N.B. I've noticed sometimes, but not always, a small problem caused when
I change to Rich Text Format from Word that some accents on or under
letters get lost.
For example Provencal should have a cedilla under the 'c' but comes out
as Proven(al in my story 'The Pre-nuptial Agreement'. In the following
story is the word 'melee' and this has a circumflex over the first e and
an acute accent over the second e.
Sometimes it reproduces correctly, other times it doesn't. Having gone
to this explanation, sod's law says that it will reproduce OK, but if it
doesn't it may look a bit like: m(l(e, and as there are two accents in
this very short word I thought this quick note might make things
clearer.
WILLOW'S STORY
"I'm going to do something about it," said Valerie Lavender.
She had been having lunch with two of her closest friends since they
were at school together, Sally and Denise, and they had been discussing
how they had got married too young to their respective husbands.
"I don't know what you've got to complain about Val," Sally mentioned,
"at least your Bill helps around the house, my Ray doesn't do a thing,
well hardly. We both work but it's always me that has to do the
shopping and cooking and cleaning, you don't know you're born."
"I can't see what either of you've got to complain about," complained
Denise. "I've even heard you say how exhausted you are sometimes in
bed, I'm lucky if I get a wham, bang, without even the thank you ma'am.
As for working, Sally, you only do it part time and you've said it's
only so you can eye up the talent."
"But don't you realise, the two of you, we're each only twenty seven, we
should have spent our time up to now playing the field, enjoying
ourselves with umpteen sexual adventures," Val had to explain to the
others. "We should only just now be thinking of settling down in the
hum drum of married life. In stead of which we're sat here telling each
other what we're missing out on."
The three friends were lunching out, as was their habit every Monday and
Friday, a chance to tell each other what they had planned for the
weekend and then to have an inquest on the events afterwards. Their
husbands were all quite well off men, so the expense twice a week of
lunch, or any other meals come to that, in one of the best restaurants
in town wasn't a problem for them.
"Maybe it's because I've been married longer than either of you two,"
Val explained. "It's been seven years for me and less than four for
either of you. Are you going to wait for it to get stale before you
suddenly realise that you're stuck in a rut?"
"What are you going to do?" Denise wanted to cut to the chase. "I'll be
honest with you, I think my Paul is having an affair."
This immediately perked up the interest of the other two.
"How do you know, come on, spill," Val jumped in straight away.
"Someone told me that he's been disappearing with his secretary for
afternoons at a time and he's gone right off me in the bedroom."
"Well why don't you join me the weekend after next and we'll sort them
out for good and all," Val replied. "I've found this group who deals
with the type of problems we have, it's hellish expensive but not nearly
what we'd lose in a divorce court."
"What do they do?" Sally wanted to know.
"Well to be perfectly honest, I don't know exactly. Do you know May
Burton? She told me told me about it and I've arranged to take Bill
the weekend after next, why don't you come along and see, they guarantee
to change the whole hierarchy of the marriage. Mind you, you can only
use it if a previous customer recommends you, other wise it's very hush
hush.
He has to stay there about a month for them to show him what to do and
make sure that he's willing to do it. It's run by a group of women who
are determined to stand up for women's rights. You don't have to take
your husband the first time, just come along and see for yourself what
they do."
"What sort of place is it?" Even Sally was intrigued.
"It's a country club down in the West Country, you can just go down to
relax for the weekend or you can take your man for re-education, they
call it. I don't know all the details but they say that the wife in the
marriage becomes dominant, her husband guaranteed to do as she tells
him. I do know that the person who told me about it, May Burton, do you
know her? She told me in the strictest confidence, now has a maid
instead of a husband and she openly does exactly what she wants and she
said that she doesn't get a word of complaint from him, he never answers
back. Do you fancy coming down to see how they do it with Bill?"
After very little further discussion, Sally and Denise agreed that they
would be fascinated to see what they did and would tell their husbands
that it was going to be a girl's weekend in a spa, giving them time to
arrange more golf etc., to occupy them while they were left alone.
Bill was mystified as to why Val would want him to go with them to a
spa, he had been told that the two other wives were going and he tried
his hardest to get out of it for himself.
"I don't know why you want me along with your friends, I know you all
take the opportunity to slag us men off and you'll feel inhibited if I'm
there to defend myself," he had told her with a smile on his face, but
his wife was adamant.
"I've paid for you to have special treat," she told him, "so you've got
to come."
When the allotted weekend arrived, Bill left work early and drove them
down in his car on the Friday. They were all surprised how isolated the
country club was, a big old mansion, its grounds were extensive with a
high wall surrounding them. When they arrived at the gates their
booking was checked before they were allowed into the grounds but once
there four gorgeous looking girls in French maid costumes came to
collect their luggage and show them to the reception desk. Val wondered
how they could walk in the stilt like heels they had on their feet and
they deferred to an older woman who was obviously in charge of them.
She was wearing a trouser suit but the minions were all in very low cut
uniforms that also showed a great deal of their very shapely legs.
"Ah yes, Ms Lavender and party," the woman entered them into the
computer, "if you ladies would go with Stephanie and Mr Lavender, will
you go with Jackie. All will be explained to you once you are in your
rooms."
Bill was a bit taken aback not to be with his wife, but assumed that the
women's quarters might be separated for reasons of modesty. He just
hoped that he would not have to sleep in a single room, they both
enjoyed their sex and a weekend away was normally an excuse for bedroom
Olympics for them.
The three women found that they were all in double rooms but supposed
that it in part accounted for the large fee they charged even for those
just staying for the weekend with no other services booked. They were
only mildly surprised that only the three of them sat down for the
evening meal, there was no sign of Bill.
Their orders were taken by a senior member of staff but the waitresses
that served the dishes were all absolutely beautiful and wearing the
very high heels of their colleagues, the wives commented about them and
wondered how they were able to recruit such attractive girls. Once they
had eaten they were shown though to a large and very luxurious seating
area where their coffees and/or liqueurs were served on low coffee
tables by the same waitresses. It was then that they discovered the
reason for the expense.
