The Barfly - Ch. 1, Rewrite free porn video

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This is a rewrite of the first story I published on the xnxx.com forum while the main story site was in-operational. All comments are welcome but if any of the categories named don’t fit your taste then please don’t read it. If you read it anyway then don’t criticize me for writing about the things you dislike.

Since English is neither my first nor second language all spelling and grammar corrections are more than gratefully accepted.

Some years ago I read the story “Camp” and since then the idea of psionics has intrigued me. I never thought it would end up with a story of my own, but here it is anyway. If you are looking for a theme in my stories it’s simply boy meets girl and mind control.

Should you be unfamiliar with the concept of Psionics there is a description of the concept in my profile.

Enjoy...
J. Bailey


The Barfly, ch. 1, rewrite.

It was a friday afternoon around 1700 hours.
Her name was Natasha.

She sat at the kitchen table in her one bedroom apartment, her elbows on the table, her face resting in her hands, her eyes closed. She was tired after a long and grueling week at work. She was sad and lonely and her greatest wish was to get a new job somewhere, doing something entirely different from what she was doing now. Unfortunately the economy was down and getting a better job was next to impossible for her as she had no education to build on.

She tried to persuade herself that maybe by going to a bar she would for once meet some nice people. Normally when she indulged herself by going out she ended up with some married guy telling her his wife did not understand him and he would love to spend the night with her.

Natasha had immigrated from Eastern Europe a few years back and somehow missed her old home. It hadn’t been much of a home, but over here she felt even more alone than in the old country.

She had been rather on the chubby side when she came to the new country and had started on a diet which had later become an obsession that resulted in her becoming way to skinny. But she still felt too chubby and she still wanted to become “slim like a movie star”.

Finally she decided to not stay at home this friday evening but rather to go to a restaurant she sometimes visited. It was a nice restaurant, with romantic music, a bar that was separated from the dining area so one could sit in the bar lounge without having to eat. It was a place where she could sit and, once she had a few drinks, she could relish in thoughts of her old homeland.

She stood up and walked over to her bedroom. She stood in front of a full size mirror and started to undress. She unbuttoned her jeans and pulled down the zipper, then she pushed her pants down to her ankles and stepped out of them. She took off her white cotton socks and looked at her long legs. They were straight and slender and she thought she could be proud of them.

She then began to unbutton the cotton shirt she had worn to work. She started at the top and as she had unbuttoned her shirt she took it off and dropped it on top of the pile that was starting to form on the floor. She then took off the white cotton top she was wearing under her cotton shirt.

She was now naked except for her white cotton panties. She pushed them down to her knees and let them drop to her ankles before stepping out of them.

Natasha stood in front of the mirror and looked at her body. Her breasts were A cups, rather small she thought, her aureolas were dark brown, perfect round spheres, just a hint of fluffiness, with perky, blueberry sized nibbles.

She looked at her self and thought about loosing another pound or two. She did not see the protruding hip bones nor the protruding collar bones, nor the lack of mass on her arms and thighs. She looked at her belly button and as it was an “inny” it gave her a reason to imagine she was too fat. She looked at her sparsely haired mound with the protruding outer labia and not once she contemplated that she might be too skinny. She stood with her legs together and there was about an inch and a half of space between her inner thighs just below her outer labia.

She could see about an inch of her slit as it curved up towards her bellybutton. She ran three fingers along her slit and outer labia and shivered at the sensation. How nice it would be to meet someone she liked that would fill her love-canal and make her experience the bliss of fulfillment she so much longed for.

Natasha shook her head sadly and turned towards the shower to release the water. She adjusted the temperature and stepped into the shower-booth. She enjoyed the water hitting her body and stood still for a moment, her face directly in the streaming water. She felt the fatigue of her mind and body being rinsed away by the warmth of the water and she started to look forward to her outing. Almost anything would be better than to stay at home alone.


Natasha arrived at the restaurant wearing a conservative, halter less, black summer dress that ended just below her knees. She was just about to order herself a drink when he came in and looked around. He was nicely dressed and had a comfortable aura around him. He walked to the bar and sat on a barstool next to her. As he sat down, his arm brushed against hers and she felt a tingling sensation flowing through her entire body.

He ordered a drink for himself, then turned and looked at her for a moment and asked her if she liked a drink.

“Yes, thank you please” she said with her thick East European accent. He ordered her a drink, paid and walked to a free table, suspecting that she would follow him in a while.

He sat down and checked on her, she was actually looking straight at him. She looked a bit unsure on what to think of him walking away. Usually when someone offered her a drink they pestered her with their life’s story and a mash of how their wives didn’t understand them.

