an idiot. “Oh, girl,” he said, “I’m afraid it’s time for a little payback.” I had no reason to doubt that assessment. Well….. nothing ventured, nothing gained. “I’ve been waiting for this,” Patrick...
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New Year’s Eve 1956 in Washington, D.C. was the night Tom and Lynda Seldon made the ultimate sacrifice for their best friends, Charles and Diana Richards. They had made the most gut-wrenching decision of their lives… and they’d had second and third and fourth thoughts about what they did. But at Charles’ insistence, Tom had finally relented to that one-time attempt to help them create a miracle… ********** ‘Kiss me, Lynda. I’m going to lose it because I don’t think I can do this!’ Tom...
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New Year's Eve 1956 in Washington, D.C. was the night Tom and Lynda Seldon made the ultimate sacrifice for their best friends, Charles and Diana Richards. They had made the most gut-wrenching decision of their lives ... and they'd had second and third and fourth thoughts about what they did. But at Charles' insistence, Tom had finally relented to that one-time attempt to help them create a miracle... "Kiss me, Lynda. I'm going to lose it because I don't think I can do this!" Tom...
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Moving to a new place (alternate ending) The day of the move in was at hand. Timmy had told the movers what to move and where everything went. They would do it for her for an additional fee. He had also arranged for the walls to be painted and for carpeting in the rooms. He even arranged for new furniture in Lydia's room. Timmy was in complete control over both of their lives. They moved into the new apartment and Lydia went to her room and saw all the new furniture. She didn't...
My Sweet Rayne (Alternate ending) by Reeb The cold of the evening air in London on a January night was almost unbearable at times. The chilling cold penetrated deep into my bones through the layers of my uniform. As I stood at the rail terminal waiting my train to Norwich through Ipswich, my thoughts reflected over the last three months of my life. It was late January 1944 and I had just been promoted to Captain in the US Army Air Force. Along with that promotion, I was awarded the...
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Okay, before we got started here, I want to thank everyone who wrote last week to congratulate me about my upcoming wedding. For those of you who were wondering, yes it's true and I think it's right this time. Now this one is a very long story. it's a character study so those of you who hate long stories might want to pass on this one. On the other hand I have been listening to you and I will be alternating shorter stories that will probably be four pages or less, starting with a short one...
My Sweet Rayne (Alternate ending) by Reeb The cold of the evening air in London on a January night was almost unbearable at times. The chilling cold penetrated deep into my bones through the layers of my uniform. As I stood at the rail terminal waiting my train to Norwich through Ipswich, my thoughts reflected over the last three months of my life. It was late January 1944 and I had just been promoted to Captain in the US Army Air Force. Along with that promotion, I was awarded the...
Inspired by true events, but an alternative ending to how I might have lost my virginity.I was 20 years old, and still a virgin. My will to get laid was insatiable, but somehow things just weren't materializing. I had never been much of a ladies man, and picking up chicks at the bar just wasn't my strong suit. So I headed online to see what I could find. I signed up for xhamster and then threw some pics up on craigslist once I got a little more brave. After a few trolls/emails that never...
My alternate ending. On my way to the hospital, I began to reconsider my parting words to Hildy. Did I really want to save my marriage? The utter contempt and disrespect she'd displayed during her "act of revenge" was certainly not that of a loving spouse - not even one who felt wronged by my actions, regardless of my guilt or innocence. Then there were my injuries to consider. Did I really want to forgive someone who almost crippled me permanently, not to mention almost killing me by...
I read and listen to the words that are written in the reviews that are left after my stories, they are what gives me the incentive to write on. All of you who eave reviews I feel close to and regard you as my friends, but when those reviews diminish and become more critical, then it is time to change, or to stop. In many ways I had wanted to bring the cake story to a conclusion a while ago, but I was persuaded to resurrect it. Recently I wanted to find the best ending and at that time...
Bullies Extended Ending When I originally wrote the story I ended at the last chapter including the epilogue. I left the gender of the protagonist intentionally blank. I didn't have any greater truths for anyone. In general, after years of these tg sex stories (even those without sex) I didn't see a need for a happy ending nor justice. If you want happy endings and justice go to the real movies where the hero always wins and the villain gets it in the end. But after reading the...