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Luna 1: Drafted Chapter 6 Revelations A Whateley Academy tale By Irvine This is fan fiction for the Whateley Academy series. It may or may not match the timeline, characters, and continuity. If you would like background information on the 'cannon' characters, see: http://crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Table_of_Contents For a copy of the campus map I am using, see: http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130114152730/crystalhall/images/d/ de/Map_v052.jpg Authors note 1: In this chapter I make mention of Aunghadhail and the Five Fold Court. While the exact role of Aunghadhail in the events leading up to the Sundering are known only to the cannon authors, my interpretation, though possibly controversial, does broadly fit published canon material: In particular, the wiki article on Atlantis. As further justification for my interpretation, I would point out that neither the Weres nor Wakan Tanka were exactly pleased when Aunghadhail showed up. Authors note 2: Because of strong emotional content, a couple of scenes use the F word. As I hope you will have noticed, I rarely use foul language in my writing. In fact, I only do so when there is no other way to realistically depict the nature of what is happening. In this case, I am only talking about two scenes and four occurrences, but since it is more than usual, I give fair warning. Construction site After mincing my way behind Kane hall, I quickly came to the conclusion that, much though I loved it, the gown was just too impractical to wear for anything but the most special occasions. This was doubly confirmed when I arrived at my destination to find a construction site. Coming in eight prefabricated sections, each of which took up the entirety of a large trailer/tractor rig, the grass had been badly chewed up getting the dormitory sited. The damage had been made even worse by the caterpillar tracked jib crane used to properly position each section. So, what with the campus maintenance crew in the process of using a digger, [US back-hoe,] to dig trenches to connect, water, sewage, electricity and a secure, fibre optic network, my clothing was completely inappropriate, and the site foreman wouldn't let me closer than 50 metres. The basic layout of the outer shell had been completed that morning, this was two floors, each with two outer sections and two internal sections. Although I had missed seeing it, they had laid the ground floor sections side by side, levelled everything off with screw-jacks, (along with shims to evenly distribute the weight,) and then bolted the sections together with lots and lots sealant. Apparently, the secret was to get the initial ground floor properly levelled. Once this was done, the second floor was a snap to install. How do I know this? The foreman, who finding a pretty girl genuinely in interested in his work, enthusiastically explained this to me in great detail.... If he talked about his wife in the same loving tones, she was a very lucky woman. At the moment, the upper floor rooms had been partitioned, along with a toilet/shower block and recreational area on the ground floor. The plumbing though, was still a work in process. Furniture and other trimmings had been delivered and Blackstar were busy putting the flat- packs together. Sam, who came out of the dorm to meet me, had evidently decided to take pity on me and told me she would take care of signing off on the installation. Though she did point out that I could expect further paper work, (along with a bill,) from the maintenance department for connecting the dorm to the utility services and repairing all the damage to the grounds Of course, I couldn't leave without saying hello to my bondsmen, who had also broken off from their work to traipse out of the dorm and gather around me. Sensing that something was up with Startech, I asked what was wrong and he replied: "I'm sorry to bother you Mam, but it's my devisor trait. I don't have Diedrick's syndrome, but I do have a compulsion. If I can't get into a workshop or lab, on a fairly regular basis, I start to get stir crazy." Thinking it through, I quickly filled in Sam and Blackstar about the Praetorian Guard, and asked Startech: "If I can get you into a workshop, can you put together a secure multi channel combat communications system, for both Blackstar and the Praetorians?" Pausing slightly for thought, I added: "If we get the time, you might want to work with Spear, (Justice,) on this, I am sure he is probably having similar problems with his devisor trait." With Startech agreeing, I turned my most irresistible, tear filled, puppy eyes on Sam, who laughed and replied: "It's maybe a bit sooner than I expected, but I was going to suggest that you start talent scouting for a training team. Are you sure they understand how much work is involved in rushing JROTC?" When I nodded yes, she went on: "Well, I don't really see a problem, there are currently, four training teams in JROTC, but only the Grunts take it seriously. The rest just go through the motions to satisfy their scholarships. Gunny Bardue is JROTC's official faculty sponsor, so if you get them all to Kane hall after lunch tomorrow, then I will make the introductions and see to the paper work. As far as Startech's little problem goes, there are technician workshops in Kane hall's sub- basement levels. I'll talk to Chief Delarose about it. I'm sure he will agree that having our own combat devisor working down there should be a real bonus." Then, she surprised me by asking Starfury: "I have been giving Luna's magical armour some thought. Once we get some reliable test data, could you modify the spell to work on something that looked like... say a flak jacket... or maybe even power armour?" Starfury, thinking furiously, replied: "I'm aware of the principles of the Law of Similarity, but I have never heard of a spell using human magic that works that way. Well apart from a few myths and legends, and they could easily be recounting tales about sidhe armour....." After giving it a bit more thought, he went on: "If Luna works with me to get the basics, I think it might be possible, though I can't really be sure until I see how the spell works and how much power it takes." Satisfied, Sam turned back to me and explained: "I know you don't really need the money, but having a legitimate revenue steam for Blackstar Corporation will help build its cover as a private security company. I think Cecilia would definitely be interested in the business opportunity, and campus security's rank and file will probably fall down at your feet in worship if you give us a tax deductible donation of power armour that doesn't have the normal power supply limitations." She said this last with a real grin, but I picked up on something else she had slipped in: "Blackstar Corporation?" Her grin got even bigger as she replied: "Oh, did I forgot to tell you. The lawyers have registered the name Blackstar Corporation as a privately held, limited liability company. While your trust fund is the sole owner, you as the commander of Blackstar squad, have to report to your board of directors which are: Headmistress Carson, Chief Delarose, Gunny Bardue and me." Since I was still a minor, being tied up tighter than a goose for christmas was no big surprise, and when I nodded an