This guy simply invited her on a drink and then walked away. Now that was a first...

He lifted his glass in her direction and smiled. She smiled back and lifted her glass in return.

She thought about it for a while and finally decided over to his table. In some uncertain way she was attracted to him. She had no idea why since she only just met him.

“May I join you?” she asked. He looked up at her and smiled.

“Yes please. I was hoping you would like to join me.” He offered his hand and said:

“Charles...” She took his hand. This time she got a bit week in her knees from the tingling sensation.

“Natasha...”

“Beautiful name for a beautiful lady.” he said, smiling as he let go of her hand.

She smiled at his remark and sat down.

“Why did you walk away after buying me a drink?” she asked him.

“I had the impression you were tired of married men telling you their life’s story.”

“How did you... Are you married?” she said a bit startled by his reply.

“No, I’m not married but I had a date for the evening and was stood up. Would you care to join me for dinner tonight?” She looked into into his blue eyes and decided to take him up on his offer.

“Yes I think I would like that.” she said. He touched her hand and smiled. Again the tingling sensation, only this time her groin seemed to be affected as well and she became all warm and a bit lustful towards him.

“Thank you Natasha, it’s been a long time since I have had such a beautiful date for dinner and I think this may become an interesting and even enjoyable evening.

As he took her hand she again felt that warm tingling sensation fill her entire body and she felt really good about herself for the first time in a long time.

“Now tell me about yourself”

She started to tell him about her life in Eastern Europe and how she had come over to the new country. And she told him about her job and how badly she was often treated, being an immigrant. She talked and talked and he listened still holding her hand. The words flowed from her mouth like a waterfall. He was a good listener and she didn’t notice how the time passed until a waiter came and told them their table was ready.

He stood up and pulled her chair. As she stood up he offered her his arm and together they walked into the main dining room. The waiter seated them, at a nice corner table where they had a bit of privacy, and left them with menus and a wine list.

“Would you like some wine?”

“Yes please, but I would prefer a White rather than a Red, or perhaps a Ros?

“Ok, and what would you like to eat Natasha”

“I have no idea, could you please order for me Charles. Since I came over this is the first time someone invites me to a fancy dinner like this.”

He ordered a “Lobster soup a la creme” as an entree, for the main course he ordered a couple of steaks and for desert he ordered ice cream with Baileys and fruits.

“I can’t eat this much, Charles, I have to watch my weight.” He took her hand and looked into her eyes. Again she felt that tingling sensation and a wave of giddiness came over her.

“Natasha, if you keep on eating as you have done so far you will eventually die, since you are much to thin. You need to start eating in order to regain your health.” She looked at him with fear in her eyes.

“I can’t eat this much Charles, I will get fat.” He looked deep into her eyes and said:

“We will worry about that later but now you will eat for me.”

Her eyes glazed over for a moment and then she replied:

“I will do it for you Charlie.”

They sat and ate their meal and drank their wine. After emptying the bottle they were in a wonderful mood. She felt happy for the first time since she came to the new country, she laughed and she found him wonderful. She couldn’t believe her luck. This was exactly what she had longed for, for so long. After they finished desert they ordered coffee and he had a brandy while she asked for some Baileys as she had liked the taste of it on her desert.

“You know Charles I think I have never eaten this much during a single meal before.”

“Well it is about time you start to come back to health. Despite what you may believe, you are neither fat nor healthy looking. You are such a beautiful woman it would be a shame to watch you whither up and die”

She looked at him and strangely enough his words did not hurt her or make her uncomfortable, they simply made sense and she agreed with him.

A sudden urge came over her. She leaned forward and kissed him softly on the mouth barely able to hold back her tears.

“Thank you Charles, this is about the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me in this country.”

As they finished their coffee he asked for the bill and paid.

“Well Natasha, what would you like to do now?”

She looked at him and he could see the alcohol was getting to her.

“You know Charles, you make me feel good about myself. I would really like to stay with you tonight. Can we go to your place now?” He looked at her thoughtfully and then nodded his head.

“Ok Natasha, I like you and really would like to enjoy your company tonight.” She smiled at his remark and took the arm he offered her.

As they came outside he called a Taxi and opened the door on the passenger side for her. He closed the door and walked around to the other side of the Taxi and got in. He gave an address to the driver and took Natasha’s hand. A warm comfortable feeling flowed through her body but this time there was also another feeling. She had a tingling sensation in her groin and her breasts felt sensitive.

