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I would like to thank those that have read my stories ancommented on them. This is a complete rewrite of the second chapter of my story “The Barfly” originally posted in the forum. I would like to ask those of you that honor me with negative votes in groups to leave some comments so that I may learn what readers dislike in my stories. I would also like to ask those of you that like my stories to throw a wote my way to keep them in an accessible position. Enjoy J. Bailey The...
Introduction: Charlie and Natasha meet Karen Prologue I would like to thank those that have read my stories ancommented on them. This is a complete rewrite of the second chapter of my story The Barfly originally posted in the forum. I would like to ask those of you that honor me with negative votes in groups to leave some comments so that I may learn what readers dislike in my stories. I would also like to ask those of you that like my stories to throw a wote my way to keep them in an...
Author’s comments: This is a rewrite of the first story I published on the xnxx.com forum while the main story site was in-operational. All comments are welcome but if any of the categories named don’t fit your taste then please don’t read it. If you read it anyway then don’t criticize me for writing about the things you dislike. Since English is neither my first nor second language all spelling and grammar corrections are more than gratefully accepted. Some years ago I read the...
Lucy opened the paperback a little wider and tilted it towards the light, but she read only one paragraph before dropping the book into her lap. Sighing, she rubbed her eyes."I shouldn't be reading," she muttered. "I have to work."Placing the book on her desk, she looked at the laptop in front of her; lid open, screensaver patterns zig-zagging across its face. She jiggled her finger on the tracker pad, watching the screen wake up, revealing neat rows of words. Positioning her hands over the...
Love StoriesMichael finished his shower as the rest of the troupe got back to their sunbathing outside. As he stepped out of the bath, a familiar figure stood before him. "It hasn't been a hundred years!" he exclaimed. "Shut up and sit down," she said. "I'm here out of courtesy; to see how you're doing." "Fine," he said. "Yeah! I see that," she said plopping herself down on his bed. "How much fucking did you do today?" "You saw all that?" he said throwing himself onto the bed to...
Authors note (PLEASE READ): this is one of the first stories I have ever written so please excuse me if my grammar is not up to par with most authors. I will continue to work on it throughout the series. I am rewriting this chapter to hopefully fix some errors I have created in the original its heavily rewritten introducing new characters and it will be longer with more details and changed scenes but all still lead to the same as chapter 3. please leave messages in my comments or even pm my...
She came to bed with him that night, instead of sleeping on his couch. Just as natural as could be, she came and crawled in with him. “Tina,” he said. “You ever sleep with a guy? Sleep sleep, not sex sleep?” “I haven’t done either, really.” she said. “You are really still a virgin? For real?” he said. She nodded. “Yeah. A dick’s been close, but never in.” she said. His turn to nod. This might be fun. He’d never deflowered a virgin. He knew he’d receive some extra karma from it, even if no...
Moms Joins the 10+ Club rewrite This story is about domination/submission, it include cheating wives and them humiliating their husbands this story is not for everyone so please if this is not your thing dont waste time writing about how terrible my characters are. Pam was an average housewife, 41 years old dirty blond shoulder length hair. She had 42D breasts with large nipples which were super sensitive. Her ass was still tight even if she had put on 15 extra pounds. She still could turn...
When I woke up very suddenly this morning… with the distinct feeling that I forgot a wonderful dream. The room was lighting up at intervals from lights that were moving around just outside my apartment. The lights were too low to be lightning and it must have been coming from cars driving past in the road. When I got up and went to the window, there wasn't much to see. It was still early, only a few minutes before four a.m., and it was still completely dark outside. Extremely thirsty I...
I always told myself Chad today you are going to meet that perfect girl and she going to love you for the rest of you're life. You see I am already 22 living in the great city of Philadelphia by myself. Like most kids my age I don't really know what I am going to do once I finish college. For now I spend my days with my two best friends in the world. Other times im at work or on my laptop chatting to random people online. Yeah I really have no life if I'm not with my friends. To be honest...
