Peeping Tom Rewrite of version by Aan sky 0
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Ronnie was a freak. At 18, he was still a virgin. That was about to change, but he didn’t know. Ronnie was a pervert. Since he was 14, Ronnie had made it a nightly habit to peer into the windows of unsuspecting neighbors, watching the women or their daughters undress, take baths and even have sex. You see, he was a handsome lad of about 5’9″ very muscular packing about 170 pounds on his frame. But was a special education student who rode the short bus to school and was taught...
Peeping Tom Scared Straight This is a story about the most exciting, and terrifying, thing I ever did. I had just finished my military service, and I was staying at my parents’ house. I was restless and horny, and still reorienting to civilian life. I would frequently take late night walks around my sl**py town, just to think. One Saturday night, well past midnight, I strolled down a quiet street. Most of the houses were dark, but this one house still had a light shining in the first floor...
His heart beat was slowing, but -- still clutching her body close to his -- he could feel that his wife's was still pounding rapidly. "That was good for you, I guess?" Eleanor laughed, playfully slapping his bare buttocks with the long fingers of one hand. "My god, Peter. That was ... wow ... unbelievable." 'Ellie' was sitting in his lap, her ankles crossed behind his back. Her arms clutched his torso tightly, refusing to let them separate until ever bit of the euphoria rocking her...
“Oh, ohhhh!” Tom pulls down his pants, while never letting his eye off the peep hole. Every Sunday night, these same five girls have gathered here and done amazing sexual things to each other in this abandoned old shack. Dan pulls out his stiffening cock and slowly strokes it. Inside the four women are completely naked, and surrounding a donkey this time. They are taking turns sucking on the donkey’s hugely disproportional dick, rubbing their breasts up and down its...
THE FOLLOWING IS PURELY FICTION... I enjoy watching. I am what you could call a “Peeping Tom.” This has long been my philia. My avocation. Since I was a child, I’ve been staring, watching others, “people watching.” Humans are the most fascinating of animals. Perhaps this is due to their intelligence. Or maybe their dangerousness. As a child I would spy on girls in the neighborhood. Going to all-boys Catholic schools made me extra curious about girls, what secrets they...
I snuck into the house well after 11:00. I figured there was a good chance my dad wasn’t home yet and thought for sure that Mom would be in bed. I figured it would be a straight shot up the steps to my room. I just wanted to free Willy, climb into bed, relive the best night of my life, and play with myself. Seemed like a simple plan. I eased the door shut behind me and headed straight for the steps. My hand was buried deep in my pocket; diddling the swollen head of my dick in anticipation of...
My name is Andrea and I'm seventeen. I have a brother whose three years younger than me. His name is Tom and until a year ago we had the typical relationship. I was a tyrant and he was a pest. Everyone told us that we'd love each other when we were older but we didn't really believe it. I loved him in that "You're-my-brother-so-I-have-too" sort of way. For example three years ago I broke a kid's nose for beating up Tom, but then I'd teased Tom about needing me to fight for him. He'd...
"Come on Tom. While mom's making a fresh pot of coffee, I'll take you on a quick tour of the house here," Rub said taking my hand. I followed, but didn't see the logic in her doing so. Our units were basically identical in design. Standard three bedroom, sitting dining room, full bath and half bath. And though they certainly had a lot more tastefully designed furniture than I did, I again didn't see the reason for her offer. Until she led me into what was the master bedroom. Again,...
Author’s Note: This is a rewrite of the story I posted titled From The Heart just a week ago. A number of commenters felt it was too short, and I said I would rewrite it sooner or later. I decided on sooner, and incorporated several other criticisms into this rewrite. I hope you find this improved. I left the original in place, in case you choose to compare the before and after. A repeat of the hat tip to member funnyalix for suggesting in a Lit chat one night that I should ‘write from the...