She closed her eyes for a moment and felt how her pussy became all warm and tingly. She was not sure but she had the feeling her pussy was becoming wet. Suddenly she longed to feel his cock inside her. She looked at him with wanting eyes and pressed his hand harder. She moved closer to him and whispered:

“I want you Charles.” He pressed her hand back and smiled. As the taxi drove on she felt something tickling the inside of her thighs. She leaned against him and closed her eyes enjoying the sensation she felt. Suddenly she felt something touching her clit. It was as if someone was nibbling on her clit using his lips and tongue. She pressed his hand harder and a shudder went through her skinny body. Finally the taxi arrived at his house and he paid the driver.

He went out of the taxi and walked around to the other side and again opened the door for her. She got out and took his arm. Together they walked to the front door and he opened to let them in. As soon as he had closed the door she pressed her body into him and kissed him fiercely. He replied and slid his tongue into her mouth.

Again she had the sensation of a mouth attending to her clit and a shudder went through her skinny frame. She broke the kiss...

“Oh, Charles this feels so good.” Her body twitched and she grabbed his arm with both her hands to steady herself. After a while the sensation of a tongue and mouth, licking and sucking her clit was too much for her. She came and collapsed into his arms with a loud moan, her head on his chest, his arms around her holding her up, preventing her from collapsing to the floor.

“Ooooh, how did you do that Charles?” She was still shaky and had not quite comprehended what had just happened.

“That is for me to know and for you to find out my dear.” He looked at her with a boyish grin.

“You are teasing me.” she said and pouted.

He looked at her smiling and nodded his head. He took her hand and led her into the living room where she sat down on the sofa.

“Would you like something to drink Natasha?”

“Do you have any wine?” she asked him back.

“I think I’ll find something you might like.” He went into the kitchen and brought back a bottle and two glasses. He poured wine into the glasses and offered her one. She tasted the wine and a smile lit up her face.

“This tastes good.” she told him, took another sip and put her glass back on the table.

He took her into his arms and started to kiss her. She responded and their tongues started a duel of the arms. She greedily sucked his tongue into her mouth and kept sucking hard as if her life depended on it

Suddenly the feeling returned. There was a distinct sensation of an entity massaging her outer labia, then entering her slit slowly pressing back and forth massaging her G-Spot in the process. Then she felt a tongue slowly circling her clit. He broke their kiss and moved down to the side of her neck covering it with his soft lips, moving further down to her cleavage covering her upper chest with his warm passionate kisses.

He pulled her halter less top down down exposing her breasts and their gorgeous centers. He engulfed her left aureola and nipple gently with his warm, soft lips and began to lick the blueberry like form in his mouth.

Mmmmmmhhh.

Natasha’s body shuddered and she threw her head back and moaned softly as she felt her aureola crinkle and the nipple harden. She placed her arms around his neck and pulled him hard into her chest. She was wild with ecstasy, the attention her pussy was getting made her sopping wet and yet she hadn’t even take her panties off. She turned into an animal. She moved to straddle his lap and humped the bulge that was forming in his pants.

She pulled her, by now hard and perky nipple, from his caring mouth and kissed him hard while she ground her crotch into his hardening bulge. This time he took a turn at sucking her tongue hard into his mouth causing her to whimper with desire, her eyes totally glazed over, her body twitching lightly each time her crotch made contact with his ever hardening bulge. She broke the kiss and moaned:

“Fuck me Charles, I need you, I want you to come inside me.”

Never had she experienced such passion before. Never had she experienced such want for a man’s “hard on” before. She was on fire. He looked at her with a strange smile on his face.

“Let’s come to bed then. I really would like to pay your sweet little pussy a visit. He moved his hand down to her ass and squeezed her crack causing her to almost collapse on top of him, so strong was the feeling she experienced from his touch. Totally out of breath she replied:

“Oh Charles, stop teasing me, I need you inside me right now. I need to feel you come inside me.” He unzipped her dress, she stood up and he pulled the dress down her body. She stepped out of it and let her panties follow suit. For the first time he saw her naked body. He looked at her and smiled. She was way too skinny but he planned to change that once he got her better under his control. Her breasts were rather small, little more than perhaps large A cups, but her aureolas were dark brown with a golden shine to them and about the size of a silver dollar. Her left nipple was standing proud and about the size of a large blueberry while her right nipple was still in its normal relaxed status.

He took her hand and they walked over to the bedroom. It was a nice friendly room with warm colors and a large, king sized, bed. As they came into the bedroom she grunted and pushed him down on the bed. She attacked his zipper and belt buckle before pulling off his pants, underwear and socks. She then went down on him, took his cock into her mouth and massaged the head with her tongue. She moved to alternating on his balls taking them into her mouth, playing them gently with her tongue, then moving back to sucking his cock until she felt it grow in her mouth.