acknowledgement, she went on: "You should talk to Phase about pricing, but based on the preliminary data that Selene gave us about impact and heat resistance, we might be looking at something that could offer protection from small arms fire, with say an upper limit of an M16 or maybe even an AK47 fired at less than 5 metres. To put it in a Whateley frame of reference, a fireball or a love tap from a brick." When I gave her a questioning look, she explained further: "Well, think about it: The strongest warrior swinging a 14lb war hammer with 4ft of handle plus 28 inches for the length of his arm and 4 inches to allow for the hammer head. Do the math and you have a punch thrown by your typical brick." With the light of understanding dawning in my eyes, she went on: "Standing in the middle of a large log fire, roughly equates to the energy transfer rate of a good sized fireball." That made sense, so when I nodded, she continued: "You can do bullets in the same way. To get a first approximation, you have the mass of the round and the muzzle velocity. Roughly, I believe you will find battle damage inflicted by the strongest warrior swinging a 14lb hammer, with a 16 inch square inch cross sectional area in an arc 6ft 8 in diameter will be comparable to the damage from a spitzer FMJ round fired by an AK47 ." Seeing me try to work things out in my head, she helped out by saying: "A world class sports man can throw a ball at over a 100mph. The ball is held about 28 inches from his shoulder, so increase the radius by another 4ft or so and you have an impact speed in excess of 200mph for a 14lb hammer wielded by the strongest warrior." After pausing to let me catch up, she lost me with: "That translates to a minimum estimate of the impact momentum per cross sectional area for the hammer swung by the strongest warrior of 6 NS/cm squared. So, if a hollow or soft point round, fired from an AK47 at point blank range crumpled instantaneously, it would have an impact momentum per cross sectional area of less than 0.07 NS/cm squared, and that does not take into consideration energy loss due to deformation... For comparison, a steel cored armour piercing round, depending on the exact design of the spitzer tip and how badly it was deformed on contact, would have an effective impact diameter of between 1 and 2 millimetres. This suggests an impact momentum per cross sectional area of somewhere between 40 and 160 NS/cm squared. Luckily for you, the armour piercing round is not too popular since it tends to pass straight through flesh without causing an incapacitating wound. In your case, if your regen really has taken a boost, then it would likely be healed in an hour or less... Currently, aside from HP/SP rounds, the round you would normally be most concerned about from an AK47 is the spitzer FMJ. To maximize muscle and organ damage, it is often unbalanced so that it will tumble when it hits a target; but, because the effect works in our favour, we can ignore it. The round has a soft core with a thin hard jacket, and, because of your armour, there will certainly be some deformation with a consequent loss of momentum. We can therefore interpolate an equivalent impact diameter at maybe 5mm or thereabouts? This would suggest that, for a spitzer FMJ round fired at point blank range, an upper estimate of the equivalent impact momentum per cross sectional area at around 6 or 7 NS/cm square....." Seeing my glazed eyes, she got really insulting! "You don't even need calculus to get quick and dirty estimates like this. Which, by the way, I thought you were supposed to have been studying along with mechanics.... What on earth did they teach you at the Barons school?" Giving her a dirty look, I decided to change the subject by asking: "What do you mean tax deductible? How would you value it? I mean it would only take a few minutes to work the spell." As soon as Sam launched into another lecture, I realised asking a question like that was a mistake: "The kind of full body protection we are talking about usually comes in power armour, of which even the cheapest, lowest quality suits have a retail starting price in excess of $200,000 and, believe me, the price gets much higher very quickly for quality work. With it having no power supply limitations, the manoeuvrability of everyday clothing and, given that there is a very limited supply,.... Like I say, you should talk to Phase, but maybe an initial price of $500,000 a pop doesn't sound unreasonable?" Okay, I was still new to the idea of being rich and, as a thirteen year old, I had never really considered real world prices for high tech military gear. So, you will not be surprised that my eyes started to goggle at the way she so calmly rattled off $500,000 for a spell that would take me only a few moments to complete. Seeing my brain go into cryogenic shut down, Sam added maliciously: "Of course, once word got around and the armour started to gain a reputation, what with having no power supply limitations , the price would probably go up substantially. Maybe 3 or 4 million dollars plus for each unit." Pulling myself back together, I frantically tried to think of something to take my mind off what she was saying. Latching onto a thought that had been at the back of my mind, but I hadn't yet managed to bring to the surface, I blurted: "The Praetorian Guard!" At Sam's blank look, and desperately trying hard not to think of the economics of supply and demand, I continued: "They will need a costume or something and we won't have time to see about it when we are rushing JROTC. Do you think we could we get in to see Cecilia tomorrow afternoon for a fitting?" "Well, you will need a pass from administration as well as an appointment with Cecilia. It's probably a good idea to talk about magical power armour anyway, so....." Blinking momentarily, she calmly stated as if it was perfectly normal: "I've sent Cecilia and Amelia Emails, if it's okay with both of them, and there is no sudden crisis, then I will act as faculty escort." We were more or less done at that point. Sam, sent Starlance over to pick up a package she had left for me in the dorm, and he quickly returned with a security issue laptop. Telling me how to log on with a thumbprint and a sixteen character alphanumeric password she had me memorize. She informed me in her best gruff Admiral's voice: "This is for security business only, don't use it for homework. If you do, I assure you I will find out and the privilege will be withdrawn. It will give you a chance for a social life by letting you do most of your security related work, except printing and filing paper copies, without actually coming into the office." With tears of gratitude, and very sincere murmurs of thankyou, I hugged her even more fiercely than I had when she pinned her original ensigns bars to my collar. Now that everything had been taken care of, Starport escorted me till we were hidden behind a corner of Kane hall, and teleported me directly to the driveway in front of Poe. Oh Crap! Arriving about 30 seconds ahead of the Praetorians, it was quite satisfying to see them jump as I appeared out of thin air. Unfortunately, Mrs Horton, who evidently had Poe cottage and the surrounding area warded seven way's to Sunday, was less than amused. I think she understood though. That is, she didn't bawl us out when we gigglingly made our way upstairs to show