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I always told myself Chad today you are going to meet that perfect girl and she going to love you for the rest of you're life. You see I am already 22 living in the great city of Philadelphia by myself. Like most kids my age I don't really know what I am going to do once I finish college. For now I spend my days with my two best friends in the world. Other times im at work or on my laptop chatting to random people online. Yeah I really have no life if I'm not with my friends. To be honest facebook became my second home. Until my life change drastically for the better or maybe more for the worse. I really don't know where to start. Hell i'm not even sure if I believe my own story, but this is my story on how I met the perfect dream girl.

It all started a while back in school. There was this rumor going around on how if you went on to this web site at exactly at 12:00 you will find true love. “True love nows thats interesting.”
“Who are you talking to Chad?”
Oh god theirs only one person I know with a voice louder then a opera singer. My best friend Stacey.

“No one!”I barked. Embarrassed by my bad habbit of talking to myself I said, “What no! I was reading a post on facebook.”
With that gentle and warming smile of hers she just giggled and said, “Sure but you do know when ever you lie your voice gets low.”
“Did you hear about that rumor thats going around school?” I asked trying to change the subject.
“The one about the computer site?”Stacey asked with a indifferent look on her face. “I don't really care for it myself, but guess who ask me out on a date?”
“Who Terrell? You know he likes you right?”
“No! ” she's shouted with a tense look on her face. Like when you first see you parents having sex. “You know you and him are like brothers to me. I would have puch you dead in the face if the star of are school football team Ryan Timber didnt ask me out.”
“Wow!”I said almost in shock.“What is somebody like him asking someone like you out for?”

“What is that spouse to mean? Who in they're right mind wouldn’t want to date this,” She started to spin around and continued“5'2, 109-pound, blue eyes, blond hair homesome country girl with a tight little ass like myself?”
I wanted to chuckled but I knew all to well that this southern bell would have blew up in my face.

“What's up Chad and stace? I see a husband & wife will never stop fighting.”

The gang was all together now. Standing 6'2 and built like a Linebacker was my best friend Terrell. Me and him have been best friends since the first grade. After a food fight. Long story...

“Who would ever see Chad as a husband anyways? He told me no guy would ever want to date me.”
Terrell looked at me and Stacey.“Stacey why would you want to date anyone in the first place? When you can have all of this good stuff.” Terrell said while licking his lips.
As Stacey was about to answer that her brand new iphone she was proud of began to ring.
“I have to go to my next class so Ill talk to you guys later on ok.” Stacey said in a rush.

“I hate to see her go but I love to watch leave.”He bursted into a smile and continued, “ So anyways what are doing tonight Chad? Do you want to go clubbing with me and Stacey tonight or are you going to stay at home and jack off to xnxx.com again?”
I was so taken aback, I spit out the gum I'd been chewing on.
“No! I have better things to do then that.”
“Like what? Talk to random people on facebook again.”He said.

“No that was last week. This week I have something else to do by myself, but we can hang out tomorrow if you want.”
I said.
“Fine just don't get into anything crazy.”He said winking at me. Probably thinking about that time I was sexting a married women.
“Sure see you tomorrow at my house.”
And with that we both went our own ways.
Later that night…

As soon as I got home I headed straight for my laptop. I wanted to know more about this site. The more I kept searching the more I kept seeing the same thing about the goddess of love Venus.
“Could a goddess really be on a website? ”I asked myself. Then I came across this web site called
TrueGoddessmatchmaker.com. Out of pure curiosity I click on the site thinking nothing of it just some gimmick was what I thought. Then questions began to pop up.
What is the perfect girl to you?
What is a perfect relationship to you?
How tall do you prefer your perfect girl?
What color hair is on the perfect girl?
Do you want her to be in love with you or madly in love with youm
What is the perfect bra size to you?
Do you like pure shy type or the outgoing speaks her mind type?
Would you love this girl as long as she loves you?

I answered all of the questions just for fun of it.

“What is the perfect girl to you?” .Someone who really understands me. Someone who really makes me feel special in this big world and someone that really cares about me.

What is a perfect relationship to you? Trust, love, and a good sex life.

How tall do you prefer your perfect girl? Medium: 5'4 - 5'6 (Since I am 5’10)

What color hair is on the perfect girl and how long should it be?
Red hair maybe

Do you want her to be in love with you or madly in love with you?
A girl that is madly in love. Kind of but I want her to be crazy in love in me and will only love me and me only.