“Mmmmm” she said as she felt his cock grow hard in her mouth. She moved up and down his shaft taking his head into her throat, sucking harder until it stood at full attention.

At that point she straddled his waist, took hold of his cock with her hand and guided it into the origin of her animalistic heat. As she sat down on his shaft the sensation she felt was incredible. There were hands everywhere on her body, tickling, massaging, stroking. There were mouths licking and sucking her nipples, there was a sensation of her anus being massaged and there was the sensation of her clit being sucked by a mouth and massaged with a tongue.

As she continued to ride his cock slowly she gave a grunt on each down thrust and a shudder went through her body. She increased the speed of her movement and as she increased her speed, the grunts changed into loud moans and at last she changed to:

“Yes, yes, yes, yes, harder, YES, YES, YES, YES, FUCK ME, FUCK ME, NOOOOOOO, I’M CUMMING, NOOOOOOO, I DON’T WANT TO COOOOME YEEEEET, YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESEESESEESESESEEES”. Her body twitched and convulsed on his shaft. She ended in a scream as he pinched her nipples between his fingers and twisted them moving her over the edge. The walls of her vagina contracted and he had a hard time not to come with her.

She jumped up and down on him in her orgasm thrusting hard and the pain she had expected from his pinching of her nipples turned out to become a feeling of lust increasing her orgasm manyfold until she collapsed on top of him.

She lay on top of him totally spent and he gave her some time to recover before moving her off of him so that she came to lie on the bed face down. He got on top of her and moved her legs apart, at first pressing his cock into her pussy and then after a few strokes moving to press into her anus. As soon as his cock touched her anus a wave of sheer panic hit him and to his surprise it originated in Natasha’s mind.

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“Once she had been tied to a table and been butt fucked against her will. It was the most gruesome experience she had ever had. She had gone to a party with people she had met in a bar and after a few drinks she passed out. As she woke up again she was tied to a table and blindfolded. Her legs were tied to one set of table legs and her hands to the other and someone was fucking her pussy hard. In and out in a steady rhythm. As she woke up she started to moan and then she screamed.

“Shut up you bitch.” the person behind her said and slapped her ass hard with his hand. By now she was screaming at the top of her voice. Suddenly she felt something like a rope being put around her neck and then she couldn’t breathe anymore.

“I’ll kill you if you don’t shut up, you bitch.” and then the rope was pulled a little tighter until her chest was hyperventilating trying to suck in air. Suddenly he let go of the rope and she gasped for air. Her assailant grabbed her ass cheeks and yanked them apart. He pressed his cock against her little tight rose bud. She tried to withstand his pressure, but he brutally pressed his cock into her butt hole after hitting her again with his hand causing her to loose concentration.

The pain this caused her, resulted in another scream that died suddenly as he yanked the rope around her neck strangling her again, brutally cutting of her airflow.

“Krrrhgkrgkrrhgrhrhhr” She gagged and grunted and turned red, the veins in her head bulging out. After a while she started to turn blue while he relentlessly pressed in and out of her ass. Just as she passed out she felt something hot squirt into her bowels.”

After this experience she had been franticly fearful of anybody fucking her anus. She screamed as she expected a sharp pain but to her amazement she felt no pain. She felt her little rosebud to be fully relaxed and no obstruction to the invading piece of flesh. Actually she felt lust, more lust than she had ever felt before, as Charles thrust his rod slowly into her butt hole. She could not comprehend that she was not feeling any pain from his actions.

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What started as a scream abruptly turned into a long guttural moan.

“YEEES, CHAAARLIE, HARDER, MOOOOORE, I’M GOING TO CUM AGAAAAAAAIN. AAAAAAAAAAAAH.” And suddenly she came with a long moan for the third time that evening, pressing back hard causing him to come. As his semen squirted into her bowels she felt happy, more happy than she had ever before felt in her life.

As she came, she collapsed onto the bed squeezing his cock and pulling him down with her. As his erection subsided he popped out from her butt hole and turned to lay on his back. She laughed out loud and kissed him passionately.

“That was amazing Charlie. How did you do that?”

“Do what” he said with a grin. “Have you never had an orgasm before?”

“Sure I have, but never like this. This was something else...”

She cuddled into him putting her left leg over his thighs and her left arm over his chest with her head on his shoulder.

“Tell me Natasha, what happened just as I started to fuck your butt?” A sad look came onto her face.

“I got tied up and raped once and had problems sitting and shitting for a month. I expected the same pain to repeat itself. Instead I was filled with lust and a feeling of pleasure I have never before experienced. How DID you do it?”

“It’s just a thing I do. Look, I’m sorry if I spooked you, I won’t do it again. I’ll ask before I pull another stunt like that.” She smiled and hugged him tighter.