the boys my armour. Once we were all in our room, Cassie immediately began to play the hostess. A roll she obviously relished. We didn't have any snacks or anything and were badly short of comfortable seating, but she got us spread out around the room on our beds and desk chairs. With everyone looking at me expectantly, it was pretty obvious I was going to have to play the part of a fashion model. So, stripping off the velvet choker, aquamarine belt, necklace and bracelet, I shoved them back in my jewellery box. This surprise, surprise produced a gasp of outrage from Jules, who, though now starting to adjust, was sufficiently close to the edge that he still had these little relapses. Justice and Achmed of course couldn't see the problem, and Tim actually suggested it was really very practical. Possibly for Jules's sake, after giving Tim a 'how could you?' glare, Cassie let the matter drop. Deciding to make a show of things, and wanting to see how I would look fully decked out. I placed the rest of the sapphire ensemble in the bottom of one of Cecilia's carrier bags along with a towel, make-up, toothbrush, toothpaste, mouthwash, hairbrush, the floral scented perfume and, remembering how low cut the skirt waist was, my shaving kit. With my full costume in another carrier bag, and after getting Cassie to undo my buttons, I was ready. It shouldn't really have been a surprised, but I was slightly amused to find four of the girls had decided to come back for a second round with the Hydroflux equipment. That is, until I remembered that I had some very personal grooming to take care of. Like I pointed out earlier public nudity seemed to be fast becoming my natural state, but public exposure on this scale was probably going a little too far too fast. On he other hand, I didn't really have a great deal of options. Making my way over to the sinks, I wriggled out of the gown to appreciative, but discreet glances from the assembled lezzies. All thing said and done, even with the audience, it was with some relief I hung the stupid gown on a convenient hook. It was gorgeous, I really adored the way it was suggestively naughty, yet remained very modest, but it was just too impractical. I mean, while wearing it, I could barely walk from one end of the room to the other without assistance. Trying to put off the inevitable, I used the sink mirror to clean my teeth and check my hair and bindi were okay. After redoing my make-up it was crunch time, or rather shaving time. There was no escape, and asking for a little privacy would probably only make matters worse. I think the big mistake I made was making such a production of the initial preparation By the time I got around to stripping off my lingerie, the girls were very curious as to what I was doing. Thankfully, none of them offered to help, but they did offer a very embarrassing critique of my technique along with lewd suggestions about how it must be a very hot date I was getting ready for. Shaving that particular area really brought home to me that my little Willy Wonka was a fast fading memory. Any regret I might have felt at his absence however, was completely buried in the raging inferno that was my blush, which, along with the ribbing, faded quickly when I slipped into my armour. Sitting on a toilet seat with the lid down, I was able to lace up the costume's sandals, and the ongoing slackjawed stares as I decorated my delicious bod with what would become my combat jewellery was very satisfying. Giving myself a quick spritz of the floral scent, I made another of the quick fashion model twirls I had given Vamp, and asked the girls what they thought? It took them a few minutes to get their tongues away from the cat, but when they did. Oh boy! Needless to say, I had to demonstrate my succubus form, and by the time I had done so, it was too late. My esper situational awareness kicked in to show me there were now four distinct points of view developing amongst the students at Whateley vis a vis little old me: Camp #1, the majority, would believe I was some kind of European royalty who badly needed taking down a peg. Camp #2, by far the largest minority, would insist I was only a fruitcake with delusions who, while being harmless and deserving of pity, was best avoided. Camp #3 whose founding members would be most of the girls currently present, but whose membership would grow to include guys, lesbians and even straight girls in other cottages, would be of the opinion I was a Goddess. However, as bad as #3's particular insanity was, which in my opinion was very, very bad. There was a tiny minority view which was potentially far worse: Camp #4 would be of the opinion I was a Demoness, who like Sara Waite, (a GOO child of whose existence my prescience had only just made me aware,) needed to be put down like a rabid dog. Stunned, I just walked out on them. Stopping in the hallway, my mind was on a carousel complete with B?la Lugosi organ music: There was a GOO child on campus, people were going to see me as a Goddess, some of my fellow mutants would actually try to kill me... There was a GOO child on campus, people were going to see me as a Goddess, some of my fellow mutants would actually try to kill me... There was a... Mum of course, like mums are prone to do, gave me a metaphorical kick to pull me out of my funk. Shocking me with: I thought I was remarkably calm when I replied: Trying to work my mind around what mum was suggesting, and making the assumption, later proved correct, that the Deep Ones were part of the pantheon of beings dangerous for humans to mess with, I asked: I felt my brain starting to turn into the puddle she mentioned, and to change the subject, asked: The really horrible thing was, I couldn't shake the image starting to form in my mind about the reality in which Gothmog existed, and how it let him take part in the creation of the succubi; yet, at the same time, not need to travel back in time. What was horrible about it wasn't that I felt my head starting to explode, (which it wasn't,) it was more that I could almost see a hyper-dimensional shape where this impossibility made sense. I don't mean a four dimensional shape of three dimensions plus time, but something much more complex involving a possibly infinite numbers of dimensions of which our human perceived four dimensional realm was a very small part. In an effort to get away from these thoughts, I asked mum to tell me the rest of the story of how the succubi were created. Starting at the beginning, she told me: By this time I was almost panting in anticipation as she reached the climax of her story. Wanting to know what happened next, I was reminded: Dam! Just as I was about to dash off, something occurred to me about what mum had said: Not really considering what mum meant by Aunghadhail finally being dead, I dashed into the room only to remember at the last moment I was still in my succubus aspect. Quadruple Crap! Everyone was gob-smacked. I had warned them about my true form and its appearance, but being warned is not the same as being prepared. Seeing me, Achmed started to mutter in Arabic about 'Takb?r', 'Qar?nah' and 'Inanna'. Justice though, was my greatest concern. Falling to his knees, he was practically banging his head off the floor as he announced: "I am yours ?ya-Iyansan . My life, my soul are yours. Lead us in battle ?ya- Iyansan, Warrior Goddess of ancient Il?