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Panther Girl of Gor: an alternative ending by 'Archer' Cordellian: So, I've always felt that the most flattering thing a writer can possibly hope for with her work is to find that some of her readers are inspired enough by the stories to try their own hand at adding to the existing body of work, either through art (my wonderful collaborator, ChloeK) or, as in this case, Archer's fan-fic writing. I'm obviously someone who is very much in favour of fan-fic. One of the very first Transgender serials I wrote was a Buffy fan fic set after series 7 that imagined what a young T-girl might be like as a Slayer, trying to balance out the confusing world of cross dressing with killing monsters in her spare time, so fan fiction writing has always been a big inspiration to me, and I therefore give a warm thumbs up to anyone wishing to have a go based on anything I've ever written. I mean, I should be so lucky that people care that much after all. So yes, go for it if you're so inspired. After all, without fan fiction we wouldn't have had Olga's story originally - a story which to my mind surpassed many of the genuine Gor novels themselves and acted as inspiration for my own fan fiction of fan fiction. Anyway, Archer posted on the review section of the final chapter of the Emma trilogy that he had written his own alternative ending to the series and asked whether I'd be willing to post it to save him the trouble of registering an account with Fictionmania and going through the upload process himself. Quite happy to do so. This then is Archer's own version of the second half of chapter 14 of Panther Girl of Gor, kicking off when Emma tries to inject Rachel with the tranquilliser and (in Archer's version) fails to do so. It then goes off on a very different trajectory to my tale, which I won't spoil by talking about it now. All I will say is it gets a bit dark, so be warned. If you;'re of a squeamish nature, you might find some of the character actions a bit unsettling. Especially if you like Brinn. Yeah, especially if you like Brinn... Oh, and before anyone says, 'hey, you promised to finish Ayesha before posting any more Gor stories!' I was of course talking about my own Gor stories, and didn't know one of my readers would then ask me to upload something on their behalf... Rest assured 'Ayesha' will complete before book 4 'Shadows of Gor' comes out. :) - Emma x Archer: In multiple reviews/comments I mentioned speculating on the storyline, developing from guesses how it could end, and how Rachel could get her revenge on Brinn. I started with plotting after they escaped from Kurgus, with Brinn badly insulting his saviour, and really needing taking down a few notches. Then I kept on revising this along the way when new chapters appeared and delivered more story twists, in particular after finding the escape capsule, then after Emma getting her first revenge on Seremides, then the beatings of her and Rachel, and finally the events in and with the Golden Klaw. I then completed this final revision after all 14 chapters were out, retaining elements of most revisions before. But I waited until the Appendix was out to make any final corrections. I hope I have not taken the characters too far out of character, because I respect well written ones, even if some are eminently dislikable! Writing down the plot started between Christmas and New Year 2016, adding many details in January 2017, with some revisions in February. At the end of February I added an analysis of Brinn's developing psychological state, and sketches of an possible follow up story depending on his decision. Revising plot and add ons continued until early in April, with small textual touches since. I originally intended posting this as review/comment, first to the last chapter, then to the Appendixes. To reduce space it is not written out fully, somewhat sketchy, mainly important dialogue. But it developed over time, and has now grown to 11 pages here, near the size of an small chapter, and over half the size of the official chapter 14! I expect this is is too long for a FictionMania review/comment. Perhaps it will better be published as an separate "guest contribution" story, similar to the "DVD Extras" chapters, with its own review/comment thread, where I can also publish the analysis and sketch, each 2.5 pages here. This starts/forks in the middle of the last chapter 14, after beating Elizabeth Bentley, and all three girls arrive on top of Skaffel Peak. Panther Girl of Gor - an ending "I know," said Rachel as she took Emma's hands and gazed into her eyes. "I feel the same way. Whatever happens to me after this, I will be happy knowing I've sent you home. You've given me purpose, Emma. I have done some dark things, some bad things in the forty years I worked for Kurgus..." Emma moved forward, hugged Rachel, then slipped the protective cap from the one-shot hypodermic, and tried to inject her. But 40 years of being an agent on Gor had left its impact. She must have somehow noticed Emma's movement being off, or how she had hid the hypodermic in her fist, or hesitation from doubts in her intention, and, fresh from using this trick on Brinn herself, she pushed Emma's arm away, just