((Author’s Note: Now I know what you might be thinking, “hey, haven’t you written this already?” If you aren’t thinking that because you never saw the previous version or don’t care, skip this author’s note and get right to the meat; otherwise, let me explain. I started Blood of Kings quite a long time ago and I’ve learned a lot since then. While the promised Twine project didn’t really go anywhere it helped me understand what I truly wanted from this story. I made more than a few key mistakes...
FantasyIntroduction: Im a young virgin (boy) and naturally am curious about the female body. I have a sister to help with that… (I thank you for your constructive feedback on the original version of this story. I thought that, as seen as you loved the story but I had not written it very well, I would rewrite it based off the other and work on your feedback) I stand in the hallway staring at the into my sisters room. My heart pounds in my chest as I work up the courage to reach out and grab the...
Be-cumming a School Girl - RewriteFrom the time I was 5 or 6 I would sneak into the lodger’s bedroom after she had left for work. I would dress up in her lingerie and climb into her warm bed. It just felt so good wearing silky clothes which felt so delicate against my skin. I just loved to feel feminine. If anyone looked in I would pull the covers up to my neck to hide what I was wearing. A few years later I would be wearing my elder sister’s panties and occasionally my mother’s when she was...
Ruler of this world ? " I asked, fighting the urge to slap myself awake. "Yes! We have reviewed your case and you have been chosen to become the ruler of this world" answered the man claiming to be the devil The scarlet eyed man looked delighted to witness my disbelief and was probably eager to know what my next question would be since he kept shaping, mashing, rolling and squeezing the anti-stress ball that was previously on my desk. After 25 years of life, I was bored with sex. It's...
"Well, Baal, what is it this time? Things are still going as I wish in the USA, but I have the impression that you are not doing as well in Central America." "Yes, Dread Lord Satan, Your plans are moving along quite well in the north, but down south there is a mixed bag." "Come, come, Baal. You know that I am not known for My patience. Stop pussyfooting around and tell Me straight out, how are things going in Central America?" "Very well, Dread Lord Satan, I will do as you command....
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After long absence from writing I managed to finish one of my stories. Hope you enjoy it. Please leave comment (good and bad things). Of course it?s a fictional story even if places or persons could be found in real life. The devil from R?tteln Castle Proem The legend says that 500 years ago the farmers killed the Earl of R?tteln Castle. R?tteln Castle is on the beginning of the Black Forest in southern Germany. The Lord who lived in the Castle was called the Devil from R?tteln Castle, because...
by Droid447 Scarlet and Dolores arrived at Leah’s house and hurried to the basement. They were on edge about the upcoming event. “Okay girls, I spent three hours doing this pentagram. What do you think?” Leah said, watching her friends stepping down the stairs. “It is perfect. This is going to be awesome!” Scarlet exclaimed. “The book says that we all have to be naked, so let’s show more skin,” Leah said happily. “Are we seriously doing this?” Dolores asked, a little scared about...
Devil or Angel By Morpheus Everything happened so fast that I didn't know what was going on, only that my whole world suddenly exploded into chaos. A billion images flashed through my mind at once, assaulting every one of my senses simultaneously. Then in an instant, the infinite amount of pain that I'd barely been able to register was gone, along with everything else. I had no idea how long I was there, or even if there was a there. Time had no meaning... I had no meaning. I...
When I wrote the Devil Inside, I fully intended it as just a tongue in cheek quickie and never had any intention to write a sequel. However, I thought it might be fun showing a little more of that universe so decided to write this one. The TG elements aren't focused on much and I don't think it came out as well as the first but I hope you enjoy. The Devil Inside 2: Not Quite the Antichrist By Morpheus I stepped through the door of the bar and paused to look around,...
The Devil Inside By Morpheus There is a stereotype that says all hard core gamers are overweight men who live in their parents' basements, though that is certainly not true. For one thing, I live in my Mom's attic not her basement, and for another, I am certainly not overweight. I'm actually quite fit and make a habit of running several miles a day. My name is Desmond Rogers, Dez to my friends. I graduated from college a couple years ago, but found that the job market wasn't...
