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HyperGraphia Goes To War
by Laika Pupkino
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[While skipping down to the end and reading these reviews in
chronological order might be a sensible thing to do in the comments
section of an actual story site, this was meant to be read starting from
the top. The title of the story that is being reviewed by these different
commenters (when they manage to stay on the topic) is "!!!!!"
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Online story reviews for: !!!!! by ULTIMA THULE
(Newest reviews are at the top of the page)
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Reviewed by Ambivalent on 04/22/2023
They finally got the power and the web going again, and would you believe
the first thing I did was log on to the HyperGraphia fiction site? With
the whole planet under siege and half my house's roof gone this is
probably the last thing I should be doing now, but it has just been too
long!
I just read Ultima Thule's weird little story and--SHIT i wanted to revew
this but thinkihave more pressing concerns now. This is very bad!
fingers like too heavy onm keyboard-----ok this is something!-----stuff
sliding---there go the bookshelfs! This a new one theyre doing/// This
one you don't run from- i mean HOW?! Is everywhere or just here? Hit
"send" + I hope someone left somwhere to read it THIS IS GOODBYE!
GRavity sems to be going sidew
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Reviewed by East Bay tg on 4/10/2023
Don't just sit there with your clitty in your hand, this is no time to be
reading smut! There are 1000 agencies calling for volunteers, the Higher
Ground Project alone needs 500,000. Keep Fighting Keep Believing, VM
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Reviewed by Sissy Boi Slave Chastity on 4/09/2023
!!!!! is such a HOT story! I am so horny, I wish I could cum, but
Mistress won't let me and she would know. She always knows. I said we
should stop this game with all that is going on the war and everything
but she said no. She said "her property forever" means FOREVER, and NO
EXCUSES.... Sometimes I hate her! There I said it. I am in big trouble
now but I don't care
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Reviewed by Laika on 4/07/2023
I'm so sorry for the loss of your entire family Pinky but I have to
disagree. I think now more than ever we need stories like !!!!!, that are
just for fun, and that you call "trivial"; a story that if you look
deeper really does have something meaningful to say; expressing a woman's
(either female by virtue of genetics or of one's spiritual essence) point
of view, our hopes and dreams, our (not-perfect but I think well
demonstrated) nurturing spirit. Qualities that if these humorless stinger
slug "warrior truemales" were in tune with, we wouldn't be in this mess!
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Review by Laika on 4/07/2023
Hi. Me again. I just realised that my last review might be seen as an
endorsement of pacifism. It's not. All nine billion of us are soldiers
now, in bad-ass mode because we HAVE to be...
But let's not abandon our better qualities, or view them as some weakness
that the absence of would have made us more able to deal with this
threat. Would such a world have been as worth protecting? Ultima's story,
written before all this started (has it really only been 3 months?) is a
fine testament to these wonderfully human traits. This fight for survival
does not invalidate your struggle for body/soul integrity, Pinks...
It's a corny inelegant slogan, but KFKB! -Laika.
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Reviewed by Pinky on 4/01/2023
This story might have been clever back when you wrote it Ultima, but now
it just seems trivial and irrelevant, a waste of the talent you were
showing before you went all neo-dada on us. I'm sure you feel a need to
break new ground, but without a reason for it all this stylistic
virtuosity is pointless. But then a lot of what we thought was important
seems self indulgent now. Even my "problem", which consumed so much of my
thinking for most of my life- I can't say it was nothing, but in
retrospect I should of been more grateful for what I did have. Maybe my
body and my role in society were not right for how I felt inside but we
had food, water, shelter. You could look up and see the sun, not this
awful Evershroud. And maybe my family didn't understand me perfectly but
I realize now they definitely loved me. On Boom Boom Day we only had the
one survival pod---bought just after the atomic nightmare of the
Indi/Paki War---and my dad made sure I got it. He didn't even mention how
I was dressed (the strike hit at EXACTLY the worst time- and despite the
horror and chaos of what was going on I couldn't help note the parallels
to your wonderful story GOING DOWN ON THE TITANIC!) except to say, "I'm
proud of you, whatever the hell you are!" right as he sealed the hatch.
That was the last I saw of any of them.
It seems now I won't be getting the viral re-gendering I was saving for
but them's the breaks. In the bloody scope of history you can't say we in
the West didn't have it amazingly good for a while. We all have some
quick growing up to do! Sorry to bag on yer story Ultima, but I know
you'll see the truth in this. From what you said on 3/13, I suspect your
future efforts will reflect a more mature outlook, an embrace of values
and meaning. Keep fighting, keep believing + love to all. Ms. Pinky,
Resistance Cell #229
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Reviewed by Mr. Spam on 3/26/2023
I found !!!!! almost as confusing as all the conflicting media accounts
of how this war is going. It looks like what my old IBM printer spews
out when it's having a fit! (BTW Loretta, I wouldn't go around blabbing
about your cousin and what it is he does. The slugs may not have ears,
but they hear.)