“It was such a wonderful feeling Charlie, you can do things like that to me anytime.”

They lay on the bed holding tightly onto each other. His last thought, before he fell asleep, was if he should tell her, or not, that he was a psionic.

To be continued...

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I always thought my Aunt Susan was hot. Susan is my mother’s younger sister, and kind of a carbon copy of my mom. She is four years younger than my mom and they had always been close. Both attractive, around the same height, maybe 5’5 or 5’6, and both with the same dirty blond hair, blue eyes, and slim, in-shape bodies. They both looked quite a bit younger than their actual ages. I grew up in a single parent home with just my mother Terri and my sister Anna, who is a year older than I....

3 years ago
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dark alleyrevelation ch 1 rewrite

sky is getting dark,i looked up enjoying the view of the twilight for it has been lo ng since i last enjoyed such a view.tod ay five years ago my father died the doc tor said it was some sort of animal atta ck for his trout was ripped open and his body was like death itself,i was only 10 when he died and now am in high sch ool.i started walking to my friend's hous e then i saw a man forcing a young girl in her later teen to a lonely area by the street, he seem not to take...

1 year ago
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Small Tight and Ready part 1 rewrite

Kimmy Pfile is 13 and stands around 4'9" tall and weighs about 90 lbs. with brown eyes and brown hair with small but firm 30B tits. She was getting packed to go over to her friends house for a sleep over, but all she could think about was her friends older step brother, Curtis, He's 14 and stands 5'9, weighing around 120 lbs. with dark brown eyes and dark hair. Then she thought to herself 'maybe I can try and seduce him.' With a wide eyed expression she quickly ran upstairs to her...

4 years ago
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Cupid curse part 5 Fruits of lovethe rewrite

At 11:30 one monday, after a lecture on Euripides in History of drama, I took a ten minute walk to a little restaurant and had a burger and some fries for lunch. The place was a quiet back street and it had somewhat higher prices then mcdonald's or burger king, but you could relax there, and they knew how to make a good burger. They were a married couple who rarely spoke to each other, and they had one waitress. As I sat there eating by the window, a group of four students came in, two men...

2 years ago
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My sexual experiences The Path of Desire part 1 rewrite

In school and mostly everywhere else I used to hang out mostly with guys, not that I was attracted to them I was just more tom boy than anything else and I hated girly girl talks. My usual mates were Pete and Tony who we used to meet every day at bus and at school lunch time. Our hang out space was quite a nice spot, it was behind a big dumpster which isn’t used anymore; so no one comes to disturb us there and we have our chats in peace. Pete had recently broken up with a girl who was...

1 year ago
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Dream Girl 3The rewrite

I thought I was a dead man. Megan squirmed around and looked at me with a smile and winked. Then she pushed my numb body to the ground. “How long will I be paralyzed like this?”I asked with all the energy I had left. “Do worry you big baby, it will only last for another 10 minutes top. So lets enjoy it while we can.” She sat on my abbs, slowly clenching her butt cheeks on my cock. My head was spinning so bad, I could hardly think at this point. I couldn't move my muscles but I could...

3 years ago
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eyes to a new worldrewrite

Day as long as I live, because that was the day my life got twisted up side down by one god damn women. Beep, beep as my alarm went off for work, and to no surprise I found my 17 year old daughter Sara laying next to me with her dirty blond hair in her pink pajamas she looked so much like her mother who I hate so much. That whore only left a letter saying she not meant to be a stay at home wife and she never got to live her life since she got pregnant at a young age of 15. If I look back at...

3 years ago
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NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN rewrite

The room was dark except for one small lamp on her desk more like an over size nightlight. Which cast small white streaks into the blackness. Sitting on her bed with the keyboard in her lap. Gray shadows cascaded from the screen. She was searching for a TV show that she had just read about. A small moan came from the next room, But she didn’t hear it at first. Then followed by the squeak of bed springs which got louder and louder. “Oh no...

1 year ago
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Acting out on fantasyrewrite

Her window was right across from mine, and the naive little girl she was she would leave her blinds open every night. Like clockwork every night she would practice her dance moves in her bedroom. She wanted to be a cheerleader but she would never be one with her tiny tits, and dorky glasses. Following that she would leave to shower, the re-enter about 15 minutes later in her towel to change. I would masturbate every night as I watched her change. You see, I'm friends with her brother...