The Brown family lived isolated from everyone, their large wooden cabin stood alone in a thick forest, there was only one way to the property and that was up a dirt track. The Brown's home schooled there girls, in order 'to save them from the evil of general schooling', As the Brown's were deeply religious. All the girls followed there mothers looks, petite with blonde hair. Jackie was developing into a women, she was only 5ft, her breasts where developing into a nice pair of 36 D's,...
Have you ever met the Devil? It’s a completely serious question. I wouldn’t joke around about something like that. So, have you? Have you ever met the Devil himself face to face? Well, I have so let me tell you all about it. I met the Devil in July of ’99. I met him a couple hundred yards from my house where three old logging roads converge and a bubbling creek cuts one of those roads in half. I was standing on one side of the creek and he was on the other a little bit further up but still...
DEALING WITH THE DEVIL By: ROBO Mad Jack Wilson was running for his life! He was an average size man and was 38 years old. Everything had been planned so well and it had gone so wrong. It was just suppose to be a simple bank robbery, he would go scoop up the cash and get away clean as a whistle. How could he have possibly known there was a plain-clothes cop waiting in the line at the bank? Now he could hear sirens everywhere, he had shot the fucking...
edited by Master Ken Wednesday, September 4th, 2013 "Hi, I am Miss Blythe," I said to my class, writing my name on the whiteboard with a red dry-erase marker. "I will be your World History teacher." It was the first day of the new school year and, as I launched into the course syllabus, my thoughts kept drifting to that day in June at the end of the last term, when my Living God, the Holy Mark Glassner, walked into this very classroom and changed my very outlook on life. I didn't know...
CHRIST, WHAT TIME IS IT! Shit, it's still dark. 3:30 AM! What idiot could be calling me at this hour? I hate calls like this. Either somebody dies or it's a wrong number. Answer the phone, dammit. It's driving me crazy. "Would you like to wear my pretty panties, Sissy Boy?" CLICK! Huh? What the hell? Wear whose what? What was that lady talking about? "Who is this?" Then I realized that she had already hung up. ********* "Would you like...
Pete has no shortage of admirers and Jacosta worries that he will find new, younger lovers more attractive than her and is shocked when she finds out her daughter is also keen to go to Pete’s bed. Pete encourages her to experiment with other lovers. She and Bill have drifted further apart and essentially live separate lives. She allows the Devil to sow more seeds of depravity in her mind and experiments with bondage and group sex. She discovers the naughtier the thoughts and activities,...
ntroduction:The Ghost is dead, but those women who he touched vow to bring him back.The Devil's Pact, The Cult of the Ghostby mypenname3000Copyright 2015Chapter One: Worship OrgyNotes: Thanks to b0b for beta reading this.Monday, November 19th, 2013 – Deidre Cheshire – Paris, Texas“It's true,” I said as I surveyed the room, looking at each of them—his lovers. There were almost thirty women and girls in the room. “The Ghost is dead. But there's a way to bring him back. If we're willing to pay the...
THE DEVIL DOWN IN HUMPER You might think you've heard about or even seen weird happenings. But until you get down here in my neck of the woods, you really don't quite know what weird is. We take pride in our weird. In fact, down here in the part of Oklahoma where I live, the weird is just every day goings-on. But there are times when it gets a little extreme, even for us. For the last fifty or sixty years Humper County was what they called a hub of supernatural shit. After that Angel lady...
The echo of footsteps filled the underground tomb's caverns. The squeak of rusted door-hinges opening for the first time in god knows how long. The screech of awakened demons. A salvo of gunshots. Dante sighed as he stepped over the now-perforated Msira bodies, paying them little heed as they flailed around in their death throws before dissolving into ash. "I never did get the idea behind using you guys to guard crypts," he muttered to the deceased demons as he holstered his pistols....