They were each handed a further menu, but this one didn't have food
listed, rather each page was the photograph of a nude male with a number
on the page of their picture together with their ages and statistics.
Looking round they guessed that there were probably some thirty guests
but the menu contained well over a hundred different men for them to
choose from. Interestingly a second menu was also placed on the table
which contained naked photographs of other women, again numbered and
with their statistics.
"Wow!" exclaimed Sally. "I didn't expect this."
The other two agreed but were rather engrossed in perusing the menu.
"For those of you that haven't been here before," the lady that was in
reception spoke to the room, "Please make three selections, marked one,
two and three, and we will endeavour to provide you with the nearest to
your first choice."
"I'm sorry, I can't do this," Of the three Denise was the least likely,
the others thought, to be the one to baulk. "I know, I know, Paul is
having an affair, but two wrongs don't make a right. I'm afraid that I
have to stick by my vows, I'm sorry, but I don't think that should
effect the choice you make."
"Don't worry, it won't," Sally quickly said and Val agreed with equal
speed.
Denise found that breakfast the next morning was a lonely experience,
the others didn't surface until nearly eleven, by which time she was out
by the pool, noticing that she was now the only single woman there. It
was nearly lunchtime when she was joined by the others with Victor and
Arnie, the two muscle men Val and Sally had chosen. Denise had a moment
of jealousy when she saw the two hunks in the flesh but had to content
herself with the knowledge that she was doing the right thing.
While she didn't wish to spoil the atmosphere for Val, she did ask when
they were going to see the new improved Bill.
"Who's that?" Victor asked. "Your husband being treated?"
"Yes, I don't know if we'll see him again this weekend, I don't get him
back for four weeks," Val replied.
"You're having the platinum service done to him, aren't you?" Arnie
asked.
"That's right."
"Well you can take a peek at him before you go," Victor told her.
"Why does it take that long?" Denise asked.
"You do know what the platinum grade does, don't you?" Victor asked.
"Val does, don't you Val?" Denise just realised that it was possible
that Val didn't know.
"Well, not exactly all the gory details, but I do know that I'll be his
boss once we're home, he won't answer me back."
The men looked at each other meaningfully but didn't speak.
As Valerie didn't enquire further, the other two didn't think they ought
to ask, they just laid back and enjoyed the superb cuisine and other
things the centre had to offer for the rest of the weekend. Although
the forbidden act for a married woman had been a big turn on for
Valerie, truth be told she didn't find her escort's lovemaking that
good. 'Still' she thought, 'I'm going to have plenty of time to look
around.'
By the time they were having Sunday lunch, Denise noticed that Sally
looked as if she needed to sleep for a day to get over their stay, not
the same as she thought about Val.
"Are you going to look in on Bill?" Denise asked Val.
"I may as well have a peek, to see how he's getting on." And went to
enquire about it from the reception desk.
"We can go along now before we pack, but I've been told not to expect a
lot," she told the others and with that followed directions to the 'Blue
Treatment Rooms' as instructed.
Once in that suite of rooms they found another reception desk. The
woman there was dressed in a nurse's uniform and while her friends were
told to wait behind, she picked up a clip board and took Valerie along
two further corridors to a small room,
"I think you've been told that there's not much to see at the moment,
the real difference will be when you return in four weeks."
She pulled back a pair of curtains on a window that looked into what
looked like an intensive therapy hospital room. The person in the bed
could have been anyone. They were covered over their head, down their
body, even their ankles with bandages. They looked thick. Pipes and
wires went into and out of the bandages and a bank of monitors was the
other side of the bed.
"All your husband's surgical procedures have been completed and her
programming started as of this morning, as you know they're the same
procedures that Mrs Burton had on her husband. That's what you ordered,
you told us that you knew all that entailed. I'm sure you will find
everything has been done that you ordered and her dressings will come
off completely in seven days but programming and tattooing her make up
will not be finished for a further two weeks. She then has a week here
to make sue there are no hitches, then you can take her home."
"She?" Val queried. "With tattooed make up?"
"Yes, ass you must know, she will present from now on as a female."
"Well I must admit that I didn't realise that it would require such
drastic work," Val mumbled, looking at all the bandages, "it's going to
take some explaining to him."
"Mrs Lavender, can I just point out that you signed off and paid for all
her procedures, you were expressly told that you will have no reason to
explain anything to her. You have ordered her to be a completely
obedient maid. She will do whatever you tell her, there is no way she
will answer you back, even if she wanted to, that was something you
expressly specified."
Valerie rejoined the others, who were full of questions as to how Bill
was getting on.
"Is he compliant with the changes? I bet he's kicking up a fuss?" Denise
wanted to know.
"No, he's being no trouble at all," Val answered truthfully but didn't
offer any other qualification. "Which of you is going to bring their
husband in next?"
"I'll bring Ray in, but I want to see how Bill turns out first," Sally
told her.
"Tempted as I am, the way Paul is behaving, I think I'd prefer to just
divorce him and be done with him. No matter how he turns out I wouldn't
want to have him hanging around," Denise was always the conservative one
of the three.
The four weeks dragged by for Valerie, she found that she couldn't
concentrate on her tennis matches, or anything else. Her only real
achievement was to have their attic converted to a maid's quarters, with
a bed-sit room and an en suite bath and shower room. She could hardy
wait for the four weeks required.
In the event Denise didn't join them. She pointed out that she hadn't
availed herself of the 'extras' the spa offered, plus she was going
ahead and divorcing Paul. He had moved in with his secretary but she
was a little concerned that if she left their house unattended, he might
come back with his girl, leaving Denise to find somewhere else to live.
She pointed out to the other two that she had made the house the home
she wanted and no one was going to take it away from her, but she did
accept an invitation from Val to have a meal with her as soon as she got
back with Bill.