enough to prevent the stab, then being stronger grabbed her hand and knocked the hypodermic from her fist. If fell to the floor, and she trod on it. "Emma... no, this is not what we climbed up here for. I will send you home before it is too late. You need to get away from Gor, before you as natural slave, defenceless in the hands of Brinn, eventually break inside from his abuse, with the remains of your person suffering decades or even centuries of pain, buried alive in your own body." "Rachel... no, you must leave Gor. You are no slave, you will be destroyed by Brinn. I can not leave, knowing you will stay here and die, I would suffer too much from knowing that." "No, I will not die. I know how I can get away, so long as Simon has not failed me, and left the binding fibres on Brinn, as I told him to do. I just hope he dislikes the barbarian enough that he does not get turned around. If he failed me, I can only hope Brinn sells me, if he does not kill me." "But what after, Rachel? How will you conceal the kef brand on your left thigh, how will you handle the problems associated with pierced ears? All other Gorean men will treat you the same as he does." "Emma, I may be marked as slave, but I am not going to live as an slave. Do you really think I survived 40 years on Gor, working as an agent, knowingly risking capture and enslavement each time, seeing it happen to countless others, without lots of thinking on this subject, developing and revising contingency plans, placing resources, arranging allies? I will get out of this, as soon as I am away from that monster. So really, you Emma need the safety of Earth. Take the ring of red metal and use it, NOW!" With this revelation Emma's resistance crumbled, and after such a strong command her submissive nature took over. She used the ring to summon the silver ship; the silver beam lifting her through an aperture in its side. A short flight later she disembarked... and stood there astonished. This was not expected! The men in Gorean clothing did not fit. As one walked up to her, she asked him, "Where am I? Why am I not on Earth?" "This is the Sardar, the Nest of the Priest-Kings. There have been irregularities. A ring given to a male warrior, used by a female slave. It got activated less than one pasang and one ahn from a large scale incident. The slave fits personal data near a Flame Death triggering a few days ago, at an unexpected location. We have questions." Emma's heart dropped, as she realised the ring may be only valid for its issued user. She was led into a room and interviewed for about an ahn. It became clear that her story was far larger than expected. So she was lead to a sleeping chamber with a table, obviously not intended for captive slaves but visiting free women. She was issued with writing utensils, and ordered to record her entire story in writing. Of course slave cages did not have tables for writing. Food would be delivered, and the door was locked from outside. Of course, that fits with use as a temporary slave cage. Thus she spent many days writing, actually weeks, under the three moons of Gor. Later in evenings she recalled sex with Brinn in Kurgus's camp, as he satisfied her need after days of missing him, over time getting far worse into need, knowing sex can not happen tonight, nor in the foreseeable future, despite relief with her own fingers. During the days she thought of Rachel, how she missed her so very much, not expecting to ever see her again, while actually still on Gor, the same as Rachel, just separated by... what exactly? Surely Rachel and Erin and Brinn and Simon would be picked up by the warriors of the Sardar. So they may well be in this same Nest, just both not knowing where the other was. After she finished her report she handed the vast sheaf of papers to the daily visiting agent and was told to wait there, until it had been read. Not that she had any other choice, locked in the room. Her fingers had other work, not writing any more. Her thoughts also had a lot of work, whether she would be continuing her interrupted flight, or would have to stay on Gor, no doubt in abject slavery, and that now alone, and even owned by the Priest-Kings. How would they sexually use her, for serving guests? After some further days she was again led to a larger room for interviewing. Apart from the fetching agent, who disappeared soon, there was one man and one large insectoid being in there, which she from descriptions recognised as a Priest-King. Despite its size she did not consider it scary, after having seen Kurii, but rather as creepy. It explained her report had been accepted, as it matched in most factual details with four others he had, only deviating where she was not present, or on personal opinions. She was told to wait until others arrived. She noted that other reports implied others present at the events, and the number four fit her final companions. Hope grew that she might see them again after waiting. After a while Rachel and Erin were brought into the room, now also clothed in slave tunics. "Rachel!" Emma cried, wanting to jump up and embrace her, but slave bracelets prevented this. "Pumpkin!" Erin called, but suffered the same problem of hindered embracing. Rachel solved this by embracing both