It was hot and humid. My body sweated from every pore and my T-shirt stuck to my back. There was an empty bottle of water next to me on the table behind an overflowing ashtray. I stared at the blank page on my laptop and swore at it once again. My mind was blank, no ideas, not even a whiff of one. I looked up as voices reached me from the entrance to the small bed and breakfast where I was staying.It was run by a family, dad, mom, and two teenaged daughters. The guests stayed in little cabins...
TeenTrue story. As a s*******n year old boy I already had a strong fetish for pantyhose and lingerie that started when I was 11 but this is not a origin story it is more of a peeping Tom story. this is an experience I had while living in my grandmother's apartment complex. Being in high school and not having a real job one of my responsibilities was to help with maintenance around the apartments. One day I was asked to check on a sink in one of the apartments. I thought nothing of it and headed...
I discovered my first playboy magazine under my parents bed at around age 10. and that pretty much set off the start of my sex addiction. the sears catalog, jc penny catalog, national geographic magazine... if it had scantily clad women, i was masterbating to it, alot, i mean ALOT... playboy was the one that set me off on a quest to see what else was out there. i was jacking off in the morning before school, sometimes id sneek off the bathroom and jack off during class, as soon as...
I looked up from my laptop straight into the sun where I saw a silhouette. I recognized the figure of that of the young woman in cabin D. We hadn’t seen her around but rumours where that late at night she was being picked up by the black man only to return before sunrise.“Yes?” I put on my sunglasses and took her in. Shorts, tight top, no bra, hair in a ponytail. My cock moved in its enclosure.“Could I borrow your charger, mine seems to be broken?”“Sure.”She unplugged mine from the extension...
TeenI had gone over to the grocery store late in the afternoon the following day, returning with several bags of groceries that I was juggling on my way over towards the elevators. "Here, let me help you with those." I heard a voice saying. I turned almost dropping one of the bags at the sound of the woman's voice. "Thank you," I said as she just caught it, taking it from me. "You're Tom right?" She asked. "I'm Crystal." I think I blushed while looking at her, the familiarity of...
I would like to thank those that have read my stories ancommented on them. This is a complete rewrite of the second chapter of my story “The Barfly” originally posted in the forum. I would like to ask those of you that honor me with negative votes in groups to leave some comments so that I may learn what readers dislike in my stories. I would also like to ask those of you that like my stories to throw a wote my way to keep them in an accessible position. Enjoy J. Bailey The...
Author’s comments: This is a rewrite of the first story I published on the xnxx.com forum while the main story site was in-operational. All comments are welcome but if any of the categories named don’t fit your taste then please don’t read it. If you read it anyway then don’t criticize me for writing about the things you dislike. Since English is neither my first nor second language all spelling and grammar corrections are more than gratefully accepted. Some years ago I read the...
Introduction: Charlie and Natasha meet Karen Prologue I would like to thank those that have read my stories ancommented on them. This is a complete rewrite of the second chapter of my story The Barfly originally posted in the forum. I would like to ask those of you that honor me with negative votes in groups to leave some comments so that I may learn what readers dislike in my stories. I would also like to ask those of you that like my stories to throw a wote my way to keep them in an...
Lucy opened the paperback a little wider and tilted it towards the light, but she read only one paragraph before dropping the book into her lap. Sighing, she rubbed her eyes."I shouldn't be reading," she muttered. "I have to work."Placing the book on her desk, she looked at the laptop in front of her; lid open, screensaver patterns zig-zagging across its face. She jiggled her finger on the tracker pad, watching the screen wake up, revealing neat rows of words. Positioning her hands over the...
Love StoriesOne day while walking to work, Tony stumbled across a binder with a cd in it called "Rewrite.exe" written on it. Curiosity got the better of him as he took it with him. After getting home,he placed the cd in the disk and scanned it with every bit of his anti virus programs. The disk files were clean,so he clicked upon the main file. A popup revealed the following message. "Welcome to rewrite.exe. this program is intended to alter anything the user desires." Thinking that this must be a joke he...
