The Beast
This is a story I have been working on for a while now. It startedout as a fantasy/role play idea and took on a life of its own. It isstill very rough, and is ONLY the first draft. What I would ask of A/allis to give me feedback on this, tell me what Y/you like and dislike and whatshould be changed, as I can't find an editor on my normal publishing site thatwill touch this story. PLEASE, if you read this, at least tell me Y/youread it and if Y/you liked it, hated it, etc. "Damn it... I need...