What is the perfect bra size to you?
Any size as long as they are perky.

Do you like pure shy type or the outgoing speaks her mind type?
Defiantly the pure shy type.

Would you love this girl as long as she loves you?
Yeah if a girl was that perfect, I would marry her in a heartbeat.

When I click OK, there was a flash on my laptop screen.

After the bright flash of light ended to my surprise I found a women on my lap. “What in the hell? No how in the hell did you get in my room?”
The women just kept staring me in the eyes without saying a world or making a peep. It was as almost as if she was reading me with her beautiful mismatch eyes. One was a dark red color. The other was blue as the sky itself. Then in a loud stern voice, she finally said something.
“Boy why have you not sign the contract with me yet?”
“Contract?”I choked and went on, “What contract are you talking about? And who are you anyways?”
I had no idea what was going on. Yet this women was calm like it was natural.

“Don't make me laugh boy. You're saying you don't know who the goddess of love is?”

Angered at that point I shouted.“I am far from a boy!”The women chuckled a little. If she wasnt so beautiful I might have lost it. I somehow manage to control my anger and said, “Look my name is Chad and I know who the goddess of love is, its Venus. However you cannot be the goddess of love because she doesn't exist.

Angered she stood up and looked me in the eyes.“You dare to say I don't exist. There is no man alive who I have ever encountered in my many years visiting the human world who would dare say such a thing to me boy. Even the mighty Zeus has once befallen upon my beauty. There have been many wars fought over my hand in marriage. Do you know how much blood was shed over my body human?”
“Wars.”I choked. “Blood.”I choked once again.

Soon the mysterious women started to undress her self from her white and gold silk garb. Slowly showing her pure white skin. When she was fully naked she said in an arrogant tone,“You see my body boy, this is the body that every women wish they had, and every man wish he could fuck.”

Looking at her body now she was right. Everything about this woman was amazing. Almost too good to be true. Her upward curving eyes were a little fiecre looking, but they match her sharp chin, well formed mouth, and nicely defined nose, all gave her an aristocratic look. Her long brunet hair was dyed with gold like streaks, which looked odd at first, but went with her jewelry, which included earrings(two in her left ear, three in her right), a total of five gold bracelets on her wrists, and thuderbolt pendant that bought out her perfect double D cup size breast. The more I look at this women body the more I was lost in my own lust. I began to want her for myself, but I didnt what was coming over me. Like I was losing all of my humanity.

After giving me a small grin like she just won a game she said,“Boy you see now. There is no man dead or alive who could resist me. Now I will not ask again will you sign the contract or not?”
I hesitated for a few moments and then spoke,“Fine I'll sign anything. Just leave me alone after I sign it, because I don't know how much longer I can control myself from raping you and fucking the living shit out of you so please let me sign it already and go.”

“Then conceder this your lucky day boy, because you have to fuck me to make your dream girl.”

I was slowly losing my insanity. I didnt care about what she talking about. All I heard was “fuck me” and fucking her was all I cared for.

She walked over to me and kissed me. She almost took the very breath out of me. It felt as though an electric current hit my body leaving this tingly filling in my brain. After a few seconds that felt like hours in heaven she finally let my mouth go.

She nibbled on my ear and whispered, “I told you boy there in no man that could ever deny me. I hold this entire world right under my hand.”
I was speechless. I had never in my life experienced a kiss with so much passion and lust before. My heart began to speed up and my lust for this women grew stronger.

“I see you're friend wants a kiss from my sweet mouth too.”
Without even noticing my 6-inch cock was ragging in my pants. It wanted to be free, I wanted to be free. Therefore I did what any man would have done. I pull out my 6 inch cock that was already covered in my own precum just from her kiss alone.

“Boy don't get to ahead of yourself. I am the one who deiced when we fuck, but I must say your cock it looking amazing right now.” while licking her pink glossed lips she said ”I could just eat it up.”

I didnt know what was over taking me but I started to be beg,“Venus please I beg you. Let me fuck you. I apologies for my rude behavior earlier.” I no long had pride or shame. She was all I cared for.

“So you do emit I am the most beautiful women you have ever seen. Even more beautiful then Zeus wife Hera? Do you agree not boy?”
I nodded in agreement.
“Yes Venus you are the most beautiful women I had ever met, far more beautiful then what Hera will ever be.”
She twirled her hair between her slim fingers. Never a dull moment.