As before Val and Sally pulled up at the reception and the uniformed
maids came forward to take their luggage. This time though, Valerie was
given a double bedded room that had a second, very much smaller single
bedroom through a connecting door. They had been a little late arriving,
so the two women met up straight away in the dining room, to enjoy a
drink while they perused the food menu.
"When are you going to meet Bill?" Sally asked, "aren't you excited?"
"I hope it isn't until I've made the most of one of their hunks," Val
told her.
They placed their food orders and the same gorgeous maid that took
Valerie's bags, delivered their meal. She had happened to notice the
name badge she was wearing, 'Willow', which struck her as unusual.
"Willow is a pretty name," she told the girl
She just curtseyed and went off without a word but when the woman who
had taken their order came over to see if everything was in order, Val
asked her about the girl.
"That's your maid madam," she was told. "We had her sign her name the
way she always has and discovered that it looked just like Willow, so
that's what she's been called. That way there will be no confusion for
her."
As the woman walked off Val remarked to Sally that it might not be
confusing for the girl, but that she was confused about the explanation.
"Why would the girl sign Willow and it not look like it?"
"Most odd," agreed Sally, "how on earth can these girls walk in those
heels, or put up with such revealing costumes, come to that."
"It's her waist that gets me," Val added, "haven't you noticed how small
it is, with a bust her size it makes her look like a Barbie doll?"
After they'd eaten Willow brought them the 'male companion' menus. They
knew the form now and quickly made their selections. Val hadn't been
terribly impressed with Victor on her previous visit, so on Sally's
recommendation chose Arnie while Sally herself went for someone new, a
man called Henry. It wasn't long before they decided that it as time to
turn in.
Valerie wasn't amused, Arnie was quite big where it mattered but didn't
have the staying power of even Victor the last time. They had one more
try in the morning and that was slightly better, at least she managed
one orgasm. Arnie had just rolled off of her when there was a knock on
the internal door to the single bedroom.
"Come in," Val called out.
It was the maid, Willow, and she entered with two coffees and the
breakfast menu, placed them at the bedside, then retired to her room,
closing the door.
"I didn't get this service when I brought my husband in last month,"
Valerie mused out loud.
"Well you wouldn't have, would you?" Arnie commented.
"Why not?" she was a little tetchy, having had what she now admitted to
herself, was a rather disappointing night.
"Well didn't you have the platinum service? It takes four weeks for
them to do everything."
She looked at him, then the door, then him again.
"You're not telling me that the maid was my husband?" She thought he
would burst out laughing at such a suggestion. He didn't.
"I know, they're good, aren't they? I haven't seen a woman yet that's
had the platinum service and recognised their husband afterwards."
Valerie leaped out of bed and rushed to the internal door, pulled it
open and confronted Willow who was sat on her bed but jumped up and
curtseyed
"Who are you?" she demanded.
The maid opened her mouth but there was only a sort of hissing noise.
She put up one finger then took hold of a small notebook that was on a
cord from her waist. With a pencil she wrote, I AM WILLOW MADAM and
curtseyed
"How long have you been called Willow?" Val asked.
She wrote I DON'T KNOW MADAM with another curtsey.
"How long have you worked here?"
Willow just showed her the 'I don't know' again.
Valerie studded the girl's face. It was at that point she realised
perhaps there were enough common features for it to have once been Bill,
but she couldn't be sure. She returned to her bedside and picked up the
telephone, dialling '0' for reception.
"I'm sorry to trouble you, but can you tell me when my husband will be
ready to collect?" she asked.
"Mrs Lavender...let me see...here it is, according to our records she
should already be with you, her name now is Willow. I remember now, it
was funny but when we asked him to sign his name when he arrived, it
looked so much as if he'd written 'Willow' we decided that should be her
name. Of course you can change it if you want, but all her papers,
birth certificate, social security number and so on would have to be
changed again."
"No...that's OK.. Thanks."
She returned to Willow who standing by her bed.
"Willow, do you know who I am?"
She wrote MY MISTRESS then she curtseyed.
"No, I mean can you remember me from before last night?"
NO MADAM then I'M SORRY MADAM I CANNOT REMEMBER ANYTHING
"Can't you speak?"
As the maid showed her the 'no madam' again, a tear ran down her cheek.
"I'm sorry Willow, don't cry, I'll see if anything can be done about
it."
At that she was surprised to see the maid had got down on her knees and
was holding her hands in a prayer position, she was begging for
something.
PLEASE MADAM I'M NOT COMPLAINING, IF I DO I CAN'T STAND THE PUNISHMENT -
PLEASE MADAM I DON'T MIND
She scribbled the words so quickly, for a moment Val had trouble reading
them.
"It's alright Willow, I won't say anything."
She left the maid, closing the door behind her and went back to her bed.
Arnie wanted to know what she thought of the job they'd done.
"She seems terrified of punishment, do you know what they do to make her
that scared?"
"I do as it happens, when they cut their bits off, they leave connected
the sensitive parts of their penis, especially the glans, buried in
their bodies wrapped round a small radio wave receiver and ultra
powerful battery. When they send a transmission to it I'm told it's
incredibly painful, it feels like they're being split in two there with
a hot steel rod. It's far worse than flogging or any of the traditional
tortures because they can't usually pass out with the pain. Fiendish,
isn't it?"
For the first time in her life Valerie felt physically sick at what
she'd done.
"Come on, get up, I'm going home," she told him.
She phoned Sally's room, telling her that something had cropped up and
they needed to head home. Her friend wasn't overjoyed at having her
weekend cut short and insisted they have breakfast before they left. To
save time Val went to the reception desk to pay their bills.
"I hope everything is to your satisfaction madam?" the receptionist
asked.
"Yes, perfectly thank you," she just wanted to get going.