Mind ControlThe Library: Rewrite, Part 1 by Roberta J. Cabot Ghosts in the library. A fairly common story for Halloween . Telling such stories, especially around a campfire at night, is fun. Heck, it's almost a tradition - a ghostly figure that you see from the corner of your eye as you work on your homework in the library, eerie sounds, unexplained movements like doors closing or chairs moving et cetera. Old hat. Hackneyed, even. Thing is, I was the one who saw them,...
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - THE LIBRARY: REWRITE, PART 3 by Bobbie Cabot - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - So. Here I was. Alone in the library with my sexy, French-speaking ghost. I want to get out of there, but I wanted to find out what this was all about, too. I wanted to know. I NEEDED to know. Even if I have to ask the ghost. My name is Mark. And this is the continuation of my Halloween...
By the time I got back into the fun room, Holly was already being strapped and secured into the swing. Rub, Stacy and Jan securing her in when I arrived. Just standing there looking on as they did that, and as she looked over towards me, smiling ... was more than enough to harden my prick almost instantly. Holly hung there suspended, her hands, legs and feet bound and secured in the sex-swing, virtually unable to do anything but just sit there. "Ok, Tom ... now it's your turn!" Rub stood...
“Police, ma’am. Detective Thomas Patterson. May I speak with you please?” The door opened slowly and halted as the gold coloured chain locked into its catch. Patterson caught a whiff of Eastern cooking mingled with the scent of Anais Anais as an attractive Asian woman appeared behind the door. “Yes?” “Dectective Patterson.” Tom announced again and flashing his ID, “it’s about the prowler you reported. May I come in and speak with you please?” Patterson stood back as the door...
This is a rewrite of a story I had published here in 2012. This is an attempt of finishing it, taking over where it stopped in 2015 after I am done rewriting. It has re-checked and better English (not perfect, though, as I'm not native), additional scenes and lines, probably heading to a totally new experience altogether, as I took in consideration all the evaluation and comments I received back then. So, if you're new to this, please, don't go looking for the old ones that are still...
Tommi: I remember when I was 10. In the toilet I asked my mother about my pee pee standing up. Through the door, she heard me and came in, as I was trying to press it down, sitting on the seat like the big girl I was. I blushed, as she looked down, as she frowned and kneeled her beige sundress billowing slightly around her. Her perfume seemed so good to me, lilacs, I think. She reached to my pee pee, and asked me, "Do you mind if I touch it?" "OK, go," I replied, "you...
Friday. It had been a very busy week. I had finally gotten the last of my new furniture delivered. Liking the way my living room now looked, the soft leather couch, chairs ... along with a deep mahogany coffee table and end tables. Something I had always wanted, but up until now, had never had. Karen had insisted on what I termed as scratchy floral printed couches and chairs after we had gotten married, and I had hated them. Now I had what I wanted as I stood there admiring my new digs. And...
After about ten minutes or so, I really lose track of time, Tommie is gasping. "Oh, Dave... Please... Whatever you're doing... Please... Don't stop... Make me... Oh, God... I'm close... Oh... Oh... I'm gonna..." As her vagina clamps down on my finger, I sucked her clitoris into my mouth and rolled it between my lips. She's gone completely silent, her back arched up off of the grass and all of her muscles are taut. Finally, she drops her back down in the grass and screams, "GOD!" so loud that it...
MatureWhen I woke up very suddenly this morning… with the distinct feeling that I forgot a wonderful dream. The room was lighting up at intervals from lights that were moving around just outside my apartment. The lights were too low to be lightning and it must have been coming from cars driving past in the road. When I got up and went to the window, there wasn't much to see. It was still early, only a few minutes before four a.m., and it was still completely dark outside. Extremely thirsty I...
I always told myself Chad today you are going to meet that perfect girl and she going to love you for the rest of you're life. You see I am already 22 living in the great city of Philadelphia by myself. Like most kids my age I don't really know what I am going to do once I finish college. For now I spend my days with my two best friends in the world. Other times im at work or on my laptop chatting to random people online. Yeah I really have no life if I'm not with my friends. To be honest...