of them, no steel hindering her, which Emma recognised as strange. They were again standing straight when Brinn and Simon entered, both unchained, but Simon's wrists were bound. Emma nearly tried to embrace Brinn, when she was hit by the realisation that he might now regard her as a willing fugitive, having left him, unless Rachel had bothered to explain. She then noted that Brinn's hands were in bandages. Something had happened here. She also noticed he looked somewhat broken instead of his overconfident self. The Priest-King addressed the entire group: "I am Misk, eldest of the Nest." He continued: "I have read your reports and compared them, the similarities are convincing as truthful. This has proven itself a matter of uttermost importance to the Nest, and thus I will personally be handling it." "It is obvious that Kurii agents nearly succeeded in destroying the Nest. You saved us all from that. For this we thank you. It is also obvious all five of you were crucial: Erin for shooting down Tarn Strike. Emma for creating the plan and piloting the drop ship. Simon for instructing both and co-piloting. Rachel for gaining entry to the ship and Simon's trust. Brinn for stopping Kurgus, so getting all to the ship. Also Rachel and Emma for twice saving Brinn, so he could do this. And Brinn for finding Emma, getting the co-ordinates, and bringing three of you to the northern forrest. For this all five of you deserve highest honour in your names and richest rewards." "Four of you were agents of the Kurii, and are from Earth. But all your reports suggest that you were either tricked or forced into serving. More important, when faced with helping or preventing their destructive plans, your actions show you chose saving us and Gor. For this, whatever you have committed as agents in the past will be forgiven, you shall not be captive any more." He motioned to the fetching agent to untie Simon and unchain Emma and Erin. "Three of you were made slaves. As such you possess no names which could be honoured, nor can you possess riches. But we regard it totally unacceptable to not reward you for this, just because men have enslaved you, without any fault of yours. As we have a blood debt towards you, which demands a life for a life, we will be giving you back your lives which were taken by enslavement. This will be done by us taking over ownership and freeing all of you, as part of your reward. Your master Brinn shall be generously compensated for his losses of property." All three girls reacted, in astonishment and joy, particularly Rachel. Brinn internally reacted even more, but in consternation, as this was far more than property at stake. But he knew that Priest-Kings do not understand human emotions well. Simon was amused, noticing the barbarian had just lost the right to abuse his fellow Earth women. Misk continued: "As for the rewards, I will start with Simon as easiest. You can stay on Gor, if you want. But there is no technical work here, except in the Nest as our agent. On Earth you have officially left for a job at a research station somewhere and can so return without questions, if you prefer. Honour to your name can only be given on Gor, as Gor is secret on Earth, but riches as reward can be given on Earth, as we have agents and funds there." "You three women are more complex cases. Work as agents exists here, but perhaps you do not want to be such. And your brands and pierced ears will get in the way, unless taking on assignments which need slave girls as participants. But your return to Earth is way more problematic. All three disappeared traceless and were surely reported as missing persons. Erin has a past as a double agent of Mossad and the US Embassy. Both may now know this after investigating her, so she may face trial. Rachel has been gone over 40 years and was surely long ago declared legally dead. Emma of course did not even exist, with Earth only missing Eric. Also all of you have taken stabilisation serum and will not age as expected. Thus return will risk exposure, even more so if multiples of you do so." "We offer an alternative here on Gor. The Sardar have retirement facilities for women agents who fell into enemy or bandit hands, got slave marked, were then rescued or else wise managed to return, but are hence unrecoverable. These run under special law, which declares that only a collar equals a slave and uncollared counts as free, irrespective of any inflicted brands or pierced ears, or whether free or slave clothing being worn, or even choice of free or slavish behaviour being displayed, which are all legally treated as meaningless. They offer such marked women all amenities of a large city villa or large remote estate." "But some get bored there, having been used to an adventurous agent life outside. They may wander the city or travel the lands, wearing concealment robes like free women, carrying money from their allowance. It is not so difficult to hide their marks, as outside they will only be treated as slaves if stripped and so exposed, while inside where such being seen is near certain they are accepted as free." "If captured they can be returned, after being sold and bought calling themselves stolen, getting their new masters to sell them for more than