"I've taken the liberty to have your maid's uniforms and accessories
packed in your boot by a valet, here is your discipline control. We
don't usually find it needs to be used very often, it's very efficient,
but if you have cause to have a serious complaint about your maid, we'll
take her back for a week at our expense to rectify it. We've never had
a maid sent back twice."
She laughed at the last comment, then gave Val the remote control that
had chain fitted to it.
"If you just let it hang from your neck, the sight of it will keep your
maid on her toes," she laughed again.
She joined Sally at her breakfast table, being served by Willow, but
refused anything more than a another coffee. When the maid went to get
it, Sally had to ask her.
"Well, have you seen Bill?"
"Yes and so have you."
"I don't think so." Sally was puzzled.
"It's Willow, she used to be Bill."
Sally made no secret of her incredulity and it was only after they all
got into the car, Willow on the back seat, that Sally finally believed
her.
"I didn't recognise you." Val saw that her friend was trying to draw
the maid into a conversation.
"It's no good Sally, she can't talk."
"What do you mean 'can't talk'?"
"They've done something to her vocal cords, she can't talk."
"Oh my God Val, what else have they done?"
"I don't know... except she can't remember anything and I know they've
implanted some sort of torture device in her body, it's the most
horrible thing I've ever heard of."
"But aren't you pleased Val? It's exactly what you've wanted," Sally
told her. "I wish I'd brought Ray with me to have him done, now I'll
have to wait another week."
"You're going to have Ray done the same way?" Val was astonished.
"Darling, it's a dream come true, you've got the perfect situation,"
Sally was talking quietly, close to Val's ear now, "you've kept all your
man's money, you've got a free maid for life and you can go out and play
the field. I can't wait."
The effect of Sally's enthusiasm made Valerie feel that perhaps it would
work out, after all, she didn't actually need to use the discipline
device on Willow. She dropped her friend off at her home and it wasn't
long before she was showing Willow round her own. The maid had to take
two trips to carry all her uniforms up to her new room in the attic, but
Valerie couldn't help asking her.
"Can you remember this house Willow?"
She was happy to see the 'no Madam' page on his notepad presented.
"As soon as you've finished hanging up your uniforms, go down to the
kitchen and get me some lunch. Tonight I'll send out for a take away,
that will give you a chance to sort yourself out, getting to know where
things are and what ingredients we have. Tomorrow I want you to prepare
a lunch for two, I have a friend coming to visit."
The maid curtseyed and Val left her with a much improved state of mind,
now convinced that things were going to work out. She telephoned Denise
to confirm that she would come to lunch the next day.
"What's Bill like Val?" Denise asked. "What does he think of what
you've done to him?"
"Oh he doesn't mind at all, Denise, you just wait till you see him," By
now Val was becoming quite gleeful about what she'd done.
For meals Val was able to sit at her dining room table and be waited on
by a maid that seemed to hardly stop curtseying. It was heaven for her,
even though the meal itself was just a take away Chinese. Lunch had
been a chicken salad which was fine, but the dressing on it was
obviously out of a bottle. Along with that Willow didn't offer any wine
with the meals, not that she really wanted it, but it would have been
nice to have the option. With these developments, the next morning Val
thought it best to find out what the maid planned for lunch.
She wrote out a menu on her pad:
SOUP, GRILLED SALMON + SALAD, ROAST BEEF + POTATOES + BEANS + PEAS +
BEEF GRAVY, FRUIT + CREAM, CHEESE + BISCUITS.
"That looks fine Willow, what wines are you going to serve with them?"
WHITE + RED + PORT.
"Which wines?"
Willow looked confused and again showed her the same card.
"I think you ought to show me."
Willow led her out into the kitchen and, curtseying, pointed to the
small wine rack where Bill kept his cooking wines.
"Oh no dear" Val led her to a door at the back of the kitchen that
opened to reveal steps going down to their basement wine cellar. "Come
with me."
She showed the collection of wines to the maid and, just to be on the
safe side, selected three wines plus a decanter that held about half a
bottle of Port. They carried two bottles of each back to the kitchen
where Willow started to put them all in the empty spaces in the rack.
"Aren't you going to put the white wines in the 'fridge?"
Willow curtseyed and did as was suggested. Val was starting to worry.
"Do you know about wines Willow?"
She just got shown the 'no Madam' page again then made the hands
together praying action which Val could immediately translate as asking
her forgiveness.
"That's OK Willow, it's not your fault."
At just before twelve thirty the front door bell rang so Val sent Willow
to answer it, she curtseyed and showed Denise into the lounge. Having
established that they would each have a glass of Champagne, Willow
efficiently dealt with those requests, and as soon as she left the room,
Denise was full of questions.
"Come on, when am I going to see your husband?"
"Denise," Val savoured the moment, "that was him."
"What!"
"That was Bill, all dressed up in the French maid's costume."
"But she's got breasts and a fantastic figure and her legs?" she phased
it as a question.
"I know, she's incredible isn't she? He's Willow now and he'll do
whatever I tell him."
"Make up your mind Val, is he a 'he' or a 'she'?" Denise laughed at the
thought.
"Let's see shall we?" Val called for the maid to come in. "Willow, slip
down your panties and lift your skirt."
Denise made a frantic 'you shouldn't ask that' sort of mime, but it was
too late. Without the slightest hesitation or seeming embarrassment,
the maid dropped, then stepped out of the tiny g-string and lifted her
petticoats..
It was the women who were embarrassed. All that was visible from the
front was what looked just like a tiny clitoris, set a very low in his
perineum, in a smooth area of skin that extended from her stomach to
down between his legs.
"Thank you Willow, please put them back on and continue with what you
were doing," Val waited until the maid had left then continued; "I think
she's definitely more of a 'she' don't you? Mind you there's one thing
I wouldn't use" she went on to describe the means she had to punish him.
"Have you really done that to Bill?" Denise asked. "This isn't some
sort of joke?"