-If??, in your name we will spill the life blood of your enemies like water in the sand" Unbelievably, things got worse when Achmed, evidently resolving his internal debate, got on his knees and echoing Justice, announced: "Yes Holy Inanna, lead us, we will bathe in the blood of your enemies. In the name of my ancestors, Inanna of the Morning and Evening Stars, Warrior Goddess of Uruk, I pledge my life to be your sword" Tim and Jules were also close to religious hysteria and Cassie was looking at me goggle eyed and asking: "Is that really you Luna?" I was nearly ready to scream in frustration. Coming so quickly on the heels of my epiphany on how a minority of my fellow students would take the view I was a Goddess, having my new friends react like this to my true form was the last thing I needed. Switching back to my human aspect, I pleaded: "Please get up, it's just me, Fiona. I'm a girl, a mutant just like you. I'm not a Goddess of War, or anything like that, please get up...." Reaching down, I pulled them to their feet. Although they flinched at my touch, they finally returned to sitting on the bed, and I pointed out: "You both hate religion, you made that perfectly clear during dinner, and now you are ready to fall down and worship the first shape- shifter you see?" Achmed put it together first, though Justice was a close second as they both queried: "Shape shifter?" "Doh! What else do you call it when someone changes forms? It's a fairly common mutant trait." Seeing a glimmering of understanding, I thought that maybe shifting into a secondary form would help. I had never done it, but during my initial instruction, mum had made clear I could take any form as long it was female. Thinking quickly, I shifted into the form of a little black kitten. As I crawled out of the jumble of my armour, which had fallen to the floor in a disorganised heap, Cassie and Jules gave a delighted scream of: "Oh how cute." and immediately picked me up and started to rub my belly. It was then that I realised that, somehow, my jewellery was with me but not with me. Kind of stupid I know. To put it another way, it wasn't in the heap of my armour, and I wasn't visibly wearing it, but I could still sense the belly ring reliquary. Yelling: , she calmly replied: Being deliberately obtuse my mum replied: Laughing, she replied: Thinking this sounded reasonable, I was struck by another thought: Echoing Sam at her most insulting, she answered: Luckily, Cassie hadn't closed the curtains. So, quickly retrieving my casting equipment from my belt and picking up the bracelet, I unrolled my blackboard. Inscribing the pentagram, symbols as mum directed, I added the activation phrases 'Silentium' and 'Sonitus' and quickly wove an inverted weave into one of the sapphires of the bracelet. Slipping it on, I could feel the weave as I fingered the 10 sapphires of the bracelet. Thinking 'Silentium', it didn't seem to make any difference, but taking mum at her word, I lifted up the edge of my toolbox and dropped it. I heard the bang as it hit the floor, but Cassie didn't budge. In case you are wondering, I didn't know Latin. Evidently, my mum was a spirit of hidden talents. Noticing the spare battery for the radio, and since it would have been very embarrassing to change form and lose the radio's battery, I took the opportunity to cast a ward of Keeping and Guarding into it. Then, remembering what the Grove had told me about masking my smell, and feeling quite proud of how all my enchantments had just seemed to fall into place, I asked mum if it was possible to cast an enchantment to do this. I was horrified when she answered: Shuddering, I replied: Not wanting to appear rude, I turned my attention back to Cassie who was still rambling as she got out of bed. Holding up my hands, I told her: "Whoa, slow down girl. I was going to make a 'sneaking quietly charm' for you and the others anyway, and tonight we have to enchant your armour. So you will get to see plenty of magic, probably more than enough to bore you to tears." An incredulous Cassie, was shocked out of her staccato speech enough to indignantly ask: "A 'sneaking quietly charm'! What kind of name is that?" Looking shamefaced, I admitted: "I couldn't think of a better name." Cassie, obviously in her element, after a moments thought, snapped her fingers and suggested : "A 'Hush Charm' is so much nicer don't you think? A 'sneaking quietly charm' sounds so sordid! " Thinking it over, I broke out into a grin and suggested: "Yeah, I like it a 'hush charm'. Since you're so clever can you think of something we could enchant that the boys would wear?" Okay, that one had her stumped. Not wanting to admit defeat, she replied: "Let me think about while I go and get a shower. I saw how much you ate last night and I am sure you are probably starving." Starting to grab her toiletries, towel and the like, she suggested I should go and wake up the boys. Telling me: "We agreed after you left last night that we should all meet up for breakfast and the first one up should wake the others." What with it being the first day in a new place, most of the other freshers were already up and getting ready; that being said, some were obviously a bit grumpy at not getting a long lie in. Achmed and Justice, were used to getting up with the dawn and were already ready and preparing to come and wake us up. Tim and Jules were more problematic, Tim was already dressed, but Jules had had a relapse and was curled up in bed with covers over his head. Asking Tim to go and wait with Justice and Achmed, I sat down on Jules's bed and gently asked what the problem was? After a bit of coaxing, and with a few sobs, he admitted: "I don't know if I can do this, I'm scared... I don't know how to be a boy." Pointing out that I didn't know how to be a girl produced an incredulous look, so I had to remind him I had only been a girl for a few day's. Then, I asked him: "I know it's not easy for you and I have magic helping me adjust; but once I got used to the idea, I found I liked being a girl. Now tell me the truth. What do you like about your new body?" Thinking about it carefully, he answered: "Well when we were in the forest I liked being strong, but Tim was really enjoying taking charge and being the man so it just seemed easier to keep on playing at being the weak girl." The follow up question was easy: "Okay, what don't you like about your new body?" Again carefully considering his answer, he replied: "It's just so weird, everything is different: The way I move.... The way I talk.... The way people look at me... The way I relate to people.... It's just too much to take in, I feel lost.... It's like I don't know who I am any more." "Okay, then imagine you had a spell working its magic and helping you to adjust, would you like being a boy then?" Looking up at me, he asked hopefully: "Could you do that for me?" Smiling, I replied: "I wouldn't even know where to begin, the spell that's working on me took the combined might of half a dozen Elder Gods and a renegade GOO...." Then holding up a finger to punctuate what I was saying, I went on: "But!... Don't you see?... Your first thought wasn't to ask if I could change you back. It was to ask if I could help you adjust." With what was still quite a feminine shrug and a: "Humph!", he replied: "You tricked me." Feeling absolutely no shame, I replied:

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Luna Meets A Lascivious Loiterer

“Well fuck you then! Ugly bitch!”Alan sat in his black pick-up and released a billow of cigarette smoke.Another advance.Another rejection.Another dose of bitterness.“When you’re sixty, you’ll be begging for this attention!” He drew in another cloud, inhaled, and then quickly exhaled followed by a chuckle.A bleached blonde with oversized, gold-framed sunglasses marched along the side-walk via his wing mirror. He planted his forearm on the vehicle’s window frame and smiled as she grew in the...

Quickie Sex
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Drafted Into Service Chapter 1

I was nervous and barely slept last night. All I could think about was the months and months that had gone into making today happen. I would say there are many jokes about this service in the media. But I don’t want to be here. I don’t want to give up ten years of my life, no matter how thrilling it may seem. I reread the email confirming my drafting into service multiple times last night. Dear Michael, Congratulations, you have met all of the qualifications and are now drafted into the...

1 year ago
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Luna Vs the world

These are the stories of Luna, A character created by Viredae on Literotica, this is a collection of short stories and side stories not told in her original story run, with Viredae's blessing and help. Luna is a girl who starts to lose bets and learns she is practically addicted to getting stripped and humiliated by people she knows.

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Magic Returns Drafted

Drafted By Circe John Spencer yawned mightily as he waited for the scanner to finish copying his latest work. He glanced at the clock and sighed. It was past midnight, which meant that some of his fans would be already posting bets on the forum as to when or if he would upload the latest episode of his web comic "Justice for Hire." Finally the scanner beeped and a window appeared on his computer monitor. John leaned forward in his chair and smiled as he looked over the...

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Youve been drafted Girlie

You've been drafted, Girlie! It's almost 11.00 pm. From where our unmarked, darkened van is parked we can see the light still on in the mark's bedroom. "It's watching porn movies," says Danni the IT expert through our earpieces. She has hacked into the mark's home computer, just as she had previously hacked into its school records. "Porn movies?" "Yeah, shemale porn movies." "Ooh, p'raps it wants to star in shemale porn?" suggests Sally. We all giggle. In the future it will...

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Drafted

Drafted By Margaret Jeanette Sharon Monroe was a leading author of romance novels. She had seven on the top seller list and has sold over a million copies of her works. She is self-confident and can be over-bearing at times. She went to get a soda out of the refrigerator when she passed Robert's computer room. He was on his computer and she knew he was probably playing games as usual. She wished he would get into something else instead of just sitting all day doing nothing. She...

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DraftedChapter 2

I was in Mom’s room using her sewing machine when she came in and asked me what I was doing. “I’m just altering a t-shirt. I’m almost finished.” “Do I want to see it?” I giggled, “Probably not.” “Oh well shit! Now you have to show me.” When I finished the last two inches of hem, I stood up, doffed the t-shirt I was wearing and put on the one I’d just altered. I’d shortened it in the same fashion I’d done with the tank top the day before. “Oh my!” Mom said when she saw it on me. “I hope...

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Drafted Into SpaceChapter 2 Joining the Team

RJ and B'TREA talked rapidly in a language that I did not know, yet I could understand some of what they were discussing. I looked at Daryl and he said, "This is fun, not." I asked what he meant. He continued saying, "Shit! This is something out of a dream or nightmare. And we are awake. Tell me you don't think this is FUBAR." My reply was interrupted by the sound of a helicopter approaching. Looking up we saw a news helicopter flying toward us and begin to circle overhead. Above and...

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Drafted Into SpaceChapter 3 First Fight in Flight

B'TREA said, "We have trouble coming at us fast!" RJ flipped some switches and the view changed from the planet toward space where we were able to see what looked like a meteor coming toward us. I could see several ships just like the 'clicks' flew flying out from the meteor and heading straight for us. "Press that button on the right, when the panel opens take out the band and put it on your head so that the crystal is over your dominate eye QUICK!" RJ said with some excitement in...

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Drafted Into SpaceChapter 4 Cash or Credit

Three hours later we were pulling into the Springs. A large enough town we could hide in plain sight and be able to buy weapons and ammunition too. I drove to my favorite gun store and asked RJ about being able to pay for the weapons and ammunition. RJ asked, "What I meant by pay for the weapons and ammunition?" We have to give money or credit which is kind of like a promise of money in exchange for weapons and ammunition. That is how these people make their living. RJ had a puzzled...