spent, to then buy a better slave or similar one with money spare. This money comes from 'agents of their old master who has interest in regaining their special training and knowledge', which are Priest-King agents to whom they present a recognition code. They can also receive a ring of red metal which returns them to the Sardar, at less suffering for them and less cost for us, but only if it is not lost and they can get to a remote hill. They can also receive an honour collar, themselves holding its key, to wear when leaving and self remove when back, or keep wearing it and still be accepted as free, by the writing on it:" THIS IS HONOURED SLAVE LADY (name) OF (homestone) OF THE (caste) PROPERTY OF THE PRIEST-KINGS IN THE SARDAR, NO USING HER WITHOUT PERMISSION, MAY SPEAK ANYTIME, CHOOSE CLOTHES, OWN PROPERTY, USE MONEY AND WEAPONS, TRAVEL "Name is what they were called when free. Homestone and caste from when they were free are not theirs, and LADY if included when appropriate for their caste is not a title, as slaves have neither. Rather these are all part of long slave names given to them by us, honouring who they once were. Permission to use is what they themselves give. Even we Priest- Kings, as nominal owners while they wear it, do not use them, unless they willingly serve as our agents." "So they remain stripped of rights, but regain most free woman abilities, while retaining the slave possibilities some now need. They may wear concealment robes and appear to be free and get treated as such, unless exposed. Whence our collar protects from re-enslavement or even punishment, unlike uncollared freed slaves, which are just free for all to take, so only a fool frees a slave. Or they may wear slave garments and present as Sardar state slaves, with our collar protecting them from abuse and limits." Rachel was impressed. That would be even better than one of her plans, wearing a concealed collar with 'THIS IS RACHEL, PROPERTY OF LADY JACINTA OF BRUNDISIUM' on it, so giving herself a pretend Mistress. Then hooking tags onto its chain loop saying 'RACHEL MAY WEAR CONCEALMENT ROBES AND USE MONEY', plus 'RACHEL MAY VISIT MARKET GARDENS, BATHS AND LIBRARIES' or 'RACHEL IS ON ERRAND TO (where she is travelling to)'. Erin was also impressed. That would be a total perversion of the normal purpose of a collar, from binding a slave to her master named on it to prevent fleeing, to keeping a slave free of masters by name of the Priest-Kings on it. Thus making them safer than even most free women could be, and vastly more than freed slaves could ever hope for. The double agent in her rejoiced at this. "Then remains Brinn, who was sent on this mission by us. You succeeded. You shall receive as reward a large estate, in addition to the normal payment for your services. But we have serious issues here. You were selected for such a suspected (and now proven) to be vital mission on base of highest rank, but have not performed anywhere near to standards for this. You delivered only what we expect from mid level rank." Brinn reacted with surprise: "What was not good?" "First, your strategic planning. After getting the co-ordinates, you planned gaining a tarn in Elysium, but also using a slow traveling ground force, while flying to Lydius, and taking ship up the Laurius and waiting for them, with intent on walking the forest. This instead of gaining only the tarn and flying the shorter distance to the Sardar, here picking up airborne warriors." "Then after failing rendezvous with this ground force you attempted a near suicidal single man run, into a forrest containing multiple enemy units and obstructing panther girls, instead of a fallback plan of traveling to the Sardar. You even walked straight into a visible panther ambush, not even trying to retreat and sneak out in the night. All this despite knowing the very survival of the Nest and Gor rested on your success. This is not top rank agent work. Your are herewith demoted to middle rank." Brinn was visibly shattered. He then replied: "But I needed to go to Lydius, there was no time to detour to the Sardar and raise additional forces." "Why? Equipment and provisions? Available in the Nest. Nearer to the exchange point? Tarn flight from the Nest is shorter than days on ship, in addition to flight to the Sardar being shorter. Handing over Melinda for exchange with Coraline? Faster here, as she was sent here anyway. Interrogating Jacinta/Rachel? Possible here, and way better methods of testing her truth and side exist. Just what exactly was the advantage of going to Lydius instead of here?" Brinn had no defence to put up, he slumped defeated. He would of course never admit in words that he had simply erred and failed at basic travel logistics, just because he was under stress, which anyone of his rank should not do. "Second, your handling of the Jacinta/Rachel case. You failed to decide by using logical deduction. Which is acceptable. But that should have given a verdict of 'not determinable, may be theirs, do not trust her, may be ours, do not harm her'. Then sending her to us along with Melinda, for us to decide what she is, and if she is not ours interrogate her like Kurgus did Coraline, as you recognised her to be more valuable than either of