“Then be my guest boy I will let you fuck me, but be aware I'm only doing this so you can create the perfect girl, and I will never love you.”
I nodded yet again in agreement.

She took my hand and we walk over to my bed and said,“Boy if you wish to please me I want you to eat my pussy out. Then once I am satisfied I will please you ten times greater then the amount you pleased me.”
She laid down exposing her heavenly body even more to me. I kiss her neck and slowly work my way down to her pink nipples that was hard yet soft at the same time. I couldnt resist sucking them. It was low but I heard a moan from this goddess soon after I had both of her tits in my mouth squeezing, bitting and sucking them as hard as I could. I could tell she was enjoying it from how heavy was she breathing. After lifting her tits in the air and giving them one last nibble, I started to work my way down again this time slowly kissing and toying with her belly button. She was going wild. Her body began to pulse and shake. It turn me on even more. So I dragged my tongue all the way to her inner thigh. Her legs started to buckled like a wild horse.
I heard her mumble something so I stop.

frustrated she said“Great Zeus! Why did you stop boy I was about to have an orgasm.”
Without saying a word I continued. I went for the first thing in my eyesight. Her clit. She let out a small howel.“Great Zeus!”I slowly wrapped her clit around my tongue, and started to move me head back and forth. She gripped my short brown hair and shoved me into her pussy. I started to lick her pussy lips and gave her clit little nibble. Once her pussy juice started to flood my face I started to get aroused even more. She started grinding against my face. I could tell she was getting close to cumming because her ranting was getting louder “Great Zeus keep going don't stop! I'm almost there!” While wrapping her legs around my head buckling her hips back and forth on my face as if I was a horse.
I couldn't breave so I decided to finished it up with a final flick to her clit.

“Oh Fuck! Here it comes! Boy here it comes. I'm fucking Cumming!
It didnt take long for my face to get covered in this warm sweet and sticky fluid.
With a cheerful yet shaky voice she said“Chad I must say, I do believe it takes someone like you to appreciate this child. I can entrust her to a young man like you and know I'd done the right thing.From the way you just showed me your skills of eating pussy.”

She pulled me up and started licking her own juice off my face.
“Boy whatever your about to feel only a handful of men and women have ever lived to tell the tale of.”

I admit part of me was scared after her saying that, but the other half of me (my cock) could care less what was going to happen.“I don't care Venus do what ever you feel is right. I just want to fell good.”
Sitting up looking me eye to eye she said“You're a brave boy this shows me you will always protect her no matter what.”
She then pushed me down on the bed and stuck out her tongue and I swear it grew.“Try not to cum to fast.” She said with a chuckle. Her tongue became so long it wrap around my hole dick. Without a warning she took all 6 inches in her mouth. It was incredible it got to a point I forgot how to bereave. Everytime I'd let out I moan she would slow down a little then wait for the right time to pick up the paste. I guess from stopping me from Cumming to fast. It was painful yet pleasurable all at the same time . As if I was slowing melting away and losing my mind. I was on the verge of cumming I couldnt hold it in anymore. Venus must have notice because she went even faster. Her head was going out of control bobbing up and down as if my cock was a horse and her head was the cowgirl bouncing up and down. I couldnt take it anymore. I grab her head and watch as she gagged on my cock while I was Cumming.

“Fuck!”I shouted trying to catch my.breath. “That was fucking incredible”

She gave me a warm and gentle smile.“Good then. Its time for the main course”Venus said while getting on top of me.
I interrupted her,“Venus I need sometime I just busted a load and all. I need a little time to recover.”

She looked at me with confusion as if I was speaking another language. “Boy you will do as I say and fuck me.”

Her fingers started to glow white as snow and then she took my deflating shaft in her hand. I felt a light shock on the tip of my penis. I was taken aback. As if I took a Viagra my cock was back in action. It even look like it grew a little bigger and thicker.

“Are you ready boy this is where the real fun begins?”

In before I could get a word out. Venus had my cock covered in a heavenly sensation. It was more intense then her mouth. She started to raise her hips up far enough that the head of my dick was still inside and clamp down on it and without a dull moment she would slam her whole body down. A shock of pleasure would over take my body the seven more times she did it. I didnt believe her at first but Venus had to be the goddess of love because the longer I fuck her the more I wanted to keep her by my side forever.

