Better Life Revised Part 1
Thanks to Caleb Jones, Karen, and Samantha for your comments. If a person can't take criticism they should not write. This story is my first major attempt and doing a long and complicated story. Plot lines can get a little twisted and sometimes a writer can make mistakes. A couple of points need to be made. Concerning surveillance cameras (E.I. in the police station) remember I am setting this story in the middle 60's where TV cameras were extremely large and very expensive....