them. You had no operational reason to continue dragging her along, as you answered her offer of help on the ship with 'in the furs and carrying my belongings'." "Instead you switched to torture, which may work on lesser more emotional enemies, but not on someone logical like Rachel. This only could test her estimate on whether suffering further torture will lead to a better chance of saving herself. That was even pointed out by Emma, but you brushed it aside." "It was not important, she had admitted guilt." "That may have been false admission." "I am skilled in the art of interrogation, I simply broke her and got the truth." "You can not get truth by breaking someone who may already be telling the truth, you then only get them to switch to telling whichever lie they hope will stop the pain fastest. A skilled interrogator checks for this, by asking for an obviously false answer." "This failure throws up the question what you wanted to hear. Were you really trying to determine her side? Or were you just trying to get her as your pleasure slave, only doing that interrogation to satisfy your consciousness, as in Elysium you showed desire of 'I really hope it turns out that you do not serve Priest Kings'? Or was it just revenge, as in Elysium you stated 'There will be a reckoning' and in Lydius also 'serving the very men you sought to destroy'? Or was it both? Or were you just simply incompetent?" Brinn was shocked at these accusations: "You do not believe the Kur bitch's lies?!" Misk called up the other until now silent man. He named himself, and Brinn recognised him as the superior of Marik, who then spoke: "Marik was long ago captured by a Kurii agent, a woman calling herself Jacinta of Brundisium. While she questioned him, he ferreted information out of her, that she did not believe in their cause, was only tricked and forced into serving, hates Kurgus for this, and would work against them for revenge, and was willing to release him for a chance at this." "So he turned her, with years in operation, party to lots of internal information, an excellent catch. She became our double agent, deeply embedded, continuing exactly the same work for Kurgus as if she had never captured him, even when it cost us agents, who may have been lost anyway. She was just to report internal details, allowing us to understand and predict better, which she did excellently." Brinn did not want to believe it, shut it out: "This can not be, she contradicted herself, and she lied repeatedly! She claimed she was not supposed to name her Handler, but Marik would not forbid her telling me that." Rachel answered this time: "I knew from Kurgus that he had killed Marik, I had to expect you to know that, so naming him my handler would have triggered exactly your 'Did you order his death?' reaction, just earlier. So I kept that secret to delay you harming me, for more chances." "But if knowing that, you could have named his superior." "I could not, as I did not know him, until meeting him the first time here in the Nest, a few days ago, after my report identified me. Such important names are not strewn widely!" Brinn argued further: "But then there is your reaction to losing the chip. That was genuine fear that Kurgus would not be able to follow and rescue you." Rachel countered: "Of course it was! I considered myself safer with Kurgus, with no reason to assume he suspected me, than as captive with you, clearly bent on dominance and desire and revenge. Also I could then have continued my assigned mission of spying on him. Damn Kurgus for telling the chip story, that was even worse than you Brinn leaking that I knew a Priest-King recognition code. Typical, you men fail at secrets because of bragging at each other, and I end up branded as slave for the rest of my life!" Brinn noted further: "There you have a contradiction, when Kurgus heard that, he said 'did she now' and that he will torture you, followed by your 'please kill me quickly'." She smiled and noted: "Kurgus knew that I knew the code, as he had given it to me. He was play acting not knowing, not leaking he had killed Marik, so I played along with him. Also I tried to get you to leave me there for 'torture' instead of taking me with you. It did not work out, because Marcellus wanted you to see that Kurgus does not get his agents back, but it was worth trying. Playing such tricks is part of my job." Brinn continued: "In Lydius you did not sound a very committed Priest King operative, just playing both sides against one another." "I do not pretend to be committed. Both sides repeatedly promised me return to Earth, and did not keep it. That did not exactly make me loyal to either. So I care only for me, because on this miserable excuse for a planet I am the only who does so. But Kurgus aided in bringing me here. And while Kurii killing all Gorean men would be very desirable, also killing all women including myself is obviously not. The Priest-Kings are the only shield to stop me ending up as Kur food, so I work for them, even if grudgingly. You moron failed even to accept such a simple motivation!" Emma compared this attitude with Elizabeth Bentley's kill them all, inclusive of women, and was pleased with Rachel. Brinn still would not believe, so she added, looking