Introduction: Im a young virgin (boy) and naturally am curious about the female body. I have a sister to help with that… (I thank you for your constructive feedback on the original version of this story. I thought that, as seen as you loved the story but I had not written it very well, I would rewrite it based off the other and work on your feedback) I stand in the hallway staring at the into my sisters room. My heart pounds in my chest as I work up the courage to reach out and grab the...
Moms Joins the 10+ Club rewrite This story is about domination/submission, it include cheating wives and them humiliating their husbands this story is not for everyone so please if this is not your thing dont waste time writing about how terrible my characters are. Pam was an average housewife, 41 years old dirty blond shoulder length hair. She had 42D breasts with large nipples which were super sensitive. Her ass was still tight even if she had put on 15 extra pounds. She still could turn...
((Author’s Note: Now I know what you might be thinking, “hey, haven’t you written this already?” If you aren’t thinking that because you never saw the previous version or don’t care, skip this author’s note and get right to the meat; otherwise, let me explain. I started Blood of Kings quite a long time ago and I’ve learned a lot since then. While the promised Twine project didn’t really go anywhere it helped me understand what I truly wanted from this story. I made more than a few key mistakes...
Fantasypart #1 (rewrite) Now it was a Friday night after a lo...n...g.... hard week of work so my co workers and I was going to relax and have a girls night out . There were 7 or 8 of us women. We worked for the highway department. And there was only one male in the whole bunch and that was our supervisor who was getting ready to retire in a couple more years. Well, my best friend out of the whole group of women was a woman by the name of Pam. And Pam was going to ride with me on this girls night out....
Be-cumming a School Girl - RewriteFrom the time I was 5 or 6 I would sneak into the lodger’s bedroom after she had left for work. I would dress up in her lingerie and climb into her warm bed. It just felt so good wearing silky clothes which felt so delicate against my skin. I just loved to feel feminine. If anyone looked in I would pull the covers up to my neck to hide what I was wearing. A few years later I would be wearing my elder sister’s panties and occasionally my mother’s when she was...
First a few words, I did not write the first version of this story, this is merely an unauthorized rewrite of the original. JR wrote the original version and the basic idea's, plot, and setting belongs to JR, not me. I took the liberty to make any changes I saw fit to make this story more to my liking. I changed the names of those involved but the plot remains basically unchanged. Any and all continuations are my work but based upon the work of JR, not mine. So without further adieu I...
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - THE LIBRARY: REWRITE, PART 2 by Bobbie Cabot - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I used to be a boy scout. Yeah, yeah, you can shut up now. The only reason I mention this is because of the ghost stories that we told around the campfire. No, we didn't roast weenies or marshmallows, but we DID tell stories. Stories about ghosts in the dark - scary-fun. But there's no fun if you...
My girlfriend and I share an old house in the city with another couple. They have the top two floors, we have the bottom two. There are no keys for the doorlocks in the house, but we trust each other.It so happens that our bedroom faces their bathroom. There's a short flight of stairs in between, but if I open my bedroom door, I can look right into their bathroom. Of coursen usually when they're in there, they close the door.Usually.I don't remember what triggered me, probably the fact that I...
Chapter 1I guess I should start by telling you something about my Mom.From what I’ve been able to piece together, Mom’s always been kind of a free spirit. My aunt Jenny, who’s a few years older than my mom, told me that they’d [Her, my mom, and my uncle Ronni] had a “less than happy” c***dhood. “You’re lucky you weren’t raised by your grandfather…” I’d heard a thousand times growing up; from both my mom and my aunt. I didn’t see my grandparents very often, but it was relatively easy to see what...
I guess I should start by telling you something about my Mom.From what I’ve been able to piece together, Mom’s always been kind of a free spirit. My aunt Jenny, who’s a few years older than my mom, told me that they’d [Her, my mom, and my uncle Ronni] had a “less than happy” c***dhood. “You’re lucky you weren’t raised by your grandfather…” I’d heard a thousand times growing up; from both my mom and my aunt. I didn’t see my grandparents very often, but it was relatively easy to see what Aunt...