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Drafted Into SpaceChapter 5 Last one standing

RJ explained to several Lyconians 'werewolf looking' males A - how to load the magazines B - insert them into the proper weapon C - chamber a round aim and fire. Then quickly did the same for the shotguns and assault rifles. She told them to show everyone else as they came for the new weapons. I loaded a Kel-Tec and 6 extra magazines that I put into a bib-vest rig then I loaded eight magazines for my Glock and put them into the slots on the front of the vest, the pouch on the left side of...

2 years ago
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Drafted Into SpaceChapter 6 Fighting Back

Daryl said that missiles should work in space as rockets did. The engineers and weapons mates agreed that the fighter launch tubes could be used to launch something other than a fighter at a pretty fast rate of speed and it would go fairly straight too. I asked if recoilless rifles would work as the recoil would leave the back end of the rifle as the round left the other. Again the engineers and weapons mates said that the force should not be that great against the size of this ship. Using...

3 years ago
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Lunar Ch 01

Chapter 1: A Night of Meetings I guess this is a story I’ve already written, but because it’s not on this site yet, and the story was PG-13 when I first did it around 5 years ago, I decided it could use some buffing and a bit more romance than it had, I hope you all like it, and I hope I can keep up the submissions regularly to this ‘novel’ — — I snuck slowly along the outside of the meeting, hearing the droning chant of cultists. ‘Lunar, you have two guards fifty feet up according to...

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Lunarlust

A lone, cold stare from the yellow-white moon peered wordlessly over the bleakness of the Carpathian Mountains, with only the faint howls of the wolves who sought both food and shelter from the wintry winds and faint snowfall threatening to blanket the Transyl-Romanian countryside; indeed, this rule by Nature herself was tolerated if not fully accepted and celebrated. Warmth from the newly-established April spring only made a brief presence in the stillness and chill of the mountains. Far into...

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Lunas RebellionChapter 2

It was a few weeks later that Luna pulled Harry and Hermione into an empty class room and made the statement that made grown men quake in fear. "Harry, we need to talk." Hermione couldn't help the giggles that burst forth from behind her hand as she stared at the look of absolute terror and fear that appeared upon Harry's face. Here was a boy who had climbed the back of a troll and stuck his wand up its nose in an attempt to save her without hesitation, and who had killed a massive...

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Lunas RebellionChapter 3

Harry's council, as the girls had taken to calling themselves, had grown from just Hermione and Luna, to now include Su Li, Daphne Greengrass, Tracey Davis, Susan Bones, Hannah Abbot, Angelina Johnson, Katie Bell, Alicia Spinnet, Sally Anne Perks, Neville Longbottom (at Hannah and Harry's insistence since Harry felt he needed at least one mate) and unofficially Professors Vector and Babbling. They met in an abandoned classroom down the hall from the charms classroom, and they soon had it...

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Lunar Eclipse

‘Lunar Eclipse tonight. Want to watch it?’ I asked him, as we cleared away dinner debris. ‘Isn’t it cloudy out? And cold?’ He stood, wiping his hands on a kitchen towel, but I saw a small smile flirting with the corner of his lips. ‘So, what’s your point?’ I asked, because if he knew me at all, he knew none of that mattered. He laughed. ‘What time does it start?’ ‘In about 30 minutes.’ I liked it when I got my way. ‘Let’s get some blankets. Don’t want you freezing your ass off. It’s too...

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family home prt2

"are you ready? " she nod's impatiently before demanding we get going so that she can get a window seat at it is our 1st holiday together since the tragedy that fell upon our parents. starting the ignition i slowly pull out of the drive just to annoy the person that for many years has remained the most important person to me, finally on the road heading towards the air port i notice that Nicky is practically shacking from pure excitement, glancing over at her "you need to calm...

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Domineering Neighbor Girl prt1

Well I have a continuing fantasy about a dominant female humiliating me and until last week I always wondered if it had something to do with my mother or aunt. cursing me out at c=Church or Library or Grocery store. I am a salesman for a manufacturing company and made a cold call on a potential new customer. When I checked in at reception the young man said that the director of purchasing would like to learn more about our company and would give me 10 minutes before her next appointment.When...

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Anal Alice PRT4

Alice was in the bathroom getting ready for bed, when she thought she heard her name. She tiptoed out and put an ear to her parents' door. 'Have you seen the state of her clothes?' her mom was saying. 'They're way too small for her, especially with her breasts, not to mention that bottom of hers. She looks like a slut.' 'Yeah, she really suits them,' her dad replied. 'She does seem to be behaving more and more like a slut,' her mom said. 'She's such a tease, especially to her brothers. ' 'I...

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Anal Alice PRT3

Later on that day Mike arrived back. He offered to make them both lunch. Alice was tempted to turn his offer down and do it herself, because she knew how much of a mess he made, no matter how simple the meal. He always seemed to use three plates or pans when one would do. Still, it'd be rude not to let him do something nice for them both, and so she watched as he kicked up a storm in the kitchen.They ate on the couch, and it seemed like things had finally gone back to normal once more. She was...

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Anal Alice PRT2

Alice woke up to the feeling of something pressing forcefully against her bottom, and her butthole opening up to it. She didn't understand what was going on, still half asleep, and it was a few seconds after she felt the discomforting, strange sensation of something large pushing inside her bottom that she realised her brother was once more entering her behind. 'What are you doing . . .' she groaned blearily, blinking in the morning light that forced its way through the crack in the blinds just...

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I love you sis PRT4

Before he opened his eyes, Charles could already tell that his usual morning wake-up routine was different. First, he felt the cold chill of the room on his naked skin, which means at some point he had lost the bed covers normally protecting him at night. Secondly, in that coolness, he could feel a warm presence next to him, close to his left side, and knowing it was his sister Karen, it lead him to discovering the feeling that somebody was playing with his now rapidly growing cock. Charles...