3 years ago
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TwinsUntitled Rewrite

We were reflections of each other. 48D breasts, round juicy asses, think black hair, slightly tan skin, hazel eyes, and one beauty mark on a cheek (Melissa’s was on the right, mine was on the left). Even after seventeen years, our parents still mix us up. Which we don’t mind too much., but you’d think they’d know buy the beauty marks or something. But either way, for twins, we’d like to think that’s pretty normal. We can get along, too- also normal for any siblings. My sister was more...

4 years ago
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Testing The Toys Rewrite

The Unexpected Consequenses Of Being Bound Together Testing The Toys Part 1 Peter Griffin was relaxing at home. His daughter Meg had gone out to the mall to do some shopping and his wife Lois had gone to town to do the same. Since like most men he was no fan of shopping he'd decided to stay and relax by watching some of his old porn videos on their new 60 inch flat screen TV. His wife had been gone about 3 hours before she returned home. Lois was wearing a short black skirt...

1 year ago
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A Familys Unwanted Sexual Awakening rewrite

Michelle looked around the RV, her mother was sitting at the back reading a book, she had a enviously good figure and Michelle loved her very much. Across the table from Michelle and Amy, Craig and Adam were playing cards, they were laughing to each other about something when Michelle noticed that they kept glancing at Amy who was sitting opposite them. 'Bastards,' Michelle thought. “That man hor keeps looking at my tits,” Amy whispered to Michelle. “I know, their both pigs. We’ll get...

3 years ago
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Dockside 2016 rewrite

Dockside Birdie, rest a little longer, ‘Til little wings are stronger, So she rests a little longer, Before she flies away.+++Tennyson, Sea Dreams Not far from the Tower of London, a few hundred yards at most and flanking the old city, there is a small marina, and actually, as marinas go, it’s a decent one. A bit of a chore to get to — fighting mad tides up the Thames and all — but I’d heard it was worth the effort. Anyway, with winter coming on fast I needed to find a place to sit-out the...

2 years ago
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Testing The Toys Rewrite

Introduction: Family Guy Griffin The Unexpected Consequenses Of Being Bound Together Testing The Toys Part 1 Peter Griffin was relaxing at home. His daughter Meg had gone out to the mall to do some shopping and his wife Lois had gone to town to do the same. Since like most men he was no fan of shopping hed decided to stay and relax by watching some of his old porn videos on their new 60 inch flat screen TV. His wife had been gone about 3 hours before she returned home. Lois was wearing a...

3 years ago
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NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN rewrite

Introduction: This is a repost of my first story to correct the technical difficulty I encountered in my first post. NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN The room was dark except for one small lamp on her desk more like an over size nightlight. Which cast small white streaks into the blackness. Sitting on her bed with the keyboard in her lap. Gray shadows cascaded from the screen. She was searching for a TV show that she had just read about. A small moan came from the next room, But she didnt hear it at...

2 years ago
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My sexual experiences The Path of Desire part 1 rewrite

Introduction: I took another look at it and changed some of it. I kept the topic same. It was my last year in school, going to pass out in a few more months and I still was a virgin. Not that I wanted to be but my boy friend lives far and we only get together online but we would be soon be together and getting married, so for him I was saving myself until something happened few weeks before my term was going to end. In school and mostly everywhere else I used to hang out mostly with guys, not...

3 years ago
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Daddy Makes Sasha a Whore Part 1 rewrite

Introduction: This story involves some subject matter such as incest and rape that may offend some readers. If you are one of these readers please dont read this, just find a different story. It is purely fictional so if there is any resemblance to anyone or anything in real life it is coincidental. Part 1 He kissed me softly at first, I responded and he deepened the kiss. His tongue was flicking my bottom lip and I moaned. His hand slid up my stomach till it reached my breast, then he cupped...

2 years ago
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personal field trip rewrite

Hello everyone the story i am going to tell you all about this time. occurred when i was only three years old.Its different from my other experiences but just as unforgettable. i mean how can i forget such a what I thought then was frightening but yet amazing experience as the ones i've shared with my beautiful aunt slash wife norma which happened just a bit after this story im going to tell you but as I said or even my sexy ther****t Ms. Liz all my experiences have been great like the one with...

4 years ago
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First Date Rewrite

Bobbie took me out on our first date to a local pub in Elwick. We had a pleasant time chatting to friends. On the drive back to my house I noticed his van was all carpeted in the back with lots of cushions – I thought this must be his passion wagon. So I determined not be lured especially on a first date. Bobbie leant over to kiss me goodnight and with his lovely soft lips feeling so sensual I melted in his arms and we let our tongues stroke each other. His hand started stroking my knee and...