And this little piggy stayed home. Bill was pretty busy getting ready for the next adventure ... with three beautiful teenagers and a perfection called Mom, there was sure to be one. Mrs. Fox wouldn't let him into the safety deposit box but Mina had arranged for replenishment funds ... up to a point. Bill's Debit card had a million dollar limit ... but he didn't know that. Megan had slipped one of her Harrahs Debit cards into Bill's wallet ... but he didn't know that either. The only...
Sleeping With the Devil Song by Lee Ann Womack Songwriter: Brennen Leigh Hulbert Lyrics: I’ve been sleeping with the devil, I thought you ought to know I can’t look you in the eye and tell you it’s not so I’m his little Darlin’, I’m that old man’s dream I’ve been sleeping with the devil, so it seems I’ve been sleeping with the devil, arms around him tight Breathing my hot breath upon his chest the whole long night Get up in the morning, God knows I have tried I’ve been sleeping with the devil...
CASE FILES - PERSONAL NOTES - PATIENTS 333 & 334 - DAY ONE (CONTINUED) TRANSCRIPTION FROM AUDIO - NOVEMBER 12th – 12:35 AM HERRINGWICK Thank you, Lily. Please relax now. Take a break. Terry, can you hear me? TERRY Sure. I can hear you. HERRINGWICK Can you add anything to Lily’s narration? TERRY Well, I guess. I don’t think it’s very pertinent, though. After she sat on my lap and confessed to having had another man’s cock inside her, I didn’t get to witness much else ... not...
Gabrielle gasped and let out an almost hysterical laugh. Towering above her at some inches over six feet, the breadth of his chest substantially outsizing that of her svelte torso, was a demon. A demon dressed in an immaculately tailored tuxedo, it had to be said, with a scarlet cummerbund wrapped around his tight middle and a matching bowtie. His tar-black hair was slicked away from granite-etched facial features and penetrating blue eyes. And he was red.Deep red from forehead to neck and...
SupernaturalChapter 11: Althea, the School Girl The infernal screeching of the alarm clock awoke Cal from his reverie. He had been up for about a half-hour, but he had only been lying in bed next to the love of his life. Althea's arms were still clutched about him as he stealthily clicked the snooze button, assuming that it was six o' five in the morning, his usual waking time during the school week. He had been thinking long and hard about the previous two nights. Evan... what have you become? He...
Introduction: Will my love for Jack grow? Who where these Devils heading toward our happiness? The Story of Ann Chapter 6 Love on the Ranch as Devils Ride to Town I drove home leaving Jacks thinking about him. The man had confessed what he had done to me some 4 years ago when Janet and I attended an end of school year party. I had found myself becoming more fascinated with him as he told me his side of the story of that night. I will admit I was attracted to Jack the first time I ever saw him...
Finally, here are the next two exciting chapters in my on-going saga. I want to thank reviewer 'anon' for his comment on 9/23/10 for inspiring me to finally get these chapters finished. I'd been just short of half done with these chapters for the better part of a year but between lack of initiative and wondering if anyone even cared if I kept going I'd just sort of let it fall through the cracks. I apologize to any readers that thought I'd given up on this series and just want to point...
1Deal with the Devilby The TechnicianRomance, Halloween = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = The payment for life is life, but will Estevan give his beloved as payment for his continued existence? = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = =WARNING! All of my writing is intended for adults over the age of 18 ONLY. Stories may contain strong or even extreme sexual content. All people and events depicted are fictional and any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental....
He said “How would you like to be fucked by the Devil?” I thought to myself this is the worst pick up line I have ever heard and I turned to blast this stranger with a berating barrage of indignant phrases but when I went to open my mouth nothing came out! He was drop dead gorgeous tall with black hair and green eyes that saw right into my soul so instead of blasting this dark beautiful stranger I just said “Hello!” He said “Hi I'm Darius...Darius Natas!” while taking then shaking my hand his...