2 years ago
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I love you sis PRT5

The piercing tone of the alarm clock came way too early for Charles. He reflexively reached out and pounded on the top, hoping to catch the snooze button and give himself another 10 minutes of sleep, but he missed the mark and the alarm wailed on. After trying another couple of times, he gave up and sat up on the bed, swinging his legs off the side, and reached over and turned on the lamp on the table next to his bed. Finally he could see which button was the snooze, but by that time he figured...

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I love you sis PRT3

Charles had missed mornings like this. For the last two years, his attempts at deep, body and mind-refreshing sleep had been interrupted by the dreams of Jessica. He figured those dreams were his last chance at holding on to the life that he and Jessica had together, before she passed away from cancer. But partly because of those dreams, he had not allowed himself to live again. Instead, his life was spent doing two things -- working, and hiding out in the condominium they had purchased...

3 years ago
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I love you sis PRT2

The early morning dawn began to weakly filter into the window of the single bedroom of Karen's apartment. On a normal weekday, Charles would have been up at least an hour ago. Even on the weekend, he was often up before sunrise, more from force of habit than any other reason.But today, habit was the farthest thing from the reality of the situation. For Charles, sleeping later than normal was one thing. But waking up in his sister's bed, with both of them naked after their taboo sex session the...

2 years ago
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I love you sis PRT1

The alarm screeched out its wake-up call, its piercing tone destroying the early morning silence. It continued to wail until a hand reached out from under the covers of the king-sized bed and slammed down on top of it, activating the snooze feature and silencing it for 10 minutes. This allowed Charles to go back to his dream, one in which he was very familiar. He and his wife Jessica were locked in a heated embrace, both naked, laying tightly next to each other on the bed, kissing as if it was...

3 years ago
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XMass Eve Jess n Trey prt2

okay let me start by saying this is a work of fiction. None of the people in this story are real, nor are the situations. That being said..feel free to comment on my writing. But do note I reserve all copy writes. Please forgive any spelling mistakesPlease read Winters kiss (Jess and Tray prt 1)For thoes fans asking for more im sorry it took so long…..Chapter TwoJessica’s knees were still wet, and my dick was still hard when we entered the store. My head was swirling and I felt like a teenager...

1 year ago
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I got caught prt2

.Standing ther complety naked, with his beautiful woman worshippnig my cock was more than I could take. Her mouth nd throat we're suckn me in a very genltly loving way. Cori keep looking into my eyes. My mouth hanging open in disblievment. My cock jumped nd my balls tightnd in that familier feeling. She felt my cock start to jump. She pulled my sack. Took a hair wrap from her wrist nd snapped in place around my balls. Then she took another nd put it at he base of my cock. Looking up at me she...

3 years ago
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Fulfilling fantasy Prt2

I woke up the next morning and turned on the computerand went straight to our pictures. Good! Phillipcommented on most of the pictures I had posted andsent a new email directed to my wife. I decided not toopen the mail, I'd leave it for Brittney to reply backhoping she'd fall for the bait. I skimmed through someof the comments noticing how polite Phillip's commentswere but yet right to the point. I cleared the browserhistory and set the computer log to save everythingincluding emails. This way...

2 years ago
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Finding my wasted bbw sister inlaw out cold prt2

I went back over to her laying motionless on the couch spread eagle her clothes were all over the floor her panties were at the foot of the couch and had a big wet spot in the crotch area, I picked them up and smelt the crotch and it smelt so delicious I looked over at her spread nude and my Dick was rock hard and dripping pre cum my heart was still racing as I held her panties in my hand I wanted to taste her pussy juices so I licked the crotch of her panties and it tasted so sweet!I wanted...

1 year ago
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The Draft Dodger Rag

Please obtain The Professor's permission before posting elsewhere Draft Dodger Rag By The Professor Copyright (c) The Professor, 1999 "Hell no! We won't go! Hell no! We won't go!" The chanting was getting louder, coming up Telegraph and moving in the direction of the Berkley campus. My apartment was only a block of Telegraph, and in the warm June air, the drone of the chanting sounded almost as if it were happening right outside my pad. Anti war activity had picked up in...

2 years ago
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Draft Dodger Chapter 2

Draft Dodger ? Chapter Two by: Jan Armstrong The war was not going well. The Axis forces seemed to hold all the cards and had been able to successfully hide their activities by using the infrastructures of the countries they attacked. Very publicized arrests had been made in Germany, France, the United Kingdom and Australia. Despite these arrests they still managed to maintain steady pressure as more government buildings and cultural sites were attacked. Washington, D.C.,...

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DRAFT

PLAYING IN A DRAFT By Persephone © 1/12/2003, Persephone This is a work of fiction. That stuff that isn't real, you know, like it has never happened and probably never will, but is still fun to read. You know, like magic, science that doesn't exist, medical procedures that would never produce the results as written and so on. Please don't comment about how the things I write would never work or never happen. Of course they won't. It's fiction, duh! This is the story of a...

4 years ago
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Draft Dodger Chapter 1

Draft Dodger, Chapter One - by: Jan Armstrong Edited By: Cai Chapter One Will couldn't believe what he was seeing. He sat watching as archived news clips scenes unfolded on the TV. The Gateway Arch and the Space Needle in Seattle fell. Buckingham palace was engulfed in flames. The Louvre had been bombed and witnesses cried as glass panels fell onto its priceless contents. Only one of the towers of the Cathedral of the Intercession could be seen through the smoke billowing from...

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Draft Dodger On The Rag A Bunnys Tale

DRAFT DOGER ON THE RAG - A BUNNY'S TALE By: Deane Christopher Copyrighted: 2000 *********************************************************************** **** Draft Dodger on the Rag - A Bunny's Tale is the direct result of three different ideas coming together to form the bases for a single story. It all started with a suggestion from Mindy Rich for me to use some or all of the photos that she had posted on the Original Fictionmania from the made for TV movie A Bunny's...