at Marik's superior: "Anyway, you can confirm my side." "Yes, I saw decades of reports of yours, proving your switch of sides beyond doubt." Rachel added: "Including one warning that Kurgus knew of the atomic weapons and how to find them and was now intent on raising. Which I suspect triggered Brinn's mission." "Yes." Turning to Brinn, Rachel continued, "So much for 'men I sought to destroy' when I really sought to save the Priest-Kings and also saved men." He fell silent after this, his resistance finally broken by authority, and their implication that he had really destroyed an own agent, and so harmed the Priest-Kings! He would of course even less admit in words, or even just to himself, that he had wronged that despised haughty woman. Misk then took up: "On to you Rachel, your treatment of Brinn." "It was straight revenge, I admit, on an own agent, I admit also. But he destroyed me as a Lady, took all I had, so I destroyed him as a warrior, taking all he had. I had intended to remove one hand, so he may not hold a sword plus shield or use a bow, but could still use the other hand. Possibly remove left hand together with notching an ear, so marking him as second offence thief, for stealing my freedom and hope. Though I put back my personal griefs for saving everyone, waiting until Tarn Strike was defeated, as he may be needed, no matter what slave abuse I would have to suffer from him." "But after risking my life betraying Kurgus, just to save his, instead of cutting his throat as ordered, and safely running off the next day, with then getting severely whipped as 'thank you', I hated him! So I wanted that he may not hold a whip again, and it became both hands, explicit as 10 fingers for 20 whippings. 5 for 10 so he may not carry a weapon or whip in that hand any more, 1 for 2 because I don't believe his claim that he took no pleasure from whipping us as he did it voluntary, 2 for 4 for failing to call me Lady and treat me as such, 2 for 4 for denying me wearing clothes I needed for leading the panthers." Emma peeked to Brinn's bandages, and was dismayed: "Rachel! You did not really do that!" "What did I tell you on Skaffel Peak? I have done some dark things. I will do so again. When we were picked up by the warriors of the Sardar he named himself their agent. I also named myself such. He claimed me to be Kurii. I protested to be a double agent of yours, pretending to be theirs. When they pointed to him warrior and me slave girl, I noted I may have been collared and branded, but I am still an agent of Priest- Kings. After waiting for their confusion to show, I noted this makes it claim against claim, they can not know who is wrong, so should not trust either of us, nor abuse either of us. As we were going to be taken to the Sardar, I suggested both should be as their captives, then handed to the Priest-Kings to decide who we are. They accepted this." "I also pointed out that he is currently my captive. When I am confirmed as genuine I wanted to receive him back, not losing him just because you could not trust me. So I asked he shall not be released before me. They gave their word to this." She then added looking at Misk: "Do I get him?" "You shall." He motioned the fetching agent to tie Brinn with what he had untied from Simon. Broken Brinn did not even protest. As warrior he knew he had lost this battle. Later Rachel decided that after 40 years on Gor she will not fit on Earth, and may have no family left to return to anyway, so this has become her world, for good or bad. Which is why she wanted to save Emma from it, before it became too late for her. Emma simply wanted to be with her friend, not miss her as she already suffered within days, now regretting trying to send her off. So she got to only see one family member, her father. She kept his now dead ring of red metal as reminder of her lost ones on Earth. Erin wanted to avoid expected persecution. So all three accepted retirement for marked women on Gor, with an honour collar. The fetching agent was sent to summon a locksmith to remove their existing ones. They left it open if they would be agents. Rachel thinks it quite likely, for further revenge on Kurgus and the Kurii, including on various agents who treated her like Seremides did Emma while traveling, starting with listing all names and places she can remember, perhaps then travelling to take part in their identification and capture. Emma thinks unlikely, preferring to live at home in peace and sex, permanently wearing her collar, belonging in a collar as part of her natural slavishness. Erin thinks she had liked the northern forrest, which seemed like her sort of place, lots of sexually frustrated women dressed in skimpy animal skins. But her experience with Sabina was not encouraging, and the retirement facilities also sound like her sort of place, lots of slave needy woman dressed in revealing silky attire, like at Banu Hashim just without the abuse. Only Simon accepts a return to Earth, to escape the dangers of Gor. Emma asks him to carry a letter from her to her mother and siblings, to ease their anxiety about her disappearance. She noted in it, that she has found the love of her life, they can not both go to Earth, will not split, so she can not leave