The dreams I have experienced over the last few days have been weird, to say the least. At night, I have woken up at two in the morning, sweaty body, a pumping heart and an erection the size of a cucumber. The dreams quickly evaporate and yet I remember the devil’s voice on my shoulder telling me that I’d like to fuck her, want to fuck her, need to fuck her.Every time I shake my head and try to forget that whimpering, giggling voice.Over several days I had dreams that reinforced the one...
IncestAll of my writing is intended for adults over the age of 18 ONLY. Stories may contain strong or even extreme sexual content. All people and events depicted are fictional and any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental. Actions, situations, and responses are fictional ONLY and should not be attempted in real life. If you are under the age or 18 or do not understand the difference between fantasy and reality or if you reside in any state, province, nation, or tribal...
Stan Satanowski stepped out of the state of the art spray tanning booth in his basement. It was a computer-controlled, fully-automatic model and should have cost much more than he could possibly afford, but he had gotten it basically for free.Free is a relative term. In this case, it meant that when he accepted a contract to clean up and remodel a space in a local strip mall, he agreed to store any and all equipment currently in the store for a period of two years.The previous tenant ran a...
HorrorStan Satanowski stepped out of the state of the art spray tanning booth in his basement. It was a computer-controlled, fully-automatic model and should have cost much more than he could possibly afford, but he had gotten it basically for free.Free is a relative term. In this case, it meant that when he accepted a contract to clean up and remodel a space in a local strip mall, he agreed to store any and all equipment currently in the store for a period of two years.The previous tenant ran a...
HorrorMy name is Anthony and I am twenty-two years old. I have extra-long dark hair and darker eyes. I tie my hair into a ponytail and have a close trimmed beard. I look handsome and enjoy keeping myself in shape. I am a lucky guy as I have a very sexy girlfriend who is two years older than me. Zoe and I met at a mutual friend’s party and hit it off right away. She has short blonde hair and blue eyes. Her small beautiful mouth sits beneath a cute button nose. All in all, Zoe is a goddess and I love...
CrossdressingOne last look in the mirror before I go in. I hate this new sweater dress. It's a size six, too tight and much too low cut. It shows off way too much of my cleavage. Oh yes, I have cleavage now. I'm a 36C-22-38. She Devil wanted me to have that "tits and ass" look. The skirt of my dress is really tight. It actually clings to my ass and doesn't cover much more than that. Black sweater dress, lace hose, white ankle boots, lots of jewelry, perfume, and make up. Bobbi trained...
Copyright 1999, 2002, 2003 by Wanda Cunningham. There is no actual sex or transformation in this chapter, but I guess it should be rated R for context. So, nobody under 18 should read this, or whatever is the appropriate age in their community. This story deals with transgenderism in children and may be uncomfortable for some readers. Kelly Girl Chapter 20: Shopping for the Devil By Wanda Cunningham Kelly made his way quickly through the crowd; he really did need to use the...
Puffing, Dey came to a stop beside the squid who ran the “Fantastical Flavored Ice Slush” stand on the corner of her fifteen K run. It was worth the hassle it took to get there. She was on liberty for the last bit of her convalescence. But just because she was supposed to be recovering from surgery didn’t mean she wasn’t going to try and get ahead on her training. Leave when you were being trained at a secret military base, though, was a bit complicated. She had to ride with the stealthed...
“Plebiscite! Plebiscite! Plebiscite!” 2nd Lt. DeShane Gallagher let her finger drop from the window blinds that looked out onto the protestor clogged main thoroughfare of Liberty, shutting out the pale red light of Proxima Centauri and turned to her superior, Captain Moon Two. “I think they might want a some kind of plebiscite or something,” Dey said. Moon Two, as befitted the name bestowed on him by parents who had clearly not thought very far ahead in their child’s life, had absolutely...