4 years ago
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Lunas Glory

This was the last night of your camping trip, unfortuneatly you had fire watch. So lucky you got to stay up all night and make sure your five friends could sleep well. At least you had gotten a nap in during the day so you werent too worried about falling asleep. Soon nightfell and everyone went to bed and you got to sit outside by the fire and take the watch. "Stupid Firewatch, boring as hell" you murmer under your breath. As the hours pass you keep yourself entertained by walking back into...

Fantasy
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Lunas Perfect Day

Luna Lovegood woke to the sound of birds singing outside the window. Slowly sitting up and pulling her bright blonde hair, she looked around. The girl's dorm room as empty. "huh? where did everyone go?" she asked herself, slowly getting out of bed. "did I miss breakfast again?" she looked out. there were no students in the courtyards and everything was quiet. She crept down the stairs to the common room, which was also empty. "did everyone just vanish?" She looked around and spotted a note...

Fetish
3 years ago
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Lunas RebellionChapter 4

Later, when Harry had gathered his council, minus the indomitable Luna, together to hear about his adventures under the lake, it was to the amusement of everyone except for Harry when Hermione asked what Harry thought about his scores. The look of absolute befuddlement on Harry's face sent the entire room into gales of laughter. "Harry, you just competed in a task where you not only saved two hostages in under thirty five minutes, but then you went back and saved one of your fellow...

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Lunas RebellionChapter 5

Harry landed roughly, as he always did when travelling by magical means when it wasn't him controlling it. If anyone had been looking closely, they would have noticed that he was seemingly floating a foot above the ground when he fell before rolling over and jumping to his feet and looking around while placing his wand in the sleeve of his robe while pulling one out of his pocket. If wizards were at all logical, then anyone coming to capture Harry Potter would have grown suspicious that...

2 years ago
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Draft Dodger

Introduction: Jessica is drafted by the meat agentcy and then runs away where she then finds herself on a dairy farm. Draft Dodger Story: #30 Copyright 2005 Written: April 16 2005 A story By: KaosAngel Proofed by: Piasa_Troll Please send any comments about this story to ([email protected]) ********************************************************************** Jessica wasnt sure what to make of the man standing in front of her after she had answered the door bell to find him standing there...

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The Draft

The Draft by Michelle Lurker (c) 1995 PART ONE The Turboway stopped abruptly, snapping Paul Mathhews out of his daze. Around the car the other passengers seemed unfazed, though slightly annoyed. This was becoming yet another one of the daily trials of living in the city... along with crime, pollution, and indifference, unscheduled stops of the Turboway were now commonplace. Paul looked out the window, but could see only darkness, and his own...

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SRU Lovers Knot First Draft

Some time ago, Raven and I collaborated on an SRU story called Lovers (K)Not, which is unfortunately incomplete at this time. Raven created the story idea, basic plot and the main characters, and then asked me to write a rough draft based on the information that he gave me. After I completed the rough draft, I sent it to him, where he polished it up and added quite a bit more detail as well as his own touches. Raven posted each chapter to Fictionmania after he'd finished his...

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Patchwork People XIX First draft people

XIX. First draft people. An occasional bat flickered across the stars overhead. The gardenias and hibiscus had long drawn in their petal- awnings. Across the lawn, the hunched bushes looked like a queue of black-robed monks marching back to their monastery. And in the middle distance, fireflies marked a secondary night-sky of transitory constellations in what might have been an even more unpredictable universe than the one we find ourselves inhabiting, one that blinks in an out of...

3 years ago
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Draft Dodger

Story: #30 Copyright ©2005 Written: April 16 2005 A story By: KaosAngel Proofed by: Piasa_Troll Please send any comments about this story to ([email protected]) ********************************************************************** Jessica wasn’t sure what to make of the man standing in front of her after she had answered the door bell to find him standing there holding a large yellow envelope. The envelope needed no introduction since Jessica had been told from the day she was...

2 years ago
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Dark Incarnate COMPLETE Book1 ch114 final draft

Introduction: A story of a girl with a special gift. She is able create spectacular works of art with ease. Her parents die in an accident on their way to her art exhibit, and she blames herself. Through self loathing and sadness she attracts a ****spoiler****. She teams up with some unlikely new friends to try and learn just what is going on. All 166pgs of Book 1. Ive got early chapters posted here but they were posted in rough draft and this is the final draft expect changes and manyxmany...

3 years ago
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Lunar Fantasy

I lie on the bed, without a garment to hide under. He is standing above me, drinking in all the milky whiteness that is my pale body. There is no expression on his face, and he does not move to touch me. Instead, I follow his eyes with mine own and see that he does not linger in the expected places. Rather, he shapes my curves with wonder and fascination, as if he has never really seen this subtle curvature, or plumpness, before. My ghostly pigmented cheeks are tainted cherry, momentarily....

2 years ago
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Debt to pay intro rough draft

Again this is a rough draft and honestly this is a porn site, does grammar really matter? please comment and get in touch if you have any ideas that will be useful for the story. useless criticism does nothing and ill just ignore that kind of thing. There will be NO SEX in this version of the introduction but expect some terrible things in the first chapter, if it ever happens, who knows, shrug, authors come and go on this site all the...

1 year ago
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Dark Incarnate COMPLETE Book1 ch114 final draft

Relevant comments are always appreciated, but I probably wont care about your opinion unless it's a valid critique. My blog http://depthofdepravity.blogspot.com/2012/07/index-to-all-current-stories-in-order.html And another new forum I want to support and where I first post my final draft stuff http://www.faustie.com/forum/ I also give permission for this to be posted in other forums/collection/story sites. It's defiantly different and I may not be doing it much longer. Just...

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