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Reviewed by Loretta S on 3/19/2023
Sad that we won't have any more of your great stories Ultima but anyone
who cares about the future of our species will understand. We all have to
pull together now and make sacrifices (I don't mean the stingerslug
kind!). Hopefully this will all be over soon. I know it is almost
incomprehensible to you Yanks that this could be happening, but our
little isle has faced similar threats before, like when the Luftwaffe was
raining death down on London and the whole German army seemed right at
our doorstep. That had seemed like the end of everything too, but our
ancestors survived. And my cousin who works at the Ministry assures me
they are hard at work on new ways to win this! I enjoyed our chats at
Helsinki Gendercon 2015 and hope to see you again at the next one,
whenever. As Vera Lynne sang 75 years ago:
"We'll meet again/ Don't know how, don't know when..."
huggles, Loretta
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Reviewed by hoser on 3/15/2023
I'm glad you quit writing Utlima coz you SUCK! You ALL suck! i woldent
even be reading this pevertist garbage exept the stupid curfew. Curfews
SUCK! But at least this war means Mr. Spam is buzy and not deleting my
coments
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Reviewed by ULTIMA THULE on 3/13/2023
I'm sorry, but this will be my last story on HG for the duration of these
unpleasantries. When I'm not at the munitions plant making salt bombs
for the Terran Air Force I'm sitting a neighbor's kids while she works
her shift, or in my garden (You all better start one now! These current
shortages are just a taste of things to come!). I hereby open all my
universes to anyone who wants to play with them. Vira-Lee, if you want to
see Ellie Ness get out of her predicament, write it! Keep Fighting, Keep
Believing! ---Ultima
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Reviewed by T 3/01/2023
Yes Selena (who commented back on 2/18) is dumb, beneath contempt, a real
squishwife......and basically NOT WORTH TALKING ABOUT!!! There are
chatrooms for this kind of discussion, why don't we try to stick to the
topic of this story, or at least of TG literature. Of the legendary
Ultima Thule and the 4000 kb of escapist fun she has gifted us with...
Anything new in the works, Sis? I'd love for you to do more stories about
Ellie Ness and the Unpassables. You should at least to resolve that Part
IX ending where you left her heading for Niagra Falls in that barrel
after One Eyed Jack the whiskey runner got her. Not to be a nag, but an
old fashion cliff-hanger like this carries an implicit promise to
continue.
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Reviewed by TV eye on 2/22/2023
The slugs being stinky + slimy is hardly the worst of it! Sure they can
be charming, I've been to the same Star City hangouts as Selena, and even
let one buy me a drink once. And yes the monorails and such run on time
in the areas they control. But if they are so "nice" then why are so many
transsexuals disappearing? Selena you are sad and deluded and I sure hope
what I hear isn't true! Laying paralysed while their eggs hatch inside
you and start to feed is an infinitely worse fate than anything the
resistance might dream up for you. So just watch your back kid!
But about Miss Thule's story. I really enjoyed it, but not as much as the
one that was all profanities. That one was about demons, right? K.F.K.B.!
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Reviewed by [email protected] on 2/22/2023
I'm afraid I cannot comment on the story EXCLAMATIONS. While I've been
able to access the reviews for it, I have been trying all week and the
story itself won't come up on my PC.....But I've been following your
spirited discussion, and I am afraid the rumors are true. MTF
transsexuals are the closest thing to those on the slug homeworld who by
biology and tradition are consigned to this gruesome fate (flesh is
flesh, but they seem rigidly bound by custom). While it is true that they
do have five distinct sexes; only two of these---warrior truemales and
coordinator truemales---have anything resembling rights. Although since
they don't have a centralized brain, "rights" might be a far too
anthropocentric label for their relative autonomy. These are the types
you see here on the surface, the big grey warriors and the smaller plum
colored coordinators. This "love" Selena speaks of is just their knack
for feeding your own emotions back to you- which comes in handy during
the subduing of their unwilling hatcheries, the second-molt
pseudofemales. (Please note: All this clumsy and rather sexist
nomenclature was adopted over my protests!). It was necessary to bring
truefemales along, as neither truemale type can digest food on their own.
They need to return to the clusterships to be fed by trophallaxis. From
what we can tell the attack fleet had made no provisions for breeding,
and it is only because they have sustained far worse casualties than
they'd ever expected that they started these unspeakable abductions. I
hope those of you who are at risk can find some small consolation in
this.