Vanakam makale, indru tamil kama kathaiyil en chelam dinesh udan nadantha kama kathaiyin thodarchiyai naan ungal idam pagirugiren. Naan antha gum irutil en kala kathalanai paduka vaithu avan meethu eri matter pottukondu irunthen. Haaaaaaaaa haaaaa matter poda poda inbamaaga irunthathu. Ineram en kanavanaaga irunthaal avaruku vinthu eppozhutho vanthu irukum, ilamaiyaana aan enbathaal dinesh sunniyil vinthu varamal irunthathu. Athanaal naan nandraaga kuthikul sorugi oothukonde irunthen. Ooka ooka...
Mark and Shaun had been best friends since school. When Shaun got married, Mark was his best man. Shaun bought a house with a granny flat at the back, but was having problems paying his mortgage, and the financial pressure hurt their marriage and his wife left him for another man. By then Mark was engaged to be married to a lovely girl called Jane, and mentioned to Shaun that they were looking for a place to stay. Shaun suggested they should lease the main area of his house, while he moved into...
Girls Have Fun Making a Pretty Boy One of Them ? by: Jayne Willard Chapter 1, Caught Peeping Cindy knew the party was getting out of hand, but she was enjoying herself. They were at Summer Camp; the boy they had discovered "sneaking a peek" into their cabin was a wimp. He had a cute face and slender body with long dark hair, as was the style at the time. They had jumped him and since there were twelve of them, they easily overpowered him, as if he had resisted at all. "He's...
Introduction: After she sees the neighbor boy watching her and her husband having sex …. My husband and I were in the middle of a good session of sex. We were in the missionary position with my legs tightly around his waist, pulling him deep into me when I happened to look out my bedroom window. There in the window, watching us, was our neighbors eighteen year old son, David. My first thought was to stop and let him know that we caught him and tell his parents, but I was right on the edge of an...
We sat and talked. Josh said that he had not seen David, at least not this time. He had seen him watching several times before and it gave my husband a thrill and made it more exciting for him to be putting on a show for our young neighbor. I was pissed and I called him a fucking asshole but I also felt a tingle in my pussy as I thought about it. I went over and pulled our curtains closed. A couple nights later, after I got over being mad at Josh, we were in bed and Josh was paying...
Part of my route included some apartment buildings where a lot of students from the local university lived. It was easier to go behind the building than around. One morning as I was walking past the back of the building, I heard something that attracted my attention. I quietly approached an open window that had the curtains not totally closed. I couldn’t believe what I saw. A girl was masturbating. She was so pretty. She had shoulder length brown hair that framed her beautiful...
My neighbor's wife, what a fox. Long brown hair, pretty face, small little tits, a great ass, and the horniest little voice you'd ever hear. Then there was her husband, and first off, lemme say, WHAT A LUCKY BASTARD! He was tall, had a nice and sculpted body, brown hair aswell, long cock maybe 7 inches? I can't tell from here, but that lass must love the feel, because she begs for it nightly. And then their room. And must I say, a landmark city. Clearly they were into BDSM stuff...
Julie turned in front of the mirror, admiring herself. “Not too shabby for an old lady,” she thought to herself, as she walked out of her dressing area. Her forty-five year old body was stuffed into a swimsuit that was skimpier than she would have been comfortable wearing if she weren’t in the privacy of her own home. These spring days in South Texas are what made living there worth putting up with the hot summers. The sun shone brightly in the clear, blue sky, but the air was pleasantly...