Gor. She translated part of her report on capture and transformation, including what Udumi did. Also included a sketch of her personal life here, including meeting her father and his death (not yet knowing that he survived). So her mother will know she lost her first son, now second daughter, to Gor, same as her husband. And her cross-dress tricking older sister will know she is now a full woman (not knowing that her sister is possibly a slave on Gor for many months, having been sold by now, also taken by Udumi). Erin also writes a letter to her family. But Rachel expects no one left, so does not bother. Misk insists these shall be read once and then self destruct letters, to avoid exposure. Simon shall warn the readers of this, to avoid harmful fires. Emma adds he shall tell her mother to only open when her siblings are also there to read it (not knowing this will only be her younger brother, who as a Royal Marine will then take action against Udumi and Kurgus's agents, with an attractive Military Intelligence agent posing as model, ending in them being captured and court marshalled as foreign invaders). Brinn only got offered Gor, with honour and reward, no Earth choice. Not that he would want anything else, with his disdain of Earth, only liking its women as slave girls. The loss of his three was annoying, unthinkably so with Emma, but it was not to be avoided under these circumstances. He knows Emma will of course stay with him, being his. But he wants her as slave, not as free woman. So he will get her to publicly declare herself slave, as he knows she needs it, belongs in a collar, wants a collar, his collar, forever. But next day he is still captive. Rachel addressed him: "Apart from enslavement and whipping, for which I took your fingers, there remains quite a bit more. There was the collar I was locked in. I do not intend to buy one for you, but instead will shear you the degradation stripe of a man beaten by a woman." She took her knife to his hair. "Also there was the pain and lasting scarring of being branded. This you will also get, and as a man beaten by a woman it will be the cursive kef brand of female slaves." She took him to be branded. Back from this she removed her new concealment robes, to continue without blooding them: "Then there was one week of painful slave training, including sexual arousal but denial just before orgasm, then enjoying yourself with Emma to spite me, and after all threatening me into accepting being used sexually for your pleasure. That is worth castration, to deny you any more such sex." She took her knife to his genitals. "Then there was also the entire interrogation, and whipping, not listening to me." She cut off his ears he did not use. "And also using me as servant slave in Elysium, before even 'proven' as an enemy, from lusting for me." She stabbed out his eyes he used greedily. Rachel noted to herself intellectually that this was more than Brinn deserved. But emotionally the pent up anger from 40 years of threats and fear and abuse by Gorean men wanted out. Now it had found an outlet, in a form of hate towards the man who had hurt her the worst of all, so spewed forth uncontrollable. Brinn stayed silent, as a warrior accepts his fate, does not complain before an enemy, and certainly he will not beg from her. But Emma's dismay grew while watching this, she voiced it. Rachel replied: "It is called capture law, any captor can do anything at anytime to any captive, no limit, no recourse before, no compensation after, not even just pity by others. This is not even from lawlessness, but with full support of law, Gorean injustice at its worst. It allowed Brinn to brand me, into lifelong slave misery, but also allows me to mutilate him, into lifelong cripple misery." As Emma was clearly not fully convinced, she continued: "He failed to learn 'do onto others what you want them to do onto you', which is the only thing that can give respect and safety to defenceless captures. I can now 'do onto him', and will teach him this lesson, with equivalent damage. Many men visiting the soon famous honoured Brinn on his new estate will see the result, some may learn from it. Also women seeing him will learn, that if abused they may do the same, creating more such examples. This will make future captives safer, and so may spare some women my loss." Later Rachel filled Emma in on what happened after separating. Brinn asked where she was, and got told about the ring, retrieved from Nessa and given to Emma, who used it, and was now presumably on her way to Earth, safe from Gorean men. He was perplexed and asked why she would leave him, as he can not live without her, and got the answer, because of him abusing her. He still did not comprehend, so got told he failed to see all women are humans, all feel desire/joy/hope/love, all also suffering/pain/sorrow/resentment/hate, both free and slave. Emma saved his life, and for this blood debt should have received reward. There may be legal law right to instead punish slaves, but it is natural law wrong to mis-punish humans. If he wanted to keep her he should have treated her better. They waited many days for Brinn's wounds to heal enough for release. In this time he digested and realised how his future would