2 years ago
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My Son My Lover Part 1 rewrite

Hello, my name is Jane; and I’m 38 years old and I’m happily married to my second husband. I have 3 c***dren, my oldest is 22 and I also have twins at 5; however they’re my son’s c***dren.And before I tell how my son became my lover, I’ll tell you how he was born.I was 16; at the time I was on my final year at school my first husband was my boyfriend, 6 months prior to the exams my boyfriend knocked me up and 3 months after the exams I gave birth to my son. My dad forced me into marry my...

3 years ago
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Bad Night Clubbing Rewrite

Chapter One – The Capture: Me out on a Friday night? What was this? This never happened.  My friend of many years had persuaded me through constant badgering to come out with him to a local club, it was the first time he had talked to me in months and I had wondered what had happened to him. So there I was, my friend had already got distracted by the first pretty thing in a skirt he found and I was left alone at the bar.From the corner of my eye I saw the barmaid looking at me, she walked over...

2 years ago
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Arajatta and the Ruby Complete rewrite

This is the first part of what I plan to be a long story line. If you have questions, comments or even complaints please email me at [email protected] This work is intended for a mature audience, it will contain big words, strong sexual themes, exploits and well, it will get rather explicit basically. If you are one to be offended by transgender themed erotica, don't read this basically. Gavin Mason looked around the bar. It wasn't a very good bar, it was a Casino Bar. The...

3 years ago
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My Awakening rewrite

This is the story of my first-time wearing women’s panties. I was raised by my grandma. She was a real conservative woman who believed the bible word for word. As a result, I was extremely sheltered from the shows I watched and music I listened too to clothes and even the kinds of friends I could have. One day I was sitting in my room playing video games when my grandma had come in. “Matt, she said, I have some bad news. Your great uncle John passed away this morning”. My great uncle...

3 years ago
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Earning an Allowance Rewrite

Getting an allowance from your parents seems to be an old-fashioned idea. My grandfather used to tell me about how he would pay my dad for mowing the lawn, washing the cars, and other chores. Even though it sounded like low-wage slavery to me, he was adamant that allowances were the only way to give your kid money. Make him or her earn it on a steady basis. In granddad’s opinion, the millennial method of ‘rewarding’ children was way too easy and expensive. For him, the ‘modern brat’...

1 year ago
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Becoming the Devil Chapter 1 Rewrite

Ruler of this world? " I asked, fighting the urge to slap myself awake. "Yes! We have reviewed your case and you have been chosen to become the ruler of this world" answered the man claiming to be the devil. The scarlet eyed man looked disinterested, he kept shaping, mashing, rolling and squeezing the anti-stress ball that was previously on my desk as if I wasn’t there. “Why me?” “Well to us, fantasies and dreams are like movies. And to keep the metaphor going, to us you are a...

1 year ago
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A Ghostly Tail Rewrite

Brandi was driving to the summer beach cabin in her sports car. Bikini clad and sunglasses, she rides the coast highway with the wind in her hair. Her bold self-confidence had been spurred by her social media presence. Her followers cheered at her antics. Half-naked poses, risque positions and her habit of making everyday things look sexual. She loved it and even tho she would never give it away, she teased and tempted her viewers regularly. Her eyes always looking for the next big selfie. ...

2 years ago
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My Scholarship 2018 Rewrite

Hi, my name is Annie and this is the story about how, during my sophomore year of college, I got the “scholarship” that helped me make it the rest of the way through. Names are of course changed to protect the not-so-innocent. First, a little background–I was a naive, nineteen-year-old girl from the state of Washington attending a small, private liberal arts college in Canada. Like many college girls I bit off more than I can chew, and I was certainly feeling the pressure about a month into my...

1 year ago
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My Life As A Sissy rewrite

This is equally on the topic of "FIRST TIME STORIES" or "TRANSSEXUAL" and is an updated version of the story I sent less than 24 hours ago *** My Life As A Sissy From the earliest awakening of my sexuality I felt a strong desire to be girly. I was the smallest boy in my grade at school and my slender body was milky white and nearly hairless. I felt that my penis was unusually small as well, and I didn’t have any pubic hair until at least a year later than the other boys. My first reaction was...

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Antheas baby 1

“What’s wrong? What’s wrong?”Anthea looked up at her mum as she sat down at the dining table. “Nothing is wrong,” Anthea responded watching as her mum hurriedly dried her hands with a tea towel.“Is the baby okay? Are you okay? Is Jack okay?” she asked as her husband came into the room and pulled up a seat at the table.“We’re all fine Mum,” she responded exasperated with her mum’s anxiety. “I have something to tell you.”“Sit down Helen,” her dad snapped. “Give the lass a chance to speak.”Anthea...