“Boy is this to your liking?”
“Yes.”
“Do you love this goddess tight pussy?”
“I do.”
“ Can you live without it?”
“I don't think I could have sex with anyother women but you after this.”
She kissed me and said “Sorry boy this is only a women time thing.”
Displeased of what she had just said I started to cry.“Venus I love you. I love the taste of your pussy. I never had such a tight pussy around my dick. Please don't say that. I dont know if I can even live on without you.”
She placed her finger over my lips and said “Lets just live for now and not later.”

It was as if two wild animals were fucking. We were just screaming from the top of are lungs, moaning, letting out sounds I didnt know a human could make. As she started to move faster on top of me I could feel I was about to cum. The rush felt so good I flip Venus over in missionary position and lost control over my hips. Yet again she smiled at me and gave me a kiss.

“Im cumming Venus. I about to cum.” I said groaning and moaning. As soon as I was about to pull out so I could cum on her stomach she wrap her legs around my waist.
“NO Chad for the contract to be complete you must cum in me no matter what.”

I didnt care anymore I started to pump in and out of her even faster then before. I could feel her nails dig into my back as I got rougher. She then pulled me in for a kiss and that broke the deal. I must have came in her for three minutes. I was so drain from all of that I pass out while my dick still inside of her.

“You did good boy. You did real good. I hope you enjoy our daughter as much as you enjoyed me.”Was the last thing I ever heard.

Several hours later, I woke up. I couldnt say how many hours went by, but from the state of my fatigue I would guess it was 7am. I got up from my bed and stretched my stressed muscles. I was a little disappointed Venus was no where to be found, but what I did find was a note and a baby.....


I know this is only the rewrite But after rereading it I even said to myself how in the hell did anyone read this and like it. Thank you if you did. The second chapter will be out soon and the new third chapter.Again Thank you and hope you enjoyed.

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Introduction: I took another look at it and changed some of it. I kept the topic same. It was my last year in school, going to pass out in a few more months and I still was a virgin. Not that I wanted to be but my boy friend lives far and we only get together online but we would be soon be together and getting married, so for him I was saving myself until something happened few weeks before my term was going to end. In school and mostly everywhere else I used to hang out mostly with guys, not...

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My sexual experiences The Path of Desire part 1 rewrite

In school and mostly everywhere else I used to hang out mostly with guys, not that I was attracted to them I was just more tom boy than anything else and I hated girly girl talks. My usual mates were Pete and Tony who we used to meet every day at bus and at school lunch time. Our hang out space was quite a nice spot, it was behind a big dumpster which isn’t used anymore; so no one comes to disturb us there and we have our chats in peace. Pete had recently broken up with a girl who was...

1 year ago
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Fateful Encounter Rewrite

We have all had encounters that we remember as well as those we want to forget, and this particular one has stuck in my mind, even though I have for so long tried to erase it. However, periodically I find myself remembering this eventful time in my life and as I slip back to when it all happened, it becomes as vivid as if it had just happened. Maybe I wish it would somehow happen again or that I could somehow go back and relive the experience. I’ve always had mixed feeling about what happened...

2 years ago
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Dirty old Des rewrite

Elaine had always been quite inhibited. She was raised by religious parents and it left her with some hangups about sin and guilt about pleasure. She was fine about the act of intercourse and enjoyed it,but when it came to anything a little unusual,she was much less sure. I had never told Elaine about my fantasies for fear of shocking her. The most persistent and strong idea's I masturbate to, where the thought of other men having Elaine. I dont know why,but the thought of total...

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AUNTS in my PANTS rewrite

I always thought my Aunt Susan was hot. Susan is my mother’s younger sister, and kind of a carbon copy of my mom. She is four years younger than my mom and they had always been close. Both attractive, around the same height, maybe 5’5 or 5’6, and both with the same dirty blond hair, blue eyes, and slim, in-shape bodies. They both looked quite a bit younger than their actual ages. I grew up in a single parent home with just my mother Terri and my sister Anna, who is a year older than I....

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dark alleyrevelation ch 1 rewrite

sky is getting dark,i looked up enjoying the view of the twilight for it has been lo ng since i last enjoyed such a view.tod ay five years ago my father died the doc tor said it was some sort of animal atta ck for his trout was ripped open and his body was like death itself,i was only 10 when he died and now am in high sch ool.i started walking to my friend's hous e then i saw a man forcing a young girl in her later teen to a lonely area by the street, he seem not to take...