The bad guys were smart. The door to the Ring was cut open by a small drone – a ring roughly the size of a manhole cover. Then two manhole covers rolled into the entry area. Dey lifted her pistol and aimed it towards the ceiling with a scowl as she recognized the sight of two K12s. Dramatically larger than K9s thanks to some complexities involving diminishing returns on microsized DV emitters, K12s were also big enough to shred the entirety of the Ring, no matter how fancy her warp bubbles...
He snored. Avery ran her hand in a circle over David’s chest. He gargled and snored quite louder than he sometimes did. She smiled. She slid out of bed. She lifted her t-shirt off of his nightstand and pulled on her flannel pajama pants. She slipped into her beaten and untied sneakers. It was almost a routine drop out the window. The back lawn had grown wet over night and she wiped her hands on her shirt as she walked back home. A few orange leaves were spiralling down but just as many trees...
“You can be angry. I’d be angry.” Leanne worried as she shifted from foot to foot. She had no idea what to do with her hands. David continued to smile. “I’m not angry. A little disappointed, I guess. I’m sure I’ll find something to do tonight.” He considered. “Hey, we’re still on for Friday?” “We are!” She yelped. She lowered her heels back to the floor. She blushed and grimaced. “So long as you’ll take me?” “Wouldn’t miss it for the world, beautiful.” He beamed. They kissed, a light touch...
"Tell me again why I should let you tie me up like this, Jacob?" Jacob gazed down at the object of his desire, his lips curving into a wicked grin. There was little doubt about the measure of luck he’d been gifted with. His wife was beautiful, and not just in his eyes. He’d overheard enough talk over a pint or three at the local pub to know she was the subject of much speculation, most of it lust fueled. And who could blame them? His gaze wandered over her body, only a thin white shift hiding...
BDSMThe Devil in a Red Dress by Jennifer The rush was incredible. It was probably one of the most intense orgasms I've ever had. My mind was drifting in what seemed like another world as she still rolled the head of my penis in her mouth. It seemed that she was intent on making me cum again, but I was completely spent. "What the hell" I thought. "I might as well let her try". After all, I've slept with a lot of women, but this one, Jenny, was near physical perfection. In about ten...
WARNING! All of my writing is intended for adults over the age of 18 ONLY. Stories may contain strong or even extreme sexual content. All people and events depicted are fictional and any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental. Actions, situations, and responses are fictional ONLY and should not be attempted in real life. If you are under the age or 18 or do not understand the difference between fantasy and reality or if you reside in any state, province, nation, or...
= = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = The payment for life is life, but will Estevan give his beloved as payment for his continued existence? = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = ******************** Normally Estevan loved Halloween. It was his favorite holiday. He had watched it change through the centuries from a yearly cultic purification of hearth and fire as practiced by the Celts, to a harvest festival as practiced by the Romans when they took the festival back to the...
Identity is a funny thing. In many ways, it defines who you are. Of course, I sometimes wonder if that applies to me. At a time when most young men and women are trying to figure out who they are, I was trying to figure out what I was. Recently, I found out certain key details about my origins. The surprising thing is that I’m not a bit surprised. My name is Steven Vexes. A six-foot-two, dark-skinned young black man who hails from the City of Champions , also known as Brockton , Massachusetts...
Summary: Secret operatives know only as She Devils use, sex, blackmail and torture to steal United States. PREFACE He’d never given much thought to how important his defense work really was, or to what lengths someone would go to steal it. He’d been so stupid about that. Even careless, but now it was too late. Too late to change what was about to happen. . . He stared without breathing at the most beautiful woman he’d ever seen, into the black eyes of a true She-Devil, and she looked...
Summary: Secret operatives know only as She Devils use, sex, blackmail and torture to steal United States. PREFACE He'd never given much thought to how important his defense work reallywas, or to what lengths someone would go to steal it. He'd been so stupidabout that. Even careless, but now it was too late. Too late to change what was about to happen. . . He stared without breathing at the most beautiful woman he'd ever seen;into the black eyes of a true She-Devil, and she looked...