be. This also included repeatedly hearing the three girls enjoy each other in the furs, including threesomes of Rachel and Erin both playing with Emma, enjoying all the slut girl sex, but without suffering the treatment as slave girls which usually comes with it on Gor. He did not see Rachel compensating for 40 years of forced abstinence with sluttish dancing in slave silks, untrained but enthusiastic, but did hear the others comments and suggestions to her. Nor did he see her going to sleep wearing the silks, but did hear the moans from playing with her sex. After this wait Rachel addressed him: "It is time to let you go. Enjoy the left overs of your life." After a break she added: "But there is an alternative I offer you: The machine used on Emma. This will dissolve and rebuild your body, with new eyes and ears and fingers and full hair and without brand, but will do so as woman, your new genitals female. Though that will undo my revenge, so I will have you branded again and ears pierced, for identical damage. No mutilations, as you will suffer enough, learning at the hands of Gorean men how wrong they are. Visitors may also learn from this. But will further see there is no safe hard barrier between male and female any more, they may also become slave girls one day. Which will improve treatment by some, and so may reduce my own suffering." After letting this sink in for a while: "I give you one day plus night to decide. While this I go and enjoy the left overs of my life, relaxing and drinking in the special law women's baths and gardens of the Sardar, together with Emma and Erin. You could join us there in the future, as Brina. Or could even place your estate under special law, offering marked women more space with acceptance as free." Emma noticed there would be a third option, not mentioned by Rachel, dissolve and rebuild as man. She then noticed the plan to exploit Brinn's rigid mentality as a trap, by reminding him of the machine but stalling him from noticing this. She was awed, which delayed pointing it out to him, until after noticing Brina would most likely be lesbian, which delayed her even more. That also reminded her of the last sex with Rachel, it was soft, it was gentle, and it was wonderful. Then she remembered the whipping before, it was pain, it was unjust, and it was awful. Love for Brinn was severely wounded there, and later mortally so, when his regret was for letting Tallia take Kurgus, while calling the whipping 'for her own good', and then using her with complete disregard of she being hurt by this. Her heart hardened remembering it, so she said nothing and left with Rachel and Erin. That night Brinn heard her have wonderful sex with Rachel, who next morning asked him: "Take the offer of the machine or get release as a cripple?" Emma by seeing Brinn's injuries was reminded of Seremides, who she heard had been rounded up. From the same 'do not like to see anyone suffer' logic that made her give him morphine, she decided to offer something similar: Dissolve and rebuild, with both eyes and without burned back and shoulders and half face. He just had to again call her Mistress, this time while she was without collar and in concealment robes, and him captive, which he accepted and did. But this rebuild was also as a woman, who she then had branded and pierced, all which she though omitted to tell him beforehand. For him cutting down Sakkara to Kara, she named this slave as Mide. She did not want to keep the girl near, any more than the man before, so wanted her sold far away. This reminded her of the Tahari and Rashid, which suggested she might sell Mide to him as an untrained but still white silk, or even first train her at Banu Hashim in an iron belt. But she decided that would be too much, did not want torture, the way Tallia and now proven Rachel could do. Random Gorean men will inflict enough suffering, whoever buys her in Patashqar, or better at some oasis for her to get lost in the sands. Thinking of Rashid reminded her, that while Seremides had betrayed and enslaved and raped her into red silk, Rashid had branded her, raped and abused her for two months, also let his brothers use her, and his sisters abuse her, near driving her to suicide, if not for Kara, and then sold her to an random stranger. She may then have considered Seremides the incarnation of evil, but with time and distance, with having once beaten him, and now being safe and in comfort, her views widened to see other men she had suffered as just as bad, some even worse. So she used part of her reward from the Sardar to have their agents track down and capture the desert brigand, after selling Mide. She got no usable information on where Kara had gone, as he long ago just sold a slave he did not care about to some random slaver house. But Emma did enslave him, for suffering a lesson on why this is wrong. For this she had him rebuilt as plain robust woman, then named unrecognisably as Louise, the first slave name she had heard on Gor. Then sold for one copper tarsk bit to his own sisters as a farm girl, but as one who has an severe case of male illusion, claims to have been a man. So she could also stop him from further raiding and enslaving women, as done to Mehra, sparing some her loss.