2 years ago
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Small Tight and Ready part 1 rewrite

Kimmy Pfile is 13 and stands around 4'9" tall and weighs about 90 lbs. with brown eyes and brown hair with small but firm 30B tits. She was getting packed to go over to her friends house for a sleep over, but all she could think about was her friends older step brother, Curtis, He's 14 and stands 5'9, weighing around 120 lbs. with dark brown eyes and dark hair. Then she thought to herself 'maybe I can try and seduce him.' With a wide eyed expression she quickly ran upstairs to her...

3 years ago
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eyes to a new worldrewrite

Day as long as I live, because that was the day my life got twisted up side down by one god damn women. Beep, beep as my alarm went off for work, and to no surprise I found my 17 year old daughter Sara laying next to me with her dirty blond hair in her pink pajamas she looked so much like her mother who I hate so much. That whore only left a letter saying she not meant to be a stay at home wife and she never got to live her life since she got pregnant at a young age of 15. If I look back at...

4 years ago
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NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN rewrite

The room was dark except for one small lamp on her desk more like an over size nightlight. Which cast small white streaks into the blackness. Sitting on her bed with the keyboard in her lap. Gray shadows cascaded from the screen. She was searching for a TV show that she had just read about. A small moan came from the next room, But she didn’t hear it at first. Then followed by the squeak of bed springs which got louder and louder. “Oh no...

1 year ago
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Acting out on fantasyrewrite

Her window was right across from mine, and the naive little girl she was she would leave her blinds open every night. Like clockwork every night she would practice her dance moves in her bedroom. She wanted to be a cheerleader but she would never be one with her tiny tits, and dorky glasses. Following that she would leave to shower, the re-enter about 15 minutes later in her towel to change. I would masturbate every night as I watched her change. You see, I'm friends with her brother...

3 years ago
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TwinsUntitled Rewrite

We were reflections of each other. 48D breasts, round juicy asses, think black hair, slightly tan skin, hazel eyes, and one beauty mark on a cheek (Melissa’s was on the right, mine was on the left). Even after seventeen years, our parents still mix us up. Which we don’t mind too much., but you’d think they’d know buy the beauty marks or something. But either way, for twins, we’d like to think that’s pretty normal. We can get along, too- also normal for any siblings. My sister was more...

2 years ago
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A Familys Unwanted Sexual Awakening rewrite

Michelle looked around the RV, her mother was sitting at the back reading a book, she had a enviously good figure and Michelle loved her very much. Across the table from Michelle and Amy, Craig and Adam were playing cards, they were laughing to each other about something when Michelle noticed that they kept glancing at Amy who was sitting opposite them. 'Bastards,' Michelle thought. “That man hor keeps looking at my tits,” Amy whispered to Michelle. “I know, their both pigs. We’ll get...

4 years ago
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Dockside 2016 rewrite

Dockside Birdie, rest a little longer, ‘Til little wings are stronger, So she rests a little longer, Before she flies away.+++Tennyson, Sea Dreams Not far from the Tower of London, a few hundred yards at most and flanking the old city, there is a small marina, and actually, as marinas go, it’s a decent one. A bit of a chore to get to — fighting mad tides up the Thames and all — but I’d heard it was worth the effort. Anyway, with winter coming on fast I needed to find a place to sit-out the...

3 years ago
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NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN rewrite

Introduction: This is a repost of my first story to correct the technical difficulty I encountered in my first post. NIGHTS IN WHITE SATIN The room was dark except for one small lamp on her desk more like an over size nightlight. Which cast small white streaks into the blackness. Sitting on her bed with the keyboard in her lap. Gray shadows cascaded from the screen. She was searching for a TV show that she had just read about. A small moan came from the next room, But she didnt hear it at...

4 years ago
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Daddy Makes Sasha a Whore Part 1 rewrite

Introduction: This story involves some subject matter such as incest and rape that may offend some readers. If you are one of these readers please dont read this, just find a different story. It is purely fictional so if there is any resemblance to anyone or anything in real life it is coincidental. Part 1 He kissed me softly at first, I responded and he deepened the kiss. His tongue was flicking my bottom lip and I moaned. His hand slid up my stomach till it reached my breast, then he cupped...