"Of course it's him Denise," Val sensed a certain degree of disapproval,
"Sally's going to take Ray there next weekend, she thinks it's great."
Denise elected to say no more. Whatever she said, she decided, would
only make Val entrench her position deeper, but she privately decided
that it was so appalling she wouldn't even have done it to her
adulterous husband, let alone a good man like Bill.
The meal went ahead under rather strained circumstances and was not a
patch on the food either of them had in the past when Bill was cooking,
but neither said a word about it. It wasn't long after they'd finished
that Denise said that she didn't like her house being empty for any
length of time, knowing her errant husband might try to get back in.
She didn't mention that she'd already got an injunction preventing him
doing just that. The real reason was that she couldn't keep having to
face poor Bill any longer.
Bedtime saw Val have another disappointment. Bill had been a magician
with his tongue and fingers, not just his penis which she now had to
admit to herself was bigger and certainly had more stamina than either
of the so called 'hunks' she had tried in the last month. Willow did
exactly as she was told, but had none of the expertise or imagination of
Bill, and it was no use trying to get her to remember what she did
before her change. All that was a foreign country.
The next morning as she lay in bed, Valerie was starting to face up to
some facts. She had to find a good male replacement for Willow in bed
and she had to think about employing a cook for at least some nights of
the week and certainly if she was entertaining. In spite of the claims
made about the transformation procedure, the only things her new maid
was good for was cleaning and as a waitress. She started to draft a
letter of complaint in her head then she remembered what they had said
about having the maid back and punishing her. Even in her discontented
and frustrated mood, she couldn't face being responsible for that. She
realised that Willow was only doing what she was told.
After having another mediocre breakfast she told Willow that she was
going out, probably for all day and that after she'd tidied the house
she could watch television or read a book from their library and just
sort out her own meals. She went to their golf club and by eleven
thirty was ensconced at the bar. By twelve more members were about,
including Sally and Ray who came in with another couple who they had
just played a round with.
"Hi," Ray greeted her, "poor you, have you had any news of Bill yet?"
For the first time since she had reported Bill missing, she actually
felt a bit sad that he wasn't there.
"None at all Ray," she replied, "He seems to have just disappeared into
thin air."
"Poor you." Ray repeated the sympathy while Sally was obviously having
trouble keeping a neutral face.
Of the couple with them, the woman took her leave after the first drink
and the man was introduced to Val as being James Parsons, a newcomer to
the area. Upon enquiry she was told that his woman partner wasn't
connected to him, just someone that made up the foursome game. Val
liked the ruggedly handsome man and during the course of the lunch the
four had together, it was immediately clear that he wouldn't object to a
liaison.
After lunch Sally reminded Ray that he'd told her that he needed to go
into the office that afternoon and then said that she was going
shopping. That left the field open for Val and James and they took full
advantage. It wasn't long before they were back at Val's house where
she had Willow bring them a bottle of Champagne and two glasses to the
bedroom. There they relaxed semi-dressed, and she thought that at last
she'd hit the jackpot. He had her in fits of laughter with his jokes
and when he told her a limerick;
"There was a young lady from Brighton
Whose boyfriend said 'you're a tight'un',
She said 'you're a poor sole
You're in the wrong hole
There's plenty of room in the right'un'."
She shrieked so loudly that Willow came back to see if she was in some
sort of trouble.
"It's alright Willow," she explained, "Mr Parsons was telling me a
Limerick."
The maid looked puzzled so James explained to her.
"You've heard of Limericks, you know, rhyming stories in five lines,"
she still looked as if she didn't understand, so he continued,
"something like;
"There was a young plumber from Lea
Who was plumbing his girl by the sea,
She said 'stop your plumbing
I think someone's coming'
He told her 'don't worry, it's me'.
Val shrieked again, but there was no response at all from Willow, so she
just dismissed the maid, but worried that perhaps her brain was starting
to get some sort of memory back and her puzzlement was because she
didn't understand why someone was in bed with his wife. However it
didn't stop her undressing them both and getting down to some serious
lovemaking.
The trouble was that Val had one climax, at the same time as James, but
instead of working her up for round two, as Bill would have done, he
turned over and went to sleep until it was time for them to get up and
go out for dinner.
* * * * *
While this was going on, Ray's secretary called his internal phone to
say that a woman had walked into their building to see him but wouldn't
give her name. He wasn't in the habit of seeing strange women, but this
intrigued him so he asked that she be sent up. He was caught by
surprise when Denise walked into his office.
"How come the cloak and dagger Denise?" he asked.
"I'm sorry Ray, but it's most important that neither Sally or Valerie
Lavender knows that I've come to see you," she saw his expression. "No
I'm not here to seduce you, I need to warn you about something. Are you
going to a health spa with your wife next weekend?"
"Well, yes, she did mention it," He was even more puzzled.
"You mustn't go. It's a trick to do something absolutely horrible to
you."
She went on to describe what had happened to Bill Lavender. Including
the punishment implant and his inability to speak.
"Denise, I'm sorry but I don't see why Val would do something like that
to her husband and I don't believe Sally would do it to me," he tried
not to give the impression that he thought she had gone mad.
"I know it's difficult to believe," she persisted, "but if you don't
believe me, go to Bill's place an see Valerie's new maid. Try to ignore
how incredibly sexy she looks and imagine Bill's face with some cosmetic
surgery. He's had his bits cut off and got big breasts and wears the
most obscene clothes I've ever seen on a maid, but it's him."
"You really believe this?" Ray asked.
"Listen to me Ray, it's too late for poor Bill but you have to protect
yourself. He's now called Willow and the reason is that they got him to
sign his name, and William, the way he wrote it looks like Willow. I
didn't understand at the time but I've done some research and discovered
that if someone loses their memory they often retain a certain amount of
what they call auto-function. If someone tells them to sign their name,
they sign it automatically, without consciously thinking about it, so it
would look like Bill signed Willow when his brain signed William."