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Reviewed by TV Eye on 2/16/2023
You traitor Selena! How could you!? They don't even have skeletons and
they stink like something died! You and your quisling kind are all a
bunch of filthy Sluggo Sluts and we will hang you from the nearest
lamppost!
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Reviewed by SELENA MOON on 2/14/2023
Stinger Slugs are an insulting name that shows ignorants and speciesism.
They want to be called Xaarxaxians and cand't be any worse than our so-
call "leaders" making such a mess of Earth history. I look up and see
their clusterships in orbit and what I feel is hope. As you know Star
City has "fallen" but corntray to all the propagnanda things are way
better here. The Helper Troops keep order and I feel safe going out
nights for the first time now. Because their dividing into five sexes
they're very TG friendly since we are like "back home" to them. And with
those stingers they sure know how to show a girl a good time! When Brad
(I can't pronounce his real name) look at me with his big purpel eye I
know he doesn't care I'm a pre-op or only a stupid human- which I hope
the corodinaters let him cure this, because that is just one thing his
race can do! Then I will be one too like him, all soft shiny and haveing
wings, more beautiful then any human lady. See my story HEART'S CONQUEROR
posted 2/13 and wish you were me!
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Reviewed by Kat on 2/13/2023
Thank you for this most charming story, Ultima. I needed it! I just made
the mistake of reading the most revolting fantasy (at least I hope its a
fantasy) of a t-girl in love with and having sex with one of the
stingerslugs. HyperGraphia has finally gone completely to the dogs if
they print sick crap like that! So though I wouldve anyway I REALLY
appreciated your cute and fun and actully pretty moving little story.
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Reviewed by ULTIMA THULE on 2/07/2023
Thank you both for your inquires, and I want to thank EVERYBODY for the
surprisingly positive response to a story that I wasn't at all sure
about.
TO CANDICE: Yes, I'm o.k., so far. Our area got off light.......But I may
not be writing anything for a while. I am moving to the country after
this last strike.
TO TOYTALK: No.... No government agent ever came and talked to me about
!!!!! or anything else. I think an old nemesis (Yes I know you are
reading this, and I want to remind you that now is not a good time to be
accumulating bad karma!) is spreading these rumors in the chat rooms.
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Reviewed by ToYTaLk on 1/30/2023
I usually don't read d ones w/out lotsa beau-T-ful gross D-grading sex
innem but !!!!! wuz pre-T dad good.....I hear u got in trouble 4 riting
this, that some-1 from Global Security Infomini came + ran a full
mindscan on u, saying ur story wuz a secret message 2 d stingerslugs. Cuz
it duz kinda look like 1.
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Reviewed by CANDICE on 1/27/2023
With the meteor strikes I didn't finish !!!!! for almost two weeks. When
I finally got to it, it was worth the wait. That ending! Just what I
needed after our town's mass funeral. Thank you darling, I hope you are
o.k...
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Reviewed by HOSER on 1/27/2023
meteors SUCK!!!
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Reviewed by Yikes! on 1/23/2023
I guess we're at war now. Suddenly your title seems very prophetic.
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Reviewed by The Cheese Danish Girl on 1/21/2023
I don't get it. This is a story? A monkey could write this! And your
"historic" pieces just seem like an excuse for old movie cliches. The
only work of yours I really liked was THE CHICKEN OR THE EGG- where that
time traveller accidentally winds up both mothering and fathering
hiz/hurself. The hermaphroditic culture of hiz/hur planet was ingenious,
you have a real gift for science fiction! I'd love to see you do more SF,
maybe one about these mysterious objects out past Mars that are heading
our way.
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Reviewed by MANDATORY, ALIAS OK on 1/19/2023
Re: !!!!!
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Reviewed by LAIKA on 1/18/2023
I wouldn't change a thing. You'll catch plenty flack for this but
remember: The ones proclaiming "this isn't music, it's noise!" or "this
cubist crap isn't art" always look like moldy old jerks a few years down
the road. Keep pushing the limits Ultima. As we said in my day- YOU ROCK!
-Spacepuppy
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Reviewed by HOSER on 1/18/2023
I think you both suck and this storey suck and is stupid and Hypergrapha
sucks and is sick and your all sick and the dumb joke little picture
sucks and I only look at these stupid sucky pussy storeys to see how bad
they suck!!
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Reviewed by Annabelle Lee 1/17/2023
Wowie this is good! And I love the way it made like a vortex as it went
down the page.......Although I did think you used a few too many smileys,
but maybe that's just me. I tend to be neo-goth
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Reviewed by BLISS on 1/17/2023
I never dreamed someone could write an entire story using only emoticons
but this really worked. Please please please tell me there will be a Part
Two!
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