3 years ago
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personal field trip rewrite

Hello everyone the story i am going to tell you all about this time. occurred when i was only three years old.Its different from my other experiences but just as unforgettable. i mean how can i forget such a what I thought then was frightening but yet amazing experience as the ones i've shared with my beautiful aunt slash wife norma which happened just a bit after this story im going to tell you but as I said or even my sexy ther****t Ms. Liz all my experiences have been great like the one with...

4 years ago
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First Date Rewrite

Bobbie took me out on our first date to a local pub in Elwick. We had a pleasant time chatting to friends. On the drive back to my house I noticed his van was all carpeted in the back with lots of cushions – I thought this must be his passion wagon. So I determined not be lured especially on a first date. Bobbie leant over to kiss me goodnight and with his lovely soft lips feeling so sensual I melted in his arms and we let our tongues stroke each other. His hand started stroking my knee and...

3 years ago
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My Son My Lover Part 1 rewrite

Hello, my name is Jane; and I’m 38 years old and I’m happily married to my second husband. I have 3 c***dren, my oldest is 22 and I also have twins at 5; however they’re my son’s c***dren.And before I tell how my son became my lover, I’ll tell you how he was born.I was 16; at the time I was on my final year at school my first husband was my boyfriend, 6 months prior to the exams my boyfriend knocked me up and 3 months after the exams I gave birth to my son. My dad forced me into marry my...

4 years ago
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Bad Night Clubbing Rewrite

Chapter One – The Capture: Me out on a Friday night? What was this? This never happened.  My friend of many years had persuaded me through constant badgering to come out with him to a local club, it was the first time he had talked to me in months and I had wondered what had happened to him. So there I was, my friend had already got distracted by the first pretty thing in a skirt he found and I was left alone at the bar.From the corner of my eye I saw the barmaid looking at me, she walked over...

3 years ago
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My Awakening rewrite

This is the story of my first-time wearing women’s panties. I was raised by my grandma. She was a real conservative woman who believed the bible word for word. As a result, I was extremely sheltered from the shows I watched and music I listened too to clothes and even the kinds of friends I could have. One day I was sitting in my room playing video games when my grandma had come in. “Matt, she said, I have some bad news. Your great uncle John passed away this morning”. My great uncle...

4 years ago
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Earning an Allowance Rewrite

Getting an allowance from your parents seems to be an old-fashioned idea. My grandfather used to tell me about how he would pay my dad for mowing the lawn, washing the cars, and other chores. Even though it sounded like low-wage slavery to me, he was adamant that allowances were the only way to give your kid money. Make him or her earn it on a steady basis. In granddad’s opinion, the millennial method of ‘rewarding’ children was way too easy and expensive. For him, the ‘modern brat’...

2 years ago
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A Ghostly Tail Rewrite

Brandi was driving to the summer beach cabin in her sports car. Bikini clad and sunglasses, she rides the coast highway with the wind in her hair. Her bold self-confidence had been spurred by her social media presence. Her followers cheered at her antics. Half-naked poses, risque positions and her habit of making everyday things look sexual. She loved it and even tho she would never give it away, she teased and tempted her viewers regularly. Her eyes always looking for the next big selfie. ...

2 years ago
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My Scholarship 2018 Rewrite

Hi, my name is Annie and this is the story about how, during my sophomore year of college, I got the “scholarship” that helped me make it the rest of the way through. Names are of course changed to protect the not-so-innocent. First, a little background–I was a naive, nineteen-year-old girl from the state of Washington attending a small, private liberal arts college in Canada. Like many college girls I bit off more than I can chew, and I was certainly feeling the pressure about a month into my...

1 year ago
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My Life As A Sissy rewrite

This is equally on the topic of "FIRST TIME STORIES" or "TRANSSEXUAL" and is an updated version of the story I sent less than 24 hours ago *** My Life As A Sissy From the earliest awakening of my sexuality I felt a strong desire to be girly. I was the smallest boy in my grade at school and my slender body was milky white and nearly hairless. I felt that my penis was unusually small as well, and I didn’t have any pubic hair until at least a year later than the other boys. My first reaction was...

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My Golden Summer with Blythe Ch 01

Our Last Day of School. I can’t believe it. This is my last day of school, I thought, not sure how I felt now that the long awaited day was here. Stepping out into the beautiful sunny afternoon, heading toward the group of waiting yellow school buses I breathed a sigh of relief. I was glad school was finished. Throughout High School like a ship at sea, I had plotted my course, studying hard. However, the Scholarship that many felt I had rightfully won had somehow ended up going to one of...