"Denise, all this is fantastic, people can't really do that, change them
so completely."
"Alright Ray, I wasn't going to tell you this, but when I went with Val
and your wife I couldn't understand why the spa was so expensive. The
reason is that wives go there, apart from having their husbands
butchered, is to spend the time with professional men, lovers. Both of
them had one when I was there, and no I didn't before you ask, and they
had other men on Friday night when they picked up Willow. I'm sorry."
Ray sat back in silence and was thoughtful for a while. Denise waited.
"You're certain about all of this?" After a long silence it almost made
Denise jump when he spoke.
"One hundred percent," Denise didn't know what else to say to convince
him of the importance of what she was saying.
"In that case would you be prepared to repeat it to a friend of mine?"
he asked.
Once it was established that she would, he arranged a meeting the
following day, not in his office, as she suspected his wife regularly
spoke to his secretary and he didn't want Denise's description getting
back to her.
Denise wondered if she'd done the right thing, at least as far as her
safety was concerned, people who could do the things they did to their
victims, she was sure wouldn't hesitate to make her 'disappear' if they
found out. In spite of this she knew she had to go ahead and see it
through. She wouldn't be able to live with herself otherwise.
Still with a worry over her safety, the next day she met up with Ray
outside a prestigious office in the city centre. He took her in and
they were shown up to his Solicitor's office where she was introduced to
the lawyer Charles Schoville, who mentioned that he knew Bill well, as
he had also acted for him on a number of occasions.
"Ray, I hope you don't mind but I put your story to a policeman I know
and he asked to be present, do either of you mind?" Upon receiving
their assent he buzzed his secretary and two people that Denise had
noticed waiting in the outer office came in and introduced themselves.
"Good afternoon, my name it Detective Superintendent Jason Wilkes and
this lady is Detective Sergeant Tanya Jones. I hope you don't mind but
we are interested in the particular country club that was mentioned,
would you tell us what you know about it?"
Denise started at the beginning and told them what had happened to Bill
and that she had to warn Ray that the same thing was arranged to happen
to him. When she had finished, the solicitor asked her if she was
certain that she'd come to the correct conclusion, that Willow used to
be Bill.
"I'd like to contribute to that Charles," the policeman interjected.
"For some time we've been hearing rumours of this establishment, but up
to now we couldn't even find out where it was, far less get the evidence
to prove anything. So the answer is that I think it's most unlikely
that Denise is mistaken."
"What are we to do about it?" Charles asked.
Before the Detective could answer, Ray spoke;
"Surely the answer to getting evidence is for me to go with my wife as
arranged?"
"I'm sorry Sir, but we couldn't put you at risk," the detective said
immediately.
"Superintendent, Bill was a really good friend to me and even if he
can't be brought back to the world as Bill, I want you to catch the
bastards that did this to him. I'm going to go and I don't see how you
could stop me."
"I know that they won't let anyone near that hasn't had a personal
recommendation, Valerie got hers by knowing a woman called May Burton,"
Denise had searched her memory and was able to give them the name. "I
think she belongs to the gym where Valerie works out."
"It seems to me that you have the perfect opportunity to gather evidence
if I go along with my wife's scheme," Ray told them.
It was with considerable reluctance that eventually it was agreed that
the police would cooperate with Ray on his mission. Then the police had
another complication.
"I'm going in as well," Denise stated, so quietly that the lawyer asked
her to repeat what she'd just said.
"I started this hare running," she told them, "I can't let Ray go in on
his own and I'm the only person that can back him up."
There were multiple objections from all the others there, but she was
adamant that she was going to go. Eventually it was arranged that they
would meet up again on the Friday morning to provide them both with
covert surveillance equipment and brief them on the plans they would
formulate.
Friday seemed an age coming for both Sally and Ray, but obviously they
had very different expectations of it. The meeting between Ray, Denise
and their co-conspirators went well and they each had tiny video and
audio transmitters fitted to their clothing and each had a minute
speaker bud fitted to the inside of one of their ears so that they could
have any instructions sent to them.
Just to be on the safe side Sally's handbag was swapped with a similar
one; the police technician explained.
"If there is any sort of interference with the reception of the signal
outside the property, there is a recorder in here that will act as a
back up to both sets of bugs."
As Valerie already had Willow to look after her, Sally was only too
pleased that Denise had decided to come along that evening, as otherwise
she would have been there by herself while Ray was being 'treated'. She
and Ray arranged to pick her up when they set off. Sally turned and
winked at Denise when Ray kept asking her to explain what happened at
the spa.
"We all have a good rest and enjoy the various treatments," she told
him, "I'm not going to tell you everything, it would spoil the
surprise."
Denise was amazed that Sally could have her husband treated that way,
she wondered if she had ever loved him.
When they arrived Ray was taken off by the woman called Jackie, the same
one that had led poor Bill to his doom. This time though, thanks to her
ear bud, Denise was able to hear the things that were going on around
him. She realised that a dangerous time for him would come quickly,
they were bound to put him out, they wouldn't want an unauthorised male
wondering round the building.
Then she heard Ray's voice.
"This looks like and operating room, does the number 117 on the door
have any significance?" he asked, letting everyone know the room number
he was in.
"We always give our new customers a short medical when they arrive," and
unknown voice of a woman told him.
As she and Sally were shown up to their rooms, Denise was able to follow
Ray's progress. He was attempting to give a running commentary.
"You want me to take everything off?" then suddenly, more urgently:
"What are you injecting me with, I didn't wan...."
Now alone in her room, Denise tried to speak to the police but there was
no answer. Realising that there might be a signal jammer, the way the
technician had spoken about, she used her mobile phone to call the
Detective Superintendent's number that she had under just 'Jason' on
speed dial. She didn't have a signal.
At this point she was close to panic, but she realised she would have to
think quickly if Ray wasn't to suffer the same fate as Bill. It would
certainly take too long to leave the spa to make personal contact and
she guessed that calls on her room's land line would be monitored. She
looked round.