Introduction: The following story is true. Well some of it is true. Ok, the only part that is true is that I did have a paper route and I did maturbate a lot when I was 13. Everything else is purely from my dreams. Onlyl my second story attempt, and the first one that I think I can make into a series. If you have negative remarks, make them constructive please, dont just say that it sucks. Thats an opinion, not a criticism. Hope you enjoy it. I had an early morning paper route. It was a good...
i wake to my phone ringing and look at the clock its 4am who could be calling me at this time of the day 'hello' i say answering my phone'time to get up come over to the window you better be nude' the black guy from next door saysi get up and walk to the window as i always sleep in the nude i don't have to take anything offi look out the window and see the black guy fully clothed staning watching me from next door'take hold of you cock get it hard then ask me nicely if you can have a wank' he...
i was looking out of my bedroom window i could see into the neighbours bedroom they were on the bed fucking really getting into it she is a hot blonde milf with tits like g****fruits he is a black dude with a huge cock which is sliding in and out of her tight cunt i can't help it my cock starts to stiffen so i pull down my trousers and take hold of my cock and start stroking it its hard now but nowhere near the size of that huge black cock sliding in and out of that fantastic blonde they roll...
I was hooked and now paid attention to every movement my neighbor made. It had only been a couple of nights since I last watched her but I had to see more. I found myself waiting and watching out the window to see when she would come home. For the next three days she never got home until after one in the morning and immediately her apartment would go dark. By the fourth night I was gust about to give up. But I was obsessed with what I had seen and I had to see more. That night when I saw her...
Day two I could not resist th temptation to go back to the apartment looking for more. The Tennant i was watching was irrisistable and the game was afoot.... I waited for her to get home it was past 11 and well past the time my grandmother went to bed. I went out to the yard to go for a walk but I really only had one intent... to spy on the neighbor.It turned out that She would not disappoint. She arrived home somewhat early for her and as she drove up into the yard I got ready.I picked a dark...
A few years ago on my way home from work late on a pitch dark, winter night. The snow had not come to any great extent. Despite the street lighting, the streets were still relatively dark. I walked through a residential area which was bordered by dense forest on one side. There was little footpath that ran along the property line to the houses, it was almost dark always because someone had amused themselves by kicking lampposts so that the lights broke. Most houses were in darkness, but here...
It was a weekend. I went to my local adult bookstore looking for some action. I went back into the private booths where you preview a DVD (so basically an excuse to hook up and get some action.) I was very disappointed because there are 6 total rooms, 3 on each side. A, B, C, and D, E, F, on the other side of the hall. I went into the last room on the left side with a full length loveseat, TV and DVD player to "preview my DVD." I pulled my pants down and was hard as a rock. I started watching...
It all started a few days earlier. I was working on a report in my study when I noticed the light come on in the house opposite. A group of girls, studying at the local uni lived there - I'd spoken to them a few times and as I was a friend of their landlord's I would sometimes pop in if there were any odd jobs that needed doing. I saw one of the girls, Carrie-Anne, go into her bedroom. She was giggling, then turned round and started sexily taking off her blouse. A guy (her boyfriend?), already...
The time had now come for Ann to return to UK early Wednesday morning so Tuesday afternoon we decided to have a final foursome with Maria and Rajeev. Ann and Maria both agreed they had fucked plenty of guys while Ann had been there so a final foursome would be a perfect way to end her visit. We all had lunch and then Ann said she would like to hear how Rajeev had got started as we still did not know his story. Rajeev agreed to tell us all so we undressed and he began his story. I began jerking...
Last week I was ready for a girls nite out with my best girlfriend but once again her husband decided to ruin it all by getting sick so she opted to stay home and take care of him instead:(((. So all alone and nothing to do I got on xhamster and started watching a little bit'o'porn playing with my increasingly wet pussy. Well about 10 or 15 minutes into taking care of myself I realized that i had forgotten to draw my shades shut....oops..... When I looked out I could see into my neighbors...
Saturday. The BIG day had finally arrived. The sun well up when I woke, having slept in just a bit as I wandered into the kitchen and started the coffee. I returned out onto the deck, enjoying the feel of the early morning sunshine, looking about. Strangely, I saw no one, and heard nothing. I stood for a moment, the sound of the coffee maker bubbling away until it had finished. I walked back inside, poured myself a cup, and went back outside again. Still nothing. Still no one. It was almost...