2 years ago
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Antheas baby 1

“What’s wrong? What’s wrong?”Anthea looked up at her mum as she sat down at the dining table. “Nothing is wrong,” Anthea responded watching as her mum hurriedly dried her hands with a tea towel.“Is the baby okay? Are you okay? Is Jack okay?” she asked as her husband came into the room and pulled up a seat at the table.“We’re all fine Mum,” she responded exasperated with her mum’s anxiety. “I have something to tell you.”“Sit down Helen,” her dad snapped. “Give the lass a chance to speak.”Anthea...

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My Golden Summer with Blythe Ch 02

My Golden Summer with Blythe – Part 2 Josh’s childhood dream girl visits him in San Francisco. The Return of Blythe Coming from a small farming community, San Francisco proved to be everything Josh had ever imagined – and then some. He loved the freewheeling atmosphere – the friendliness – in short, he fell in love with the city by the Bay. Because of early retirements, and dedication to his work, he had advanced much quicker than he had ever expected. Arriving at his chic little Apartment...

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Uther

Uther By Ellie Dauber (c) 2006 Introduction According to the legends of King Arthur, Merlin changed Uther Pendragon into a double for Duke Gorlois, so he could spend the night with Ygraine, the Duke's wife. Ygraine and Gorlois had three daughters: Elaine, Morgause, and Morgan le Faye. During their time together, Ygraine became pregnant with the child who was to become King Arthur. Uther's men killed Gorlois that same night. This is my TG (of course) version of what...

3 years ago
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The Devils Pact Sidestory Miss Blythe Is Hot for Her Students

edited by Master Ken Wednesday, September 4th, 2013 "Hi, I am Miss Blythe," I said to my class, writing my name on the whiteboard with a red dry-erase marker. "I will be your World History teacher." It was the first day of the new school year and, as I launched into the course syllabus, my thoughts kept drifting to that day in June at the end of the last term, when my Living God, the Holy Mark Glassner, walked into this very classroom and changed my very outlook on life. I didn't know...

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Carruthers Bride

The the wind howled around the quayside as I stepped onto terra firma for the first time in weeks, the wind threw sharp shards of ice to sting our faces as we looked up at the sails as they were finally furled and stowed as our captain grinned at our discomfiture, "Au revoir!" he joked as if he knew we should soon be recalled. Those such as were left, and we were few enough, I shuddered. My best uniform packed securely in my Valise, awaited me, and just a few more duties before I...

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Athena Corp Chronicles A Mothers Love

As he approached one of the hall's long mirrors he stopped to inspect himself. It was a familiar sight, the flowing, billowy French maid outfit surrounding his body. His arms and legs were outlined in silky, white stockings and arm-gloves. He wore pearl earrings and the lacy white collar around his neck was adorned with a beautiful pendant. It was a gift from mother that he wore every day, without fail. Jon's painted red lips and neatly applied eyeliner and blush were evidence that he was...

2 years ago
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Sex Therapy 2 The Thert

PREFACE:There are no sex acts in the story but the patient does have an orgasm as a result of the Ther****t’s physical examination. Part 1 is the Sex Therapy appointment from the patient’s point of view and part 2 is the same examination seen through the eyes of the Ther****t. I don’t think it matters which one you read first.I hope you enjoy it and will let me know what you think in any...

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Aunt Katherin and Her SlavesChapter 2 Katherine

Katherine stepped into her elegant living room and took a book from the shelf. She sat in a plush lounge chair, specifically selecting a chair in the back corner of the room next to an old dumbwaiter that was once used to ferry delicious meals from the downstairs kitchen to the dining room table. She planned to read the book for a short while, but she already knew her attention would soon be diverted. Tonight the dumbwaiter would once again be placed into service, except this time it would be...

4 years ago
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I Fucked My Godmother Who Became My Girlfriend Aft

-I Fucked My Godmother Who Became My Girlfriend After-I met my godmother, Amanda, at my high school job when I was only a junior. And I kept the job as a part time while I am going to my first year of college, so we see each other every day at work. She was 42 when I meet her and I was only 16. I was shy to talk to her, especially she was so gorgeous and I thought she was only in her early thirties. She was the one who approached me and we started to talk like good friends ever since. I...

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