On the door was a notice to say that if she smoked it would only be
allowed in her room and then the ventilator had to be turned on. She
hadn't paid any attention because she didn't smoke, but she saw the fire
detector at the same moment she remembered from when she exchanged
handbags, that she still had one of her errant husband's lighters in her
bag.
She emptied all the miniature spirit and liqueur bottles onto her bed,
added a newspaper and toilet rolls from the bathroom and set the whole
lot on fire. Once it was well ablaze, she opened her door to aid
ventilation, causing the smoke alarm in both her room and the corridor
to go off. She joined quite a crowd of women all making their way back
down the corridor and thence to the reception area. By the time she got
there a general panic had broken out, women were running everywhere and
at that point she could see a large number of men, most in police
uniforms and some armed, charging towards the entrance.
"Thank God you're safe," it was Sally who grabbed her. "Do you know
where the fire is?"
Before she had time to answer, Denise recognised the D.S. running in.
"He's been knocked out Jason, room blue 117," she told him. "The fire's
only in 142."
Half a dozen men ran past her carrying fire extinguishers, others moved
everyone out to the car park for safety's sake. The spa was set in
extensive grounds, surrounded by a high, broken glass topped wall with
only one entrance and that was guarded by more police so no one was
going to escape.
They were only out there for ten or fifteen minutes, then everyone was
herded back to the large dining room where policewomen were marshalling
them into two groups, visitors and staff. The offices behind the
reception desk were quickly filled with plain clothes police, who were
collating records that were kept in a multitude of filing cabinets and
P.C.s.
Several times Sally asked Denise what she thought was going on. Her
questions were deflected until Jason came back and Denise made the
introductions.
"Sally Simms, I am arresting you for conspiracy to commit grievous
bodily harm to your husband, Raymond Simms," he went on to caution her.
"I don't understand," Sally looked at her friend, then recognised
Charles, the lawyer that sometimes she, but more frequently Ray, used
for business.
He handed her some papers and had her sign for them.
"To save you going right through them Sally," he explained, "it's a
petition for divorce from Ray, with an injunction preventing you from
being within five hundred feet of him, which means you can't go home,
you can also expect a civil damages suit to follow."
He placed an arm round Denise's shoulder and guided her out to his car,
leaving a very shocked Sally behind.
"I think you ought to come back with me, I don't think Sally will be
very good company. Jason came away from the m?l?e to find time to thank
Denise for her quick thinking once they realised that there was some
sort of device to stop signals coming from the spa buildings. They only
allowed calls through their switchboard, presumably so they could
control them.
He told her that they would take statements from them the next day, once
they were all back home.
"What about Ray, have you heard how he is?" she asked as a technician
swapped back her handbags, giving her own back and taking theirs with
the recorder inside.
"Yes, they've taken him to hospital as a precaution, we'll go there
first, we might be able to collect him," the solicitor told her.
After being brought round by paramedics, he was given the all clear to
go home, but only if he had someone to stay the night with him. Denise
immediately volunteered and it wasn't long before the three of them were
headed back, away from the vicinity of the spa.
"There's also going to be a problem of what to do with Bill," Charles
told them. "The police have arrested Valerie and at the same time they
had to take Willow in as well, they didn't think he was safe to be left
on his own."
"Could we go via the police station, then he could come along with us?
We'll look after him until we can get him professional help," Ray
suggested.
"If you can put him up in your place, Ray," the solicitor told him,
"I'll get an injunction against Valerie to keep her away on grounds of
his safety, it won't be difficult under the circumstances."
Once they got back to their local police station they learned about the
raid on Valerie's house, which went ahead once the spa was being
overrun. She was arrested and photographs taken of a distraught Maid,
Willow, upset when they tried to get a statement from him. Because of
his state of mind, the police inspector decided he should be taken back
to the station until they found something to do with him. They arranged
an appointment at the county hospital the next morning and it looked as
if he would have to spend the night in the police station cells, until
the three got back from the spa, the police were only too pleased to
pass the responsibility of him over to them.
It was well after midnight before Ray and Denise had got Willow settled
in his bedroom at Ray's house. They had a taste of how difficult it was
going to be to get Bill's mind back into Willow's body. He was
completely thrown by the course of events, he knew he should be serving
his betters, but they didn't want it and that just confused him.
Although Ray had been told all about Willow, he was truly shocked when
confronted by his former friend. There was absolutely no trace of the
Bill he knew, just a frightened, silent young woman was presented to
him. He was even more thrown when he realised that, but for Denise's
intervention, his wife would have him made the same.
Denise sorted out some of her clothes to give Willow to wear to hospital
the next morning, rather than wander around in his nearly obscene
uniform. The first appointment was to examine the physical changes that
he'd had to endure and for that reason he had to see three different
specialists, one each for a gender reassignment, an ear, nose, throat
consultant, and a plastic surgeon. That took until after lunch, when
all three reports were sent to a psychiatrist, Doctor Irene Phillips,
who spoke to him for a little over two hours. It was agreed that he
would see the doctor every day for the foreseeable future to try to
recover his memories. There were only two hopes on the horizon shown by
the reports. One was that the sensitive material left to torment him
with through the remote control, was sufficient to provide him with a
functioning vagina should he decide to progress that way. The other was
that his vocal cords hadn't been surgically removed or cut, rather they
had been chemically frozen, so there was just a chance they could be
restored.
While Willow was at the hospital Denise and Ray went to the police
station to complete their formal statements. There they learned that
the raid on the spa had been a complete success with over a hundred
arrests for serious offences carried out overnight as well. The police
had recovered a complete list of all the men that had been operated on
and their spouses accounted for a significant proportion of those
charged and included May Burton, the friend of Bill's wife, Valerie.