3 years ago
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Uther

Uther By Ellie Dauber (c) 2006 Introduction According to the legends of King Arthur, Merlin changed Uther Pendragon into a double for Duke Gorlois, so he could spend the night with Ygraine, the Duke's wife. Ygraine and Gorlois had three daughters: Elaine, Morgause, and Morgan le Faye. During their time together, Ygraine became pregnant with the child who was to become King Arthur. Uther's men killed Gorlois that same night. This is my TG (of course) version of what...

2 years ago
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Carruthers Bride

The the wind howled around the quayside as I stepped onto terra firma for the first time in weeks, the wind threw sharp shards of ice to sting our faces as we looked up at the sails as they were finally furled and stowed as our captain grinned at our discomfiture, "Au revoir!" he joked as if he knew we should soon be recalled. Those such as were left, and we were few enough, I shuddered. My best uniform packed securely in my Valise, awaited me, and just a few more duties before I...

1 year ago
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Motherless Vintage

Do you know of the porn site Motherless.com? You should. I’ve reviewed it a few times on my site, The Porn Dude, although it was for different genres every time. This time around, I’m going back to this place and looking at a specific and niche little category many of you are just begging me to cover. We’re looking at vintage porn today. While it doesn’t have the same resolution and quality as the porn you can find today, it’s definitely a genre of porn that has a lot of personality to it and...

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Althea

I should have known better. I should have remembered that old saying, "If it looks too good to be true, it is." I was in love. She was damned near all I thought about with the exception of my studies and it didn't make sense to me. I prided myself on my intellect and my ability to think logically, but there wasn't anything logical about the way I felt about Althea. She was beautiful, smart and very popular and I was not. I wasn't a bed looking guy, but I was nothing exceptional. I was...

1 year ago
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Motherless Images

Motherless. A one-word website title that says everything it needs to say. This is a site where the rules are, more or less, completely thrown out the window, morality means absolutely nothing, and there is nobody to save you from it. Hedonism is God here.The site likely is also called this due to the fact that the girls who end up on motherless.com likely have no positive female influence in their lives to keep them from it. Motherless is the place parents spend their whole lives fearing that...

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Motherless Amateur

I always considered Motherless the “4chan” of porn. Not only because Motherless was somewhat popularized there, but because Motherless also encourages users to share their own content in a very open way. This means minimal bullshit like moderation and censorship, and a strong “anything goes” attitude that leads to free and extreme content. It encourages people to create and upload their own homegrown content, like videos of their girlfriend pissing or spycam videos of their cousin....

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Motherless BBW

What is it about Motherless that makes me fucking cum every time? Maybe it is how raw and amateur the porn on the site comes across as, or the content is just that fucking hot. Perhaps it is the fact that there is an astronomical amount of pornography just waiting for a dumb fuck like you to beat off to! I really don’t know, and frankly, I’m not going to pretend that I do.But what I do know is that if you love BBWs, the Motherless.com homepage will not be of much use! Preferably, head on over...

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Motherless Voyeur

Have you ever heard about a website called Motherless? Home to all kinds of kinky porn niches, with a side of the mainstream crap? If you are into some questionable fap content, you might want to check this website out. Plus, Motherless is a free porn website, so you can browse as much as you fucking want. Now, I am not really here to talk about the website in general… I am here to tell you about their amazing category, called voyeur porn.The world of voyeur fucking is a rather interesting one....

Voyeur Porn Sites
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Aether Guardians

The Five Kingdoms of Arstoria had been embroiled in the Great Ancient War for centuries. The war came to an end when Kalace, the Wizard King conquered the five lands and brought them under his rule. Kalace, the Wizard King of Arstoria, conquered all of his opponents who were unable to deal with his overpowering magic. When Kalace had united the five kingdoms, he brought peace to the warring kingdoms and was revered and celebrated by his later generation. Kalace, however, had a dark weakness in...

Fantasy
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Motherless Creampie

Woah, did Motherless.com get a facelift? I know I suggested it in my review, so I guess they listened to me! Well, I’m not going to brag too much about it, and instead, I’m going to focus on what I’ve set out to bring you today. We’re looking at an amateur website, and I just know that many of you are begging for amateur creampie content, so that’s what we’re looking at. I know how much you think Motherless can look sickening and pretty gruesome at times, but the creampie content can be quite...

Creampie Porn Sites
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Motherless Cuckold

No matter what type of porn you may be in the market for, Motherless has an ample supply of it, and cucking is no different. Actually, this might help to explain how you ended up being such a pussy little cuck.The journey that brought you to my website reading cuck porn reviews started in your childhood. A fair portion of my readership is actually motherless. Why, you ask? Your guys' moms chose a life of cucking and riding cock instead of raising you fucks properly.Don't worry, gents. I'm in...

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