Further good news was that the entire operation was owned by a woman who
was a billionaire, so the victims could go after her for compensation,
as well as their own wives. They also learned that Valerie and Sally
had gone to stay with Valerie's sister, some twenty miles away.
As Willow had no relatives who could take responsibility for him, and
with their agreement, Doctor Irene arranged through the solicitor,
Charles, and the hospital's legal department, for Denise and Ray to act
as his guardians, through a power of attorney, until such time as he was
able to understand what was going on. It was decided that his recovery
would be helped if he could stay with them both, as they were, in Ray's
house. Because there were no signs of unusual hormones, or any other
treatment showing in his blood tests, they would hold back on any
operations until, hopefully, he could decide for himself what he wanted
to do. The only pressing things they were investigating were the
removal of his shock device and a way to allow him to speak again.
When they arrived home that evening, Willow wrote several questions down
in an attempt to understand what was going on. The first of which was
asking why he wasn't allowed to wear his uniform and serve them the way
he knew he should. This was his main problem and was visibly very upset
that, firstly his mistress wasn't coming back and in default of serving
her, why he couldn't work for them as their maid.
They did their best to calm him and compromised by all helping with the
evening meal but letting Willow lay the table and serve the food,
although they insisted that he ate with them.
That was how things went, without any significant developments for the
following three weeks The only exception was a small operation to
removed the remote implant from his body. Doctor Irene Phillips was
able to report a little progress, especially pleasing as she didn't want
the shock of everything that had happened to him to be remembered too
quickly. She reinforced a strength in him that would enable him to cope
with the enormity of what had been done to his body.
In the meantime, rather inevitably, Denise and Ray became very close,
even though they wouldn't admit it, even to themselves. On the
instructions of Doctor Irene, Willow was allowed to resume duties, at
least part of the time as a maid in his uniform, but they insisted that
he didn't curtsey and called them both by their given names. They both
felt awkward about this and it was in part the reason for them not
pursuing their emotions towards each other. Neither of them felt able
to gain happiness while Willow was so deprived.
By the end of the month Denise's divorce from her estranged husband
Paul, was finalised. It had happened quickly because she had settled
for their house and one third of their other assets, still a substantial
fund, but Paul had been worried that she would go for more and then
alimony, which she decided she didn't want or need. She was just
pleased to be rid of him.
Not long after this the first of the criminal trials of the people
associated with the spa were due to start. These were of the staff and
owners in the first instant and at the last moment some of them changed
their pleas to guilty, the rest followed like toppling dominoes. Many
of the staff were the wives of the maids that worked there, their own
husbands were treated like slaves and so they faced additional charges.
Only the Chief Superintendent, Denise and Ray were called, the latter
two by code initials only, to protect their identities. They appeared
to explain how the spa operated and how they were brought down, then
medical reports on Willow and two other victims were submitted as
samples for the judge to consider. He was asked to take a total of
eighty seven victims treated the same as Willow and a further nineteen
with lesser injuries into account.
Sentencing of so many took three days and ranged from two years for the
lesser staff members, to twenty eight years for the senior people.
After this came the trials of the mostly wives, but a couple of mothers
and one sister, who without exception also pleaded guilty. They had
very little choice after the full impact of their conspiracies were
known. They all got terms from five to eighteen years, the only
exception being Sally, as Ray hadn't actually had the procedure done on
him, unjust as it may seem, she only got three years.
A huge compensation fund was set up from the assets of the spa and its
owners, and in each case the women of the men 'treated' all had the
majority of their assets handed to those men. Ray was awarded the house
and ninety percent of their other assets. Willow, through his guardians,
was also given a divorce and Valerie was only allowed enough money for
the advance payment on a rented flat for when she came out after her
eight years in prison.
Willow had a long treatment on his voice which eventually paid off, as
did recovering Bill's memories. One day, when Ray had been at work and
Denise out visiting a family member, they came home to be greeted by
their maid in uniform, something he hadn't worn for weeks.
They were shown into their dining room, where he had prepared a four
course meal for them. When they saw that the table was laid formally
for only two, they were worried that he'd had a relapse. He got them
seated then poured two glasses of Champagne.
"This is to thank you for everything you've done for me," Willow said.
They both were over the moon that he could speak again and what's more,
cooked them a meal to the same standard as Bill was used to. They said
nothing about the pitch of his voice, which was distinctly feminine.
"I've decided on several things," he told them. " As you know I've had
over two hundred hours of sessions with Doctor Irene and am taking the
obvious course open to me. I'm going to have full reassignment surgery,
I've still got the make up to contend with and if I want any form of sex
life, plus because of the pitch of my voice, it's the only course open.
Now I have to ask you yet another favour, would you allow me to continue
to work for you? I still find it makes me far less worried about
things, so even my Doctor thinks it would be best for me for at least a
while."
They both rapidly agreed.
"Mind you, there is a condition," they looked at him, a little
surprised. "for God's sake Ray, when are you going to take this woman
to bed? It's obvious you're both crazy about each other, now do
something about it."
They did, that night.
* * * * *
Willow kept his name, he agreed that it was both pretty and unusual, and
it wasn't long before he had his surgery and became a woman. She had
her very large bust reduced from something like a triple 'F' to 'D' size
and stayed with Denise and Ray for some three years, although they
insisted that she ate with them.
She was maid of honour at their wedding where she met up with a
colleague of Ray's solicitor, a Jenny Holmes. Jenny knew about Willow's
past and wasn't worried about it, in fact she pointed out that if she'd
still been a man, she wouldn't have been interested. Their marriage
ended the career of Willow the maid and they moved into a cottage close
enough that they could keep up their old friendships.
Actually the maid came out of retirement the following Christmas, when
they had Ray and Denise, and Charles Schoville and his wife June over
for a meal, giving out presents in a uniform that was red with a white
fur trim.
The following year they adopted a baby boy, soon followed by a sister
for him. Even Willow had to agree that life had taken a satisfying
turn, even after all the traumas.